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Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate

Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

shady_milkman7 said:
--Part 1---






One day my wish came true.


---Comments?---
It's my first time writing a story. Should I follow up with the next part?
Click to expand...

Great story got me right on edge , now we have got to wait for Part 2 :(
Dont keeping us waiting too long dude ..|
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

Absolutely you should continue... you are already exploring a couple of themes we don't see much, inter-racial relationship and fetish.

Please post more soon!
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

Very hot beginning! Oh, to be a Freshmen in the college dorms again!!:p I had a couple of really hot roommates, but nothing like this happened.

Can't wait to hear more.

Craiger
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

Yes! Keep it going. We want to hear a "blow to blow" description for the entire school year... :p Very hot indeed!!

Craiger
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

Another hot chapter!

I really like the tense ambiguity you created when the narrator is caught by his roomie! Is he angry? Is he cool with it?

Great job!
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

Can't wait to read ur 3rd part
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

please continue your story, it's so HOTT!!!!!!!
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

I found this a while ago on nifty.org
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

That was really great. Looking forward to part 3.
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

Hot stuff. Just got through parts 1 and 2. Hurry up wth3, I'm ready to cum.
 
Re: Getting Caught By My Hot Roommate--Part 1

I think that you have an awesome story here .... BUT; that you should do a part 3 - Final Chapter and move on .....
One of the things I hate about Nifty.org is that it seems most of the stories go on and on and on forever ....... making me think that the author is more or less full of himself ... two or three chapters are enough . If I want more than that, I'll buy a boook ...

In part three: why not tell of how they "got together" all thru college and even became lifemates etc ... and end it ... of course you could throw in som erotic events such as the proposal night as well ......
 
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