Jason/Thor

[Autolycus]

Well, you have made a good start, so you can't leave it there!

 

[threetimes]

Go Back With Him Daniel!!!

 

[Craiger]

To (possibly) be continued... You've got to be kidding. Thank goodness for all the people that made you smile, now on with the story....

Craiger

 

[FabFairy]

^^^ What he said!!

 

[DonQuixote]

Hey, Fool,
I agree w/ Auto. This is a nice start, AND a cliffhanger.
You can't stop your story here. We need to know what happened.
Was it just the one night, did it develop into anything longer lasting?
Was Jason just in the states for a little while, or did he live here, now?

I hope you find time in your busy school schedule to put us out of our misery -- after suitably drawing us in even further!

Thanks for the read!

 

[hardreader]

While I realize my vote is not critical at this point, I still wanted to cast another yes vote. Please, do continue. Don't rush things. We'll still be here waiting whenever Part II appears. Thanks and enjoy your roll in entertaining all of us.

 

[TxGuy1982]

Ok i saw this thread and laughed. Why? I thought of Thor of Marvel comics and Jason from Friday the 13th getting it on.

 

[threetimes]

STOP teasing him THOR!!! rip that little kid's shirt off and rim him like its 1969!!! (although i have no idea why people keep referring to that year... im not even born yet...)

 

[Craiger]

I'm liking this more and more! Getting to know each other before sex is a turn on for me. I like the romance as well. Take your time, I think we are all hooked by now. Thanks!

Craiger

 

[hardreader]

As long as we're talking names here, I wouldn't have chosen Thor. But then it's not my story. And the job you're doing of introducing us to the characters is so excellent, I really shouldn't have even brought it up. I can only assume that when these guys finally get to know each other, the story is goes to be awesomely sexy. Sex between guys we really know is so much hotter! Thanks. Nice job. Sorry about the name comment.

 

[DonQuixote]

Fool,
Don't worry about the name choice. Thor was one of my favorite comics as a kid -- I think I still have some in my collector's box. He was cool. So's your story.

Keep bringing the characters along as you are and I'm sure we'll all be rooting for them.

I'm not a Friday the 13th fan, either, so it didn't hit me that way. As I think about Jason's -- you've got a couple of other choices - one not so appropriate, and the other, my preference, extremely appropros.
Not- Jason Alexander from Seinfeld -- this Swede definitely isn't him. Then to go with Thor -- Jason from Jason and the Argonauts - another classic "historical (grade B) flic" from the past! It was of the cheesy mythology genera, but it was great as a pubescent teen!

Keep writing. It's YOUR frames of reference that count!

 

[Craiger]

I really have no idea why some are obsessed with the names of your characters. It's your story, your characters and you can name them anything you want. I think you gave a fairly good explanation regarding Thor. And Jason seems to be a popular name among others writing on this forum.

You are doing a fine job and I look forward to your continuing in your own fashion.

Craiger

 

[takeitbytch]

Keep on writin
Thor is a sexy name

 

[Craiger]

Now that was intense! How I miss the innocence of young love...lol Maybe I'll recapture it in second childhood...

Craiger

 

[GrayFox]

Wow! That was a two-shooter. Cum is all over.

 

[DonQuixote]

Like Craiger said, the innocence of young love is incredible. Very nice writing style. Keep up the great work, and you'll keep US UP, too!

 

[hardreader]

What a wonderfully and gently written story. The pacing, the tone, the characters all so well suited to the tale of young love, seduction, lust and wonder that you are unfolding for us.

I'm rock hard and so close to cumming its hard to write this. But I'm thrilled to have another story of this quality to follow. Thanks so much!

 

[albsa]

Continue please

 

[giorgiobaby]

may we have some more please?