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Sunshine in the Train

karlossus

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I saw so many of the stories here and just decided to write a story ; so welcome any criticism ;)

Sunshine in the Train

What a tiring day! I dragged my feet to the train station from a long day work. Work done for family, work for the boss, work of my own business were just so tiring. I went home alone and people dragged their feet like me and went home. that's not a very interesting life. Work from the early morning and then come home feeling exhausted. True, that's what my life looked like. At least, at that moment.

December, windy, cold, no one to hug with; and the New Year's on the way. I just could not help feeling sad. People passed me like bullets but I didn't know them. What's the point of life, I wondered. leaves fell from trees, wind blew the leaves away, cars were on the run. in such weather, I just thought of going home though there weren't so many things to be done at home. but still, I had a home to go to.

Into the station I went. It was just so natural that the compartments were so full, full of people heading home. they were just like bees - so many of them. I heard the the joy of laughter and looked there were a few rugby players waiting in the same direction. and they were in shorts, revealing pairs of muscular legs with golden hairs. How muscular their arms were and how beautiful their hairs were. My heart pounded so loudly I could heard the excitement from inside.

And so, I moved closer and closer. Ah, the train stopped and the door was opened. I remained cool and followed them and I was so successful that my face didn't move at all. not even one thing that suggested matters that people might read out of my face. And so, these guys went in and stood there, talking of their own practice and how very talented they were in the game. One of them flexed his biceps and boasted about his strength.

Two of them took their seats while some passengers left and gone off the train. The door was closed and the train started to move. These two guys sat down and their super short shorts revealed their healthy curving shaped thighs. With their marble like skin and golden hair that looked so fine and that could shine in my eyes. I got closer to those who remained standing. Then, someone left the seat, ready to be off in the next stop. I decided to take that seat so that I can "accidentally" touch their butts.

Their firm butts hung like apples in the trees right in front of me. With a slight movement of my feet, my bulge could easily fit into the crack in front of me. So, I fought my way to get even closer. Since the passengers were crowded in the compartment, I could easily manipulate the situation. I decided to take my move and my bulge touched the behind of one of the guys. My bulge hit directly into the crack covered by the colorful pants.

How wonderful it was to have my tool to touch the butt of a muscular hunk. The butt that I touched was so muscular that it felt like the biceps and triceps and abs. in that split-second, I was in heaven. then I sat down. These five or six guys were right in front of me. The one sat opposite had his thighs revealed to me. I stared hard to look up from the thigh skin to where the hairy forest was. The blood inside me flooded downwards. Oh, I've got to stop. Otherwise, they might know about it. With great strength, I covered my eyes pretending to feel sleepy and tried to make a yawn. Still, I stared at the feet in front of me through the gaps between my fingers.

After a few seconds, I put down my hands and looked to my left pretending to see if I had to be off; and turned my eyes to my right where the juicy butts hung near me. All their butts were against the laws of gravity and seemed to wave their sides to me. I almost stretched out my hand to have a firm grip on them. Stop! I told myself. By the time I realised I almost committed crime in public, my other hand had already grabbed my hand and stopped the lustful movement.

"The next station is..." the announcement was made and I stood up. A wild idea came to me. Why not touch that butt again as if nothing happened. After all, there were so many people jammed here, and bodily contact was not that a big deal when everybody took the train home. So, I moved and my sensitive part met that loaf of meat again. A warm feeling came to me when my bulge made contact. He pushed his butt and his crack sank more deeply onto my parts. I looked at him. He looked at his friends as if nothing had happened.

So, I left. And they left at the same station too. That guy I had contact with looked at me and gave a warm smile. Now, I finally had the chance to look at his face more closely. Ginger hair, thick eyebrows, big green eyes, completely shaved, messy hair, and a big innocent smile. Stunned, motionless, I stood there for a second and regained my consciousness. Embarrassed, I turned my head and took a few steps. He and his friends walked right behind me. Then, at the corner that I was ready to turn, some of these blond guys overtook me,. and I felt a pinch. I turned my head, a hand grabbed my butt.... His hand.

---------------------------------------------- end of part I ------------------------------



Well, I think I will continue if responses are good. hope you guys enjoy this
 
Re: sunshine in the train

Good beginning, but you need to use capital letters at the start of your sentences. Continue the story.
 
Re: sunshine in the train

thanks, i will edit it;
hope you like the story, more will come ^^
 
Interesting story. This has a promising start. Hope you write more.
 
Karlossus,

Very nice! I think we all have had or hoped to have had such an experience on a train. But this is leading into more that just a touch...and I like where it is going....lol. Also Welcome!

Craiger
 
Re: sunshine in the train

Autolycus said:
As your time for editing has passed, I have done it for you.

Interesting start. Thanks for posting.

Wow, that's kind and wonderful you help me out -- thx for that and also thx so many of you for your support here.

So, here comes the second part, hope ya gais luv it ^^

........................... part two ...............................................​



Oh my God! He grabbed my butt. It felt so good!.... Wait a minute.,,, Does that mean something?... No. it can't be. It was an “accident”. No. It just can't be that kind of “accident” I did not touch him by accident... Why not? .... So, there is a slight chance that he fancies me.... Don't even think about it! Now, stop arguing! Think about what to say to him. Stop!

I returned to reality to face the embarrassing situation.

“Excuse me. Do you have any idea of what ya're doin'?” I put on my bitch look that demanded an answer. The passengers hurried past me, unaware of anything around them - they were so busy wanting to catch the next train.

“So many people and so little space. That's an embarrassing situation, I must admit.” He ran his fingers through his beautiful hair and extended his grin, revealing his shining teeth.

“I can't hear you!” I protested.

“I apologized,” he said

All of a sudden, he grabbed me by my wrist and dragged me to a corner far from where we were standing. “What're ya doin'?” I cried a little fearfully but couldn't help feeling excited as we moved away from the crowed platform. People formed a long line waiting for a train at the opposite platform. I was dragged by him into the shadowy corner.

“I am terribly sorry that I touched you in the wrong place,” he said looking at me.

“Apology accepted.” I still put on my ugly face.

“Just a question; why did you stare at my butt on the train and try to screw me with you bulge?”

“I...I...was...ummm..” I was tongue tied and I could think of no waY to explain myself. Worse still, my face HAD turned unusually red. His eyes were fixed on mine. How beautiful his green eyes are, I was lost in my thoughts.

Before I was able to lie a trustworthy lie, he pressed me against the wall behind me, locked my hands with his hands and glued my lips with his red lips. My brain went totally blank. My body felt dry but then I felt a warm feeling spreading all over my body. I felt dizzy. I felt hot. I felt safe; and I didn't want to let go.

"Stop!" I called out to myself in my mind. But my hands resisted any action. After a few seconds, I finally gathered up enough of my consciousness to push him off.

“We'll get caught.” I whispered.

“We? So, you admit you fancy me, eh?” he smiled.

“Please, I don't want people to look at me like this now,” I almost begged him.

“Can you go out with me?” he asked, holding my hands.

“Not today,” I looked around as I answered him.

“When? Tell me I'll see you again.” He was surprised both at my answer and the way I had turned him down. He looked a bit down at my answer.

“If you can meet me in the train again tomorrow, I will do anything for you,” I grinned.

“Anything?” his eyes suddenly turned bright.

"Yes, anything and everything. So farewell, my sunshine," I blew him a kiss and walked away.
 
I really like this story. I am going to be on that same train tomorrow just to watch like a little mouse. I will follow them wherever they go....... Can't wait to catch that train...

Craiger
 
thx gais for your nice reponses, so here comes the increasingly erotic parts ^^

----------- ------------- -------------- --------------- Part Three ---------- ------------- ---

I was surprised he came into my room, fully dressed. I was taking off my clothes to have a bath. I didn't know what to say about him. But he gave me a beautiful smile. And he began to take off his clothes. Piece by piece. First, his T-shirt, then belt, and jeans....in less than thirty seconds, he was in his “clothes”, not even a pair of socks were on. His messy hair, big eyebrows, straight nose, broad chest, bulging abs, and further down was a vast land of forest with golden leaves, where there were red round hairy strawberries hanging in the air and there a gigantic serpent lie with its red head poking out. The serpent awoke at my breath and got closer to me. The serpent got its head out of the jungle to get at me. I was amazed at the beauty of both the snake, the hairy fruit and the golden statue. My hands held the gigantic serpent and i was ready to give it a kiss. My lips got closer and closer

“Wake up! Lazy bone.” My boss's shrilling voice dragged me from my afternoon nap, “ You've to finish these before you go.” Then, he put another pile of documents right in front of my eyes.
“Couldn't I finish them tomorrow morning?” I asked.
“Can you finish it before you leave? Yes or no? ” He didn't look at me when he spoke.
“yes.” I had to give in.
“yes, what?” He demanded.
“Yes, Mr. Longbut.” I lowered and head and bowed.
He stared at me. I knew he would. I didn't say anything and he went in his office.
It was such a small hill of paper work waiting for me to check. How can I finish it before six o'clock. He was going be there for me but if I couldn't make it....I dare not think about what would happen.

At last, I finished them all. I grabbed my bag and hurried off to the train station in the hope of meeting him again. Five minutes to go. I got past the people like a bullet, piercing through the street to the train station. Bang! I ran into something right in front of me. “What the h---” Before I opened my mouth to blast that thing away from me. It's not a thing: a hunk. My nose hit his back and he turned his head and said sorry. It's okay, I said, with my feet carried me away but something got hold of my wrist.
“What's it this time.” My face looked terrible.
“Hey, it's me Logan, Milo.” It's him who got my wrist.
“Hi,” I gave one of my most fake grin to him. Oh, he knew my name. Looking at his dark hair, I searched my head for an image.

I'm your high school friend, he said. Yes, nice to see you again, I said. And I looked at my watch. Three minutes to go. Are you in a hurry, he asked. I am heading home, I replied. Me too, he continued. He actually walked with me in the direction of the train station. He walked so slowly. But I was in a hurry. Finally, I was in the platform in the subway. I looked all directions but no signs of him. I got worried and anxious. But this dump hunk was still around me.
“I got to go, see you around. We'll meet again.” I forced a smile and my legs were already on the move.”
“Where do you go? You're waiting for the train home, isn't it?” he still rumbled with more questions.
“I...” Before he said anything, something happened.

A hand grabbed my shoulder and an exclamation of “I've got you” from behind my back. It's him. And he was kind of surprised to see another hunk standing by my side.
“Who are you?” He asked, not sounding very friendly.
“Who are you?” My high school friend didn't yield.
“I'm his...”
“Stop!” He was going to blurt out our relationship and I stopped him. I decided to have it in my own hands.
“This is my high school friend, ” I waited for him to introduce himself.
“Logan” He said.
“Yes, Logan, I bumped into him in the train station, and this is...” my hand stretched towards the blond.
“Dave.” His tone didn't sound at all friendly.
“Yes, Dave.” I pronounced it loudly. “Now, I have a word with Logan before I go with you,” I whispered to Dave, “Give me your number.”

“Logan, could you just wait for me a few seconds” I asked. Okay, he walked away and stood out of earshot.
Dave got closer to my ear and also returned me a whisper. He lowered his voice so that Logan wouldn't hear what he said.
“45—32--8” He told me.
“what kind of number it is? 45? 32? and 8?” I asked.
“45 inches, my chest; 32 inches, my hip; 8 inches, I think you know what I'm talking about.”
My face immediately turned scorching red.

......................... ............................. end of part three ..................... .......................
 
Karlossus,

What a great line...45..32..8! This is getting really exciting. Can't wait for the next installment...

Craiger
 
Karlossus,

What a great line...45..32..8! This is getting really exciting. Can't wait for the next installment...

Craiger


Dear Craiger, thx for that, hope you enjoy the numbers ^^

also, can I know you guys' preference of the story
will you prefer a longer story or a shorter one
and how do you guys like about the story so far so that can work on suggestions

thx for support ^6^
 
also, can I know you guys' preference of the story
will you prefer a longer story or a shorter one
and how do you guys like about the story so far so that can work on suggestions

thx for support ^6^

Karlossus,

I think you have a great plot going right now. You have an intriguing introduction of another hunk. It could be very exciting finding out what jealousies play out in this.
I would think the length of the story depends on your desire to continue. As long as you have an audience "the show must go on". And it is an erotic show!

Craiger
 
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