The swimmer

[Lefty]

no,
its not bad at all

 

[Gardenboy95]

Very good, and I think its probably real. Now remember what comes next.

 

[wyndhampaul]

Gee, you must give a bloke a chance to read your lovely tale before you start complaining about no replies! Tut Tut.
Yes, you are on the right track to titillate our senses, (and nonsenses)
Just don't make a cock-up of it!! Ha Ha!
More please.

 

[kcm17480]

Just keep going the way you are. This has got me hooked. Very nice story so far,

 

[Trent0n1]

A nice, well written story Harding. I'm looking forward to more.

Trent

 

[harry113]

Harding, Thank you .... wonderful story.
I just read these first chapters, you posted them very quickly.
Very well written
Harry

 

[wyndhampaul]

Hi Harding! You have indeed a great talent, and your tale is unfolding beautifully. Thank you.

 

[gogetter]

Very well-written story; I look forward to reading more!

 

[harry113]

Harding, this is great. Thank you
Hope your connection isn't down for too long
Harry

 

[hungbuzz]

love the story. keep it cumming

 

[willybob]

You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time.

 

[bz5950_2000]

nice story man

 

[smile86]

i really like your style, and fuck do you write quickly! very good, looking foward to more

 

[wyndhampaul]

You're not unemployed, You're a talented writer! The tale progresses in a beautifully controlled way. Thank you.

 

[kcm17480]

This is a really very good story. I'm enjoying this very much. Please keep writing,
Thanks.

 

[harry113]

Thanks Harding, this is a well written story, moving along nicely!!]
Are all the business trips genuine? I wonder!!!
Harry

 

[harry113]

Ooooh!! You tease!!
Thanks Harding, great story
Harry

 

[wyndhampaul]

I'm still enjoying your story, and yearing for more.

 

[willybob]

Awww. I hope it's not the end. Awesome story though.

 

[kcm17480]

Yeah! I hope is not the end. Please keep going.