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Wonderboy

Dudley0501

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Soo.. Uhm.. Yeah, so this is my first story (and post, actually) here on JUB. I've never written a story like this before, so i hope you like it. Everything is entirely fictional. I'm afraid english isn't my mother tongue, so please forgive me for any grammar/spelling errors. I've run it through a couple of times though, so hopefully there's nothing major. Feedback is much appreciated, either here or in a PM. Chapter one here is quite long; any further chapters will probably NOT be this long though. I just felt I needed to set the tone for the story, get the introductions straight, and so on. It makes it easier (in my opinion) to write future chapters. Once again, I welcome any and all feedback. Suggestions for how the story COULD progress is very welcome in a PM. But anyways, enough of my ramblings, please enjoy chapter one of ?(hopefully more than 1;)), of "Wonderboy"

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I was but a young boy of 18 years when I was first exposed to love, sex, and everything in between. My name is Ryan, and when this story unfolded, I was still living with my parents in a relatively small town. We lived on sort of a farm, which used to have a lot of animals on it. But when my now deceased Grandfather bought it, the animals were sold, and the farm has since then only been used for people.

The large house has its benefits; when I was 13, my father started renovating the farm. He then made a section of what used to be stalls for cows, into kind of an apartment for me. With kitchen, bedroom, bathroom and a living room, I moved into that section when I was 15. My parents felt that both they and I could use the privacy. My big brother Nick was a bit upset that he had just moved out, and didn’t get the same perks, but I was the youngest son after all!

Around this time, I started realizing that I probably was gay. My brother had goaded me into some light bodybuilding with him at the local gym, and I was surprised when I felt attracted to a lot of the men there. I hadn’t done anything with girls at this point, since I actually didn’t find them very attractive.

Time passed, and on my 18th birthday, I came out to my parents. Thankfully, they were both very supportive of me, and it didn’t ruin anything between us. I told my brother the following week, when he was home for my birthday party. He just laughed at me, and told me that he already knew. He had figured it out during our bodybuilding “tenure” together. He just hugged me and said he loved me. Relieved and overjoyed, I told my closest friends shortly thereafter. Once again, everybody was supportive of me, and it turned out my best male friend, and my best female friend, also had the same cunning eye as my brother.

So, I should probably introduce everybody. Jim and Lois are my parents, a couple in their late forties. They had my brother when they were quite young, and me 6 years later. They were always there for me, and never ceased to protect “their little babies”. They had created a home in which both my brother and me felt we could tell them anything.

My brother Nick was 24 years old at the time, and had already moved out a couple of years ago. He was tall and lean, with a muscular frame thanks to his weightlifting and exercising. We were pretty close, able to bicker and bitch one day, and then be completely different the next. I idolized him when I was younger, especially when I began bodybuilding myself. Also, he was very easy on the eyes to say the least, so subconsciously he probably even turned me on a bit.

My friends were a tight knit group, consisting of Matt, Jessica, James, Chris, Amber and myself.
Matt was my best friend. We were very close, and had known each other for 6 years. We trusted each other completely, and had a lot of fun together. We were 100% comfortable around each other, and we were often spending the night at each other’s houses; my parents were quite fond of him as well. When I was just discovering my sexuality, I was infatuated with him. He was my first crush, but not wanting anything bad to happen to our relationship, my lusty feelings subsided a bit. Matt was pretty tall, with dirty blond hair, and blue eyes you could drown in. With a swimmers build to die for, and the best ass I’ve ever seen, he was one hot guy. When we were 18, he had been with his girlfriend for 3 years though, so I kept my hands off him.

Jessica, or Jess for short, was my confidante, my best female friend, and a constant source of joy in my life. We had known each other since kindergarten, and stuck together since. We could talk about anything, absolutely anything, without it being recited to others 20 minutes later. We trusted each other completely, but nothing sexual ever happened between us. Jess and Matt were really the most important figures in my life at that time. Amber, Chris and James were great friends too, but it’s kinda like Scooby-Doo; you only care about Scooby and Shaggy anyway.

And I guess that leaves me. At 18, I was a rather short, but quite muscular young man. Thanks to my brother, I really became interested in building my body, and had done so since I was 15. My short stature also made my muscles stand out more, so I looked very fit. I was pretty proud of my body. I had well-defined pecs, a nice hard ass, great abs and strong arms and legs. I have well defined cheekbones, and had short brown hair, with blond streaks in it back then. My eyes are greenish blue, with a certain sparkle to them. So, I was probably raking in the hot guys, right?

Wrong. I had one problem. I was shy as hell. At 18 I was still a virgin, and only had my right hand to rely on, along with a rather extensive toy collection. When I was about sixteen I had been curious about bottoming, and since there was no man in my life, I bought a few toys. Since I enjoyed them very much, I had quite a collection at 18, with dildos of various shapes and sizes.

So, with introductions out of the way, I should probably get on with the story. When I was 18, me and the rest of the gang were still in school, but liked to go to parties together on Saturdays. And at one of these parties, “it” finally happened to me.

A few of our classmates, who were actually twins, were throwing a huge party. They had invited practically everybody they knew, and held the party at sort of a community centre. Apparently it was cheap to rent, and had 2 large rooms. One with a lot of couches and big chairs, and one with tables and chairs for dinner parties.

“Hey Ryan, can I crash at your place tonight? I don’t really wanna have to get somebody to pick me up that late, if I can stay with you?” Matt asked me. “Sure, why not. You have a key, so if you wanna go home early, just use that.” I replied. The community centre wasn’t far from my house, so “The gang” had met up there, and we were now on our way to the party. Parties weren’t really my thing. I became a little depressed at the end of them, when everybody began leaving, often with their tongues down another person’s throat. Nevertheless, Jess had made me come to this one, as she thought I needed to get out more to find “Mr. Right”. She was already right though. I wasn’t gonna find him at home.

“It’s just down this road guys,” said James, stating the obvious as usual, as music could be heard coming from the centre. Jess put her arm under mine as we walked down the road. She was stunning, as per usual. Even though I’m gay, I have no problem separating beautiful girls from the not so beautiful. And Jess was definitely beautiful. She leaned in so she could whisper something in my ear. “Please try to find a nice boy. You really deserve somebody to love, Wonderboy.” She smiled at me, and kissed me on the cheek, before resting her head on my shoulder as we walked. She always called me Wonderboy, even when it wasn’t entirely appropriate, like in front of my parents.

We arrived at the party, and said hi to everyone we knew. There was even more people then we’d thought there would be, and it looked like more were coming. We found a couple of couches facing each other, with a table between, where we could all sit. A pretty waitress was serving aperitifs, and we all got a glass of bubbly. I looked around the room. A table was set up at the end of the room, with bowls of snacks and dip on it. Through a couple of doors I could see a lot of tables, and a couple of waitresses were placing everything from napkins to forks on them. It wasn’t the usual party, with nothing but drinking and dancing. Here, we were going to have a meal first, and THEN drink and dance. The others were chatting about some silly TV-show, when I looked across the room, and saw myself. Actually, I saw a guy sitting on a couch alone, but I could recognize the look on his face. It was the same look I always had at the end of a party, when people were going home with their girlfriends/boyfriends, and I had no one. It didn’t happen that often though, as Jess wasn’t really into a lot of guys, so when she was at the same party, we often left together. But Jess wasn’t that fond of parties either, so sometimes I ended up alone. Matt had his girlfriend, James and Amber were dating, and Chris often got lucky. And so, that left me.

I looked more closely at the guy, and was actually quite attractive. He was wearing all-white clothes, which were a great contrast to his jet-black hair. He was a bit taller than me it seemed, and had a sorta “twinkish” body, but had quite broad shoulders. He was definitely cute.

“See anything you like Wonderboy?” said Jessica, as she pulled me out of my trance. She looked over my shoulder, and saw the object of my stare. “Aww, he’s quite cute. Why don’t you go other there and talk to him?” I blushed at her words, and replied in a hush voice. “Are you crazy? I can’t just go other there and spark up a conversation? I don’t even know if he’s gay!” Jess giggled while she said “Look, first of all, there is only one way to find out whether he’s gay or not, and that’s talking to him. Secondly, you really need to get that gaydar tuned. Even I can see he’s gay. And eve…” She trailed off, as the cute boy looked over at us. We were caught, and Jessica quickly hid behind me. He stared directly into my eyes, and I couldn’t look away. He looked down my body, and then smiled, and looked me in the eyes again. He winked at me, and patted on the seat next to him, wanting me to come over. The entire gang had seen him now, and they practically pushed me off the couch, and toward the guy. I walked slowly towards him, as he mouthed “thanks for the help” back to my friends. I sat down next to him, as chills went down my spine.

“Hi. I’m Austin. Nice to meet you.” He said. I shuffled in my seat, and finally looked him in the eyes. “Uhm, my name is Ryan. Nice to meet you too.” I said, as his eyes stared into mine. He had green eyes, almost glistening in the light. “So how do you know the twins?” he asked, smiling at me. “Uh, we have some classes together in school. How about you?” I asked back. “The same.”
I was shocked to find out he attended the same school as me. I couldn’t remember ever seeing him there. “So uhm.. You here alone?” I mustered up the courage to say. “Well I came with a couple of friends, but I’m not really sure where they are now. But I guess I’m not alone any longer” he said, and grinned at me. He was definitely getting to me. My groin tingled a bit, as he flashed me his most charming smile.

“It’s funny, I don’t recall seeing you at school at all. And trust me, I’d remember a guy like you.” He said. I blushed again, and looked into the bubbly drink in my hand. “Uhm, well, I don’t recall seeing you either. I guess it’s just because it’s a big school.” I replied, before looking at him again. I could feel the blood running to my cheeks. This guy had definitely piqued my interest, but my shyness made me feel a bit awkward about talking to him. He just smiled at me again, his shiny green eyes looking into mine. It felt like they were trying to draw me closer, as they stared deep into me.

“Hey Wonderboy, it’s dinnertime.” Jess’ voice pulled me away from Austin’s gaze. She smiled at me, and then looked at Austin. “Hi, I’m Jessica, but people just call me Jess. It’s nice to meet you, and I can tell that Wonderboy here agrees.” I blushed again, as Austin introduced himself to my inappropriate friend. “Austin. Nice to meet you too. I enjoyed meeting.. “Wonderboy” was it? - As well.” He said, and then grinned at me. We both stood up, and looked at each other awkwardly. Jess broke the silence as usual. “Hey, you should come sit with us. I’ll introduce you to the rest of the gang. Come on!” Jess went ahead to secure us a couple of seats with the others. Austin smiled at me, again. “You have a gang? And what’s this “Wonderboy” stuff?”. “Long story”, I said, “And yes, we have a gang. We’re just a bunch of friends. By the looks on their faces, I think they’d like to meet you.” We both looked through the doors, and saw the whole group staring at us. This time Austin blushed, as we went to sit down.

“So, everyone, this is Austin. Austin, meet everyone. This here is Matthew, but he prefers Matt. Next to me are Amber, and her boyfriend James. Next to Matt is Chris, and my name you already know. I’m the one you should be afraid of, because I hurt people who hurt my Wonderboy. Just kidding! So anyways, that’s the gang.” Jessica said quickly, before finally running out of breath. Everyone greeted Austin before we sat down to have something to eat. I don’t really recall what we had. Jess and Matt were chatting with Austin the whole time, and I just sat there, dumbfounded to say the least. Austin tried to answer their questions as best he could. Where he was from, how he knew the twins, all the typical things. By the time the main course came on the table, things were a bit quieter though. I was seated between Matt and Austin, whilst Amber sat across the table from me. Jess sat in front of Austin, so she could find out everything about him.

“Wow, this tastes really good” said James. Everyone nodded in silence, as we kept on eating. As soon as the last bite was gone though, the interrogation continued. It was actually not that bad, because I could just sit there and stare at him, while learning a lot about him, which I would probably never have the courage to ask. “Wait a minute! We have a class together, don’t we? It’s gym, isn’t it?” Jess asked. “Yeah, I think so. Thursday morning?” He replied. “Yeah, precisely. I knew I recognized you. You’re on the swim team if I remember correctly.” Austin nodded, and looked at me. I suddenly felt his hand on my thigh, and he smiled at me again. I blushed as my crotch was burning. He kept his hand there until we had to get up after dessert, occasionally stroking my thigh a bit. We all went back to the other room, and once again found a place were we could all sit.

“So where do you live? I guess you know a lot about me now that Jess interrogated me, but I don’t really know a lot about you.” He grinned over at Jess, who looked at us, almost expectantly. “Uhm, to tell you the truth, I didn’t really hear much of what the two of you were talking about. I… I drifted off a little, looking at you.” I blushed again. It wasn’t entirely true, but I wanted him to tell me all of those things in a bit more private setting, where Jess wasn’t asking all the questions. Plus, it seemed like a nice thing to say. “But anyway, I live right nearby. We actually walked here from my house. I…” Jess interrupted me, and blurted out. ”You really ought to see it, he has a whole section of the house for himself, whilst his parents live in a different wing of the house.” I sent Jess an unpleasant look, but Austin just looked at me and said: “I’d like that.” For once, I didn’t blush, but just smiled back. The fact that I’d found a guy who wanted to see how I lived, gave me a bit of confidence.

The evening slowly passed along, as we just sat there talking. James and Amber had left early. Amber apparently wasn’t feeling well, so James took her home. Chris had found a nice girl whom he was currently chatting up. Matt was also gone. I hadn’t really noticed, but I figured he had found someone who would give him a lift home. He had promised to tell me if he went home to my place. Jess was looking kinda tired, but she still had the energy to watch Austin and I closely.

“Soo… How about it?” he asked. I looked at him with a puzzled face. “How about what?” He smiled again. God, I could never get enough of that smile. “Me seeing your place of course. You said it’s only a walk away.” Jess woke up again, and sent me a look that seemed to be saying “SAY YES FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! YES!”. “Uhm, sure, why not. Right now?” I asked. “Yeah. This music is annoying me.” I laughed. I had been thinking that for an hour or so. It was this really awful techno crap, which got repetitive after 10 minutes. We went outside with Jessica. I felt bad leaving her, since she always stayed with me at parties. She could see it in my eyes, and as she gave me a hug, she whispered in my ear. “Don’t worry about it Ryan. I know some people here, so I’ll just go talk to them. I’m being picked up in 20 minutes anyway. You just have fun now. You really deserve this, Wonderboy. He seems nice. And he’s definitely into you. But then again… Who wouldn’t be? She gave me a quick peck on the cheek, and smiled at me. My eyes got a little wet, but she wiped it away. She really was a great friend. And then, Austin and I left the party.


“She really loves you” Austin said as we were walking away from the party. The music was fading away behind us, and soon we were far away from all the noise. It was a quiet night, not a person in sight. I live in a small, quiet town, where people usually go to sleep quite early. The sky was lit up by a lot of stars and a half-moon. “You’re lucky to have friends like her and Matt, and the rest of the gang for that matter.” I looked at him, sensing something was troubling him. “Where were your friends anyway? I would have liked to meet them.” He looked at his feet. “Well. To be honest, none of my friends were actually there, except the twins. We’re pretty good friends, but other than them, none of my friends were there. I don’t have a lot of friends like you do.” I could hear the sadness in his voice, but I was curious as to why he had so few friends. “How come?” “Well… I used to have quite a few friends. But since I came out, I’ve lost some of them. They weren’t all as positive as your friends.”

I immediately felt bad. Partly because I had brought this topic up, and partly because I just felt sorry for him. I looked around, and seeing nobody in the street at all, I took his hand. He looked at our hands, and entwined our fingers. We smiled at each other, and kept walking. I was definitely enamoured with him, and wanted him to feel better. “It doesn’t matter how many friends you have, as long as you love the ones you have, and they love you in return. And the ones who couldn’t accept you for what you are, weren’t your true friends after all.” He looked up at me again, smiling. “Yeah, I know. But thanks.”

We finally arrived at my house, and I opened the door, letting Austin inside first. I was happy that I’d just tidied the place a few days ago. Austin looked around as I closed and locked the door behind us. He walked around a bit, checking out the kitchen and the bathroom. I sat down on my sofa, and stared into space. What if we were gonna have sex? He was probably not a virgin as me, so I worried a bit about what he expected. I had cleaned myself thoroughly before the party though; so I was definitely clean everywhere. I broke out of my thoughts when Austin sat down next to me.

“Nice place…” He trailed off. “But not as nice as you, Wonderboy”. He leaned towards me, and put his lips on mine. I was having my first gay kiss, and it felt great. I had practiced with Jessica when we were young and naïve, so at least I knew how to kiss. I felt his hands on my back, pulling me closer into him. He tasted great, and my entire body was shaking from the sensation. He pulled away again, and grinned at me. “I.. Wow… Uhm, I… I’m a virgin.” I said, blushing again. He leaned in and whispered in my ear. “Don’t worry. So am I.“ He bit my ear a bit, before kissing down my neck. I moaned, and threw my head back. My fears were all gone, and I felt safe with him. His hands were rubbing my back. My heart was pounding hard and fast, as he covered my neck with kisses. He came back up, and we looked into each other’s eyes. Austin’s eyes were filled with lust, and I’m sure he could see the same in mine. We kissed again, and I leaned towards him. I broke the kiss, and pulled of his shirt. His swimming had definitively made his body very toned, and I suspected some weightlifting as well. He was lean and thin, with well-defined abs and pecs. His arms were quite toned as well, but actually he was toned everywhere. He had a nice tan and very little body hair, and his nipples were hard as rock.

I made my way down his body by kissing his neck and chest, and then sucked on his sensitive nipples. He moaned, and took my head into his hands, pushing me into his chest. He tasted great, and the light scent of sweat coming from his armpits made my nostrils burn. I lifted his arm, and buried my face in his armpit, licking all over. Austin moaned again, and threw his head back. I gently laid him down on the sofa, and continued to lick his upper chest. I couldn’t get enough of his taste, wanting to savour it as long as I could. A bead of sweat formed on his lip, and I quickly sucked it into my mouth, before kissing him. I couldn’t believe I had found such a hot guy, who actually didn’t mind that I was shy at first, and now wanted to have sex with me. My cock was almost hurting in my pants, and I needed to get out of them soon.

I guess Austin was growing impatient, because he pushed me off of him, and onto my back. He ripped off my shirt, and looked lustily at my body. He gave me the same treatment as I had given him, licking all over my torso, making me groan loudly. He bit my nipples a bit, before moving further down my body. He kissed my abs, and licked the indents between them. He kissed my navel, and looked up at me. He grinned at me, with that special shit-eating grin. “You ready?”

I nodded, and watched as he undid my pants. He kissed my navel one last time, as I heard my belt fall to the ground. As he pulled the zipper down, the door to my “apartment” flung open. Matt stumbled inside, and shut the door behind him.

To be continued.....
 
very good english, very good story...excellent build up and character development...tension is just right...great overall, thanks for you excellent efforts. and long chapters are great for me...:D
 
This is a great start to a story that needs to be told. Incidently, I only spotted one grammatical error. I see nothing wrong with your command of English.
 
Wow!! This story is really excellent and if english isn't your main language than you fooled me. It is very well written. I would love to here the rest of this story.

Thanks
Ken
 
Excellent story dudley. I hope you are able to write more in the near future.

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I must agree with all the above posts, Dudley. Your command of the English language is superb. Your writing is excellent. You had me drawn into the story so completely that I felt I was a party to it all. The chapter was not too long and I truly look forward to the next one.

Craiger
 
Hello all!

First of all, thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter.

Unfortunately, it would seem that I screwed up, and broke the CoC by having a rape take place within this story. Even though this is all fictional, I do understand that rules are there for a reason. I also understand, that some may be offended by such material, and i sincerely apologize if that has happened.

However, the whole rape-thing has now been removed, and I'll have to be a little creative. I am rewriting the last part of the first chapter right now, and will then continue writing chapter 2 afterwards. I hope my "new idea" doesn't seem TOO creative/slapdash, but I need to wiggle around the rules, while still getting vital parts into the story. I hope that everybody will read the new ending of chapter 1, to avoid any confusion.

Once again, thanks for the feedback, I look forward to receiving more.

Best Regards,

Dudley
 
Revised ending of Chapter 1 of Wonderboy
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I nodded, and watched as he undid my pants. He kissed my navel one last time, as I heard my belt fall to the ground. As he pulled the zipper down, the door to my “apartment” flung open. Matt stumbled inside, and shut the door behind him. I looked at him, and was too stunned to move a muscle. His shirt was ripped terribly, with several bloodstains on it. His jeans were torn countless places, some places so much that scars on his legs were visible. A big cut on his forehead was bleeding profusely, and Matt’s face and arms had dozens of small cuts and scars on them. Austin looked at him in horror, and then looked at me. I zipped up my pants, and stood up as well.

“Good God, Matt, what happened?” I almost cried out, whilst running around the couch to get to him. Austin locked the door again, whilst I stopped Matt from falling over. Austin pulled out a chair from the dining table, and I sat Matt down on it. His eyes were glazed over, not able to see straight. I had never seen anything like this. I took a cloth from the kitchen to wipe the blood from his face. Matt seemed to wake a bit up from his daze, and could finally look straight at me. “Matt? MATT?! What happened?” I said loudly. “I… I ran away. I… They wanted to beat me up... I ran...” His voice trailed away when he noticed Austin standing next to him. He was a bit shook up, but then realized that Austin and I weren’t wearing shirts.

“Oh my God, you guys were…” I didn’t know what to say, but Austin broke in. “Listen, it’s ok. You’re safe now. Is it ok if I talk to Ryan just a bit?” Matt nodded, and Austin took me aside. I gave the cloth to Matt so he could control the bleeding.

“Listen. I don’t know what happened to Matt, but I sense that he isn’t comfortable talking about it in front of me. You’re his best friend, so you should be able to care for him, and not worry about me. My car is parked a few hundred meters from here, and I didn’t have any alcohol at the party,”
he whispered. I looked at him, and saw that he was dead serious. My brain knew that he was right, but my heart wanted him with me. “Ok. I don’t want you to leave, but you’re right, something is wrong.” I looked him in the eye, and kissed him passionately on the mouth. “I want to see you again, soon.” I reached out and grabbed pen and paper. I wrote down my phone number, and made him do the same on another piece of paper. We exchanged numbers, and kissed again. “Don’t worry, Wonderboy, you’ll see me again very soon. I had a great time with you. To show you I’m serious, I’ll leave you my shirt, and take yours instead. I like the smell of you.” We kissed again, before Austin grabbed my shirt and put it on, and left my house.

“I’m happy for you.” Matt said, and even smiled a little, despite his banged up face. “Thanks. Now let’s get you out of those clothes, and get you washed up.” I walked over to him, and luckily I caught him before he got up. He was still very wobbly from the exhaustion, and I knew I would have to help him.

I helped Matt to the bathroom, where I put him down on the edge of the bathtub, and got out some towels from the closet. My bathroom is quite big, with a large bathtub and a big shower. Matt took the cloth off the wound, which had stopped running by now. “Listen, don’t worry, I’ll help you get clean, so just relax, and let me do the work.” Matt nodded, still pretty dazed. I pulled his bloodstained shirt over his head, and threw it into the sink. I then had him stand up, and helped him into the shower. I took off my remaining clothes. We had seen each other naked a million times before, so no reason to get my clothes wet. I had him lean against the wall, so I could pull his pants down. With his back facing me, I got down on my haunches, and reached around him to undo his pants. I pulled them down, and lifted his feet to get them completely off. I did the same to his boxers, and he stood naked before me, his perfect bubble butt right in front of my face.

I threw the pants out of the shower, and turned on the water, turning it away from us until it was nice and warm. I let the water pour on us, and Matt gasped. I helped him stand, and held him tight into me. The water ran down his body, and washed away the blood and grit. I cried a bit as I rested my head on his back. I couldn’t stand seeing Matt this hurt. I released my hold, and let him lean against me. I took some soap in my hand, and washed his upper body. Sensing that he was still dazed, I also washed his crotch. I probably didn't need to do that, but I wasn't really thinking straight. Any other day, I would’ve found it wildly arousing. But on that day, I felt nothing sexual, only my love for Matt, and my rage. I had him lean against the wall again, this time with his front towards me. I lathered up his legs and thighs, and washed them tenderly. I turned him around again, and washed his back, butt cheeks and the back of his legs. I then stood up, and washed his hair thoroughly, before turning off the water. I helped him out of the shower, and dried him with a towel. I held his warm body close to mine, and looked at our reflection in the mirror. Rage filled me as I realized just how bruised and scarred he was.

I helped Matt to the couch where he sat down. Even though he was still pretty groggy, he was beginning to “wake up” mentally. I went to my bedroom and grabbed some tights for both of us. I put mine on, and then helped him getting another pair on. I grabbed a blanket and put it around him, and then gave him a glass of water. I sat down next to him, and we just stared at the floor. He shifted a bit in a seat. I wanted him to tell me what happened at his own pace, and not bombard him with questions. 10 minutes probably went by, before he took a sudden deep breath, and started explaining what had happened.

“After dinner, when we all sat down, I was kinda bored. You and Austin were talking with Jessica, Amber and James talked together, and Chris left after 5 minutes, as usual. I talked a bit with Jessica, but decided I would see if there was anybody else I knew at the party. I went outside, and I… I bumped into this big jock. I said I was sorry, and just walked past him. But he called my name, so I looked back, to see if it was anybody I knew. It was Diane’s older brother, Brock. Apparently, he knew why Diane broke up with me last week.”

I was shocked. Diane and Matt had been dating for 3 years. I was also kinda hurt that Matt hadn’t told me. I didn’t say anything, and just let him continue.

“Brock wasn’t alone though. He had 4 of his big jock friends with him. Brock grabbed my collar, and pulled me close. He told me to come with him, without making a scene, or he’d kill me. Not wanting to challenge fate, I quietly walked away from the party with Brock and his posse of big jocks. He took me into the small forest just outside town. He turned his back on me to talk to his pals, and I just started running as fast as I possibly could. I ran through the forest, falling over God knows how many times, even hitting my head on a sharp rock once. Unfortunately, I was so frantic running through the forest that I hurt myself a lot more than what you would expect. I just kept running, and remembering the key in my pocket, I ran here. Good God, I fear what they would have done to me though. Would probably have been a lot worse."

I was stunned. It was one thing that Diane had broken up with Diane, but even worse, there seemed to be some very serious reason as to why she did it. And that same reason seemed to enrage Diane’s big brother so much that he wanted to beat up Matt, and who knows what else. There was still one big enigma though; what was the reason?

I put my arms around him, and let his head rest on my shoulder as he sobbed a bit. I could sense that this whole thing had shaken him up a lot more than he was letting on. I felt I had to ask the question that was the key to this whole situation. “But Matt. Why DID Diane break up with you?"

“Because I told her that… I think I might be gay.”
 
Dudley, Thank you. What a wonderful story.
You changed the ending very well, it was entirely believable.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Harry
 
Dudley,


The correction to the story was excellent. As Harry said, it was very believable. Now that that has be done, I can hardly wait to hear what comes next. Well done!

Craiger
 
Thanks for all the kind words!

I'm afraid I won't be able to post chapter 2 until sometime next week. My computer is having "issues", and will be out of the house for maintenance until wednesday-ish. Expect something to be posted at the end of next week :)

Best Regards,

Dudley
 
Nooo!

And I was looking forward to reading it..

Great.. More suspense XD
 
Hey all!

A small update on the progress of chapter 2 here.

My computer is up and running again, and the next chapter should be up within the next 24 hours :) Hope you'll like it.

Best Regards,

Dudley
 
Well this is just annoying!

My crap computer is not functioning right at all. Ill try to get some work in, on another computer, but im afraid I wont be able to post something within the aforementionened 24 hours :(

Im terribly sorry.

Best Regards

Dudley
 
Just love cliffhangers and you sure left us with one. Can't wait to see what happens with this story...|
 
Don't you just hate technology, Dudley! One minute the damn computers work and then the next they go on the blink. Hope yours gets well soon. That cliffhanger is eating me alive.......lol

Craiger
 
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