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A Meeting, A Secret, and A Kiss

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So a friend told me I should write to help relieve stress, and since I like romantics, I thought it'd be interesting a to write a story here. Keep in mind this is my first time writing ANYTHING out.


Victor Hartford looked up the stairs leading to the third and final floor of the dormitories, carrying his sixth and final box of possessions, after his tenth and - hopefully - final trip up from his car. He was exhausted, tired, and just wanted to lie down and rest a bit. This place needs an elevator he thought, making his way up the steps and blowing a stray lock of his brown hair from his face, now slicked with sweat. The college staff want you to get used to running around like a headless chicken for your first year he reminded himself sarcastically.
Victor was the silent type. He was of slight build, not very tall, sensitive, shy, and quite naive about anything not concerning biology or books. He never really had many friends worth mentioning, but he was fairly friendly to anyone willing to talk to him.

As he reached the door to his rooms, he was greeted by his roommate, Damian Terence, a third-year on a sports scholarship that had managed not only to become quite popular, but also had a reputation as an all-night party guy. Victor couldn't help but notice that the guy was devilishly good-looking, especially in his cargo shorts that showed off his tanned legs which were muscular from Track & Field classes. He never really considered his sexuality, being more consumed with books and such than physical attraction, but he supposed Damian was the type that could drive anyone wild with one of his smiles.

Noting the comical expression on Damian's face and realizing that he was staring, Victor nodded once in greeting and quickly entered the shared sitting room between his and Damian's separate bedrooms and then towards his door. The dorm's were not very large, but they were larger than his room back home. A bed on one wall and a desk and shelf on another completed the furnishings while a door to a shared bathroom took up a third, with a window taking up the last.

"It's not Buckingham palace but it works well enough," called Damian from the sitting room, which startled Victor out of his inspection enough that he dropped the box he was carrying on his foot, letting out a short yelp of pain and nearly falling backwards into the pile of boxes at the foot of his bed just as he caught himself on the edge of the bare mattress, causing it to shift slightly and bang the headboard against the wall.

Sitting on the bed massaging the foot through his sandal, he noted Damian standing at his door. "You alright?" he asked with a look of only mild concern.

"I'm fine, thanks. I just dropped the box on my foot, that's all."

Damian gave him that comical look again and left towards his own room. He probably thinks I'm a klutz and a homo, now Victor thought grimly as he began to unpack.

- - - - - - - - - -

The next few weeks were, naturally, uneventful in every possible way for Victor as he became familiar with his new surroundings. Every day was almost the same; he woke up, took a shower, attended his morning classes, ate lunch in his rooms, went to his afternoon classes, and then back to his rooms to study for the evening. He never saw much of Damian and rarely spoke more than a few words of greeting each day, having an almost entirely different schedule, and noting that Damian always came in late after a night of partying.

It was on one of these uneventful evenings when Victor was studying in the sitting room when Damian came in, drunker than an anorexic with a whiskey fetish. He took one look at Victor, giggled, then promptly passed out on the sofa. I should leave him there Victor thought, before his sensitive side took hold and he decided it was best to get Damian sobered up and dragged him to the bathroom to lay him beside the toilet.

Upon splashing the fifth glass of cold water in Damian's face, he woke up in a daze, smiled cheesily at Victor, then made a horrid face and began vomiting into the toilet. Victor, being the nice kid, was obligated to hold back Damian's dark, shoulder-length hair out of his face until he was done.

"Thanks," Damian said thickly as he leaned back against the tub, panting slightly. "It must have been the cheap booze, you know how that stuff gets when it's sitting out too long," he said when he had the breath.

"It's alright, and I wouldn't know, I'm not a drinker," Victor replied with a slight shrug of his shoulders. "Where were you? It's later than the usual time you come in."

"Can you keep a secret?" Damian said with a small, secretive smile.

"Yes..," Victor replied, instantly wary of what this drunkard was going to say.

"So can I," Damian said as he got up and, none to steadily, wandered off to his room, slamming the door.

After washing the bathroom floor of the water he had used to wake Damian, he saw a small card that must have fallen out of Damian's pocket lying behind the toilet.

"Barry's Bar and Nightly Entertainment," Victor read softly from the card. Noting from what he heard around campus, Barry's was a gay bar and local hotspot to meet others for 'nightly entertainment' of the homosexual variety.

- - - - - - - - - -

Another few weeks, and another few episodes of Damian coming in drunk late at night, Victor was beginning to become a bit annoyed at Damian's nightly interruptions.

On one such occasion, with Victor in his usual spot at the sitting room table, Damian comes bursting in, though not drunk this time.

"Damn it, where is it!?" Damian kept repeating to himself, looking around the sitting room, his bedroom, and all in the process, begins throwing things around looking for whatever 'it' is.

Damian picked up a pillow off the sofa and throws it across the room, as he begins to ruffle through the rest of the pillows. The thrown pillow hits Victor in the chest, causing him to almost fall back out of his chair.

Finally losing his cool and at the end of his patience, Victor yells at Damian, "What's your problem and what the hell are you looking for?"

"I wrote a number on the back of a card I found on a table, wrote a girl's phone number on it and now I can't find it," Damian retorted with an angry expression, still rustling around the sofa.

"Oh..," Victor says as he gets up and walks to his room, returning with a small card, handing it to Damian, "I think you dropped this a few weeks ago. I guess there are a few secrets you don't have anymore," he said angrily without thinking.

Damian snatched the card from Victor's hands, then with a rage-contorted face cuffed Victor in the arm, knocking him sideways.

"What are you talking about? If you think I'm gay, I swear I'll-"

"What, call the homo police and have them arrest me for obstructing your nightly entertainment?" Victor said, once again without thinking, as Damian promptly started toward him with a dangerous expression, backing Victor against a wall.

"What'd you say, you little weasel?" Damian said as he put both hands on either side of the wall to prevent Victor from moving away. "You don't know anything about me," he yelled at him.

Victor, seeing he drove Damian a bit too far, begins looking around for someplace to run to, noticing he probably can't get away. Unconsciously, his lower lip began to tremble and he took on a fearful expression, knowing Damian would probably beat him to a pulp if he said anything without thinking again. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to say that," he risked.

Finally able to meet Damian's gaze, he noticed that Damian's face had taken on an almost hurt expression, only to be replaced by that comical look he usually gives when it seems like he knows something that you don't. "You're damn right you didn't," Damian said in a husky whisper, as he leaned closer to plant a kiss on Victor's lips that almost buckled his knees.

As Victor realized what just happened, he almost went into hysterics, then unconsciously noted that they were both tearing each others shirts off in a mad dash for his bedroom.

Within minutes, Victor found himself more or less underneath Damian as the slightly older guy began planting kisses over his neck and chest, and as Damian slid his hand down Victor's stomach to brush across the fly of his shorts that sent a thrill up Victor's spine, causing him to let out a soft gasp. It became apparent that Damian was obviously more experienced in this area as he slowly undid the zipper of Victor's shorts and slid in his hand to gently massage him, inadvertently causing another gasp to escape from Victor's parted lips.

"You've never done anything like this before, have you?" Damian asked softly, and it was all Victor could do to just shake his head slightly as Damian began to slowly stroke him through his shorts, causing him to squirm slightly and shudder in pleasure.

Realizing he wasn't being very friendly, Victor slowly slid his hand down Damian's jeans making Damian whisper, "You don't have to."

"I want to," Victor replied while slowly removing Damian's jeans the rest of the way off, admiring his toned calf muscles

Damian continued stroking Victor as his other hand began slowly playing with his ass. Suddenly, Victor took a sharp intake of breath and an exclamation of surprise as Damian slip a finger inside him, and began sliding it in and out, much to Victor's amusement.

While Victor continued stroking Damian, he looked into his eyes, and noticed that Damian had taken on a fevered expression, lips slightly parted and eyes beginning to water. "Easy," Damian whispered between breaths, "Not too fast," as Victor moderated the strokes of his overzealous hand.

"Sorry," Victor replied as they both laughed slightly.

Just when Victor was beginning to feel uncomfortable in the position, Damian increased the speed of his stroking, making Victor almost whimper in ecstasy as he began to cum over his chest and abdomen, sending his body shivering. In response, and during his convulsions, Victor began stroking Damian faster, causing his dark-haired friend to let out a soft moan as he came over Victor's hand and arm.

Damian collapsed onto the bed beside Victor and rolled onto his back as both lay still and panting. Both were twisted on top of the sheets, glistening with sweat.

"Wow," Victor whispered when he could talk again. "I didn't know I was gay."

"I didn't know I was, either," Damian replied with a little laugh.
 
Was thinking about it, but was wondering what the general community thought about my writing before I consider doing another. After reading it over for the fourth time, it feels like it's missing something. Too much romantics?

Constructive criticism is most welcome.
 
You're off to a good start. Your beginning was quite strong. I couldn't really believe that you were a first-timer. The second half seemed a little more rushed, but still quite well done. Keep on writing. Pace yourself and don't feel pressured to post. Write and rewrite until it feels good to you and then let it rip. I hope you were serious about wanting real feedback. That's what I'm all about.

Is this really your first effort? I am still doubtful you could do that well on your first try. But I'm glad I read it.
 
Yeah, the last half was a little rushed because there was a storm brewing here and I didn't want the power to go out in the middle of typing and end up missing everything I wrote. The point was there, but the last two sections missed all the personal thoughts and details that the first section had.

In all honesty, yes, this is my first time writing. I mean, I have a pretty good imagination and these stories kind of fly off the top of my head, I've just never wrote one down before.

As to future writings, this seems like a good spot to pick up, and I had thought of putting it into an almost romantic comedy kind of setting. I'm just hoping I'm not going into territory that's been done to death.

I would love more constructive criticism.
 
I really liked this story and it is really good for a first try, but I have to agree with the others that the last part did seem a bit rushed. It needed more feeling from both parties involved. I want to read more. GOOD JOB.
 
Thanks P.O. Great story, I agree that the last part could have been expanded, but certainly very well written.
If our replies are encouraging to you then please continue! We would love to hear more about our 'Heroes'.
Harry
 
Ah, what the hell...

"Love Bites"

"A little higher."

"This?" Damian replied from the top of the ladder.

"Still higher," Said Victor.

"What about this?" Damian asked, straining almost to the second floor windows.

"Not that high," called Victor. "You need to bring it down about three inches."

"Is it really going to make much difference?" asked Troy from the bottom of the ladder. "And since when did you become an exterior decorator? I thought you were a biology major. I'm the artistic one."

Giving Troy a withering look, already accustomed to his constant sarcastic comments despite having known him for only two weeks, Victor tossed the hammer up to Damian so that he could pin the banner above the main entrance to the dorm. A few sharp raps with the hammer was all it took and Damian was climbing down with the aid of Troy. He's probably just waiting to say something critical about the whole business Victor thought, mildly annoyed at Troy's wanting to help in the first place.

As all three stepped back to admire their work - Troy having painted the banner with the help of some of the other art students - Victor almost cringed as he waited the inevitable comment. Damian looked ready to chew iron and spit nails, having put up with Troy's comments for over an hour.

"You know, I think that top left corner is crooked. That's probably your fault, Damian. He's got no tact, he does. You just don't have the knack for ha--" began Troy before he was cut off as Damian smacked him across the back of the head, falling forwards onto the ground before he could stop himself. Dramatically rubbing his head with exaggerated care and glaring at Damian, Troy said, "Maybe it's not so crooked after all. Actually, from down here it looks quite nice."

"I figured you would say that. Now that I look at, it does look a little crooked, doesn't it, Viccie?" said Damian with a sudden mischievous grin. Knowing he was going to be the butt of some joke, Victor just went with the flow.

"No it doesn't. It looks perfectly fine, to me." Victor replied, giving Damian one of his 'don't start with me' looks. He could see Troy, still on the ground, unsuccessfully hiding a smile behind his hand.

"Maybe that's because you were the one giving the directions," Damian said, his grin becoming a little wider.

"Oh, bite me," Victor replied, then let out a startled yelp as Damian quickly took his hand and bit him on the forearm. "Ouch, what the hell was that for?" said Victor, rubbing his arm.

"I think that's called a love bite," supplied Troy before Damian could speak, almost jumping at the chance to poke fun at anyone. Here it comes Victor thought grimly. "Some animals do that when-" he cut off again as Victor kicked him in the leg.

"What is this, pick on Troy day? You in another one of your moods, Vic? Is it that time of the month, again? How do you put up with him?" he finished just as Damian took another swing at Troy's head, which he ducked under and started running towards the door shouting "love bite! love bite!" at the top of his lungs. Damian, seeing a chance to use his quick feet, pursued him as they disappeared into the dorm.

Of all the people I finally become friends with, one is immature and the other has a running fetish Victor thought to himself, once again looking up at the banner that read 'Autumn Bake Sale', referring to an event the campus staff thought would be nice to have. We're having an outside bake sale in mid November Victor thought sarcastically if they think a bake sale is going to go well at a boy's dormitory they've got another thing coming. He put the idea of this idiotic sale out of his head as he began packing up the ladder and tools they had used.

It had been almost a month since Damian and Victor had had that first encounter. While they weren't exactly open about their new relationship, word got around and it was pretty much common knowledge. Nobody seemed to care what they did, and it seemed so long as it didn't affect anyone else, it was generally accepted. That's nice to know Victor thought at least the snickering and offhand comments by most of the student body has stopped.

Damian had taken it well enough. He was still quite popular and still one of the best on the track team. If anything, being in an actual relationship had stopped him from those late night binge parties.
Seeing that Damian was returning from the dorms, he gave Victor one of those little smiles that sent his blood running. Damn, but he's gorgeous. What's he doing with me?

"I like your personality. And you're not that bad looking, either." Damian said with a grin, as Victor realized that he had spoken his thoughts aloud. "I can't stand people that think they're God's gift and act like they're superior. You're very somber and calm, and you rarely think of only yourself."

"You once thought you were superior," Victor risked with a little smirk, picking up the toolbox as Damian got the ladder.

"I'm a changed man, you know," he started, sounding like one of those old guys giving sage advice to young people.

"You haven't changed at all. You're still the same hedonistic person you were before, just from a different perspective."

"Oh, shut up and let's put these things back in the janitor's room," said Damian, hefting the ladder on his shoulder.

"If you say so, and I still have a mark from where you bit me," Victor replied absently twisting his arm so Damian could see.

"I've given you worse than that and in more painful places," Damian remarked, as Victor blushed furiously. He's got no tact, he does Victor thought, mimicking Troy's voice in this head.

"What happened to Troy?" Victor asked, wanting to change the subject quickly before people started hearing their conversation.

"I stuck him in a closet and said if he came out I'd shove something unpleasant up his ass," said Damian with a wicked grin.

"You going to let him out?" Victor asked with a little laugh, imagining the look on Troy's face when he heard that.

"When he wants to come out, he can. The door was unlocked." replied Damian with another wicked grin. "He's probably still in there."

"That's cruel," said Victor.

"That's life," Damian replied sagely.

As they reached the doors, Victor looked up once more at the banner. It's only a little crooked he mused.



more to come soon
 
That's exactly what I wanted to do: write something funny and romantic, yet realistic.

I don't think I'm very good at sex scenes; every time I try to write one they come out all.....overly-dramatic and totally overly-romantic.
 
i like your story please will you write more its very good i really enjoy it
 
Nothing wrong with romance. I think it is something we all want, but alas, it doesn't come easily and doesn't stay long enough. Great story, I see some parallels with my first year in college. Thanks for the memories...

Craiger
 
"Like a Game of Chess"


Victor tried his hardest to think about his next move. He was a great chess player, but Troy proved to be a skilled opponent. He had won only half the games they played the past week. He's a much better player than Damian Victor thought, moving one of his pawns forward to block Troy's bishop from taking his knight.

"Why'd you do that for? Now you lost your pawn, and for what reason?" Damian asked, sitting backwards in his chair with his arms folded on the back where he'd been watching the game with only a little interest. "That's not the move I would have made."

"You would have moved the knight, which would have caused me to move my other bishop and take it anyways, leaving room for my rook and the queen to check the king," Troy said matter-of-factly.

"That's confusing," said Gareth, from the other side of the table. He had only met Gareth a week ago. It had not taken him long to find out that Gareth was dimwitted and lackluster when it came to academics, but was very compassionate about things he set out to do, often to the point of obsession. Nobody teased Gareth about his intelligence, though; he was on the varsity football team, with all the height advantage of a basketball player and the size of a WWE wrestler. Nobody but Troy, that is.

"That's chess for you," Damian mused. "It's only for the intellectual types like Vic and Troy, here." You're just mad you lost to Troy Victor replied mentally.

"I can be intellectual," said Gareth, unknowingly baiting himself for one of Troy's clever - and often tasteless - jokes. Joking was almost a form of art with Troy, Victor had begun to realize. He played a joke like he played chess; setting the stage then casually dropping a few noncommittal statements only to end with a big finish. This caused Victor to frown down at the chessboard in worry as he began wondering what Troy's trap was and where it would come from.

"What makes you say that?" asked Troy with the hint of a little smirk, eyes still focused on the board.

"I got a B on that biology quiz that Vic helped m' study for," Gareth said, beaming with pride with what might be one of his greatest achievements, sad as that may be.

"The one about the growth of plants?" Victor asked, surprised that Gareth had retained any knowledge of what they went over. The guy's mind was a proverbial sieve.

"That's t' one, ya," Gareth said. Victor had enough time to look over at Troy to know a cutting point was about to be made by the glint in Troy's eye. He could have sworn he heard Damian mutter "here it comes" under his breath.

"Well of course you're knowledgable about plants, Gar. You have the intelligence of a carrot, the thickness of pea soup, and all the complexities of a New York vegetable garden." Troy remarked with that annoying little smirk as both Damian and Victor couldn't help but chuckle. He then proceeded to move a piece on the chessboard, looking to keep Victor's queen trapped behind two pawns. Looks like he's going to win again Victor thought grimly.

"I'dun think yer very funny, 'ya know that right," Gareth replied with a slight hurt expression, but aware that Troy never meant any real harm to anyone. Gareth's southern twang was thick when he was stressed or emotional.

"You don't think very much at all, do you, Gareth?" Troy said with his usual air of superiority, finishing off his joke with another cutting statement that would in turn set the stage for another string of jokes. Victor wished he knew what Troy was getting at on the chessboard.

"I think," Gareth said dully, "I jes don't flaunt it like ya'll." Troy almost spit his drink over the chessboard to keep from laughing.

"Why Gar, I think you almost made a funny," Troy said when he could catch his breath. This chessboard isn't funny Victor mused as he still tried to puzzle out what Troy's game was aiming for.

Knowing a change of subject was in order, Damian asked Gareth about his new girlfriend, Sarah, one of the cheerleaders.

As the two started to talk back and forth, Victor still had his eyes glued to the game. It was almost like his and Damian's relationship. Nothing much had happened since that first encounter, just as nothing major happened on the chessboard since Troy had made his first power play twelve moves ago.

Damian still kissed him and they cuddled on the couch at night watching the TV, but nothing happened in the way of sex or moving their relationship forward. Somebody had to move first to make anything happen. Victor just didn't know how to get Damian to talk about it or what he should do to prevent them from drifting apart. It was a stalemate.

Still looking at the chessboard, he could feel Troy's eyes on him, studying him in his usual calculating manner. Among Troy's many artistic and linguistic abilities was his talent for reading people's faces and he could be surprisingly insightful at times. That's probably why he wins so much Victor mused.

At least Troy had been nice enough not to remark too much on his and Damian's relationship. He knew when things were touchy. Maybe Troy knows what I should do Victor wondered maybe I should ask Troy for advice, he's known Damian longer than I.

"Victor," he heard Troy's voice.

"Hm, what?" Victor asked, snapping out of his reverie.

"It's your move." Troy said with a knowing gaze into Damian's eyes.
 
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