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Hi, this is really sudden of me, but I decided to post up my writings for you all to view. The characters in this story are a little young, so until the story grows and progresses, the only things extremely sexual are the ideas in the narrator's head. This story is based on personal experience, so I hope you enjoy it. I may not be as good as many of the jubbers who write, but I do hope that you enjoy this. Any comments, ideas, and criticism are welcomed with open arms!
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Chapter One: Beginning of the End
“Renee! How are you?” I screamed at the top of my lungs. “Ugh… how can you be so perky this early in the morning?” she moaned at me, obviously cranky. “Umm… Sleep! Come on, rise and shine! This is only the beginning!” I stated, trying to get her out of her bad mood.
As much as I love her to death, Renee is NOT a morning person, but I put up with it. After all she was the only one who was there for me when Chris ripped my heart apart and took advantage of me. Not once, but MULTIPLE times. Besides, her family loves me, sometimes more than they seem to love their own daughter. So, I was there for her when a guy had to give her ‘the slip’ once he became of age, and I was still there when she almost failed English, and I was there for her when she accidentally shattered her mother’s priceless vase.
It was our first day as sophomores, and I planned to have a blast. Now that the abused lifestyle of Freshmen angst was over, I planned on kissing up to Ben, the sexiest guy I had ever laid my eyes on. Maybe it was the dirty blonde hair, or his bright blue eyes, or his blinding smile, OR his big… arms. He was sexy, smart, and humorous, and maybe I might get to kiss down…
“Hello! Is anyone there!?” I had just realized, courtesy of the Renee Express, that I had been daydreaming again. “Oh… sorry. So are you excited?” “I guess… so what classes do you have?” “Let’s see… first period… band… second, English, third, History, I have Gym fourth, geometry sixth, lunch seventh, chemistry after that, and I end with a study hall. How about you?” “Completely different… oh, except for English and History! Who do you have?” “Murray and Dawson.” “Sweet me too! Well I better get off to homeroom! See you second period!” She shouted as she bolted down the hallway. Typical Renee; cranky one moment, the next, you can hardly keep up.
As I walked down the hall, it seemed so new to me, even though I’ve already been at this school for a year now. I finally found my homeroom. As I walked inside, a familiar voice called out to me.
“How’s it goin’, sexy?” said Dan, smirking at me. “Ugh, it’s you. Why do you always show up in my life?!” I groaned. Dan was a douchebag, plain and simple. He’s the guy who asked me out online, asked to keep it a secret, and pretended to be gay, just so he could make a fool out of me. All because of that skank…
“Wow… what an eerie coincidence.” Julia said with a smirk, as she cuddled up to Dan. Oh, and in case you’re wondering, yes, she is the skank I’m referring to. She was the brain behind the operation, the one who started this whole mess, just because I out-staged her at the talent show four years ago. “Great… is this punishment for my previous life?” I asked sarcastically. Julia just wore her cheesy, sarcastic smile. “Yes, don’t you just wish you could stab me to death?” I smiled. “Yes, I would, but I left my harpoon at home, Moby Ditz!” I smiled, as I watched her normally pale face grow bright pink, and as I left the room, I could hear her shouting in rage, and all I could do was giggle with satisfaction for my cleverness.
But as I walked down toward the cafeteria, I began to realize this would be an interesting year, which was confirmed when I bumped into a random guy, spilling his coffee all over him.
“Oh god, I am so…” I looked at his face, and then into his eyes. “…sorry.” Much to my surprise, for the first time in ten years… I blushed like a little girl.
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I don't know when I'll get the next chapter up, but I hope you enjoy this, and again, I hope you'll give me feedback.
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Chapter One: Beginning of the End
“Renee! How are you?” I screamed at the top of my lungs. “Ugh… how can you be so perky this early in the morning?” she moaned at me, obviously cranky. “Umm… Sleep! Come on, rise and shine! This is only the beginning!” I stated, trying to get her out of her bad mood.
As much as I love her to death, Renee is NOT a morning person, but I put up with it. After all she was the only one who was there for me when Chris ripped my heart apart and took advantage of me. Not once, but MULTIPLE times. Besides, her family loves me, sometimes more than they seem to love their own daughter. So, I was there for her when a guy had to give her ‘the slip’ once he became of age, and I was still there when she almost failed English, and I was there for her when she accidentally shattered her mother’s priceless vase.
It was our first day as sophomores, and I planned to have a blast. Now that the abused lifestyle of Freshmen angst was over, I planned on kissing up to Ben, the sexiest guy I had ever laid my eyes on. Maybe it was the dirty blonde hair, or his bright blue eyes, or his blinding smile, OR his big… arms. He was sexy, smart, and humorous, and maybe I might get to kiss down…
“Hello! Is anyone there!?” I had just realized, courtesy of the Renee Express, that I had been daydreaming again. “Oh… sorry. So are you excited?” “I guess… so what classes do you have?” “Let’s see… first period… band… second, English, third, History, I have Gym fourth, geometry sixth, lunch seventh, chemistry after that, and I end with a study hall. How about you?” “Completely different… oh, except for English and History! Who do you have?” “Murray and Dawson.” “Sweet me too! Well I better get off to homeroom! See you second period!” She shouted as she bolted down the hallway. Typical Renee; cranky one moment, the next, you can hardly keep up.
As I walked down the hall, it seemed so new to me, even though I’ve already been at this school for a year now. I finally found my homeroom. As I walked inside, a familiar voice called out to me.
“How’s it goin’, sexy?” said Dan, smirking at me. “Ugh, it’s you. Why do you always show up in my life?!” I groaned. Dan was a douchebag, plain and simple. He’s the guy who asked me out online, asked to keep it a secret, and pretended to be gay, just so he could make a fool out of me. All because of that skank…
“Wow… what an eerie coincidence.” Julia said with a smirk, as she cuddled up to Dan. Oh, and in case you’re wondering, yes, she is the skank I’m referring to. She was the brain behind the operation, the one who started this whole mess, just because I out-staged her at the talent show four years ago. “Great… is this punishment for my previous life?” I asked sarcastically. Julia just wore her cheesy, sarcastic smile. “Yes, don’t you just wish you could stab me to death?” I smiled. “Yes, I would, but I left my harpoon at home, Moby Ditz!” I smiled, as I watched her normally pale face grow bright pink, and as I left the room, I could hear her shouting in rage, and all I could do was giggle with satisfaction for my cleverness.
But as I walked down toward the cafeteria, I began to realize this would be an interesting year, which was confirmed when I bumped into a random guy, spilling his coffee all over him.
“Oh god, I am so…” I looked at his face, and then into his eyes. “…sorry.” Much to my surprise, for the first time in ten years… I blushed like a little girl.
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I don't know when I'll get the next chapter up, but I hope you enjoy this, and again, I hope you'll give me feedback.

















