youngnhung
Virgin
dear cdg9899, hey man..have written a few freelance stories in the past that involved rape type environments...you have to be descriptive enough to get the point across, but allow some ambiguity to play, just to give the reader the idea, but not all the details of each person raping him. usually, in this kind of situation, there are no more than a handful of guys that actually do the raping..it's like porn, focus in on the parts that are going to show the pain, the humiliation, and if possible a twist at the end..nothing like that to make a rape scene turn into something different...as far as the football locker rooms, you have the team managers, the guys that only sit on the bench, and then the main players.. You want to focus on a couple of silent players that step up to do the nasty when you don't expect it..and a few of the main characters..Keep up the good work..if you want to chat..my email address is *EDIT* Email addy removed.
