Thanks for the feeback, DonQuixote.
I'm going to retire this story now for a number of reasons. The main one being that Sam was based on two guys; one who I was actually talking to online and the other was actually a guy I spotted in the sauna.
The guy in the sauna became a fantasy which is what inspired the description of him. Now I've actually met the 'real' Sam after bumping into him in the gym and the fantasy didn't match reality.
Thanks to everyone for their kind comments on this story. I already have another idea in my head for the next project which I think will be even hotter.
I'm going to retire this story now for a number of reasons. The main one being that Sam was based on two guys; one who I was actually talking to online and the other was actually a guy I spotted in the sauna.
The guy in the sauna became a fantasy which is what inspired the description of him. Now I've actually met the 'real' Sam after bumping into him in the gym and the fantasy didn't match reality.
Thanks to everyone for their kind comments on this story. I already have another idea in my head for the next project which I think will be even hotter.
