Hi! I am a first time poster, and I have decided to try my luck here. This is also Gay Fiction, so please be honest.
(BTW...This story does not have any sex, but in case I do write Chapter 2, which I’m not yet ready to do, it will involve it.)
"Class Attention! Echo!" The noise echo’s throughout the classroom. "That’s what I’d like to hear! We are called Echo because we are the loudest and biggest squad in this school!"
Our Sergeant Major Stands in Front of the class, his name is Ryan Cruz, We have been friends ever since third grade, but come eighth grade he started getting all the girls. As I was stuck on the sidelines eating my sadness away, now that we are sophomores. He’s 5'11, 180 lbs, and has a body any girl would want to possess . While here I am at 5'9, 265 lbs, and having no one but my f. The reason I Joined ROTC in the first place, was to lose weight and look good for the guys... I mean girls!
Oh, who am I kidding? I’m gay, I’ve been gay ever since I was in eighth grade, I will admit I started having day dreams about my Math teacher in seventh grade, but I actually felt it hit me when I started to realize that every guy I looked at was cute, especially the chubby guys.
"Single file. Fall In!" That’s our 1st Sergeant, name is Ruben White, he’s the ultimate hunk In my book, even though most people might disagree with me, at 5'10 and about 270, he is the first thing I look at when we undress and change into our PT uniforms, with belly in tact and his twins on him, he’s the cutest guy on the squad.
Huh? That’s weird, Sergeant Major Just Took Over For 1st Sergeant, O well.
"Forward march!" As we are marching I hear "Smart! Get In Here!" That’s me, Jake Smart.
"Yes First Sergeant" "Close The Door" I Closed The Classroom Door. "Is it true?"
"Is What True?"
"That you’re a cock sucker, cadet!"
I was in shock, not only because he called me that, but how did he find out? No one other than my closest friends knew even.....
"Ryan Told you, didn’t he, sir?"
"Yes he did"
DAMN IT! I thought I could trust him! I feel like crying. "Permission To Leave 1st Sergeant."
"Permission granted." I turned to leave.
“Smart!" As I turn back to answer, he kissed me on the lips, not with tongue, but a gentle kiss - the sort that you would want to last forever.
"Now go on, you still haven’t done your exercises yet."
He smiled at me like nothing had happened. I nodded, turned around, and walked out of the door into the unknown.........
Opinions?
(BTW...This story does not have any sex, but in case I do write Chapter 2, which I’m not yet ready to do, it will involve it.)
Chapter One.
"Class Attention! Echo!" The noise echo’s throughout the classroom. "That’s what I’d like to hear! We are called Echo because we are the loudest and biggest squad in this school!"
Our Sergeant Major Stands in Front of the class, his name is Ryan Cruz, We have been friends ever since third grade, but come eighth grade he started getting all the girls. As I was stuck on the sidelines eating my sadness away, now that we are sophomores. He’s 5'11, 180 lbs, and has a body any girl would want to possess . While here I am at 5'9, 265 lbs, and having no one but my f. The reason I Joined ROTC in the first place, was to lose weight and look good for the guys... I mean girls!
Oh, who am I kidding? I’m gay, I’ve been gay ever since I was in eighth grade, I will admit I started having day dreams about my Math teacher in seventh grade, but I actually felt it hit me when I started to realize that every guy I looked at was cute, especially the chubby guys.
"Single file. Fall In!" That’s our 1st Sergeant, name is Ruben White, he’s the ultimate hunk In my book, even though most people might disagree with me, at 5'10 and about 270, he is the first thing I look at when we undress and change into our PT uniforms, with belly in tact and his twins on him, he’s the cutest guy on the squad.
Huh? That’s weird, Sergeant Major Just Took Over For 1st Sergeant, O well.
"Forward march!" As we are marching I hear "Smart! Get In Here!" That’s me, Jake Smart.
"Yes First Sergeant" "Close The Door" I Closed The Classroom Door. "Is it true?"
"Is What True?"
"That you’re a cock sucker, cadet!"
I was in shock, not only because he called me that, but how did he find out? No one other than my closest friends knew even.....
"Ryan Told you, didn’t he, sir?"
"Yes he did"
DAMN IT! I thought I could trust him! I feel like crying. "Permission To Leave 1st Sergeant."
"Permission granted." I turned to leave.
“Smart!" As I turn back to answer, he kissed me on the lips, not with tongue, but a gentle kiss - the sort that you would want to last forever.
"Now go on, you still haven’t done your exercises yet."
He smiled at me like nothing had happened. I nodded, turned around, and walked out of the door into the unknown.........
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