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Ok so... this is the fist time I've done something like this and I hope to get positive feedback. Even if I don't, I intend to use that feedback to improve my own writing. Expect an update every two to three days.

This is a true story. For the privacy of the other party in this story, his name has been replaced with a common generic one (George).


Two years ago, my best friend at the time was sleeping over. He’s not the brightest bulb in the shed but that’s what makes him adorable. That and he hadn’t gotten rid of all his baby fat but was still an athlete. At 5’ 8” his blond hair and bluish gray eyes always shone when he was playing soccer. He didn’t have a six pack but neither did I. Not that it matters really. He was fit. I've gotten taller and more muscular since then but I was still fit I guess.

My parents were at convention so we had the house to ourselves. Everything went just as it had always went. He came after his soccer practice, took a shower at my place and since it was just me and him, stayed in just his boxers and a white crewneck undershirt. Normal, right? It was. … Until bed. As most of you know, a sleep over is never just for sleep so we ended up doing what most people doing. Chat. It was late so maybe I wasn’t thinking so fully and asked if he could keep a secret. He said yes.

“I really like you George.”

“Well that is why we’re friends isn’t it?”

“No, I mean… I really like you.”

“Uh… what?”

I sighed.

“George, I don’t think I’m 100% straight. Maybe just a little bicurious.”

Silence.

“Um hello?”

“So you’re saying you want to fuck me.”

“N-no! At least… not unless… erm… I mean… I don’t think either of us would be ready for that…”

Silence again.

“So do you hate me?”

“Why should I? Not like we haven't done shit before.”

It was true. We had done some experimenting about a year before that. Just mutual touching but neither of us came so it was harmless… right? That’s what I thought too except about four months after that first skin-on-skin contact, I had to jack him off. He wasn’t as explored with his body so after a dance at school he had gotten blue balls. He was in so much pain at the time I told him to let me help. We swore to never speak of that. Now it was a whole year later.

I sat at the foot of his (technically my) bed on the mattress, maybe half hard. The lights were already out but there was still a small bit of light from the windows but not much. It was a cloudy night with a very faint new moon so there was no light. The clouds shifted a little bit letting the moon’s blue tinged light through. Then I saw it and said,

“You’re hard.”

“I know. It’s for you”

Author's notes: Ok so I tried to leave some suspense but I'm sure you can see where this is going so maybe I'm not so great at writing... It was hard to find a spot to stop in the grand scheme of things though so I'm hoping you accept my apologies.
 
Well I think you're off to a good start. I think a little more detail would be helpful. Like, the way he smiles at you, or the way he looks at you, and little quirks that no one else would notice. Things that give us, the reader, an idea of what's really going on.

I think you have a nice little blurb, but I think you need to expand on it and bring us into the story more.

Oh and also, tell us what happened next because seriously dude... cockblock...
 
inthecloset said:
Well I think you're off to a good start. I think a little more detail would be helpful. Like, the way he smiles at you, or the way he looks at you, and little quirks that no one else would notice. Things that give us, the reader, an idea of what's really going on.

I think you have a nice little blurb, but I think you need to expand on it and bring us into the story more.

Oh and also, tell us what happened next because seriously dude... cockblock...

isn't that half the fun of writing? also it is a true story and it really was dark :P

skittles said:
So far so good, except I guess I have what's apparently a generic name. Hahaha, but it's cool. Please, sir, may we have a bit more?

i just happen to know a lot of people with the name. please don't take it as an offense.

Also I've decided that I can stretch this longer if I move away from the truth. Keep an eye out for the author's notes (always in red) and idle banter (always in blue) as at some point I will ask whether the truth will continue (though may be a bit shorter) and whether the fantasy/imagination should play around. For those of you who haven't figured it out, all actual parts of the instalments written by me will be in black.

But without further ado,


I didn’t know what to think. Had he been shy but attracted to me too? Or was he trying to help me by letting me satisfy my curiosity? In any event, I yearned for a better look, a taste, anything really. I slowly pulled down his boxers with no objections from him. It was beautiful - all six and a bit, uncut, inches of him appearing as smooth as velvet and as I would soon find out, just as soft. His foreskin already pulled back from not being large enough for him. Being blond, his pubic hair appeared nonexistent in the light he was bathed in. I saw his crack had a bit of hair and as if to give me a better look, he spread his legs. It was nice and furry but not thick at all. Just as I reached the bottom to pull off his drawers and fling them to the side, I had to look down so they wouldn’t get tangled around his feet.

Then the clouds covered the moon again. I couldn't see where his cock was. I moved a little further up maybe hovering a little too low as my lips accidentally touched his head. I immediately got harder as I pulled back to check if he was ok.

“Just do what you want.”

Glad he trusted me but still new to being with a guy, I started to suck him slowly (and maybe a bit clumsily). It must not have been that bad since about a minute or two later he wanted me to go faster, pushing my head down and thrusting as he said it. I tugged at him to remind him of his earlier statement. A grunt and light chortle was all he could muster. The moon illuminated the room again and I could see he had tilted his head back on the pillow and closed his eyes. I couldn’t see much of his face but I could see his lips. I never noticed just how thin his lips actually were but they were hot none-the-less. Moisture glistened off them in a half open smile as he took a deep breath. His chest raised about two inches blocking my view – “Damn” I thought. He looked up (or down) towards me and out of the corner of my eye I saw him lick those amazing lips with just the tip of his tongue.

For all my life, I swore that he had been as straight as an arrow. But here I was sucking him off with no objection. What happened next came as an even greater surprise.

“Stop for a sec ‘kay?”

“Are you going to cum?”

“No… But it’s my turn.”

“…What?”

Author's Notes: Ok, so I think I like ending it with a quote each time just to draw more questions. This part was difficult to know where the best place to stop it was so I judged it based on the length (trust me this wasn't the BEST place to stop it but I couldn't really decide. I pretty much the rest written but I would like to see reactions and feedback so I can edit the next parts accordingly.

P.S. I'm aware I'm being a bit mean by saying I have everything written just slowly putting it up. ;) I'm already being nice by changing the update frequency to once every 1-2 days which means less time for feed back and editing. This also means the excerpts will be shorter than intended.
 
Welcome to the story board - you have made an interesting start to your contribution to our 'library'. However, I have to ask whether you are a writer or a cock tease?

A bit of both is my guess! Keep up the good work. :=D::=D::=D::=D::=D:
 
Clearly a tease ... but with a hot story ... I want to know how "George" sucks cock ... and if this is his first time or not. I don't think it is ...

I'm looking forward to the next bit ... Yum!
 
Welcome to the story board - you have made an interesting start to your contribution to our 'library'. However, I have to ask whether you are a writer or a cock tease?

A bit of both is my guess! Keep up the good work. :=D::=D::=D::=D::=D:

I'm not entirely sure what the difference is at this point since I'm not sure how far I want to go with this work on the side as I have some more pressing and important things regarding my future.

Anyways, without further adieu...


Before I could comprehend what was happening, he sat up and reached over where I was sitting. He grabbed my shoulder and pulled me over top of him such that my legs were where his face was. Stunned, I looked down (or up) to see the shadows of his face grin. He smirked in a way that just made me want to squeeze him like a giant teddy bear – in all honesty, he did kind of remind me of one except of pure (maybe not so pure anymore) flesh. I opened my mouth to say something to him. But maybe it was a good thing I was speechless – he sure wasn’t.

“I didn’t say stop.”

And with that he thrust into my still open mouth. I nearly choked at the aggression but loved it at the same time. I got a nose full of his scent. Freshness from his shower but still having the undertones of his musk and sweat from his soccer practice. Then on my own six inch, I felt something wet and hot. I knew I had more tolerance than he did so I wasn’t worried too much about spilling inside him but he did something that took me a minute or two to notice.

He was copying my tongue! I wasn’t sure so I stopped, and only sucked with no tongue movement. He did the same as if he were saying “This is how you make me feel.” He shifted his core forward forcing me to almost dig my chin into my chest to keep at his cock. I guess that’s a minor problem being just under six feet tall with him being about a third of a foot shorter. I had had it and dared to use my hands on the rest of him. Too bad we were on our sides otherwise I could have wrapped him in my arms entirely. Instead I had to settle with only one hand caressing the newly perfect spheres of his bubble butt. Oh how I wished I could use both my hands!

With my left hand I dragged my middle and index finger together down his spine towards his crack. With my right, I cupped his rocks and squeezed a little. The response I got was a gasp for air. I nearly gasped myself at the softness of his skin. Like I said, he was a bit fuzzy but it’s the type of thin hair you’d find on a baby. I moved my hands closer and closer together. I stopped just after the start of the two mounds and a little beyond his scrotum. I pressed on both sides and made a circular motion.

“Aah! Do that again!”

I swore he grew harder and I obliged as I tasted his precum. Truth be told, I tasted it the moment my lips had touched him. This time it was sweeter though. His own suction was comfortable but hesitant. I could tell he wasn’t sure about being with another guy and I could tell it was his time sucking cock as well. I wasn’t either really. I’m still not. But I like what I like. I can’t remember too much of what happened next to be honest. As I twirled my tongue around his velvet-wrapped hardness, something inside him must have snapped. He threw my leg away and released me from his mouth. He gasped for air and started panting as if he had just run the soccer pitch for a breakaway. He tapped, or rather, tried to tap, my side but I felt his strength was elsewhere. Sure enough, my right index and middle finger felt the pressure building – felt his muscles contracting struggling to keep control.

“I… unh… I’m unh… going to unh… cum…”

I didn’t slow or release him. I wanted to feel his heat. My right was still following the convulsions of his muscles. I took my left hand away to pull his balls towards his anus. It seemed like his balls had covered some of his length. I took him in as far as I could. Somehow I managed to. My surprise at this was short lived as I had released my right hand from the pressure point accidentally as he screamed with pleasure and disbelief

“OH GOD! FUCK!”

I had heard the average ejaculation was about a teaspoon. So when he filled my entire mouth with his seed I didn't know what to do. So I did what had felt as natural as drinking water. I swallowed. For about five minutes after that, we stayed there both breathing heavily and sweating – both unsure of what we had just done and whether or not it would happen ever again.

Author's Notes: There's a little bit more to this story that's truth however I feel that would leave readers unsatisfied. Therefore, I put it to the votes of the readers. Would you rather I finish this series with the truth? Or is it more preferable to have me fabricate an alternate to the reality that occured? In preparation for both answers and to await votes, the next segment will not occur until Sunday, September 13, 2009.
 
They say that the truth never hurt anybody - test the theory!
 
as unfortunate as this may seem, the truth would mean the next is the final installment and it may not be the ending you would be hoping for. perhaps i can fabricate a separate storyline where it's like "choose your own adventure" sort of thing. Either way, I think I only have time for maybe one or two more parts before real life overwhelms me with work.
 
Croboylover,
I just played catch up on your history.
While short vignettes - teases as everyone has said, it has been a fun and interesting read.

I like your thoughts on dual endings - it wouldn't be the first story to offer that option.

Welcome. I understand about "real life". It has to take precedence.
 
again i'm very new at both writing and this whole being not 100% straight which i'm coming to grips with so I thank you for the comments.. I would like to apologize to anyone who was looking forward to the final portion as I underestimated the workload my university and extracurriculars has given me. I shall have it up in due time however it will be my last piece until I get more time in the summer. (I say summer because I am going away in winter for family reasons)
 
croboylover,
Your REAL LIFE ALWAYS comes FIRST! We'll keep, maybe wilt a little, LOL, but we'll survive.
 
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