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Well, give it a fair go mate; JUB's worldwide readers need time to find you, then read your tale. I think you write well, and your story is intriguing. So please continue to tickle our interest.
 
The framework of your plot is sound, but I do not view this as a webcam situation where I ask for a function, and you dutifully perform. The parameters of this tale are already in your mind if you look for them: just let it flow out from you. These characters are your puppets, they dance on your strings to your tune. Once you let others dictate their movements, their features could become blurred, their actions inconsistent, and the whole tale stilted and unsatisfactory. I would like to see YOU, the author, create a hot, hot interesting story from just your thoughts and experiances.
 
Please don't stop now as now you have my attention. An excellent start to a well written story...| :=D:
 
I really like the where this story is heading. I has avery good start. Please continue.:=D:
 
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