ballentyne84
On the Prowl
Author note:
To all the readers out there reading my story, this is my first attempt to write a gay story, so be a bit generous to me guys. I’m not actually a sex addict type of person, so I like to write my story with warm feelings full of love in it. I like to see my story working its way from the beginning of the relationship towards the end. Of course I’ll try my best to include some sex stuff in it, just bear in mind that I’m a virgin and don’t have much experience in the real sex stuff. Another thing is English is not my mother language. I’ll try my best not to make numerous amount of grammatical errors. If anyone of you is kind enough to correct my mistakes, I’ll be honored. Should anyone of you want to give me criticism, comments, suggestions and/or compliments (especially), you are welcome to do so.
Part of the story is real but some of it is just my imagination. The characters’ names are real and the friendship thingy with them is real. The girls' characters are real. The café is actually my dream and I hope one day I could have it. Remy is me completely, not a single thing missed out. The rest is all imagination, I think. So enjoy and I hope you all like it. Oh yeah, I don’t use much slang in my story, because I hate to see that red-wavy line while I’m typing. I want to ignore it but it makes my eyes sore. I hope you don’t mind.
As time goes by, I drift further into my thoughts. Thinking back to what things were like before struggling my way to finally have my own life now. Thinking back to where I had to face stuff and shit that came into my life. Thinking back to where I have to give up every thing after my mom died in order to take care of my family welfare. Oh, by the way, my name is Noremie (pronounce No – Remie) also known as Remy by my friends. I’m from Kuala Belait, Brunei Darussalam, small town and small country too. I’m 22 years old, 171 cm in height, 85kg and coming down in body weight, dark brown eyes, shoulder length black hair that has white flashes in it, don’t ask me why, it is just natural and has been since my early teens.
To me, it is actually quite nice and I like the front part my hair because honestly it looks like Rouges’ hair in the X-men, LOL. But to others, they often told me to dye my hair, and those who have never met me before, they actually suspect that I'm 30 years of age or even older. Back in my college junior year, they were often surprised by my looks and age. Sometimes I kind of let them foolishly believe that I’m older than them, only my smile and laugh could answer them. Oh man…you should see their face when I’m telling them I’m only seventeen and they still couldn't believe it, so it ended-up with me taking out my identity card from my wallet to show them.
Anyway, back to the story. I never actually know how to describe my appearance, so go figure it out for yourselves. My race is Malay and my religion is Islam. Now you know how difficult my life might be as a gay, and it is, with my religion condemning homosexual activity and saying that it is a sin and those who practice it will be thrown into the fiery pit of hell.
For those of you who don’t know where my country is, here is some information about it. Brunei Darussalam lies on the north-western coast of Borneo island, and nope we are not hairy wild man as some westerners say about us. Oil and gas industry form our main exports, but nowadays our government has begun a shift into agriculture and other types of industry. Most of our land is covered by thick tropical rainforest and it matches our tourism slogan, ‘Brunei Darussalam the adobe of peace’. You can search in the website to find out more.
I don’t know how long I have been day dreaming but I can feel someone was lightly shaking my shoulder and softly calling me back to my reality. “Sir……sir……” the soft voice said.
I glanced to my right side and found a cute six year old Chinese girl with his long black hair tied up into a pony tail at the back. She smiling at me and let out a small giggle pointing her hand to a direction. I quickly follow her pointing finger and there is a lady standing a few feet behind her, smiling at me. I’m guessing she is the girl mother. I quickly stand on my feet to apologize to them, “I’m so sorry M'am. I don’t hear you coming in and I’m kind of day dreaming back there.”
“No, it’s OK. We’re just arrived a minute ago and found out there was nobody at the counter. I actually hesitated to call for you and well the next second I know, my daughter was standing there beside you lightly shaking your shoulder and you know the rest…” the lady said, still smiling her wide smile and her daughter hugging her legs, giggling. By now, I can feel my face blushing a bit.
“Ya…I guess Ija (pronounce E-ja) is going somewhere…,” I quickly took a glanced to the counter. “What can I get for you two? Dine-in or take-away?” leading them to the front counter.
“Take-away please. I want two normal size chicken sandwiches, one tuna Veggie salad, two milk coffees and one hot chocolate,” she said. I punched in all her orders into the cash register and bring up the total.
“All together is $9.60, M'am” I said to her with my best smile. She handed me the money. I punched in the change and open-up the cash drawer with a ting sound. I gave her the change back and say “I’ll be back in a few minutes with the orders. Please take a seat for a while.” With that I quickly walked my way into the kitchen to prepare the orders.
I swing my head to have a look at the clock on the kitchen wall. 10.30 am. Ija and Shima were sitting around the kitchen table, talking and laughing vigorously about something. From the look of their faces and the way they talking with each other, I would bet their topic would be non-other than boys. I walked to my kitchen counter and take out all the things and ingredients I need. As I busily taking out the stuff, I asked them, “So who’s the unlucky guy that you two are gossiping about? Care to introduce to me?” I let out a chuckle and turned my face to them to see their reactions.
“Ooh…knock it off, Remy. You’ll not turn my younger brother to be gay like you…,” Shema said with an eyebrow tilting on her forehead. “…besides, he’s straight as a lamp post and my dad will kill him if he’s gay.”
I busily started on the sandwiches and Ija coming up to help me. I tell her to prepare the drinks for me while I will be doing the salad after I have finished on the sandwiches. I turned my face sideways to face Shema and asked her, “Which one, Azri or Yusri? And if I’m not mistaken, Azri is the youngest one right?”
“Yes, but we’re not talking about him. Don’t you ever dare to try to mess up his teenage head with your gayness. I mean it. He’s our family future, you know. He’s so smart and I do hope he can go overseas to further his studies there.” While she’s talking, I have finished my sandwiches and get a start on the salad.
“Duh…you know I’m not into a young teenage guys. That leave Yusri on the chart and he is the same age as me. Are you quite sure he’s so straight? You know a lamp post always bends if knocked off by a car.” I said to her with a small laugh. Ija joined her laugh with me finishing up in preparing the drinks. I never actually have met with Shemas’ younger brothers; she only told me that she has two younger brothers, but back in my mind I really want to meet them, especially the 22 year old Yusri. Who knows maybe we can be something and that he actually a gay deep inside or least a bi.
“Haha!…very funny…but in the end the driver would either be dead or seriously injured,” Shema answered defensively.
“Not if I try to knock it off with a different angle of my car and I’m wearing a safety belt.”
By the time I have finished talking, the salad was ready. I quickly grabbed two plastic bags and arranged the sandwiches and salad in one and the drinks in another one.
“Whatever, Remy…” Shema said with her eyes rolling back. I chuckled at her.
“You two are totally a mess, you know that don’t you?” Ija said with a small laugh and her head moving both sideways. We smiled at her. I take a peek at the wall clock, 10.33am and I feel glad that I’m not taking so much time while talking to them.
I rushed to the front counter with the orders but made a quick stop at the freezer nearby to get a small cup of strawberry flavor ice cream and placed it in the drinks bag. I continued my way to the front counter. As I walked out of the hallway door, the lady stands up followed by her daughter to meet me at the front counter. “Here’s your order M'am and I slipped in a small cup of ice cream for your daughter. I hope it is okay with you?” I said to her.
“Oh you don’t have to do that…,” she replied sheepishly.
“No it’s on me for her by way of thanks for getting me back to earth safely,” I said to her. I turned my attention to the little girl and said to her with my huge smile, “I hope you like strawberry flavor.” I can see her eyes sparkling brightly and nodding her head up and down while jumping happily around like a rabbit. I guessed I have my answer and hit the jackpot. I give a small laugh at her and her mother joined in. Her mother told her to thank me.
“Goodbye and thank you. Come again next time.” I said to them and waving my hand to the little girl. She waved me back with a huge smile on her face.
After they have left, I decided to take a quick run to the kitchen to get Ija and Shema to the front counter, as I really need to take a quick pee. As I turned to walk, the front door swings open. So much for taking a quick run I thought to myself and burst into a smile. I turned back to face the front counter to meet my next customer with my best smile.
A nice looking man met my eyes and my gayness kick in. He has nice short black hair, spiking up on top, nice eyebrows, deep brown eyes, nice pink-fluffy lips, nice nose - a bit pointed at the end, clear face, not too skinny or too fat; I guess his weight is around 60-70kg, he is a few inches shorter than me, not too pale or too tan and his cologne draws my full attention to him. He’s wearing a neat black t-shirt with a flaming sword effect emblazoned on his chest, long khaki pants and sandals. While he walks towards the counter, he smiles at me. He’s a hot looking man as though surrounded by flames all round his body and those smiles make my heart melt. And yet something about him made me wondering, I have seen this guy somewhere but I can’t recall just where.
To all the readers out there reading my story, this is my first attempt to write a gay story, so be a bit generous to me guys. I’m not actually a sex addict type of person, so I like to write my story with warm feelings full of love in it. I like to see my story working its way from the beginning of the relationship towards the end. Of course I’ll try my best to include some sex stuff in it, just bear in mind that I’m a virgin and don’t have much experience in the real sex stuff. Another thing is English is not my mother language. I’ll try my best not to make numerous amount of grammatical errors. If anyone of you is kind enough to correct my mistakes, I’ll be honored. Should anyone of you want to give me criticism, comments, suggestions and/or compliments (especially), you are welcome to do so.
Part of the story is real but some of it is just my imagination. The characters’ names are real and the friendship thingy with them is real. The girls' characters are real. The café is actually my dream and I hope one day I could have it. Remy is me completely, not a single thing missed out. The rest is all imagination, I think. So enjoy and I hope you all like it. Oh yeah, I don’t use much slang in my story, because I hate to see that red-wavy line while I’m typing. I want to ignore it but it makes my eyes sore. I hope you don’t mind.
My dreams come true!
Here I am sitting at one corner of the table. My eyes fixed on the glass door to the sidewalk outside, waiting for any sign of customers to step into my café. My café, yeah that’s right and it sounds soothing to me. I still can't believe that my dream about starting my own business had actually come true. Although it was only two weeks old, I can see a bright future ahead for my café to compete with the other café and restaurant owners out there.As time goes by, I drift further into my thoughts. Thinking back to what things were like before struggling my way to finally have my own life now. Thinking back to where I had to face stuff and shit that came into my life. Thinking back to where I have to give up every thing after my mom died in order to take care of my family welfare. Oh, by the way, my name is Noremie (pronounce No – Remie) also known as Remy by my friends. I’m from Kuala Belait, Brunei Darussalam, small town and small country too. I’m 22 years old, 171 cm in height, 85kg and coming down in body weight, dark brown eyes, shoulder length black hair that has white flashes in it, don’t ask me why, it is just natural and has been since my early teens.
To me, it is actually quite nice and I like the front part my hair because honestly it looks like Rouges’ hair in the X-men, LOL. But to others, they often told me to dye my hair, and those who have never met me before, they actually suspect that I'm 30 years of age or even older. Back in my college junior year, they were often surprised by my looks and age. Sometimes I kind of let them foolishly believe that I’m older than them, only my smile and laugh could answer them. Oh man…you should see their face when I’m telling them I’m only seventeen and they still couldn't believe it, so it ended-up with me taking out my identity card from my wallet to show them.
Anyway, back to the story. I never actually know how to describe my appearance, so go figure it out for yourselves. My race is Malay and my religion is Islam. Now you know how difficult my life might be as a gay, and it is, with my religion condemning homosexual activity and saying that it is a sin and those who practice it will be thrown into the fiery pit of hell.
For those of you who don’t know where my country is, here is some information about it. Brunei Darussalam lies on the north-western coast of Borneo island, and nope we are not hairy wild man as some westerners say about us. Oil and gas industry form our main exports, but nowadays our government has begun a shift into agriculture and other types of industry. Most of our land is covered by thick tropical rainforest and it matches our tourism slogan, ‘Brunei Darussalam the adobe of peace’. You can search in the website to find out more.
I don’t know how long I have been day dreaming but I can feel someone was lightly shaking my shoulder and softly calling me back to my reality. “Sir……sir……” the soft voice said.
I glanced to my right side and found a cute six year old Chinese girl with his long black hair tied up into a pony tail at the back. She smiling at me and let out a small giggle pointing her hand to a direction. I quickly follow her pointing finger and there is a lady standing a few feet behind her, smiling at me. I’m guessing she is the girl mother. I quickly stand on my feet to apologize to them, “I’m so sorry M'am. I don’t hear you coming in and I’m kind of day dreaming back there.”
“No, it’s OK. We’re just arrived a minute ago and found out there was nobody at the counter. I actually hesitated to call for you and well the next second I know, my daughter was standing there beside you lightly shaking your shoulder and you know the rest…” the lady said, still smiling her wide smile and her daughter hugging her legs, giggling. By now, I can feel my face blushing a bit.
“Ya…I guess Ija (pronounce E-ja) is going somewhere…,” I quickly took a glanced to the counter. “What can I get for you two? Dine-in or take-away?” leading them to the front counter.
“Take-away please. I want two normal size chicken sandwiches, one tuna Veggie salad, two milk coffees and one hot chocolate,” she said. I punched in all her orders into the cash register and bring up the total.
“All together is $9.60, M'am” I said to her with my best smile. She handed me the money. I punched in the change and open-up the cash drawer with a ting sound. I gave her the change back and say “I’ll be back in a few minutes with the orders. Please take a seat for a while.” With that I quickly walked my way into the kitchen to prepare the orders.
I swing my head to have a look at the clock on the kitchen wall. 10.30 am. Ija and Shima were sitting around the kitchen table, talking and laughing vigorously about something. From the look of their faces and the way they talking with each other, I would bet their topic would be non-other than boys. I walked to my kitchen counter and take out all the things and ingredients I need. As I busily taking out the stuff, I asked them, “So who’s the unlucky guy that you two are gossiping about? Care to introduce to me?” I let out a chuckle and turned my face to them to see their reactions.
“Ooh…knock it off, Remy. You’ll not turn my younger brother to be gay like you…,” Shema said with an eyebrow tilting on her forehead. “…besides, he’s straight as a lamp post and my dad will kill him if he’s gay.”
I busily started on the sandwiches and Ija coming up to help me. I tell her to prepare the drinks for me while I will be doing the salad after I have finished on the sandwiches. I turned my face sideways to face Shema and asked her, “Which one, Azri or Yusri? And if I’m not mistaken, Azri is the youngest one right?”
“Yes, but we’re not talking about him. Don’t you ever dare to try to mess up his teenage head with your gayness. I mean it. He’s our family future, you know. He’s so smart and I do hope he can go overseas to further his studies there.” While she’s talking, I have finished my sandwiches and get a start on the salad.
“Duh…you know I’m not into a young teenage guys. That leave Yusri on the chart and he is the same age as me. Are you quite sure he’s so straight? You know a lamp post always bends if knocked off by a car.” I said to her with a small laugh. Ija joined her laugh with me finishing up in preparing the drinks. I never actually have met with Shemas’ younger brothers; she only told me that she has two younger brothers, but back in my mind I really want to meet them, especially the 22 year old Yusri. Who knows maybe we can be something and that he actually a gay deep inside or least a bi.
“Haha!…very funny…but in the end the driver would either be dead or seriously injured,” Shema answered defensively.
“Not if I try to knock it off with a different angle of my car and I’m wearing a safety belt.”
By the time I have finished talking, the salad was ready. I quickly grabbed two plastic bags and arranged the sandwiches and salad in one and the drinks in another one.
“Whatever, Remy…” Shema said with her eyes rolling back. I chuckled at her.
“You two are totally a mess, you know that don’t you?” Ija said with a small laugh and her head moving both sideways. We smiled at her. I take a peek at the wall clock, 10.33am and I feel glad that I’m not taking so much time while talking to them.
I rushed to the front counter with the orders but made a quick stop at the freezer nearby to get a small cup of strawberry flavor ice cream and placed it in the drinks bag. I continued my way to the front counter. As I walked out of the hallway door, the lady stands up followed by her daughter to meet me at the front counter. “Here’s your order M'am and I slipped in a small cup of ice cream for your daughter. I hope it is okay with you?” I said to her.
“Oh you don’t have to do that…,” she replied sheepishly.
“No it’s on me for her by way of thanks for getting me back to earth safely,” I said to her. I turned my attention to the little girl and said to her with my huge smile, “I hope you like strawberry flavor.” I can see her eyes sparkling brightly and nodding her head up and down while jumping happily around like a rabbit. I guessed I have my answer and hit the jackpot. I give a small laugh at her and her mother joined in. Her mother told her to thank me.
“Goodbye and thank you. Come again next time.” I said to them and waving my hand to the little girl. She waved me back with a huge smile on her face.
After they have left, I decided to take a quick run to the kitchen to get Ija and Shema to the front counter, as I really need to take a quick pee. As I turned to walk, the front door swings open. So much for taking a quick run I thought to myself and burst into a smile. I turned back to face the front counter to meet my next customer with my best smile.
A nice looking man met my eyes and my gayness kick in. He has nice short black hair, spiking up on top, nice eyebrows, deep brown eyes, nice pink-fluffy lips, nice nose - a bit pointed at the end, clear face, not too skinny or too fat; I guess his weight is around 60-70kg, he is a few inches shorter than me, not too pale or too tan and his cologne draws my full attention to him. He’s wearing a neat black t-shirt with a flaming sword effect emblazoned on his chest, long khaki pants and sandals. While he walks towards the counter, he smiles at me. He’s a hot looking man as though surrounded by flames all round his body and those smiles make my heart melt. And yet something about him made me wondering, I have seen this guy somewhere but I can’t recall just where.





















