montimon
Porn Star
Please check it out and be supportive instead of bitch-itive lol as it is my first ever made short film 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iBJ0rs1jsIs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iBJ0rs1jsIs
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. If that is your first effort, you should be proud of your big ole' bad self.
Dude...you did a great job. If that is your first effort, you should be proud of your big ole' bad self.
Constructive criticism: Needed an establishing shot of the two at the table to set everything up. It didn't necessarily need to show faces...it could have simply been a shot of two sets of feet under the table or hands across the table. In future shoots, and I know you shot this with a 20's film in mind, don't forget the closeups!
You did great and like I said you should be proud of your accomplishments. If you need any questions answered, please feel free to PM me. I have worked in film/tape/tv for over 30-years. I don't know everything..., too in fact...I hope I can learn something new from you too! LOL![]()
Needed an establishing shot of the two at the table to set everything up.
