Problem with my locked closet door

[spmarwah]

Hey everyone this is a first time for me. I've been reading these stories for so long that I finally decided that I wanted to write one of my own. This is a story about a guy that I met, the story is totally fiction, but the characters are true. I also want to say right now that I'm a French Quebecer and that I might make mistakes in the use of some words or the spelling of some I try my best to correct most of them but some still find a way to pass through, and also remember this is a story with true names, which are going to be abbreviated, but they are still French names hard for English speaking people to read lol. Anyways here I go.

Problem with my locked closet door...

-Yes mom we're driving up there right now. We're close to Sorel-Tracy. Yep everything has been fine for now, when we're gonna get to the airport we're gonna meet with everyone else. OK that's good love you too, bye!

''That was my mom as you probably guessed'', I said while looking at my friend who was sitting next to me.

''Well duh I might be sleepy but I'm not stupid'', Ana said with a smile on her face.

Me and Ana had met at work three years ago, and now we were both going to take a lifeguard class in Hawaii. The hardest and the most specialised lifeguard class in Canada, Ocean Lifeguard. We had been saving up money for this class since a year ago and we were finally going to the famous Hawaiian beaches that everyone dreams about.

Our plane was scheduled for take off at 8.00 in the morning, at exactly that time we were leaving the ice cold temperatures of Québec for the warmth of Hawaii. I had started training for this class two years ago....

More to come in tomorrow I have to go to sleep

 

[deathmass]

C'est tres bein pour le début de ton premiere Histoire (very good for the start of your first story)(for those who don't know french)

 

[botboy03]

Good start to the story. Please continue.

 

[harry113]

Well done spmarwah, Thank you
Please continue
Harry

 

[spmarwah]

I had started training for this class two years ago. I was ready for everything, the class, the hot babes, but mostly for the hot lifeguards Two hours later me and Ana where waiting in the airport with our luggage looking for the group, before getting on our plane. When we finally found them we joined them and started introduced ourselves. Since we didn't know any of them we were kind of shy and stayed behind just talking with ourselves.

''Can't wait to get on the plane so we can sleep. My god being awake since like noon is killing me.'' I said looking at Ana.

''Yeah I know at least you slept on the way up...I couldn't even shut my eyes.'' she responded.

''Yeah but that's why I'm so beat up, but who cares in like 6h where in Vancouver it should be awesome. I'll finally be able to see if they truly do speak French over there...''

''My god you are really independent aren't you?'' she asked.

''Well yeah ha ha, but that's not really the point, I just want to know.''

We waited for like two hours with our teachers who were giving out information for-the trip and our plane tickets and where we would meet up aver we passed the security guards and all the check-in informations. When we passed the security guards and had to wait for the plane to arrive it was then that I noticed him...Since we were a big group I had not noticed him before, he had arrived before me so I hadn't seen him arrive...I found him pretty cute he had a beautiful face, with brown hair and magnificent Brown eyes with a splendid smile. I just couldn't stop staring at him, until he looked at me and smiled.

''Hi'' he said

''Hey''

And it's all we said to each other before we got on the plane. It took us six hours before reaching Vancouver. A long trip on a plane, don't know if any one of you guys has ever taken a plane but were all cramped up and we have leg aches at the end of the trip. When we got to Vancouver I ran off the plane with Ana and went to walk around and eat something cause I was starting to get really hungry. So I went to get a whopper at Burger King. And what do you think I did, of course I ordered everything in French.

''Hello can I take your order'' the girl at the counter asked me

''Bien sure je voudrais un whopper avec des rondelles d'oignons, pis un grand coke merci beaucoup'' I responded with my biggest smile.

Ana who was standing right beside me started laughing when she saw the girl's face. Which was so funny, you could very well see that she hadn't understood anything that I had just said. That's when I got a little frustrated, but maybe I had mistaken her facial expression, so I waited.

''Sorry sir I didn't understand what you just said. I do not speak French''

Ok I give her credit at least she knew what language I was speaking but still were supposed to be in Canada here. The country which has TWO national languages: English and FRENCH!!! My god that got me so frustrated people in Maine and Vermont and new Hampshire knew how to speak French and they didn't even know how to, ans she works in an international airport. So I just looked at her and continued to play the game...

''Excuser moi je comprends l'anglias mais je ne suis pas capable de le parler...''

The girl just kept looking at me with big eyes so I just got even more frustrated...

''I want a damn whopper with onion rings and a coke thank you!''

I got my order and went to sit with Ana and ate trying to cool down...

More tomorrow and hey for everyone who is English Canadian I don't hate you guys Ok. Actually I love the Canada just I think that the FrenchOKCanadaEnglishMaineVermontHampshirejust language would be so much better in a French ruling country. Sorry that's the way I think but who cares the story is not about that.

 

[wyndhampaul]

Oh!, you crazy mixed up lad. But it has all the elements for a good tale; But French???? You know, diplomats only use it because its limited vocabulary enables them to deliberately misconstrue. Thus ensuring their continuity of employment.
So. More Please!

 

[harry113]

Yes please .... more!!!
Thank you
Harry

 

[botboy03]

Please continue. I'd love to know what happens.

 

[spmarwah]

Done with eating we walked toward our enrance, where we would take the plane. We sat there waiting and Ana fell asleep on the seats while i listened to my music and kept staring at the guy. I think i stayed like that for at least one hour, just staring at him and wondering if i might have any chance. Suddenly one of the girls who was called Odrey came walking towards me

''Hey Sp you want to come play something with us were bord like hell in this place,'' she asked

''Of course, anyways i don't have anything better to do''

So me and her and four other girls sat down and starting playing cards for one hour. We still had four more hours to wait so we decided to start playing tag in the waiting dock. While we were playing the guy asked us if he could join and without any hesitation i told yes. So we continued playing for an hour until one of the security guards came up and asked us if we could do something else since we were not in a place to play those games. So we went back to sitting down, but unexpectedly when i went back to where Ana was still sleeping the guy followed me and sat beside me.

''Hey we never really introduced last time we talked to each other'' he said, ''I'm Phil''

''I'm Sp'' i said, '' So where do you come from?''

''From Sorel-Tracy a little north of Montreal'' phil said, ''You?''

''I'm from Theford Mines, a little east of from Quebec City''

''So how old are you'' i asked him

''I'm 18 you?'' he said with a smile

''I'm 18 to''

So we talked for about half an hour and i just kept telling myself. Damn he has a nice smile. I just would love to kiss him and see if he's a good kisser...We talked about everything until our teachers divided us into groups to start the class early so we could do less in hawaii so we said our goodbyes and we went to our seperate groups. We did our activities until we were told our plane had arrived and that we could take our seats. So me and ana took our bagpacks and went to take our seats. It took six hours before we had reached the Honolulu airport. When we got off, our teachers asked us to make a big circle around them before leaving the boarding dock. During the whole time our teachers were explaining the procedures to get to our hotel i kept noticing phil taking little peeks at me from time to time.

When our teachers were done explaining we got our bags and went onto the buses that were waiting for us. Unlike i had wished me and phil didn't take the same bus so i was going to make the long ride to the hotel with only ana...

More when i have time to write.

 

[Craiger]

I think sp and phil are going to have to do mouth to mouth on each other soon. At least sp is wishing for that... Fun story and well done. Write soon.

Craiger

 

[harry113]

Yeah! Good story!!!
More please, waiting for the spiced - up action
Thank you
Harry

 

[kcm17480]

I like the story so far. I hope to see more soon.

 

[phoenix72]

cool glad i took the time to check this out...keep it up when you get a chance. i'll be there checking it out for sure.