The news of Ryan and Max just barely surpassed that of Sara and David. When they walked down the hall together, holding hands, smiling and laughing, everyone turned to stare. Mouths hung low, eyes were raised.
What was even more shocking was how David looked…he wasn’t wearing glasses or a collared shirt tucked into jeans that were too small for him. His hair wasn’t parted down the middle. Sara had completely changed his look: he now wore his contacts every day. He wore slightly baggier jeans; or at least ones that didn’t look like they were from when he was 10. He had a slightly cooler collared shirt, buttoned down, with a plain white shirt underneath. His hair had no gel or part, but was flipped above his forehead. All in all, he no longer looked like a nerd. And every girl saw that; some even looked at Sara with an envious frown. ALL were attracted to his look.
“So, would you like to come to my house tonight?” she asked him.
“Yeah…I don’t see why not.”
“O.K.,” she said. Sara leaned up, since he was slightly taller than her, and kissed his neck.
“What was that for?”
“I don’t know…I just want to tell you that even if you don’t like your new wardrobe or hair, etc., I still would date you.”
“No. I really like the way I look. You made me look great.” He kissed her back.
“Aw, yay! I was hoping you’d say that.” She smiled. “Well, I will get going. I’ll see you at lunch.”
“Kay,” he said. They kissed for a couple of seconds and then she walked away.
***
Max walked into the gym. Barely anyone was in there. He figured his team was in the changing room. He walked in, hearing voices. But, once everyone could see him, the talking stopped. All eyes were on him. Guys who had been putting shirts on or taking them off froze; some stood there, only in underwear; no matter what people were doing before, they were froze.
Finally, one walked up to Max. He had a nice, defined body. He wore tight boxer briefs only. “You’re a faggot.”
Max was standing against the entire basketball team; one versus the entire team. They all had the same expression as the one who had said ‘faggot.’
“Do you wanna suck my cock?” He asked. He reached his hand into his boxers, jiggling his junk around.
“Yeah, like I’d ever do that.”
“Well, you’re homo anyway. Why don’t we all just line up and you can blow us all.”
“I’d die before I could find it to suck.”
“I aint gonna get in no fight with a little homo. We want you off the team.”
“You want ME off the team? This team would go down the hill without me on it.”
“Well, we’d rather have an entire team of straight people, so one wouldn’t look at the others naked.”
“Like I said, Ricky, I don’t want you. You don’t attract guys either, it’s not just girls.”
“Bastard.” He walked towards him. Ricky punched Max right in the face. He flew back a little. No blood came out and he wasn’t that hurt.
“I may be bi, but at least I can punch like a guy.” Max ran over to Ricky and punched him straight in the nose. Blood poured out. Ricky covered it, trying to hold the blood.
“Fuck!” He said. The others had no idea what to do, but no one moved.
“You’re gonna die, you cocksucker.”
“Really? Well, obviously not by you.”
Ricky walked over, staggeringly, ready to fight, but Max got to him before. He grabbed his head and pushed it into the wall. Ricky fell.
Max grabbed his stuff. “Don’t fuck with me, Ricky. You don’t want to fight with the big boys.”
He turned his back, thinking Ricky wouldn’t do anything. But moments later, he felt a shoe hit him in the back of his head. He turned around; Ricky was in the floor, obviously hurt, but not ready to give up. Max, in rage, walked over and before Ricky could do anything, Max kicked him in the side of the torso. Again in the chest. Again in the leg and in the stomach and in the back. “Don’t – fuck – with – me!” He screamed in between each kick. By the time he was done, Ricky was in a fetal position. There were bruises all over his body.
Max, realizing what he had done, ran from the gym, forgetting his bag.
***
Jeff, checking his watch, ran into the diner. He was late, he knew. He scanned the restaurant for her-there she was, in the back. He walked too her.
“Sorry, I was-“
“Jeff…” she looked up; it was obvious she had been crying. “I’m pregnant.”
He sat down, face in shock. “Because of…”
“You. Yes, Jeff, that’s what happens when SPERM goes into my body!” He was mad, he could tell.
“Erena, I’m sorry…what are we going to do?”
She put her head in her hands. “I don’t know…actually, I do.” She stood up, putting her dollar on the table. “I don’t want you to see the baby. I already am in enough trouble now that I have to tell my daughter I’m pregnant, with her BROTHER’S dad! I don’t want you anywhere near this baby!”
“You can’t tell me I can’t see the baby. It’s my sperm.”
“I don’t care if it’s my sperm!” People were watching now. “You are not going to have ANYTHING to do with this baby!”
She stormed out. All eyes remained on Jeff.
Come on, Erena, there won’t be conflict that way. Until next time, <3.
sorry it's so short...i promise chpt 6 pt 1 will be longer. next time, we will see why the plot against alexis fails, what happens to max, max and ryan's relationship, erena and jeff's relationship, sara and david's relationship, an introduction to amanda's family, and lastly, how all 8 (10 including adults) main characters end up together in one house, for this special thanksgiving episode.
What was even more shocking was how David looked…he wasn’t wearing glasses or a collared shirt tucked into jeans that were too small for him. His hair wasn’t parted down the middle. Sara had completely changed his look: he now wore his contacts every day. He wore slightly baggier jeans; or at least ones that didn’t look like they were from when he was 10. He had a slightly cooler collared shirt, buttoned down, with a plain white shirt underneath. His hair had no gel or part, but was flipped above his forehead. All in all, he no longer looked like a nerd. And every girl saw that; some even looked at Sara with an envious frown. ALL were attracted to his look.
“So, would you like to come to my house tonight?” she asked him.
“Yeah…I don’t see why not.”
“O.K.,” she said. Sara leaned up, since he was slightly taller than her, and kissed his neck.
“What was that for?”
“I don’t know…I just want to tell you that even if you don’t like your new wardrobe or hair, etc., I still would date you.”
“No. I really like the way I look. You made me look great.” He kissed her back.
“Aw, yay! I was hoping you’d say that.” She smiled. “Well, I will get going. I’ll see you at lunch.”
“Kay,” he said. They kissed for a couple of seconds and then she walked away.
***
Max walked into the gym. Barely anyone was in there. He figured his team was in the changing room. He walked in, hearing voices. But, once everyone could see him, the talking stopped. All eyes were on him. Guys who had been putting shirts on or taking them off froze; some stood there, only in underwear; no matter what people were doing before, they were froze.
Finally, one walked up to Max. He had a nice, defined body. He wore tight boxer briefs only. “You’re a faggot.”
Max was standing against the entire basketball team; one versus the entire team. They all had the same expression as the one who had said ‘faggot.’
“Do you wanna suck my cock?” He asked. He reached his hand into his boxers, jiggling his junk around.
“Yeah, like I’d ever do that.”
“Well, you’re homo anyway. Why don’t we all just line up and you can blow us all.”
“I’d die before I could find it to suck.”
“I aint gonna get in no fight with a little homo. We want you off the team.”
“You want ME off the team? This team would go down the hill without me on it.”
“Well, we’d rather have an entire team of straight people, so one wouldn’t look at the others naked.”
“Like I said, Ricky, I don’t want you. You don’t attract guys either, it’s not just girls.”
“Bastard.” He walked towards him. Ricky punched Max right in the face. He flew back a little. No blood came out and he wasn’t that hurt.
“I may be bi, but at least I can punch like a guy.” Max ran over to Ricky and punched him straight in the nose. Blood poured out. Ricky covered it, trying to hold the blood.
“Fuck!” He said. The others had no idea what to do, but no one moved.
“You’re gonna die, you cocksucker.”
“Really? Well, obviously not by you.”
Ricky walked over, staggeringly, ready to fight, but Max got to him before. He grabbed his head and pushed it into the wall. Ricky fell.
Max grabbed his stuff. “Don’t fuck with me, Ricky. You don’t want to fight with the big boys.”
He turned his back, thinking Ricky wouldn’t do anything. But moments later, he felt a shoe hit him in the back of his head. He turned around; Ricky was in the floor, obviously hurt, but not ready to give up. Max, in rage, walked over and before Ricky could do anything, Max kicked him in the side of the torso. Again in the chest. Again in the leg and in the stomach and in the back. “Don’t – fuck – with – me!” He screamed in between each kick. By the time he was done, Ricky was in a fetal position. There were bruises all over his body.
Max, realizing what he had done, ran from the gym, forgetting his bag.
***
Jeff, checking his watch, ran into the diner. He was late, he knew. He scanned the restaurant for her-there she was, in the back. He walked too her.
“Sorry, I was-“
“Jeff…” she looked up; it was obvious she had been crying. “I’m pregnant.”
He sat down, face in shock. “Because of…”
“You. Yes, Jeff, that’s what happens when SPERM goes into my body!” He was mad, he could tell.
“Erena, I’m sorry…what are we going to do?”
She put her head in her hands. “I don’t know…actually, I do.” She stood up, putting her dollar on the table. “I don’t want you to see the baby. I already am in enough trouble now that I have to tell my daughter I’m pregnant, with her BROTHER’S dad! I don’t want you anywhere near this baby!”
“You can’t tell me I can’t see the baby. It’s my sperm.”
“I don’t care if it’s my sperm!” People were watching now. “You are not going to have ANYTHING to do with this baby!”
She stormed out. All eyes remained on Jeff.
Come on, Erena, there won’t be conflict that way. Until next time, <3.
sorry it's so short...i promise chpt 6 pt 1 will be longer. next time, we will see why the plot against alexis fails, what happens to max, max and ryan's relationship, erena and jeff's relationship, sara and david's relationship, an introduction to amanda's family, and lastly, how all 8 (10 including adults) main characters end up together in one house, for this special thanksgiving episode.

















