So Wrong, But So Right

[blanefan]

Great story! I love a happy ending.

I really enjoyed reading your story. Your use of the English language is quite good. Many times in the and other forums I read stories and the authors don't bother with proper paragraphs, quotes and other punctuation. Congrats to you for s well written story.

 

[BearLover1694]

Thanks guys! Glad you liked the ending, it was a little hard to write because, as a younger guy myself I haven't really experienced that stuff yet so I didn't know if half of what I put was realistic haha, but I also wanted them to end happy and found that this was a good way to do it.

I have already posted the first chapter of my next story, which I have high hopes for being a good one. Already I can see that the first few chapters are going to be a lot of sex sex and more sex. Hope you guys read and enjoy it! Here's a link

http://www.justusboys.com/forum/threads/438775-A-Booty-Call-for-Every-City?p=9969760#post9969760

 

[DonQuixote]

BL,
I saw this this morning as I had to head out to work. Just got home after a long day and what a great, enjoyable end.

I can't help imagine that Jim was decided to retire post haste, as opposed to it being his idea.

No matter - Love won in the end. And I know full well the love that is children, even with all of the heart ache that can come, too.

 

[MyCuriousFantasy]

Nice Work!