some poetry...

[Phantas33]

Enchantment (Crush)

And when I fall

I fall hard

I fall deep

deeper into him

his eyes enchant

spellbound I stray

a silent call

beckons me

into his eyes

into his arms

into his heart

please, let it be

From this spell

I don't want to be set free.


Even when in sleep

I can't let go

he haunts me

in my deepest dreams

coming when I call

upon my beckoning

he envelops me

his arms, strong arms

surround me

we gaze

into each other,

into the inifinities

within each other's eyes...


I feel myself drifting

among the stars, the endless clouds

I am yanked back

back into His world

as our bodies meld

moving, undulating

caught in this passionate dance

until neither of us knows

where one begins

and the other ends

oh no, let it not end

let it never end

Please let me live here

in this dream

don't let me fall again

unless it's into him


Love,
Rick

 

[Phantas33]

Not sure if no one's interested in my poetry or not, but here's another

Everything He Is, I Am Inside

Sunkissed skin
so hot it melts the sky
every colour lighted
like I'm high
well I'm drifting on clouds baby
because of you
and the way you look

Tattoo on your back
intruiging design
colours deep and oily
like they're wet
help me I'm getting wetter
because of you
and what you emanate

Scar across your cheek
what story does it tell
how deep does it run
like my heart
it has depths for you to fathom
because of you
and what you do to me

Three hours later
staring at the ceiling
panting, our breaths heavy
like our bodies
oh god I'll never forget
because you're good
and what you did was too

Everything on you
glows like a sunset
golden creamy colour
like your voice
Wanna hear you scream again
scream my name
until the end of time.

Love,
Rick

 

[Phantas33]

thank you armastus! You're the first person to comment on these here !! O.O

 

[MrMojoRisin]

I love the "Crush" poem. You've captured that emotion of being so deeply infatuated with someone beautifully!! We've all been there!! I felt those emotions as I read the words. Brilliant.

 

[Phantas33]

I love the "Crush" poem. You've captured that emotion of being so deeply infatuated with someone beautifully!! We've all been there!! I felt those emotions as I read the words. Brilliant.

thank you!

 

[Phantas33]

Adding some more poems here... a little more provocative? porn-ish? you decide

S. E. X.

his hands unfold

revealing a galaxy

of possibilities

and endless desires

his mouth opens

but no words follow

only an instrument

of pure lust

his lips upon me

caressing, pushing, tasting

we strip ourselves

of the unnecessary layers

His body flexes

sliding against mine

no time for thoughts

only pure desire

***

my gateway opens

his rocket enters

a wingless needle

cutting through the galaxies

rupturing brainwaves

thought patterns colliding

no more desire

just pleasurable pain

we are like animals

grunting, groaning

our bodies melting

our minds moaning:

***

More! More! More!

***

Our skin tingles

his sword unsheathing

although I'm cut

he's the one bleeding

white blood so sweet

I want it inside me

like a vampire, tasting

like a vampire, needing

***

then we are spent

our bodies heaving

our breaths raspy

our throats dry

but both of us

intensely satifsifed.

- - - Updated - - -

Tough Love

Lift my legs and make me cry

hurt me, please me, make me die

within your arms

within your arms

I was meant to lie

***

Kiss my lips and betray my heart

Fuck me, and tear me apart

with your words

yes with your words

I loved you from the start

***

Tie me up and make me try

shag me, shock me, make me sigh

with your dick

yeah with your dick

you make me feel like I can fly

 

[MrMojoRisin]

"S.E.X." is my favorite out of the two. It's very erotic.

 

[Phantas33]

"S.E.X." is my favorite out of the two. It's very erotic.

It was supposed to be, sort of my first few attempts at writing specifically erotic poetry. Porn Poetry I call it lol

I have a couple more poems...I'll share those later

and thank you for reading!!

 

[Phantas33]

And I...

I yearn for his touch

to lead me into his shadows

into his darkness

He is King there

and I

shall be his willing slave

obeying his every command

and I

seek the comfort of his hand

soft and gentle at night

===

I yearn for for his heart

to lead me into his world

into his universe

He is the Star there

and I

shall be his astronaut

setting foot on his surface

and I

seek the treasures in his caverns

glimmering and glistening

===

I yearn for his flesh

to lead me into the wild

into his secret hideout

He is the Lord there

and I

shall be his captive

who dared enter his realm

and I

seek the hidden palace of gold

behind the fragrant bush

===

I yearn for his soul

to lead me into temptation

into his embrace

He is my Savior there

and I

the ever searching refugee

who wanders the unknown

and I

shall linger there with him

until we become one.

 

[Phantas33]

was that a poem or a confession? I'm very bad at reviewing poetry myself... and this style of poetry is not to my personal taste. But thank you for sharing, not just with me, but with everyone else as well.

 

[Phantas33]

Ode To My Boy

Hey there boy
I'd like to see you
all dressed up
ready to go
Your skin be shielded
from too stark weather
by various items
by various clothes

Hey there, my boy
I'd like to touch you
just for a moment
to feel that skin
your hands to hold me
as if I'm sheltered
warm and comforting
by mother's arms

Hey there boy
I'd like to kiss you
your lips on mine
and mine on yours
Your eyes to see me
the way I see you
not just a moment
but forevermore

Hey there, my boy
I'd like to hear you
your voice still unheard
rings through my mind
Your words to soothe me
and to entrance me
feeling like witchcraft
that thing you do

Now, hey there boy
come and play with me
we'll be like brothers
we'll play like boys
If it goes too far, well
what does it matter?
I'll be a good sport
I hope you know

So, hey there my boy
may these words reach you
my heart it tells me
that you should know
My soul is yearning
my heart is aching
my body wanting
I love you so.
I love you so.

Written when I was chatting with a guy online which I liked - unfortunately he lived in the US but also he didn't see it through. His loss!

 

[ElmosToe]

I love poetry. I'm enjoying reading yours.

I like S.E.X., I have just a couple editing suggestions on that one if your looking for some constructive critique.

 

[Phantas33]

not really looking for critiqes here - I am on a site for that already but thanks for offering and reading!

 

[Phantas33]

Agape [Song of Telemachus]

My heart beats fast
my bare skin is wet
my lips are agape
my body's bereft
of such innocence I had.
Awakened, I
lay upon this bed
next to me he lies
and naked are we
yet of such love we had made.
He's lost in dreams
I wish them I could see
but I must hope alone
to feature among them
they are not mine to command.
The day is now half-passed
soon it will be night again
I yearn for when he wakes
And yearn more for his truth
to be taught by his touch.
His warm, tanned, oily skin
to mingle here with mine
his eyes that drink my youth
his lips that taste my love
his wisdom enfolds my flesh.
He says he is my slave
and that I am his Prince
and although it is so
I see it not like this
but he my Master is instead.
Oh! to yearn for him so
to need his hands, so strong
to want to be so close
to taste his skin, his lips
and ache for his fierce sword.
Such agony it is
to want something so much
yet having to wait
the sun to crawl the sky
and moon to yet arise.
So blissful, also, it is
to have him by my side
to know he will be there
to take away this pain
and to quench this evil thirst.
For him, I sing my song
he has made this life complete
where once I yearned for all
he's made them obsolete
for he is all I need.
At rest again, my heart
I lay back onto the bed
my hand upon his chest
the faint hairs tickle still
and close my eyes once more.

Note: The title Agape is the Greek word for Love. The word used in the poem is English with its English meaning for something 'opened wide' .