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Trevor's Year

hey guys, it looks like not many people are responding in this thread anymore including me for the last month. I hope the story isn't getting you guys bored because tantiboh I thought the last 4 chapters were great.

I've learned a lot from "Brandon" and if Tantiboh wrote it all it would take books, so I'm glad that youre writing so much about him Tantiboh because he's pretty awesome.

and you asked about dialogue I think it's great. I know these people and usually I can imagine them saying exactly what you're writing so great job.

So anyway guys i know Tantiboh really likes reading what you think about the story so even if your saying the same stuff and its really short let him know what you think! I can tell you he spends about six hours a week writing this and he gets excited when he knows you guys like it and no he didn't ask me to write this haha

I'll try to not be such a slacker and join the thread more in the future.

Amazing development ... wonderful insights into Brandon ... Yes, being in that sleeping bag would be awesome ... to have been Gary would have been even more so. It must have been mind blowing ...

Bravo!!(!):=D: Thank You ... for everything ...*|*:kiss:
 
Friend,
I thought you might enjoy this story - I know I have, several times, in exacting detail.
 
As I have mentioned, I am an aspiring author. A large motive in my telling this story was to have an opportunity to hone and perfect some specific skills as a writer. With your help, I am happy to say that I have made tremendous progress on those goals. This project has been a massive drain on my time, however, and I now turn my attention to less frivolous matters. Therefore, I must announce my retirement as an author from this forum for the foreseeable future.

I have not been faithful in commenting on this story, my apologies. As a last comment I just want to affirm your writing ability, not just story telling, but the shades of meaning in each encounter retold by your skillful hand. I would not want to be part of this story except for the wonderful transition that occurred in Trevor. The real care that he developed in his relationship with his cousin, moving from initial sexual enjoyment, through jealousy to acceptance of the special person that Travis is and was. Jason is a bit much, but so very excited about every new thing and that very excitement seems to be part of the reason that such close friendship (with benefits, it seems) continued as Trevor basically returns to a "normal" straight life. In all a wonderful story of discovery that never glossed over the real struggles that journey can reveal. Thank you!:=D:(!):wave::biggrin:
 
Friend,
I'm glad you liked it - I could have stood some more of your posts as you discovered this tale - it's how we relive our encounter with it, too.
 
Re: Part 9 - Burn

Part 9 - Burn​

Note: This chapter describes bisexual sex. If this doesn't interest you, continue to chapter 10.

July

***​

Two trays full of various bottles and cups in their hands, the women walked back in. “I just don’t think it matters,” said Melissa.

“Of course it doesn’t matter to us,” replied Jennifer. “A dick is a dick is a dick. But it matters to them.”

Travis butted in. “So size doesn’t really matter?”

Jennifer looked at him like he was nuts. “Of course size matters. Not too big, not too little. I like a Goldilocks cock. But we’re not talking about that.”

“Oh. What, then?”

“Well, Melissa noticed that you’re circumcised and that Trevor is not.”

“I just thought it was interesting, that’s all. I don’t think it makes any difference.”

“Like I was saying, it does make a difference.”

“How’s that?” asked Trevor, curiosity mingling with his bemusement.

“For you. It makes a big difference.” Jennifer set down the tray and handed Trevor a bottle of water. “Here, you look thirsty.”

“Well, maybe in how it looks,” chimed in Melissa. “From a pure aesthetics point of view, I like how a circumcised penis looks. A foreskin just looks kind of sloppy.” Trevor looked hurt. “Sorry, baby. But for pure fun, a foreskin is great. It’s easier to jack off, you can play with it with your tongue and lips and twiddle it with your fingers. It’s fun to play with.”

“All that’s well and good, my dear,” said Jennifer. “But you’re looking at it from the wrong angle. If you want great sex, you have to give your partner great sex. You ought to be thinking about what circumcision does to a guy.” Now Travis looked oppressed. “Hey, I think your dick looks excellent. Like she said, I’d rather -look- at your dick.”

“But what?” asked Travis.

“Years of swinging around in your pants have made the head of your penis much less sensitive. I hate to say it, but a cut guy cannot relate to the amount of pleasure an uncut guy feels. Usually the foreskin kind of shields it, but I can make an uncut guy squeal.”

Travis looked dubious. “I don’t know, my dick feels pretty damn good when somebody rubs it.”

She patted him on the cheek affectionately. “Of course it does, my sexy boy. Like I said, you can’t relate.”

“I still don’t see what you mean,” said Melissa.

Jennifer sighed in good-humored exasperation. “I see what we need is a demonstration. Boys, get yourselves hard.” Trevor and Travis glanced at each other then broke out laughing. “No, I mean it. Jack off. Show off if it helps. Rub yourselves. Show us what manly men you are.”

Complying, they both grabbed their semi-erect cocks and started stroking. Melissa sat back and sipped at a glass of juice, watching them. The awkwardness made getting into the mood more difficult, but they started stealing glances at one another, watching each other masturbate. The girls noted this and smiled, enjoying the spectacle. The men showed off, as much to each other as to the women, their hands rubbing over their bronzed bodies, moaning softly, gyrating their hips. Trevor dribbled a little bit of his water over his chest and rubbed it in. Within a few minutes, their cocks stood hard as stone.

“Good,” declared Jennifer, standing. She retrieved a bottle of lubricant from a drawer. “Now, I’m going to jack each of you off hard for ten seconds. Stand still, try not to move. First, you.”

She knelt in front of Travis, gripped the base of his cock with one hand, lubricated it liberally with her other, and grabbed his head. She stroked it aggressively. “Oh, yeah,” he groaned, his head tipping back in pleasure, his pelvis thrusting of its own volition as Melissa counted to ten.

“How was that? Good?”

“It felt great.”

“Good for you. Now it’s Trevor’s turn. Slide over here, rock star.” Trevor obeyed and Jennifer did the same for him; she gripped the base of his cock, lubricated him, and grabbed his cock head, except she held his foreskin tightly back with her hand. “Now stay put.”

Travis knew what was coming; he steeled himself to try to withstand it. Her hand stroked aggressively as Melissa counted to ten. “Oh, shit,” he choked as she started, his body twitching. On six his legs buckled underneath him and he collapsed backward.

“See what I mean?” Jennifer stood, laughing. “He couldn’t take it. Most of the uncut guys I’ve played with are that way. Once, I tied a guy up spread eagle, lubed him up good, and did that to him. He screamed for me to stop and then came all over my hand in less than a minute. Most uncut guys enjoy sex more than cut guys. They -feel- it more. Their dicks are just plain more sensitive.”

Melissa grinned wolfishly at Trevor. “I’ll have to try that out sometime.” Trevor smiled. He'd always been vaguely embarrassed by his foreskin. Maybe it wasn't so bad after all.

“Well, this is great and all,” commented Travis, gulping down a glass of juice. “But my desensitized cock and I are still horny.”

Jennifer grinned at him. “What’re you looking at me for? You’ve got a buddy right there that can help you.” Trevor flushed red. “Come on, rock star, your pal needs some help. We know what you two have been up to. Why don’t you get down there and suck on his balls some?”

Trevor looked at Travis with a silly grin. “You heard the lady.” Travis put his hand on Trevor’s shoulder. “The sweat’s not licking itself off my balls.”

“I can’t fucking believe I’m doing this,” Trevor mumbled. He’d done about everything under the sun with Travis, but never in front of other people, and certainly never in front of girls. He knelt and dove into his cousin’s crotch anyway, tea bagging his scrotum with the tip of his tongue.

“That’s it,” moaned Travis. “Suck those balls. Use your hand. Play with them.”

Long seconds passed as Trevor lost himself in the moment, the kinkiness of pleasuring another man in front of these women making him horny again. Finally, he glanced up. “Why don’t you join me down here?”

Travis obeyed and the men lay side by side for a sixty-nine. Trevor looked over at the girls as Jennifer tweaked her nipples and Melissa masturbated gently. It finally struck him how much they loved the show and he dove into his cousin with renewed fervor.

Moments later, he heard the women get up and move toward them. Jennifer lay down next to Trevor to share his cock while Melissa did the same thing for Travis’ cock. Trevor stared into her beautiful dark eyes as his head bobbed back and forth, mouth full of meat. He felt Jennifer’s warm breath on his thigh as she moved in to share with Travis.

Trevor and Melissa passed Travis’ cock back and forth like a giant joint, each one alternately getting higher, fascinated by their view of the other sucking at it, the sights and smells punctuated by spikes of pleasure as Jennifer and his cousin worshipped his own manhood.

“Hey, Trevor,” Jennifer called. “Why don’t you deep throat this guy? We’ll see which of you can stay on the other longer.” Melissa giggled and nodded at him in encouragement. Trevor had never actually tried taking Travis’ whole cock in his mouth before. He hesitated a moment then drew a deep breath and steeled his will, determined to win. Opening his mouth, he wrapped his face around Travis’ cock, engulfing it, forcing his head down farther and farther. “One!” His gag reflex kicked in, his entire body tightening as it tried to cough. “Two!” A little choke emerged from his throat. “Three!” His eyes started watering. He wouldn’t let go. The seconds passed entirely too slowly as Jennifer incremented the count. “Nine!” His body revolted completely, almost throwing his head back against his will. “Ten! Way to go, that’s almost half my personal best.”

Trevor sniffled and wiped the stinging tears from his eyes. “Whew, how do people do that?”

“Practice,” quipped Jennifer. “Now your turn.”

“Ten seconds?” Travis chuckled. “No problem. You’re going down, sucker.”

Jennifer nudged him. “I think you’ve got that backwards buddy. Quit stalling.”

Travis took a single deep breath and plunged, burying his lips against Trevor’s balls and pubes. Trevor could actually feel his cousin’s throat muscles spasm and pulsate. He’d gotten deep throated by Travis before, but never this long. His body twitched.

“Five!”

Melissa whispered to him, an evil glint in her eye. “Hey, watch this…” She wedged her finger in between Travis’ cheeks, locating his anus.

“Seven!” Melissa bit her tongue, her nose crinkling in determination. “Eight!” Her hand thrust hard, halfway burying her delicate middle finger dry and raw up Travis’ rectum.

“ggghhHHPHRAUGH!” Travis’ whole body jerked away from the unexpected invasion. The other three busted up. “Bitch! I had that!”

“You lose!” crowed Trevor. “Fuck, I thought you were going to take my dick with you!”

“Not fair,” he groused good-naturedly. “Not fair at all.”

The others rolled on the floor. Jennifer teased him about how the chick had owned him. Trevor and Melissa laughed at his speechless discomfiture.

Finally, the joviality melted into chuckles and Trevor stood to get some water.

“So, Melissa and I were talking in the kitchen,” Jennifer segued, “about what we’d like to do. Wanna hear it?”

“Sure.”

“I fuck Travis, Travis fucks Trevor, Trevor fucks Melissa.”

Trevor gaped at her. “Woah, woah, woah. I don’t know.”

Melissa sidled up next to him, leaning in to his ear, nibbling his lobe. “I’d love to see you get fucked, baby,” she whispered. “I want to see what your sexy face looks like when he drops his cum up your ass.” He just looked at her, partly speechless, partly charmed. “Will you do it, for me?” She kissed his nose lightly and all his will to resist melted away as her tongue found his.

“What about you?” Travis was saying. “You’re not exactly equipped.”

“Au contraire, my unimaginative friend.” Jennifer moved to a bureau in the corner. She withdrew a harness and a rather sizable, strangely shaped dildo It had one end that was just a plain, if fairly large, rubber penis. The other end curled down and up into a smaller more bulbous handle. “I love this little guy,” Jennifer said. “I put the little end up into me. It hits my g-spot while the bumps here take care of my clit.” She slid the penis through a hole in the harness until it wedged in fully, then inserted the toy into herself and strapped the harness into place. She turned to them, presenting the fashion statement, the fake cock swinging around through the air. “Voila! Gender-bender special. The harder I fuck you, the better I feel.” She stepped up to Travis. “I’ve fucked quite a few guys with this little man. Of course,” her fingers traced at his nipple, “I’ve never actually diddled a guy who already loves taking it up the ass.”

“Baby, your wish is my command.”

“Good. Get down and suck my cock,” Jennifer demanded, guiding Travis’ head downward with surprising force. He obeyed, slipping the rubber into his mouth. “Oh, yeah, that’s it bitch. Use your hands. Stroke my big dick.” Melissa and Trevor watched, fascinated as Jennifer dominated Travis. She made him lick her shaft, made him jerk her off, even grabbed his head and face-fucked him to the sounds of his choking and gasping. His cock stood fully hard the whole time, obviously titillated by the role reversal.

Trevor noted Melissa at his side becoming increasingly restless, her fingers finding her clitoris as he held her close. Finally, reaching her breaking point, Melissa grabbed Trevor by the hand and pulled him urgently to the floor. “Fuck me, baby.” She lay back and spread her legs, guiding his body over hers. Trevor’s erection had waned somewhat, but he tickled her labia with it, rubbing it against her soft flesh as it hardened. He pushed just the tip against her, teasing her. Her body arched, her legs wrapping around his waist, begging him to penetrate her. He pulled away. “Ohhh, come on,” she moaned. He pressed at her again, not quite enough to really get past the outer fold of tissue… then pulled back. He gripped the base of his cock and clubbed her clitoris with it ten or fifteen times then poked her again. “Come ON, give it to me!”

“Not until you say you’re sorry.”

“Sorry? What for?”

He pulled away, rubbing the shaft against her clit with slow pelvic thrusts. “Not so much fun is it?” he mused. “All you want to do is fuck, and what does she do?” He poked her again. “She ignores you. She drives you wild for an hour, making you crazy. All you want to do is fuck, get a blowjob, maybe even just get felt up a couple of times. But, nooo…” He pulled back. “She rubs your whole body instead. She pokes you in the ass…” Poking again. “She makes out with you. She even fucking dresses you like her life-size Ken doll and makes you feel all sexy and horny. And she doesn’t even give the part of you that needs it the time of day.” Pulling back.

“Alright, you little baby! I’m sorry!”

Trevor smiled gently and leaned down, slowly, their eyes locked. Their lips met, gently, tenderly. “That’s all I wanted to hear.” One savage thrust and his cock buried to the hilt in her. She moaned. He withdrew completely then thrust again, her body shifting at the impact of his pelvis. She moaned again. A third time, all the way out and thrust. He tore into her, arms braced against the floor, eyes locked with hers, muscles flexing and rippling as his pelvis slapped against her willing body.

Moments later, he felt his cousin slide up behind him. He’d almost forgotten the others. A tugging at his ass. Damn, he thought. He had forgotten the toy, its battery having gone dead some time ago. He’d just gotten used to it in there.

He buried himself into Melissa as he felt Travis’ slick cock head press firmly against his anus.

He’d hated getting fucked the last time he tried it. It hurt too much. Perhaps this time the vibrator had kept him looser and habituated to having something in his ass. Perhaps he was turned on by the situation or by the sexy girl beneath him. Whatever the reason, the pain, while still there, morphed into enough pleasure to make the invasion bearable. He threw his head back and moaned like a whore, his eyes rolling into the back of his head as his cousin’s cock relentlessly wormed its way deep into him. “Oh yeah,” hissed Melissa, entranced by his reaction, her fingertips pressing at his pectoral. “Take that cock you fucking stud.”

Finally buried, Travis left himself in there and wrapped his arms around his cousin as Trevor started thrusting again, moving his hips in time with Trevor’s, his firm chest pressed hard against his cousin’s powerful back. They thrust as one body into Melissa as Travis pulled Trevor’s head around, their lips locking passionately.

Jennifer had knelt behind Travis and matched their thrusts, her dildo working its way a little deeper every time Travis’ ass backed up onto it until finally it had also disappeared and her hips swayed along with Trevor’s thrusts, three people now fucking Melissa as one.

The grunting and groaning and moaning filled the room as they slowly established alternating rhythms, Travis’ cock burying itself into Trevor as his cock slid out of Melissa; Jennifer’s cock burying itself into Travis as his cock slid out of Trevor. Two powerful, muscular men, driven to utter simultaneous domination and submission by the women at either end of the line, their bronzed torsos gleaming as the droplets of sweat formed on their skin, all four enraptured by the pleasure in themselves and in the others.

Long minutes passed as the group maintained its rhythm, too entranced to change position or alter pace, except that they unconsciously sped up together until the sound of slapping flesh at three flashpoints competed for attention with the moans and sighs.

Finally, Jennifer wrapped her arms around Travis and pulled him upright against her body. She started whispering to him, low where no one could hear. Trevor tried later to learn what had been said but Travis only blushed and grinned and would never answer. Whatever the words, they electrified Trevor's cousin; within seconds, Travis’ breathing became harsh, more ragged. His grunts turned into groans. Trevor felt his cock begin to spasm inside him, thought he actually felt that first rope of semen splash against his rectal wall and that pushed him over the edge. He buried himself into Melissa and shot, his orgasm hitting him like a freight train as his rectal sphincter muscle spasmed and cramped around his cousin’s embedded shaft, the pain and pleasure mixing into an explosive cocktail. Melissa studied his reaction, turned on by it, lapping it up with her eyes, watching the burning swatch of pained pleasure begin to twist and tear its way through him in a welcome rage, felt his cock twitch and pulsate against her vaginal wall and her orgasm began, scorching like a slow, hot flame as convection makes it bubble and flow up and around its fuel. Jennifer beheld the glory of what she had wrought, felt her godlike control over the bodies of these mere mortals and her orgasm sparked, fueled by her insistent thrusts of the toy into Travis’ ass.

The four men and women burned together in lust for one another, their bodies simultaneously twitching and dripping, convulsing and perspiring, gasping and moaning in one mass of enraptured flesh. It could never have been planned, but the lustful sensuality of the moment seared itself into each of their memories.

The moment finally waned. The four disengaged, utterly spent, heaving their breath as they collapsed onto the carpet and daring not to break the spell with a single word.

Hi taniboh

I started reading this awesome story after it was recommended to me from hardreader-HR. I was looking for something good to read, and HR felt like I would enjoy it! I had just finished reading the trilogy of ITIK.

This story is very well written, descriptive and fucking Hot! I was a little bit turned off with the idea of this Bi-sexual part initially! But decided to give it a try anyway. I'm not at all disappointed after this hot chapter. I think it adds a great deal of insight into what goes on in the heads of these Hot cousins. After all Trevor started out this journey as a Straight guy, at least in his own definition of who he believed he was sexually.

I am loving the Hot sexual encounters and experimenting between the cousins that has lead up to this Hot Bi-sexual foursome!

Looking forward to reading more!
 
Hey guys... I realize that this story was post long ago, but I had a couple of comments to share about the last chapter.

Each time taniboh warns of bi-sex in the chapter I consider skipping ahead, both times now I have found myself enjoying the sex more than I would have thought that I would. I am thinking it is because of the comfort level between all of these characters as it is taking place! Melissa is AWESOME to encourage and and enjoy the sex between the cousins. It makes it so fucking hot to me that they can just share it all together with no jealousy, and no one being left out! I would have expected Trevor to have a bit of jealousy as Travis fucked his girl, even asking Trevor if he enjoyed watching him do so! The comfort dynamic with all of them makes the sex between them so damn HOT. I really love that Travis and Trevor are so comfortable sharing what they have together with and right in front of Melissa.

I can hardly wait to read the next part with the addition of the other 3 college guys. It seems that at least one of the 3 is excited about fucking Melissa! i am thinking that there will be some sex with the guys as well before it is all over with... Hope so anyway... Great chapter taniboh... Hot as usual.
 
I didn't like the lifeguard horning in on what the cousins share together at all. And neither did Trevor!!! Even though it was obviously Travis plan all along!

I think I was more upset than Trevor, even though Travis seemed to love the whole thing quite a bit (just a little bit to much in my opinion). Did he even consider how it was likely making Trevor feel?? Or is he just oblivious to feeling?

Maybe Travis is just trying to prepare Trevor in a very twisted selfish way for the separation that is unfortunately soon to come! At this point it seems that the deep feelings between the cousins are more one sided than I was hoping for! I think Trevor is going to have a very hard time with that! I'm not even sure that he has allowed himself to go there at this point! It did let us see a little bit deeper into the heads of the cousins! But was not my favorite chapter, even though it was very well written as usual taniboh!
 
Awesome Chapter... I enjoyed the intensity of the two guys torturing each other in the shower! A hot form of exciting foreplay, with the added thrill of getting caught! I think Trevor really is going to be ok

I find it interesting that Trevor reacts by getting angry (mostly at himself) as he struggles to understand why he is having the new feelings and attractions towards other hot guys! He couldn't really have believed that the smoking hot sex he had with Travis had not significantly changed him in several ways! I suppose he must have not really given it much thought, until just before the boys parted at the end of summer!

I have also been wondering if Travis has been feeling some sadness and loss, or if all his cousin was to him was easy convenient sex, and basically just a way to get his own rocks off!

Looking forward to seeing the evolution of Trevor! I am loving this hot story!
 
Awesome writing style tantiboh! It's a lot like HR's erotic writing, if you don't mind my comparison! It feels real, the imagery created in the minds eye is excellent.

I appreciated Brandon's honesty and his safe sex concerns towards the less experienced Trevor. It feels to me like Brandon is fooling himself, if he thinks his own sex practices are safe!!! The more sex partners one has realistically increase the chance of STD's and becoming infected with AIDS no matter how careful he thinks he is being! The risks of careless gay sex, or for that matter any kind of sex are real! Suffering, misery, and even death are possible to those uneducated and careless when the little head takes over the thinking in the heat of passion!

I have to be completely honest! I was very disappointed when Brandon revealed that he is a slut, has sex with many guys, and apparently plans to continue. I know it bothers Trevor, even though it was just briefly mentioned! For me it cheapened the new relationship, made the sex between the two somehow not so hot after that revelation!

I know Trevor is still figuring himself out, and what he wants in his sex life! I would hope that Trevor will do some serious thinking, and determine if Brandon is what he is looking for in his life! Trevor seems to need a stronger commitment and some real feelings in place with those he chooses to have relations with! It makes me sad that the two guys he has been with so far both seem to be the gay stereotype of sluts. All about fulfilling there own sexual needs, and all about getting themselves off first and foremost!

Maybe things will evolve for these two in time. But it does not seem to be heading in that direction, after this chapter of revelation from Brandon! I hope Trevor is taking heed! I would hate to watch him get hurt by this Cocky selfish swimmer!

I would not feel at all comfortable or safe even with safe practices, testing etc, fucking around with someone who has the need to slut around with many different partners.

On the positive side it will likely motivate Trevor to maybe look closer at himself and decide who he really is, how he identifies sexually, and what he really wants in his sexual partner, or partners!

Maybe Trevor should hook up Travis and Brandon, they seem to both have quite a bit in common!

It scares me that Trevor is setting himself up to get hurt once again with Brandon! Time to move on, in my opinion and seek out someone worth keeping around! Hopefully in time Trevor will meet someone who is more interested in developing a meaningful, deep feeling, and hopefully loving and caring partnership!!

I realize that my thoughts and comments are very opinionated! And that some or even many will not agree with me! I don't really care much about the popular opinion! It is how I am honestly feeling at this point in the story!! Take it or leave it!!! I am enjoying this story, and looking forward to reading the next chapters... Thanks tantiboh and Trevor/abiwrestler....
 
Wow, I've just finished reading this hot story. Tantiboh, you are without doubt a talented and engaging writer, and I'll be sure and read your other threads.

I have to say that as I read the story, what kept me coming back chapter after chapter was the sex. There was a LOT of variety, and it was written with such skill that I could clearly visualise all of it, and yes, I was hard most of the time. Quite a bit of it was outside my own experience, and beyond my fantasies, but it was fucking hot and I loved it.

I really liked how this was the story of a year of Trevor's experimenting, maturing, and realising that sex with passion is the best sex. Much of the frenzied activity in his year was wonderfully full of energy and lust, but lacking emotional intensity. I tend to agree with jrsons' comments above, about being disappointed at Brandon's sluttiness. But of course, it's all about Trevor's discovering himself and what he needs. He did recognise that sex is best when there's an emotional connection, and I really liked how he felt that giving his lover pleasure was important to him.

To any horny boys who are reading this comment, but haven't read the story yet, I say dive right in. It's a hot yarn, really well written, that is sure to make your dick hard. Cheers, HF
 
Well I have spent my Easter Sunday reading this great experience Tantiboh and Abi, great interpretation from Tantiboh about his and Abi experience, Tantiboh you are a great writer and I enjoy how Abi put his thoughts on what you wrote is great, you have kept me busy today! I saw HF and Friend have read this, Hi guys :wave::wave:

Trevor and Travis from the 1st chapter was hot, starting down on the farm and doing things I wish I could experience, hot humid summer working hard and playing hard.:cowboy:, Trevor/Abi got an education from that experience with Travis all because his curiosity of seeing his cousin wacking one off in a field, how they developed a deeper understanding of each other and the way you wrote this is amazing, Melissa and Jennifer definitely gave them an experience as well, even the Bi scenes are great, shame you never saw the Jock again after you had a connection in away. :sex:.

The way you gave people a warning incase they wanted to skip a scene with it being a Bi scene was not necessary in my opinion as they were hot as well, if anyone didn't read them they have missed out, just to see the different connections that was going on in Trevor/Abi head, Tantiboh the scene with life guard was great, the way you wrote about the jealousy Trev had about Travis being with someone else at the same time just shows how complex relationships can be. The road trip journey is great as well, how Trev felt when he and Travis had to part does get you in a way, his change from a sort of Jock character to someone who is not going arsed by the littlest things is great.

I will definitely revisit this thread and really recommend people to read this fully all chapters and not skip any, as you need to see the character development of Trev from all experiences he had Male and Female, from all the people he experienced in this year, I enjoyed how you gave us some closure with all the people as well, sometimes you never get that. What are Tantiboh and Abi doing now would be great to know.

Enjoy the experience of reading this and enjoy all the sex, fetishes and what all the guys do it made realise I have lived a very sheltered life :grrr:, looks like I need to find an American boy.... THIS WILL MAKE YOU CUM *|*

Thanks Tantiboh for writing this, Deano x
 
Hi Deano :wave: Glad you liked the story too, and I enjoyed your comments - insightful as always (*8*)
 
Hey HF ..| hope you’re good, thanks for stumbling across this and reading it, it is a great read, am sure Chaz would enjoy this as well! I enjoyed reading you views as well, I wonder if Abi/Trev still has that hot body?:-<
 
Hey, highflyer99 --

I am so glad I suggested tantiboh's masterpiece for you to read as a follow up to reading my "I Thought I Knew" trilogy. It looks like you've hooked Deanotrav into tantiboh's considerable writing skills. Maybe it will soon have the revival it deserves.

If only tantiboh were still signing into JUB.

Stay happy. And stay hard!

-- H.R.
 
Welp! I've FINALLY made it to this party! Better late than never, right? \:/

My good bud HR recommended this to me years ago! Then things intervened, and I never got to it! #-o

Not long ago, HF and I were comparing story notes. He was having trouble finding ITIK 3 "Jess' Story". I sent him the link. He commented to HR, who also pointed him here. HF, in turn, shared that recommendation, which rang some bells with me, and <<Voila!>>. (group)

I see our bent bud Deano jumped in, too! (!w!)

All the more proof that, "What goes around cums around!" Looks like we're all an official 'Circle *|* ' now! :hurray: :badgrin:

Read ON, bros!! (*8*) :kiss:
Chaz :luv:
 
What an interesting story this is. The more I read the deeper I got into characters. Glad to see HF, Deano and Chaz enjoyed this story as well.

Brian
 
Hey Chaz and Brian ..|:wave:

Glad to see you both enjoyed this as much as I did, it is definitely worth another read as this is a great afternoon journey to read about Trev/Abi, Tantiboh/Travis wrote a worthy journey and was hot, heavy and :cowboy:(!):3way::sex:

Great comments as well.

HR thanks for suggesting this to HF I was really happy to stumble across this, HF has made some recommendations as well for 'I thought I knew' trilogy as well which I am looking forward to reading soon :D

Take care guys (group) Deano x
 
Deano, I think you'll really like "I Thought I Knew," especially after your reaction to "Trevor's Year." Tantiboh and I were writing and posting to JUB at the same time. It quickly became clear to each of us that there was a similar vibe to the projects we were working on. We corresponded regularly offering feedback and suggestions. We teased each other by exchanging chapters to a story with the nding left in limbo for the other to complete. It resulted in an excellent exchange .. the results of wandering naked and aroused through the deepest and darkest recesses of each other's twisted brains ... no rules to follow ... only the fetishes and lust of the other guiding us as we wrote unfinished chapters back and forth to each other. You come to know a writers twists and torments if they have opened themselves to observation and you have read them closely enough. Certainly tantiboh excelled at that.

Let me know what you think, if and when you start raeding "I Thought I Knew."

Stay happy. And stay hard!

-- H.R.
 
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