Long time lurker, 1st time poster. Thought I'd unload a dirty story I've been writing for a while. Sort of an escapist romp spawned by a real life experience that was much, much less exciting.
I will post it in installments as I proofread it in my amateur way.
A DEBT
He opened the door halfway and looked out at the street behind me, made sure my car wasn’t too close to his house - a low, dirty ranch style home among many other low, dirty ranch style homes. I kept my hands in my pockets, shivering.
Satisfied, he caught me with his concrete eyes, black behind bushy, gray-flecked eyebrows. He straightened, grinned warmly, and opened the door. I ignored the goose bumps and went inside, my coat tight around me to keep out the wet winter cold. His heat radiated off of him as I entered, and my heart began to pound, stomach dropping. It was actually happening.
The house I’d entered was clean, but sparse. White walls and beige carpets under wooden furniture and a black sofa facing away from me. A dormant large screen television lay beyond it, dominating the wall, black pillars of speakers rising on either side, all the expense of the dreary place funneled into an entertainment setup.
He closed the door abruptly. I jumped, turn to watch him as he looked me over. He was three or four inches taller than me, bald head, flat stomach, broad waist, broader shoulders. He had rough chin pubes, long on the edges. He wore jeans and a white wife beater. He had to have been at least forty-five years old, but his arms and shoulders were quite bulky, much larger than mine, and the muscles beneath his white T-shirt were bulging, chest thrust forward. He was a cop. The aura of control that he’d emanated when he’d nearly given me that speeding ticket was just as palpable now as then.
I let my eyes roam down his shirt to his belt buckle, his denim jeans. The bulge…it was massive. So massive that my insides quivered, wondering what it would feel like when it was inside of me, when it was pushing into me, how much it would hurt. It excited me, it scared me – though I tried not to show it.
He smiled, more of a smirk, adjusted his burden shamelessly with a big, hairy hand. He was looking at me with a barely suppressed animal grin. “I’m glad you came,” he said, his deep Georgia drawl permeating every word. I could feel it in my chest.
I shrugged, still wearing my heavy coat, my hands in my pockets. I’d gotten a haircut this morning, short at the sides, loose on the top. I’d shaved, leaving my face just barely brushed with dark shadow on pale skin. Beneath my coat was a black shirt and brown jeans. As he requested, I wasn’t wearing any underwear. I was glad now – the extra room seemed to make my raging erection less apparent.
“Don’t you talk?” he asked, taking a step toward me. “Here – I’ll take your coat.”
Awkwardly I slackened my shoulders, let it fall down my arms. I handed it to him. He stepped close, draped it over the sofa beside me, keeping his eyes on me. They were hungry. We were silent for a moment. I couldn’t meet his gaze, which was fixed on me, slithering over me, caressing me, devouring me. I was exhilarated, and I couldn’t speak. My heart was thumping. My cock was so hard it hurt. He could tell.
He stepped back. “Take off your shirt,” he said, his hands crossed in front of him. I hesitated, then began lifting my shirt over my head. The cold air hit my flat stomach, and I took a deep breath. This wasn’t going fast enough for him.
He crossed the room in two long strides and grabbed the shirt from my hands. He lifted it over my head and tossed it across the room in the space of a few half-seconds. His hands fell on me immediately, and his tongue, his go-tee…
He groped my chest, squeezing my pecs – hard – and dug his tongue into the muscles of my neck, raking it across my throat, not bothering to suppress a bestial grunt. I was taken by surprise – I moaned, gripping his shirt.
His hands immediately went lower, moved around my smooth sides, under my belt and into the back of my pants, where he cupped each of my large, clenching ass cheeks in his big, strong, cold hands, squeezing all the way. His thumb dug into the soft place between –
“Wait,” I gasped. “Not so – not so fast –”
He didn’t seem to hear me, but, I thanked God, his thumb left my asshole alone for the moment. He dropped to his knees, his tongue weaving a sticky, sore trail down my chest until it was at my navel, where he dove in, devouring my smooth belly and pushing me back against the sofa. I was shuddering, taught in his aching grasp.
His hands came to the front, ripped my pants open at the button. The zipper parted at once, exposing my trimmed pubic hair and most of my groin, along with the trail of fur that connected my naval with my pubs. My dick, fully erect and throbbing, was caught at the bottom of the V, held captive by my drooping pants.
I was breathing hard, my shoulders trembling as I leaned back, arching just slightly. He was breathing harder, eyes wide, drinking me in below the waist. He looked up at me then, grinning a crooked grin. He put his left hand on my hip and began to rub the fur of my groin with his right, massaging deep, tickling and prickling me with his bold, sausage-like fingers. I began to breathe harder, faster. I tensed the muscles of my thighs, my buttocks, my groin. He was drooling, very slightly, and it dripped into his rough go-tee as he pushed deeply, kneaded the muscles of my groin until my legs shook and parted for him, and then –
The fire in my loins spread, engulfed my stomach, my bowels, my legs, my brain. The torture was too much – I had to have his hands on me. All of me. Still, I dared not move to guide him. He would not have let me. I squirmed, and his massaging stopped. He knew – he could read it on my face, feel in in my body. “Please,” I gasped.
In one deft move, he yanked my pants down around my ankles. My dick, a solid, thick, uncut seven inches, sprang from my pants as they released it. It smacked against my stomach, leaving a sticky patch of precum as, slowly, it began to slide to the side. I gasped softly, gripping the sofa beneath me. It felt as if I’d never seen my own cock that large, that engorged.
He wasted no time burying his face in my sizable scrotum, his tongue forging a path up into the soft, sensitive crevice deep beneath my dick. I spasmed, moaning impotently. His tongue left that spot and found another at the base of my left testicle. His mouth shortly engulfed it. I whimpered. Hot, wet ecstasy. He breathed deeply through his big nose, taking in the scent of my intimates. Hands ran roughly up my torso and twisted each of my nipples, harder than before. My back arched and I squealed, not caring at all that I sounded like a girl, like a sow, a bitch in heat. I was lost in the heat and the pleasure and the pain of it, thrusting my hips at his prickling face.
Hands left my aching nipples and closed in around my throbbing member. He pulled the foreskin back viciously and his tongue left my balls, only to reappear beneath the extra-sensitive head of my penis, round and round and round –
“Oh – oh my God – ” I grabbed onto his bald head with one hand, to steady myself, root myself to the real world, to him. I had - had to keep myself from coming.
His hand snaked around to my butt cheek, gripped it firmly, massaged. I realized his fingers were sticky and wet with something cold and slick, and then –
His middle finger pushed up into my ass quite abruptly, pushed past my unsuspecting sphincter and up, up, until his knuckles were pressed against either side of my hole, as if he were flicking off my tailbone.
I cried out and grabbed onto his bald head with both hands now, frantically, for it was the first time anything had ever been put up there, and it was somewhat painful – a deep, sharp stinger – but I couldn't ask him to stop, oh no. He wanted this, after all. I'd known it would be happening sooner or later. Besides, it couldn’t compete with his tongue, his lips, milking my exposed sex hungrily, relentlessly – and now the finger up my ass began to move, slowly at first, then faster, then up, pushing against the base of my – my – it felt very, very good now. So good I thought I was going to –
“Wait,” I wheezed. “I’ll – ”
His mouth retreated from my dick, leaving it wet, cold, but still burning. His finger stayed in my ass, but it had stopped jabbing into me, settling for curling in the tight velvet of my insides.
“Boy, you taste too good,” he rasped, his breath rushing across my wet sex, exhilarating, like peppermint. He stared up at me, his eyes on fire, grinning wider than ever. “I am so happy you came.”
I couldn’t think of anything to say, so I just grinned back at him. His finger slid out of my ass and he stood up, rubbing his bulging crotch unabashed with his right hand, squeezing my cock with the other. He tugged on it and I stood up, stepped out of my crumbled pants, agonized with wanting. He tossed his head to the right – the hallway. I followed him, and he led me by my dick. I had to walk fast.
I will post it in installments as I proofread it in my amateur way.
A DEBT
He opened the door halfway and looked out at the street behind me, made sure my car wasn’t too close to his house - a low, dirty ranch style home among many other low, dirty ranch style homes. I kept my hands in my pockets, shivering.
Satisfied, he caught me with his concrete eyes, black behind bushy, gray-flecked eyebrows. He straightened, grinned warmly, and opened the door. I ignored the goose bumps and went inside, my coat tight around me to keep out the wet winter cold. His heat radiated off of him as I entered, and my heart began to pound, stomach dropping. It was actually happening.
The house I’d entered was clean, but sparse. White walls and beige carpets under wooden furniture and a black sofa facing away from me. A dormant large screen television lay beyond it, dominating the wall, black pillars of speakers rising on either side, all the expense of the dreary place funneled into an entertainment setup.
He closed the door abruptly. I jumped, turn to watch him as he looked me over. He was three or four inches taller than me, bald head, flat stomach, broad waist, broader shoulders. He had rough chin pubes, long on the edges. He wore jeans and a white wife beater. He had to have been at least forty-five years old, but his arms and shoulders were quite bulky, much larger than mine, and the muscles beneath his white T-shirt were bulging, chest thrust forward. He was a cop. The aura of control that he’d emanated when he’d nearly given me that speeding ticket was just as palpable now as then.
I let my eyes roam down his shirt to his belt buckle, his denim jeans. The bulge…it was massive. So massive that my insides quivered, wondering what it would feel like when it was inside of me, when it was pushing into me, how much it would hurt. It excited me, it scared me – though I tried not to show it.
He smiled, more of a smirk, adjusted his burden shamelessly with a big, hairy hand. He was looking at me with a barely suppressed animal grin. “I’m glad you came,” he said, his deep Georgia drawl permeating every word. I could feel it in my chest.
I shrugged, still wearing my heavy coat, my hands in my pockets. I’d gotten a haircut this morning, short at the sides, loose on the top. I’d shaved, leaving my face just barely brushed with dark shadow on pale skin. Beneath my coat was a black shirt and brown jeans. As he requested, I wasn’t wearing any underwear. I was glad now – the extra room seemed to make my raging erection less apparent.
“Don’t you talk?” he asked, taking a step toward me. “Here – I’ll take your coat.”
Awkwardly I slackened my shoulders, let it fall down my arms. I handed it to him. He stepped close, draped it over the sofa beside me, keeping his eyes on me. They were hungry. We were silent for a moment. I couldn’t meet his gaze, which was fixed on me, slithering over me, caressing me, devouring me. I was exhilarated, and I couldn’t speak. My heart was thumping. My cock was so hard it hurt. He could tell.
He stepped back. “Take off your shirt,” he said, his hands crossed in front of him. I hesitated, then began lifting my shirt over my head. The cold air hit my flat stomach, and I took a deep breath. This wasn’t going fast enough for him.
He crossed the room in two long strides and grabbed the shirt from my hands. He lifted it over my head and tossed it across the room in the space of a few half-seconds. His hands fell on me immediately, and his tongue, his go-tee…
He groped my chest, squeezing my pecs – hard – and dug his tongue into the muscles of my neck, raking it across my throat, not bothering to suppress a bestial grunt. I was taken by surprise – I moaned, gripping his shirt.
His hands immediately went lower, moved around my smooth sides, under my belt and into the back of my pants, where he cupped each of my large, clenching ass cheeks in his big, strong, cold hands, squeezing all the way. His thumb dug into the soft place between –
“Wait,” I gasped. “Not so – not so fast –”
He didn’t seem to hear me, but, I thanked God, his thumb left my asshole alone for the moment. He dropped to his knees, his tongue weaving a sticky, sore trail down my chest until it was at my navel, where he dove in, devouring my smooth belly and pushing me back against the sofa. I was shuddering, taught in his aching grasp.
His hands came to the front, ripped my pants open at the button. The zipper parted at once, exposing my trimmed pubic hair and most of my groin, along with the trail of fur that connected my naval with my pubs. My dick, fully erect and throbbing, was caught at the bottom of the V, held captive by my drooping pants.
I was breathing hard, my shoulders trembling as I leaned back, arching just slightly. He was breathing harder, eyes wide, drinking me in below the waist. He looked up at me then, grinning a crooked grin. He put his left hand on my hip and began to rub the fur of my groin with his right, massaging deep, tickling and prickling me with his bold, sausage-like fingers. I began to breathe harder, faster. I tensed the muscles of my thighs, my buttocks, my groin. He was drooling, very slightly, and it dripped into his rough go-tee as he pushed deeply, kneaded the muscles of my groin until my legs shook and parted for him, and then –
The fire in my loins spread, engulfed my stomach, my bowels, my legs, my brain. The torture was too much – I had to have his hands on me. All of me. Still, I dared not move to guide him. He would not have let me. I squirmed, and his massaging stopped. He knew – he could read it on my face, feel in in my body. “Please,” I gasped.
In one deft move, he yanked my pants down around my ankles. My dick, a solid, thick, uncut seven inches, sprang from my pants as they released it. It smacked against my stomach, leaving a sticky patch of precum as, slowly, it began to slide to the side. I gasped softly, gripping the sofa beneath me. It felt as if I’d never seen my own cock that large, that engorged.
He wasted no time burying his face in my sizable scrotum, his tongue forging a path up into the soft, sensitive crevice deep beneath my dick. I spasmed, moaning impotently. His tongue left that spot and found another at the base of my left testicle. His mouth shortly engulfed it. I whimpered. Hot, wet ecstasy. He breathed deeply through his big nose, taking in the scent of my intimates. Hands ran roughly up my torso and twisted each of my nipples, harder than before. My back arched and I squealed, not caring at all that I sounded like a girl, like a sow, a bitch in heat. I was lost in the heat and the pleasure and the pain of it, thrusting my hips at his prickling face.
Hands left my aching nipples and closed in around my throbbing member. He pulled the foreskin back viciously and his tongue left my balls, only to reappear beneath the extra-sensitive head of my penis, round and round and round –
“Oh – oh my God – ” I grabbed onto his bald head with one hand, to steady myself, root myself to the real world, to him. I had - had to keep myself from coming.
His hand snaked around to my butt cheek, gripped it firmly, massaged. I realized his fingers were sticky and wet with something cold and slick, and then –
His middle finger pushed up into my ass quite abruptly, pushed past my unsuspecting sphincter and up, up, until his knuckles were pressed against either side of my hole, as if he were flicking off my tailbone.
I cried out and grabbed onto his bald head with both hands now, frantically, for it was the first time anything had ever been put up there, and it was somewhat painful – a deep, sharp stinger – but I couldn't ask him to stop, oh no. He wanted this, after all. I'd known it would be happening sooner or later. Besides, it couldn’t compete with his tongue, his lips, milking my exposed sex hungrily, relentlessly – and now the finger up my ass began to move, slowly at first, then faster, then up, pushing against the base of my – my – it felt very, very good now. So good I thought I was going to –
“Wait,” I wheezed. “I’ll – ”
His mouth retreated from my dick, leaving it wet, cold, but still burning. His finger stayed in my ass, but it had stopped jabbing into me, settling for curling in the tight velvet of my insides.
“Boy, you taste too good,” he rasped, his breath rushing across my wet sex, exhilarating, like peppermint. He stared up at me, his eyes on fire, grinning wider than ever. “I am so happy you came.”
I couldn’t think of anything to say, so I just grinned back at him. His finger slid out of my ass and he stood up, rubbing his bulging crotch unabashed with his right hand, squeezing my cock with the other. He tugged on it and I stood up, stepped out of my crumbled pants, agonized with wanting. He tossed his head to the right – the hallway. I followed him, and he led me by my dick. I had to walk fast.










