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Qwerty2K9,
I hope you're just pulling our chain. Don't let Ethan pointing out a minor flaw in the story line hurt you.

I frequently try to help aspiring authors out by pointing out some awkwardnesses in their writing, particularly if I sense they are trying to be serious authors, and not just writing a quick JO story.
I look forward to seeing more of your writing in the near future.
Thanks for taking the time and effort to craft it for us.
:wave: (*8*) .
 
I am enjoying this story tremendously.
I hope to continue to be able to read the next chapter.
BRING IT!:sex:
 
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