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miaplacidus
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Re: Alexander And Me (first story)
Alex would never be so selfish. I've asked Autolycus to correct it.
Nice signature, by the way. It makes me remember very pleasurable moments.
gaygoth said:miaplacidus,
I know precisely how you feel. I too am 19, and my parents don't know, so I do all my writing while their out of the house. And my experience in sex is also very limited, never having gone beyond oral.
Probably the hardest part of writing a sex story is not quite so much deciding what the characters will do, but how to put it into words. The best advice I can give to you on that is to just type what you feel is right, even if it gets a little repetitive. If the story's good, the words you use to write it don't seem to matter so much.
As far as grammar, it's been spot on. I found only one mistake.
In part 1, Alex says 'I love you, Alex' to Mike. Other than that, absolutely superb.
Please continue with your story, whenever you get a chance. And if you get stuck on something, feel free to let us know. We'd all be glad to help.
Sincerely,
Xx_Goth_xX
Alex would never be so selfish. I've asked Autolycus to correct it.
Nice signature, by the way. It makes me remember very pleasurable moments.
























