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Being the Person I Can Be

i love this story mate - excellent characters and writing...long may it continue
 
Your story is powerful. Your characters complex and complete. And your writing gets me plenty hard for sure. Maybe more than hard. ;)

I just hope you don't get too caught up in plot twists and surprises. Great stories are the tales of character development, so make sure we stay more focused on the characters. They are characters worth caring about. Let them grow and develop and deal with all the problems you've already laid out for them before you throw in too much more calamity.

Oh, yeah, and sex is always good to throw in too. :)

You're doing great. Keep it up.
 
I absolutely loved this!

As someone who is in the same boat as Josh, this whole story made me swoon!

Good job for sure!
 
Wow! That was brilliant. I just came across it today and read it all in one i was glued.
 
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