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Blake's Journey

I could see that coming! As I expected before, the cliffhanger will be continued with Shaun telling Blake that he likes him. Good writing Matt. But I think it could be better if you make it a little bit longer for each chapter. But you still did a good job anyway. Keep up the good work!!!
 
Thanks for another good chapter, Matt. Since guys seem to be suggesting where this sty should go, I'll recommend a three-way, but somehow I don't think that's where you're headed. ;) Get some sleep and write some more for us. Thanks as always.
 
Matt, you are doing a great job. The English teacher in me is pleased.

I like how you are developing the characters, and your dialogue is realistic. Very nice! :D
 
Actually Matt, we are in the same timezone. I'm from Malaysia, not so far away from Australia isn't it.
 
I see. I thought we are in the same timezone. I fail my Geography. LOL

Can't wait for the next chapter...!!!
 
Matt, this is your story. Write it how you want it to be or what direction you want it to go. Good JOB!!!!!
 
That would be a nice way to wake up in the mornings. Oh so much better then an alarm clock buzzer!
Great chapters Matt!
 
Nicely done. The change in perspective was smooth and believable. Now, can you tell us which of the guys you identify with?
 
Just read the whole saga up to your latest. Sorry I've never said anything before... I don't really read many stories on here, just post :P But since you always read mine I figured I'd best get on the band wagon.

I love the saga so far. It's well paced, the chapters are spread out nicely and the characters are well rounded and believable. (Not to mention, the smutty bits are quite juicy).

Can't wait to read more! Have had some similar experiences in my life.
 
Matt,

I told you I'd try and get caught up today and now I am. I like the transition into different points of view. You can get a lot more detail in that way. This is a great story and very believable. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Kevin
 
matt excellent story man nice twists and i def lovethe different POV's. very good writing
 
Hey Matt. Please don't keep us waiting too long between chapters. Great story and looking forward to what happens next with these guys. Thanks.

Todd
 
Great Story. I like how its written. Character development is really good. I just read it all the way threw, so this is the first time I actually got stuck with your infamouse cliffangers lol. Hope to see more soon.
 
Matt,

Nice chapter ..|. Why do some parents have to screw up their kids relationships? My kids won't have to worry about that because they aren't dating until after I am dead. LOL ;)

Kevin
 
Damn parents! Maybe we should vote them out of office.
 
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