Matt,
Your writing improves greatly with each new chapter.
You are really showing your own hidden talent here. Keep it up, the more you practice the better you will get, as with most things in life, practice makes perfect.
This was an awesome chapter and I liked the cliffhanger, too. And I agree with your reason for it. It peaks the readers curiosity and forces them back to find out what happens next.
Like everyone else I can't wait to find out what happens to Dad.
Thanks for sharing your story with us Matt,
Kevin
Your writing improves greatly with each new chapter.
You are really showing your own hidden talent here. Keep it up, the more you practice the better you will get, as with most things in life, practice makes perfect.This was an awesome chapter and I liked the cliffhanger, too. And I agree with your reason for it. It peaks the readers curiosity and forces them back to find out what happens next.
Like everyone else I can't wait to find out what happens to Dad.
Thanks for sharing your story with us Matt,
Kevin
























