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But I can't be gay!........................Can I?

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13hangers

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At least thats what I thought as I woke up in the arms of my best friend.

Lets back up a bit.

My name is Jake, I'm 20 years old, I live in England, I have a reasonably good body. I like to think I am attractive.
And I have a 7 inch cock (when flaccid).

I have known Lindon for about 10 years now, since he moved into the house next door to me when we were both 11.
It used to be a, if I saw him say hi, sorta relationship.
Until one day he asked if I wanted to go into town with him.
From then we became inseperable.

We used to do everything together.
Played football (soccer), went to see the football matches, go to the pub all the typical guy stuff

We even lost our virginity on the same night!. Not to each other though!

Let me tell you about Lindon.

He is about 6 foot, he has a GREAT body,
and (when flaccid) a 6 inch cock. Did I mention he is gay?


We both started at the same University a couple of months ago. I'm taking all 3 Sciences and History. Lindon choosing English Literature and English Language, P.E and also History.

We had decided to become room-mates for 2 reasons. 1 - It was easy and having 2 of us would make rent a LOT easier. 2 - We spent enough time round each others houses that we practically lived with each other anyway.

Lindon had come out to me about 2 months ago. I was okay with it as I had kinda had an inkling that he was anyway. So I just brushed it off and we carried on like we used to.

So anyway...............back to now.

I've just woken up thinking,

'What the Fuck happened last night?!'

'Was it a dream?'

I knew instantly that it hadn't been, I NEVER had dreams like that.

I turned over, as if to confirm what I was thinking, waking him up in the process.

"Morning", he said groggily.

"Dude, we need to talk!", I replied.

"What about?" he asked.

"What the fuck do you mean 'What about'?!",

"Last night of course you dumbass!"

"Oh that!", he replied meekly
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To Be Continued​
 
Interesting start. You might want to pad it out a little bit because it's quite sparse at the moment; if you add more detail we care more about the characters and their situations. You can write a bit more and still not give too much away.

But keep going though, it'll be interesting to see where this leads.
 
you write well, keep going.......i've had a lot of cocks but never seen a 7 inch flaccid one!!! where are you measuring from????????
 
Loved to first part. I hope you don't mind a bit of advice.

Try not to break your paragraphs at every sentence. Let a paragraph be one complete idea. Example:

13hangers said:
At least that's what I thought as I woke up in the arms of my best friend.

Lets back up a bit.

My name is Jake, I'm 20 years old, I live in England, and I have a reasonably good body. I like to think I am attractive. And I have a 7 inch cock (when flaccid).

I have known Lindon for about 10 years now, since he moved into the house next door to me when we were both 11. It used to be a 'if I saw him say hi' sorta relationship. Until one day he asked if I wanted to go into town with him. From then we became inseparable.

We used to do everything together. Played football (soccer), went to see the football matches, we would even go to the pub, all the typical guy stuff. We even lost our virginity on the same night!. Not to each other though!
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A good paragraph should usually be about 3-6 sentences. Of course, not always, but it is a good rule of thumb. Also with your dialogue, try to keep one paragraph for each person speaking.

EX: "What the fuck do you mean 'What about'?!", I said exasperated. "Last night of course you dumbass!"

Makes it a bit easier to read and flow better. Also makes it easier to know who is speaking.

Anyway, keep up the story... Can't wait read the next part.

Joshua
 
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