Hey everyone! I know the last chapter wasn't very in depth so I tried to make it up to everyone with Chapter 5. There really isn't too much news with things at home, things have been kept on the D.L. and it would appear like nothing happened but I can't help but think about it. It's weird knowing someone else so important knows something about you and hates it. As for the story, this is once again from Daniel's perspective. I want the story to be about him primarily but realized it did need input from Hunter as well. Anyway, I think everyone will like this chapter which I am dedicating to Craiger and gaultierfnd2007 who posted despite the not so exciting Chapter 4. I'm hoping this longer and certainly more exciting chapter will result in more comments.
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DEFINE LOVE - CHAPTER 5
As the shower water swirled around my flip flop covered feet, I could hear and feel the day’s emotions rush out of my naked body. The repetitious pitter patter of the water hitting the tile below me was hypnotic and my shampoo lathered fingers running slowly my brown hair relieved the last of the tension stored in my head. Time was whizzing by, or standing still, I couldn’t tell; whichever one it was, I enjoyed it immensely.
As I began rinsing my soapy hair, I couldn’t help but over hear noises coming from the changing room adjacent to the showers which jarred me out of my trance. I hadn’t heard anyone enter the room but didn’t think much of it given that I had been in my own world for the majority of the shower. I was in the first stall opposite the changing room so I could have easily turned around and peered through the cheap shower curtain to see who was making the noise but I opted to continue my showering. It was late and probably just some fat guy down the hall cleaning up before hitting then hay. But just in case, I decided to listen more intently. All I could hear was the water from my own shower which was the only shower occupied given that it was a Friday night on a college campus. I was about to pour the liquid body wash into my hand when I heard something again and paused to see if I could hear any more noises. Silence, silence, silence, and then something unmistakable. The sound of two people making out.
I had heard stories of people getting it on in the showers and had even vowed to be one of those people getting action at the beginning of the year but I never thought I’d be in another stall when it was all going down. My heart began racing at the thought of it all; I was a virgin and Petey isn’t the type of guy who gets girls back to the room so this would be the first time I’d be in the same room as sex. Then I heard a soft, low pleasure moan and moments later a male voice say seductively, “I’m gunna fuck you so hard in your fat ass.”
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Holy shit,” I thought to myself. These were two kinky motherfuckers, they were either completely wrapped up in their foreplay or didn’t care that someone else was listening to them getting it on, or both. And the guy was going to plow the girl in the ass. “
Dear God, whatever gift you gave the guy in there, give that gift to me. I’m begging you.”
I could hear the guy breathing more deeply and faster and moan louder and more frequently. I could feel the blood rush to my elongating dick and began slowly stroking it with my body wash filled right hand. Whoever that girl was was obviously giving good head and it was driving the guy wild because what had started at a whisper had built up to above normal speaking volume and I could hear the occasional smack of the lips and repeated strokes of a hand wrapped around a cock. I could feel my own cock at full mast, a little over 7 inches from last measurement, and the combination of the body wash, water and the guy getting head mere feet from me had me letting out my own small moans and breathing faster as I continued to stroke my cock.
“Come on cowboy, I’m gunna take you for a ride.” I heard the girl get up and take a step towards the showers when I heard the guy talk again. “Get over here you sexy son of a bitch.” I heard the two of them kissing again. The sounds grew louder and louder with each step towards the showers and in fear of being caught I stopped jerking myself off and just took in the raw, ancient sound and power of fuck whilst being under the constant warm caressing water of the shower. I stood facing the shower head with my hand on the wall, head tilted back, eyes closed, just reigning it all in, listening to the two lovers passionately kiss feet behind me with only a curtain of cheap plastic separating us. The footsteps stopped as I heard two arms being pinned up against the metal wall of the stall directly across from me. I didn’t care at that point, I was going to keep jerking my cock because I had become just as horny as the love birds on the other side of the curtain. I poured out a little more of the body wash directly onto my erect cock and slowly spread it across the rest of my shaft and up to the head where I massaged it in gently in a circular motion, stimulating every last nerve ending, driving me to utter a very audible moan.
But it didn’t stop the two from going at it. They were kissing again and it was as fiery and passionate as ever. “Get up here,” I heard the guy say to his partner. It was obvious by the tone and confidence in his voice he had done this before and was going to have the lucky lady screaming by the time he was through with her ass. There was some shuffling around and then more kissing and it was clear the foreplay was soon to conclude.
“That was just a warm up, baby,” he moaned between kisses. “I’m gunna fuck you so good.” It was almost like he was talking directly to me and spurring me on further towards an orgasm. He could’ve been reciting Dr. Seuss for all I gave a damn, it was the force and passion in his voice that made it insatiably erotic. Each time the back side of my fist hit my pelvis, a wave of pleasure coursed through my body from its epicenter at my cock which was on the verge of ejaculating it’s loaded tank of semen into the shower drain below. The lovers took the backburner and I turned my full attention to my cock, they had gotten me to this point where any stroke could be the one that sets off the cum waiting within. I quickly decided to add a little more body wash lubricant to it to make the orgasm even more powerful. I stopped jerking my now red, throbbing cock which seemed to have gotten even bigger and grabbed for the body wash and attempted to lather on one last coat of lube when the bottle squirted out of my hands and onto the floor. I frenziedly got on my knees to pick up the fallen bottle. I had it in my hands but instinctively looked out from underneath the curtain to see if I could see where the two fuckers had gone to. All I could see was the guy’s big feet but they were directly on the other side of the curtain.
I quickly got up, eyes open wide and saw a hand grab onto the curtain rod of my stall, feeling for something to hold on to. It moved down to the curtain and after feeling it for a second to realize what it was, ripped it aside. My jaw dropped. On the other side of the curtain was a naked Hunter with another guy he was holding completely in the air, also naked, wrapped around his waist, kissing each other passionately. They didn’t even realize I was there and continued to kiss as they made their way into my shower. It wasn’t until Hunter felt the hot water on his arm that they stopped and turned, Hunter continuing to hold his partner in the air. I had no words, nothing I could say was adequate enough to explain how I was feeling, so I just stood there. Me, with my head under the shower, eyes and mouth open wide with a throbbing cock moments away from orgasm, Hunter, holding up the obviously drunk guy he had been kissing, his cock jutting out from underneath the guy he was hoisting up and the drunk’s cock sticking up by Hunter’s chest, Hunter’s arms rippling and glistening from the weight of his partner and the gentle spray of water that was kissing his left arm softly.
We stood there in silence for a good twenty seconds, the entire time Hunter staring into my eyes with his own two blue pools of mystery. Then he put the drunk guy on the floor and stepped over to me at an arm’s length, grabbed my shoulder and slowly moved up to the back of my neck with his strong left hand and gently held my head in place meanwhile inching slowly towards me. I couldn’t speak. I couldn’t move. I could feel my heart racing in my chest as he moved closer to me while I remained under the warm water. Hunter was now less than a foot away from my face which had not changed from its wide-eyed, jaw-dropped expression. He was now completely covered in a thin coat of water which was running slowly from where the shower water was now hitting his head. I took a small step back but couldn’t get myself to move any further back, not because of Hunter’s hand which only provided a small amount of resistance but because my subconscious didn’t want to. I couldn’t think, I couldn’t do, I could only act on impulse and my impulses kept my silent and still. Hunter moved forward, making up for my small step back and then a couple of inches more. He stood in front of me staring me dead in the eye, drenched by water of the shower rushing down his face to his protruding pecs, chiseled arms and broad shoulders while the rest of the water poured down on my head and torso and down to my cock which was so erect it nearly touched my belly button.
Some of the water got into Hunter’s cobalt blue eyes and he closed them for a moment as he titled his head down slightly. When he opened them back up, he was staring at my cock, stayed there momentarily and slowly began making his way back up. I instinctively did the same and looked down at his circumcised dick which was roughly the same size as my own but stuck more out than up and laid only centimeters away from my stomach. His light brown pubic hair was neatly trimmed and fell nicely around his cock and balls which all lied at the base of v-line abs. I followed his happy trail to his abdominals where each of the six were defined with great detail and I lingered there for an extra second, taking in his breathtaking nude body piece by piece. His pectorals jutted out slightly from the rest of his torso which had a light covering of that milk chocolate brown hair and rock hard pink nipples protruding from it all. I moved up to his thick neck, clean shaven jaw, luscious rose lips and back to his eyes which were still taking in all they could of my body but I stared into them anyway. They slowly took a similar path up and around my body, finally coming to rest on my parted lips and then purposefully met my gaze which he instinctively knew was there. He moved in closer, the underside of his cock now resting against my abs and slid up them as Hunter inched closer still. His left hand which had never moved from its perch on the back of my neck slowly started massaging me and I responded by breathing deeply through my nose, closing my eyes and resting my head on his hand. He took the opportunity to softly kiss my open neck slowly and repeatedly, making his way kiss by kiss up my neck all the way up to my ear lobe, each one causing me to let an audible moan and rub the side of my face against his forearm. His cock was now completely against my stomach as was the upper half of his ball sac, my cock doing the same against Hunter’s chiseled torso. As he moved slightly to his left to reach my ear, our cocks touched which immediately caused me to let out an “ohhh, fuck” as a wave of orgasmic sensation rushed through my whole crotch. My pleasure spurned Hunter on as he leaned up and gently bit my ear lobe, rubbing his dick against my stomach and, consequently, my dick against his stomach causing another wave to course throughout my body.
That had done it. The friction of our intertwined bodies, his teeth biting softly into my sensitive lobe and the constant stream of water rushing between it all had pushed me over the edge and I could feel the cum inside me beginning to rush from my testicles towards my engorged cock. My head switched sides in response and now rested against the left side of his wet face, the warm water and hot steam of the shower drowning us in their heat, our wet cocks sliding up and down our abs in rhythm as we both slowly rubbed against each other, my right hand reaching out and grabbing onto the side of Hunter’s muscular ass cheek, my left hand latching onto my own thigh all the while his tongue played with my ear and his left hand still massaging the back of my neck with Hunter’s former partner bearing witness to it all in the corner of the stall. My head reared back in anticipation of it all and, in doing so, gave Hunter the chance to move his lips back to my neck with more force and then up my jaw where he gently and forcefully pushed my head down towards his face with his hand and we met in a momentary powerful gaze under the water before my pulsating cock and shivering body overwhelmed me with pleasure. The power of it closed my eyes and made my head rear back once again while moaning loudly and biting my lower lip as the semen began to fill my shaft but before it shot out, I felt Hunter pull me back down towards him and kiss me. As our lips met I felt the rush of the first shot of cum shoot up between us, slickening further our already wet bodies. Rather than letting out another massive moan, I kissed Hunter harder and more deeply, pulling him in towards me by his ass, our tongues colliding with each other as my next shot of cum met the air and then a third. A fourth. A fifth, sixth, seventh and eighth. Our humping slowed back down and the aftermath left me shaking, our lips locked together but not kissing, my hand wrapped firmly around his butt cheek and his around my neck.
We held the position for a good ten seconds before I regained power over my own body which I then used to kiss Hunter. We continued to kiss as passionately as before, rubbing my juices between us and explore each other’s mouths when I heard a knock. “Duhhhhh, open the door.”
“Oh shit,” I said in a loud whisper as I broke the kiss between Hunter and me. It was Petey’s voice and he was drunk. We all froze in the shower, no one saying a word, my eyes locked with Hunter’s as the drunk guy stood silently in the corner not knowing what was going on.
“Come on, Duhhhh. Wake the fuck up you lazy piece of shit, I need to go to bed.”
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Wait…what? Going to sleep?” I looked down, puzzled, and when I looked back up I didn’t see Hunter or the other guy standing in front of me, it was Petey. “Duh, get up and let me in the room will you? Fuck!”
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Holy shit, I’m dreaming? I’m dreaming…”
I shot up in my bed, panicked, taking short deep breaths as I surveyed my surroundings. I was in my room, TV on, lights off and my rock hard dick resting upright in a pool of its own doing inside my jeans.
Another knock on the door. “Come onnn, get up already and unlock the door. I need to go to bed dammit, I am drrrrunk.”
“Petey, you fuck up, I never lock the door. Open the fucking door yourself you drunk piece of shit,” I responded angrily.
“No it’s not, reta…OHHH SHIT!! IT’S OPEN!!!” As Petey entered the room, the light from the hallway penetrated the room and shocked my tired eyes.
“Will you just shut the fucking door you fuckup?”
“Ohh, don’t be pissed Duh. It’s not even that late. You shouldn’t be in bed you pussy.”
“Call me a pussy again and I will come over there and beat your drunk ass. Then we’ll see who the fucking pussy is.”
“Duh, chillll my man! I’m just fuckin’ with you. What did I do, wake you up from a sex dream or some shit? Jeez, man, calm down a little bit. I’m going to bed now anyway, tired as a motherfucker.” And with that, he flopped onto his bed and passed out moments later. I was wide awake now, my heart beating out of my chest and I was still hyperventilating. I lifted my hands and placed them on the top of my head, trying to figure out what exactly had happened. And then it hit me like a tsunami. I had just had a gay sex dream about Hunter Reid.
To be continued…
I feared that some people might realize it was a dream sequence prematurely and currently fear the story is somewhat predictable. I'm going to try and keep all of you on your toes for Chapter 6. And I'm glad you like Daniel and Hunter's interaction the best, it means I've done what I set out to do. Again, thanks for you constant support.
Thanks for your enthusiastic post! I'm glad I could get such a response out of you. I'll have more soon
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