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Dorming With Dalton

Smart move. You've turned out another great chapter that shows the depth and strength of the characters and their feelings for each other. Take your time in thinking your next step through. You're instincts as a writer will find the best path for you and your charcaters. Great job once again! Thanks so much for sticking with this and sharing it.
 
Very nice work, reed! The descriptions in your story are very great. It makes reading your story exciting, as though I could almost picture myself there.

I look forward to reading the next chapters that you have to offer.
 
This was a very good story!

It gives me hope that I will find someone like that when I decide to come out, hoping I will get similar reactions from family and friends like Dalton had.

Look forward to more of your readings in the near future.
 
Todays job was reading your story. What a pleasant job it was. The characters present themselves as real people. This seems so much more than just a story.

I patiently await the next chapter.
 
I've just finished reading every part of this story posted so far. I love the way you have crafted the characters, their development, & the flow of the story.

Just one criticism (& it's one I'd make about most of the stories I see anywhere)- when you're writing as a character who's supposed to be such a remarkable student as Christian is in the story, you need to write the way they would write (to preserve the little fiction that the text is being written by the character themself). Mistakes like writing "there" when you mean "their", or "forth" instead of "fourth" indicate that the writer is not someone who would be attending Yale on a full academic scholarship. especially with a 4.0 grade average all the way through high school.

That said, the story is an indication of a good writing talent. Maybe you just need a good proofreader to help get the details right, making your work even better...| (*8*) :D
 
I have to say that this story is absolutely fantastic! The plot makes me want to beg for more, and the characters send me into my own fantasies. :D Please continue, and please do so quickly!
 
This has been one of my fave stories for a few months, I hope you come back soon to add more to it. :D
 
Hey there reed, I have been following this story for THE LONGEST, and I am DYING to read more! Can we PLEASE have an update?
 
This has to be the best story I've read on JUB before, I thoroughly enjoy your writing style and diction. I await your next addition with excitement, and I wish you good luck in any of your life's problems, and hope they get fixed up.

This story makes me want to go find a boyfriend just like Dalton to hold me every day...

Thank you for all of your hard work writing for us!
- Ryan
 
I miss this story dearly!!! Reed, I hope you're doing okay, and please update soon :).
 
I know I'm probably building a lot of false hope by posting in this thread without having an update, but I have some unfortunate news. I don't believe I will be continuing this story even though I said I would try my hardest to do so. The inspiration I once had for this story is no longer present and I have moved onto a new one. I personally believe those who enjoyed this story will like my new one just as much as this one if it is given a chance. It would be greatly appreciated if everyone could read "This So Called Love" to give me positive or negative feedback on it, so I could hopefully write another successful story here. Thanks.
 
I'm really sorry, you don't have that magic feeling for the story. I will def read your new one.
 
:cry: I'm begging you Reed, I LOVE this story. There aren't any words, it has become a part of me. I know that sounds pathetic, but I hope you find it in you or the magic gets reignited and that you will be able to continue. I shall REED your new story. But I still have yet to find a story that is as lovely as this one.
 
I think I'm going to start updating this story again. I'm not sure if I need a new editor for it, but if anyone is interested, please send me a private message.
 
Omg omgomgomg I'm so excited hahahaha. I can't wait for the next part!! I've missed this story sooo very much.

Welcome back Reed :).
 
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