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Fit for Life

Kuli,
You are making a full fledged adventure novel out of this great story.

And there's still all the background stuff we started with that we still don't know about - no I haven't forgotten.

They really need to learn how to skin and cook those cats so that their meat is disease free. Lots of protein there.

You are a prodigious writer.
This and the other story both concurrently in rapid succession.

Thanks for all your efforts.
:D :wave:

Cook cat meat?

DQ, cats carry so many diseases the meat isn't fit for human consumption.

OTOH, they really ought to wake up and realize what they're throwing away by only taking the skin -- many of the bones are useful, as are the intestines (ever hear of 'plucking the ol' cat gut'?).


The other story is easy to write -- there's no goal, and no real plot (though I feel a tug to take it somewhere). This story.... well, the last chapter required a total of five hours and forty minutes from first keystroke to clicking on <submit reply>.

I'll confess that probably forty-five minutes of that involved relearning some Paint Shop Pro stuff, to get the artwork right. It tempted me to ditch the artwork, but I went and collected so much just for the future of this story that I slugged it out and got those three leaves tacked on.

That reminds me -- I have a chapter to write, in which the amazing sticking oak leaves get explained, and we meet--

well, you'll see. :D
 
Until you mentioned PaintShopPro, I didn't think to check out your home page and the gallery.

just took a quick look - it's late.
Oh, yeah, my home laptop died,so I'm pushing my kids to use "their" PC's for a couple hours here or there at home. (They tend to forget who ordered AND PAID FOR them! lol
 
Until you mentioned PaintShopPro, I didn't think to check out your home page and the gallery.

just took a quick look - it's late.
Oh, yeah, my home laptop died,so I'm pushing my kids to use "their" PC's for a couple hours here or there at home. (They tend to forget who ordered AND PAID FOR them! lol

I keep meaning to ask a mod if that gallery can be hidden. I don't want to mix them in with all the pics for CE & P and F & G, but I'd really rather not have them public....

I'm currently two hours into the next chapter, and things are getting.... well, they're getting. You can provide an adjective later. :D
 
Return​


Austin saw the direction of Rigel’s gaze. Frowning, he looked down. On seeing the leaves, he moved his left hand to touch them.

Anaph intercepted that hand with a grip that made Austin wince. He held it, looking deep into Austin’s eyes. After a couple of seconds, he turned to Rigel. “He is not fully returned”, he announced quietly.

“Returned from where?” Rigel demanded. “What are you talking about?”

Anaph put Austin’s hand in his lap, with a push to say he meant it to stay away from those leaves, then rose. “His body was losing life. His spirit was ready to depart, but the life-master caught it, and held it. We gave life back to his body. But his spirit has not yet fully returned. Until it does, he is in great danger.”

“And the leaves have to stay put?” Ryan inquired skeptically.

“They must. They are the... call them the anchor, so his spirit does not wander.”

Rigel wanted to grab the leaves and tell Austin to chill by the fire, but Anaph’s weird explanation, however bizarre it seemed, stayed him. “Ryan, remember how we decided we were snatched from the car before it quite crashed?” Ryan nodded, so Rigel continued. “What got grabbed?”

Ryan looked disbelieving. “You mean you think we have spirits?”

“If we don’t, what got grabbed? If we’re nothing more than bodies with chemical activity, how are we here?”

“Maybe our bodies aren’t really back there”, Ryan muttered.

Rigel laughed. “Oh, no you don’t, mister – you’re the one who convinced us all they were. So answer me: what got grabbed?”

Ryan stared at the leaves on Austin’s chest. “The patterns of our brain waves. The electromagnetic activity of our bodies.”

“Our auras!” Ocean declared reverently.

Rigel hadn’t seen her join them, but nodded to her. “Auras, brainwaves, whatever – there’s something to us besides just our bodies, or we wouldn’t be here. Ocean says ‘aura’, Anaph says ‘spirit’, I say it doesn’t matter.” He took a deep breath.
“And when we were running after Oran, I sort of yelled at whatever brought us here, and told it to stinking well do something.” He left it there, for them to think through themselves.

Ryan was nodding almost before Rigel finished. “So you’re thinking that it did the same thing here it did before – except it didn’t need a new body, so we had to save that. Then it put Austin’s... put Austin back in his body, but not all the way? Like, it screwed up?”

Anaph shook his head furiously. “The life-master made no error! It is the spirit which wishes not fully to return.”

Ocean had dropped to her knees by Austin. “Young one, what do you remember?” she asked, just barely loud enough for the others to hear.

Austin licked his lips; his eyes looked... odd. “A great vast... vast space. It was all green, but gray. It was all things like me...”

“People?” Ryan interrupted.

Austin shook his head. “No – no, what Anaph said: spirits. It was spirits of trees, and grass, and birds, and... and everything.” He looked at Rigel with awe on his face, and spoke with pleading in his voice. “I was part of all of them, and they were part of all of me. There was balance, and everything was... was, like whole.” Tears began to leak from his eyes; plainly he was trying to hold them in, but failing. Ocean reached to embrace him, but some feeling made Rigel wave her off. “I was me, and nothing was bad. I wasn’t an abomination – I’m not an abom–“ Tears overwhelmed him.

Understanding came to Rigel. “The best place he’s ever been”, he whispered, deeply touched. “The only place it was okay to just be Austin.” He looked to Anaph. “No wonder he doesn’t want to come back.” Ryan was nodding in agreement; Ocean just sat and cried on Austin’s bare thigh.

Oran had been listening as he worked on the fire, which he’d just got set up for igniting. “Anaph, isn’t there something you can do?” he asked. “Make him want to stay!” Ocean looked up hopefully at his words.

To Rigel, it was strange how they’d drifted from skepticism to, well, maybe not trust, but belief that Anaph could do some things they couldn’t. He’d seen the look on Ryan’s face as Austin described the ‘space’ where he’d been; the doubt was gone. Ocean was, he’d thought, off the deep end with a universe that listens to prayers, which made her ripe for such a thing, but she was looking at Anaph now with the trust a child might give a parent. Oran didn’t seem as persuaded – or was it ‘converted’, he wondered – but was hopeful. Anaph plainly had no doubts at all; from talking to the spirits of trees to this, he’d never shown the slightest uncertainty.

And now, he was pondering, regarding Austin intently, seemingly looking at something none of them could see. Bending, he traced around the leaves with the middle finger of his right hand. The hand rose, the index finger landing lightly on Austin’s forehead. Rigel wondered how long he was going to stand there – a half minute passed, and more.

Anaph stood. “Mistletoe”, he announced. “Find and bring mistletoe.”

Ryan snorted and laughed lightly. Ocean sprang into action, grabbing Crystal and Breeze, pressing them into service. Rigel stood regarding his sworn follower.

“So mistletoe is magic?” he asked finally.

Anaph almost looked offended. “There is no magic. It just has properties appropriate to this situation.”

Rigel didn’t think that was much of an answer – too much like someone trying to sound wise, he figured. “Like what?”

Anaph’s expression changed; it seemed he considered that a worthwhile question. “Mistletoe speaks of love, of joining. It will call the spirit to bind again to the body.”

“Why wouldn’t it call the spirit to go back to that gray-green place?”

Anaph smiled. “Because the mistletoe is here, not there.”

Rigel considered that. Austin had spoken of the spirits of plants and animals, in that place he’d been. If he could tell an animal spirit from a plant spirit, and tell plant spirits apart, maybe he would recognize the spirit of mistletoe.... “Wait a minute – that bit about mistletoe and love, it’s just a tradition, right? a superstition.”

Slowly and firmly, Anaph shook his head. “Master Rigel, why do you think the tradition began?”

It was a worldview Rigel wasn’t entirely comfortable with – nor Ryan. They both saw things in the world as being just what they were, in this case cellulose, chlorophyll, stems, leaves, roots.... But things having a significance beyond their mere existence, a meaning that could be felt or sensed, was a stretch. But as their leader, Rigel wasn’t going to object except in private – and besides, if it worked? maybe he needed to adjust his worldview.

“Or maybe the rules are different here”, Ryan commented quietly, echoing and completing Rigel’s train of thought.

Much to Rigel’s surprise, Ocean and her two helpers came back with a handful of mistletoe each. In a stray thought, he wondered if there’d even been mistletoe in the grove until Anaph wanted some – but that was too crazy, far crazier than mistletoe having a spirit with actual meaning for other spirits.

Anaph placed sprigs of mistletoe around Austin, who watched with a bemused expression. A final sprig, biggest of all, he handed to Ocean. “Hold this high above him”, he instructed. She stepped forward, all solemn, and held it out at arm’s length. It reminded Rigel of Christmas, and he tried not to laugh. Ryan had his hand over his mouth, fighting the same problem.

Anaph knelt, straddling Austin’s knees. Then he made all their jaws drop: he leaned forward, slid his right hand behind Austin’s neck, and planted a firm kiss right on his lips. For a moment Austin sat stiffly. In a single instant, that changed: he went from frozen to frantic, reaching out and pulling Anaph close, wrapping his arms around him, turning his head and changing a lips-only kiss to a hungry, passionate one.

The three oak leaves fell from Austin’s chest.





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Kuli.
I can see why you felt that was where the story told you to end for the chapter.

A very metaphysical installment. I like it, a lot.

And, talk about your incentive plans for staying on "This" terra firma, instead of going into the light! Anaph does seem to have a grasp of things others are too blind to see or understand -- or, maybe part of it is just plain not stopping to think and consider, while Anaph considers all things.

A very spiritual installment, with a splash of spice at the end that, too, is spiritual in its context. Clever.

Thanks!
:wave:
 
Kuli.
I can see why you felt that was where the story told you to end for the chapter.

The worst thing about it was that I needed to come up with an appropriate chapter title. :eek:

A very metaphysical installment. I like it, a lot.

You ain't seen nothing yet. :D

And, talk about your incentive plans for staying on "This" terra firma, instead of going into the light! Anaph does seem to have a grasp of things others are too blind to see or understand -- or, maybe part of it is just plain not stopping to think and consider, while Anaph considers all things.

A very spiritual installment, with a splash of spice at the end that, too, is spiritual in its context. Clever.

Thanks!
:wave:

Clever?
Gee -- I just wrote it that way in line with the basic parameters and plot lines.
 
I'm very much looking forward to a LOT More!! :=D:

And, I promise to stop comparing You to other authors. This is going in directions that no longer have any parallels!! (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:
 
Well, I had an argument with the latest chapter. When I got done, it insisted very firmly that the second half was happening too early in the tale.

So I have a half-chapter to write, and shelve the other half for later use. I meant to have a new one this morning. :(
 
I can only Imagine your inner turmoil, because I'm not nearly as Creative as You are! #-o

However, I'm definitely in great anticipation for reading more from your amazing brain! (!w!)

And, when I HAVE to, I can be very, Very, VERY, Patient!! I KNOW it's going to be worth the wait! ..| (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:
 
I'm very much looking forward to a LOT More!! :=D:

And, I promise to stop comparing You to other authors. This is going in directions that no longer have any parallels!! (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:

You can compare me to any authors you want; just don't mess with my mind by comparing my characters to anyone -- especially now, while I'm still working out their identities/personalities.


Actually, if I were going to compare this story to anything, I'd go for one of Terry Brooks' tales, like the Shannara series.
 
QUICK NOTE:

I just pounded out a new chapter. On review, I decided to send it to our Mighty Mod for him to review.

So if it's slow in appearing, you now know who to bother with complaints. :badgrin:
 
The new chapter was too long for one post!

So our mighty mod is reviewing it in pieces. The first one is back... and I've made it its own little chapter, to keep the character limit happy.
 
Grove Camp​


Rigel sat with Ryan and Oran overlooking the place where they’d dug for water, where the day’s troubles had begun. They spent a good deal of time talking about anything but Anaph. Across from them, what had looked like a sort of cliff was clearly just that: granite, Ryan claimed, carved by a river that once flowed here. Where their dry watercourse had been was now a pond; it filled a basin that was granite all around – just as Ryan had realized, a bit too late to see the consequences. Some quirk of the flood waters had scoured everything out of that pocket – between three and four meters deep, it looked (no one had gone in to measure; when Antonio had reported the discovery to Rigel, Rigel had decreed it off limits until the water had cleared, and all their bottles filled; only then was anyone going in).

It seemed hard to believe that a river had once flowed there. That meant that the whole grassland had actually been lower, Rigel figured; then the river dried up, and the land got higher somehow. Not that I really mattered; they weren’t staying any longer than they had to, anyway.

They tried not to discuss the injuries, either. Devon’s arm was in a sling made of his own shirt; Rita wasn’t going to be moving for a while; Oran, Chen, and Antonio were scratched up. Then there were the more subtle injuries: Lumina wasn’t improved at all, and had to be led around like an infant; Crystal was jumping at every little thing, and muttering to herself constantly; Anaph...

“Let’s look around the grove better”, Ryan proposed when Anaph’s name came up again. “Since we’ll be staying here awhile.”

“Right”, Oran agreed. “Get to know it better.”

“Yeah”, Rigel responded sarcastically. “And maybe there will be buried treasure.”

Oran laughed. “Know what I think would be treasure? A sleeping bag, a lantern, and a mess kit.”

“A tent, a self-inflating mattress, and... a pillow”, Ryan said. “Your turn, Rigel.”

“Treasure?” Rigel mused. “A flint striker... a camp saw... a compass.”

Ryan looked at him closely. “You really are turning into a leader. We thought of things for ourselves, and you thought of things that would help everyone.”

“The striker and camp saw would help me”, Oran teased.

“The time you saved with the fire would help everyone”, Ryan pointed out. “You’d have time to help with other things, too, and that would help everyone.”

“Any of us could start a fire, with a striker”, Rigel said. “Any of us could cut wood with a camp saw.”

Ryan nodded agreement. “Here’s another treasure: a sharpening kit.”

“And a shaving kit”, Oran declared with a grin, tugging at his chin. “This beard’s getting long.”

For him it was a joke, but for others it was more serious, Rigel thought. His face was getting fuzzy, and itching, and he wasn’t alone. And the girls were unhappy with the hair showing on their legs. He’d been putting it off, but maybe it was time to talk with Antonio about turning a blade into a razor.

They meandered. Rigel felt somewhat guilty about not helping with the camp, but he needed time to let his thoughts drift, and absorb what has been happening. He figured that since everyone had sort of made him leader, he deserved some time to get his head clear, so he could make good decisions.


“Identify yourself!”

Rigel stared at Chen, who had just stepped out of a gap in a sod wall that was four feet high. It actually had a gate: two upright oak logs held in place by sod piled against them to shoulder height, and then another layer outside that. The outside of the sod piles sloped, rising at about a seventy-degree angle instead of ninety. The walls sloped, too – and that sloping face ran four meters in either direction from the gate, which was topped by a slender oak branch that still had leaves.

Oran stepped ahead of Rigel, who’d stopped at the surprise. “Comes now Rigel, lord of this humble domain and our leader”, he proclaimed, grinning widely at Chen. Ryan burst out in laughter.

Chen made a half-bow, bringing the spear he’d blocked the gate with upright. “Enter then, Lord Rigel, and welcome to this your hall.” Rigel gave him a dirty look – “lord”, my ass!

From inside he could see more of the wall: it went all the way around, enclosing the space completely except for the gap where Chen stood guard. Almost straight ahead was a massive oak, with a young one right in front of it. A fire pit had been fashioned, and more.

Ocean came to give them a tour. “It’s wonderful!”, she gushed. “The universe provides when asked – see?” Her waving arm took in the whole of the camp as she spun, eyes aglow. Rigel wondered that she didn’t lose her balance on the uneven ground – and that’s when it hit him: the ground was in fact smooth and level, and as he looked around he realized that no roots poked up through for anyone to trip over, no tangles of grass or moss stuck up to entangle feet, no branches hung so low as to be in the way....

“How....?” he asked, at a loss for words.

“Oh, see it all first!” she urged. “Come!”

The details of Ocean’s enthusiastic and kind of mystical tour were boring, even annoying; at least Rigel and Ryan found them so – Oran went off to see what someone had done with the fire pit, which had been his domain, so he didn't share their suffering. She absolutely had to show them every detail, and make those details part of some almost supernatural plan; and she absolutely had to tell not just Rigel and Ryan (over and over) how wonderful it all was, she had to tell everyone they met – which she’d probably done before, but that didn’t seem to bother her in the least.

“I bet she found something fun, and got high”, Ryan whispered once when Ocean was gushing and bubbling to Crystal how fine her “mattress” of dead grass looked, and how wonderful it would be to sleep on, and...

“I hope not”, Rigel whispered back. “We have enough troubles.”

“Unless maybe it works as a pain killer”, Ryan mused. “That would be worth it!”

Rigel stopped to talk with Rita, who said her back felt like it was burning, and was stopping to itch terribly. He wanted to look at the wounds, but Ocean shooed him away. “Anaph says the covering must stay. Now, come see....”

For a while he thought she would never run out of things to describe. Patience with her ran out when he was trying to talk with Devon about his arm: she took his arm to pull him along.

Rigel calmly grabbed her wrist and moved her arm away. She tried to grab again, but for all her efforts he stood holding her wrist, which stayed like it was stuck on a wall hook and wasn’t going anywhere. Some force Rigel hadn’t felt in himself since he stood up to a counselor at summer camp one year simmered, boiled, and broke free.

“That’s enough. You don’t grab me like you’re in charge. I’m listening to your tour, but when I want to stop and talk to one of my people, I will do so – and you will not try to bend me against my will.” Rigel caught her eyes with his, and she couldn’t look away. As he spoke the last words, her eyes widened.

Rigel didn’t know what a curtsy was supposed to look like, but when with his final word he released her, she bent her knee and bowed. “As you say, lord”, she whispered. Rigel and Ryan looked at each other. “‘Lord’?”, they mouthed silently, together.

But Rigel knew it was no accident: in his mind, as he spoke, he felt as he imagined a feudal lord might, talking to... a serving woman. And some of his words hadn’t been ones he would have chosen. That troubled him, and he made a mental note to talk with Ryan about it

Later, Casey drew a map of the camp, and it was like this:

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Tour over, Rigel realized there were some people missing. He made a guess at one. “Is Antonio hunting?”

“Yes”, Ocean exulted. “We will have fresh meat!”

“Who went with him?” Rigel knew Antonio wasn’t such a fool as to go alone.

“Dmitri.”

“Where’s Tanner?”

“Up the blesséd oak.” Ryan gave her a look at that, and shared a glance and shake of his head with Rigel. Anaph had changed, and was still changing, becoming... something. Now Ocean – well, she’d seemed a bit New Age and mystic before, but it had been like a layer over an ordinary person; it seemed that the ordinary person was fading, and the mystic (and airheaded, Rigel told Ryan later) part was coming out and dominating.

“Anaph and Austin?”

Ocean didn’t say anything, just smiled beatifically. When Rigel insisted on an answer, all she said was, “Ask Casey, lord.”

Casey blushed a little, but grinned. “They found a good... spot”, he informed Rigel. “You’re the only one I’m s’posed to tell. C’mon.”

If he’d had to give directions later, Rigel would have said, “Past the half-broken oak tree, through the patch of ferns, past two more oaks, and hang a left at the huckleberries. Go twelve paces, and around the fallen oak full of vines and thorns.” Casey pointed them at that last item, grinned, and headed back.
 
Kuli,
They built quite a Fortress for a few days stay - but with as banged up as the group as a whole is, and plenty of fresh water, as soon as it settles down a bit, maybe it's not such a bad place to call home for a few - they don't know what else they will encounter.

The place does seem to have a mystic aura permeating it, and insinuating itself into the psyche of the troupe.

You continue to hold my attention.
Thanks, I know you're working hard on these chapters.
 
Hmmm ... Interesting! MOST Interesting!! ..|

Perhaps it's just me, but this new "beginning" seems a little disjointed to me. I had some trouble catching my bearings. I'm still not all that sure about everything that is going on. There is a different "air" about how everyone is reacting. Why were they avoiding talking about Anaph? Where did the new "my Lord" attitude come from? Something has "shifted", and I'm not quite sure what it is, or where it came from. :confused:

But, I'm LIKING it! And, I know there is more coming! (!)

Looking forward to it!! :D

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz ;)
 
Kuli,
They built quite a Fortress for a few days stay - but with as banged up as the group as a whole is, and plenty of fresh water, as soon as it settles down a bit, maybe it's not such a bad place to call home for a few - they don't know what else they will encounter.

The place does seem to have a mystic aura permeating it, and insinuating itself into the psyche of the troupe.

You continue to hold my attention.
Thanks, I know you're working hard on these chapters.

The truth?

They were just going to do the little sod & log wall they did once before... until Anaph got in there with his staff. I'd hoped the reader would figure that out. Apparently I'll have to work that info in later!

"Later" will be soon, because I got more words back from our Masterful Mod, and now need to do my rewrite of the last part of what was one massive chapter.

Awesome to have feedback like this to fix any weaknesses before they're long buried! ..| (*8*)
 
Hmmm ... Interesting! MOST Interesting!! ..|

Perhaps it's just me, but this new "beginning" seems a little disjointed to me. I had some trouble catching my bearings. I'm still not all that sure about everything that is going on. There is a different "air" about how everyone is reacting. Why were they avoiding talking about Anaph? Where did the new "my Lord" attitude come from? Something has "shifted", and I'm not quite sure what it is, or where it came from. :confused:

But, I'm LIKING it! And, I know there is more coming! (!)

Looking forward to it!! :D

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz ;)

It's supposed to feel a little rushed, because Rigel was feeling a little rushed. In fact, you caught what's going on in his head very nicely!

As for Anaph, this was supposed to tell why they were 'avoiding talking':


Casey blushed a little, but grinned. “They found a good... spot”, he informed Rigel. “You’re the only one I’m s’posed to tell. C’mon.”


The next chapter will help a bit... but not completely. :p
 
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