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Fit for Life

Kuli,
A great chapter - interesting "vacation".
Loved the train ride - horse/cattle cars to transport the "local/not on train route" transport.

And, a much smoother train ride and stop - of course, they didn't have Celts all over the tracks at their destination to force an emergency stop, either, lol.

Interesting conversations.
Poor Austin. But I'm glad it's come to their attention and they can start to work on it for him.

A truly interesting mix of happenings - including "allowing" the twin twins to start developing - and the question of one babe with two fathers and a mother!

The unexplored valleys near where the gr’venstut made their way into their territory. What lurks down there - and are the missing scouts OK?

You leave us with more questions, even as you answer some . . .
(*8*) :=D: :wave:

Horse rides are great opportunities for conversation -- they almost demand it, sometimes. With a lot of little things sort of hanging loose, I decided conversations would be a good way to catch up on those -- okay, some of them. :D

I suppose raising questions even as I address old ones has become a habit. Well, so long as it keeps you reading.... :badgrin:
 
Detour​


Chen worried. The Rider had said his partner had ridden in to climb a vantage point and see if the others were visible. But he saw no one on any high spots. And he was tense for another reason; something about this big valley made him uneasy. It wasn’t the size, though it was easily three times as large as the Valley of Servants; it wasn’t the geography, though some round and some very abrupt hills dotted it; it wasn’t the border, though most of that was a sharp edge delineated by sheer drops to the valley floor....

Sheer drops, he’d thought, but concentrating he saw the curve to them. At some point, a massive glacier had cut this place deep, though leaving the little hills, and then it had filled again. That meant those hills would be incredibly solid rock, while most of the valley floor would be sediment. The latter was confirmed by something that he did find unnerving: waterfalls from some side hanging valleys dropped into pools and became streams, which flowed out... and got smaller the farther they went, disappearing finally before they reached much more than halfway to the center of the valley. However much he could explain it, it went contrary to his experience, and bothered him.

Well, one way to deal with it – the direct approach. He set off at a ground-eating pace almost as fast as Oran would use, to one of the streams; not coincidentally, it would take him past one of the abrupt hills, from which he could take a higher look for that Rider.


Oran came jogging into the camp. It was like a small town, the tents in the middle all different, surrounded by tents in tight groups, all the same. The sight seemed to be exactly one of the things Rita had warned of, taking privilege and becoming an elite class, but Oran understood the truth: the Snatched hadn’t so much chosen the situation as had it pressed on them by their people, who wanted to see that their guides and protectors were cared for properly – or, as an uncle Oran had rarely seen might have put it, “were done right by”. The tents themselves couldn’t help but be symbols of luxury; they were the best cloth, tightest weave and finest fiber, their civilization could produce. That was so expensive as to be incalculable, but on the flip side it meant that material got the best of care – not the least of which was attention from Druids who somehow made sure no molds or fungi or pests bothered the cloth at all.

Rigel’s tent wasn’t hard to find, though by the Big Guy’s stubborn command it did not stand alone in the middle; it clustered instead with Anaph’s, Ryan’s, Rita’s, Devon’s, and Chen’s, Druid, Wizard, Wise, Engineer, and Scout, the Gifted Orders, as someone had called them, a name that was starting to stick. Rigel had insisted that the chief representatives of those Orders belonged in the center with him, just as they belonged in Council, and he’d gotten his way. Not quite his way, Oran corrected himself, as he looped around Chen’s tent; Ocean had refused to be included, maintaining that her gift merely deserved a lower case letter.

Rigel was watching a Rider set aside the sod from a fire pit. Oran slowed to a walk and waved. “Chen’s into the big valley. This one’s clean – three gr’venstut off on the west northwest is all. Sign of big cats, but didn’t see any.”

“Not the same cat that’s been shadowing us?” Rigel asked. Oran looked startled; Rigel chuckled. “Chen noticed. Casey did, too, but he wouldn’t say anything. Spill it.”

Oran sighed. “His name’s Runner. He adopted me. He’s afraid of the camp. Streaker thinks it’s funny, says Runner will get over it.” Rigel detected the signs of an internal debate. “And he’s not alone – Ewan’s been adopted, too. So’s Kelsin, and Castan. And that girl at Tree Hall village.”

Rigel reviewed who was where. “So three of our four Scouts besides Chen have cats. Well, tell them they’re welcome here, as much as Streaker, and my thanks for their companionship.” He’d learned the cats didn’t grasp thanks for their work; they couldn’t see that any reward or credit was due for doing what was part of their being. Was that Heidegger? Sartre? Not the guy with his thesis and antithesis stuff, he knew. “I guess tomorrow we find out what Chen’s learned?”

Oran nodded. “Early. I’ll head out with Runner before first light.”

“Kool. We’ll put a day camp by the valley mouth, or whatever it is. The detour is fine, but no need to go farther till we know more.”


Chen regarded the stone above him. The hand holds were iffy, but the best he had. His reason said he shouldn’t try it, but an odd confidence assured him he could do it. That inner voice won: he sat and shed his shoes, then used cords attached to his shirt – like super-long versions of the pioneer fringe – to tighten the leather about him. Leather wasn’t his thing in terms of fashion, but the garment made for Scouts had a virtue he treasured: when there was little pressure, or merely a point or two, it slid without gripping, but put broad pressure on it and it gripped. With it he could slip through a patch of thorns and not get snagged or betrayed by the tug on a vine or branch, yet he could also drop flat on a rough surface and be confident that it would grip. Here, he wanted grip; he also wanted to be able to feel the rock contours, thus he snugged it tight.

An observer might have thought he had a thing for rocks; he first lurched, then flowed, then inched over the surface in a nearly sexual way. Chen would have agreed to an extent; it was an experience of a sort of oneness with the rock, a kid of symbiotic joining, Scout and stone conniving together to make passage possible. Scout One would never have admitted it except to another Scout, but such passages – as Oran had confessed to him – could actually be erotic. This one was; before he glided over the lip he need to pass for safety, he was hard enough he had to undo the leather Scout breeches to alleviate the discomfort. But the grade was gentle after the early battle, so he could walk – though not neglecting to choose his footing carefully.

The pain of the horse seemed to leap across the gap between the hills, from where the Rider sat holding his steed’s head to where Chen stood. Horse down; that explained why he hadn’t seen the pair. Patience rewarded: the Rider noticed him; Chen lifted an arm in salute before turning to survey the valley below. It was as vast as his dreams had made it, and as beautiful. Vapor rose near what felt like the center – geometry spoke to the contrary, but to Chen it was the center, regardless – indicating hot, or at least warm, springs. Volcanic activity, overridden by glaciation – he liked the contrast; it meant vigor to him, that contrast.

“To the center, then”, he muttered, realizing as he said it that he’d just stated the very thing those explorers would have done: even without the plan to travel the two sides and return up the middle, they would have been drawn to that vapor. Chen laughed out loud; the very vapor that would have drawn them made it impossible to determine if they were down anywhere near it.

Descent was a quicker process: the rough path he’d ascended was out; a quarter turn around the rock it was a smooth even slide to the bottom. Scout breeches were made for such things, strips of gr’venstut hide fastened and polished for such quick travel. Sunrise ran backwards as he zipped downward, so he got to see the orange-tinted orb crest the eastern ridge a second time. This time he paused to appreciate the sight. A frown creased his forehead; the sun was a bit too red, a color that at home had meant either pollution or a fire. He doubted pollution – but then Rigel had described how the Others had a realm stretching from the north, and had to have technology.... The thought chilled him deep down; no Scout talent would hold off their numbers, not if they had even Napoleonic levels of military ability. “It’s smoke”, he told himself, “has to be.” Bloody well better be, he added mentally as he spun and set off to meet Oran. He’d be late, but he’d learned something worth it. Don’t forget, that Rider needs a Healer, he admonished himself.


“Back off”, Oran snapped at Patrick. “Back the fuck off now!” What was wrong, he didn’t know, but something was: Patrick shouldn’t be there.

His vehemence pulled the Knight-Protector of Healers back as though he was attached to Titanium by a rope and the horse had startled. Rigel turned to him in mixed shock and anger and curiosity. Oran held up a hand. “It’s... wrong, Rigel. I don’t know why, but” – he slapped his forehead. “Ewan! Front!” he called, almost certain of his guess. “Just wait”, he told Rigel. “You’ll see.”

Ewan showed in under a minute. “Head south”, Oran instructed. A great cat following Ewan sat and watched with curiosity. Ewan walked forward, alert, checking the ground. With no idea why Oran wanted him there, he put all his skill to determining what was so special–

“Yes!” Oran exulted as Ewan suddenly stepped sideways almost as though his left foot had landed in hot coals. Scout Two turned to his lord. “It’s Scout territory! Ewan feels it, or sees it, but Patrick wouldn’t have. The traps–“ His eyes went wide and face white at his own words; he hadn’t been aware that he’d been aware there were traps until he’d named them. He turned to look where Ewan crouched, hand held over the patch of ground he’d just avoided. “Shit, and more shit.” Eyes passed the junior Scout, traveling toward the uncertain plume of vapor. “Is it traps all the way? Rigel, there’s something in there someone didn’t want just anyone to walk in on. If we didn’t have Scouts....”

“Frak and damn”, Rigel declared with disgust. “It’ll be like this on the south, too, won’t it? And that’s what happened to the explorers: they didn’t have a Scout alert enough to warn them, and they’re stuck in some maze – right, Scout Two?”

“Yeah”, Oran replied absently, already intent on the task ahead. Ewan had moved a good two meters farther on, but not in a straight line. Oran watched his friend and former student slide a foot, then pivot and move east before stepping forward again. The younger Scout pulled a slender dagger from his vest and stuck it in the ground; he then retreated the way he’d come, marking three more spots the same way.

“Nasty”, he commented to Oran. “I need stakes – I’ll forget a spot, and... Two, I don’t know what’s there, but I don’t want to step off that path.”

“No argument here”, Oran replied. “I think we need Chen.”


They got more than Chen; Rigel had Austin sound a general recall of everyone in the big valley. They put a camp just north of where the trapped area began. “I don’t understand how there can be traps under the ground that you guys can sense without even touching them”, Dmitri complained. “It’s like witchcraft or something.”

“Wrong”, Devon responded. “I see engineers every day avoid something that’s bad when they don’t even know they’re doing it. You learn your shit, you act on it even if you don’t understand what you’re reacting to. You get clues, your subconscious sees them but you don’t really, and your mind makes a decision without telling you the steps to it. Sometimes it’s stuff so basic that if someone asks, you’ll think it’s so obvious the question is dumb. Other times, it’s at the limit of your skill and expertise, so you can’t explain it even when you look right at it and ask what’s going on. You know your shit enough that your mind makes conclusions you can’t get to.” He took a bite out of the redberry-juice “snow cone” Melanie had brought him, and looked to Oran.

“Yeah”, Oran mused. “I got farther than Ewan. I could explain most of what he felt, but not what I did. Chen got farther than me, and he could explain a lot of what I felt. But if he runs out of... skill, or whatever, we can’t get in there.”

“You’ll know soon enough”, Ryan observed, pointing. “Scout One cometh.”

Chen looked weary; Rigel got up and scooted his camp chair forward. Chen plopped into it and nodded gratefully. “Gimme snow cone”, he requested, seeing several around him. Oran had been holding his without eating, so he passed it over. Chen tipped its flimsy paper holder and slurped, then took a bite. A burp and a long sigh later, he adjusted his position and looked to Oran.

“There’s a pattern. You were in far enough to see it.”

“Didn’t notice”, Oran admitted.

Chen shrugged. “No surprise; it was just repeating. I got through two more iterations. Then it changed.” He sighed and shook his head. “I need you back in there – or maybe Casey; his link with Streaker could make a difference.”

Oran didn’t feel insulted or put down; the longer-standing and deep link between those two was just a fact among the Scout fraternity. He nodded. “I’ll mark the edges”, he volunteered. “They couldn’t have done the whole valley.”

“Good”, Chen agreed. “If you know where the edge is, Rigel can send someone around to find those explorers. And we super-scouts can find out what’s in the middle.”


Casey was sweating. “These guys were good”, he commented to Chen. “This is crazy! But how did they do the whole valley with traps?”

Chen didn’t turn to look. “You’re thinking too much. And talking too much. Stuff it.” A nagging thought told him it wasn't traps, but he put it aside for the moment; danger areas were danger areas. The near-kneeling head Scout was trying to let his mind shift into the way of thinking of the people who had made the place. It was Celtic, but it wasn’t. There were aspects that seemed familiar, but just out of his grasp. What on this world could–

Scout One burst out laughing and stood. “There’s British influence here! I’m not picking up on something from what I know here, I’m picking up on something from home – well, where we came from”, he amended thoughtfully. Memories from the streets of Hong Kong, from other streets still in the British realm rose up, along with snatches of Kipling... “You're a better man than I am, Gunga Din”, he muttered, not that it helped, but it did feel appropriate: for all his Scout talents and skills, whoever’d done this was a “better man”, without question. With a faint grin he brought up another line: "See how our works endure!" – for these had indeed endured.

The tune from Bridge on the River Kwai wafted from his lips without any decision to whistle it. Very British, he thought, to be so dedicated to Getting It Right, ship-shape, top-notch, all orderly, very much of a sameness. Kipling wrote a poem – no, it was a short story, about a bridge, all its trusses regular, the pilings identical and orderly, each span the same from center point to center point of the massive pilings, with the parallel lines of steel rail running down the center.

Every span the same. Things realigned in his mental view. This wasn’t Mother Gunga, to shift her banks and dismay an engineer, this was the bridge, chaining her. Before he tried to analyze what had sprung to mind, he leapt. “Casey! Match me!” he called as he landed. “Mirror – it’s a truss!” Well, it wasn’t, really, but the concept matched: not the same from span to span, from piling to piling, but mirrored above and below – not the length of the truss, but its symmetry above and below.

They collapsed, embracing, when the pattern brought them slamming together at the end, a sweaty, triumphant pile of Scoutness. “Like dancing”, Casey laughed. “I don’t think they did it that fast!”

Chen crushed Scout Three then pushed him off. “I didn’t want to lose the rhythm.”

Casey nodded. “I felt it, too. Made me think of To the Manor Born, or Keeping Up Appearances – all tidy and ‘praw-puh’.”

Chen stretched out on his back. “Captain Peacock.”

“Not Mr. Humphries?” Casey teased.

That’s when it sank in for Chen; he did a sit-up and looked down at his comrade and colleague sprawled on the frozen ground. “You watched BBC America?!” he asked incredulously.

“Better than the shit Hollywood turned out.”

“TV shows didn’t come from Hollywood”, Chen corrected.

“No, they came from beautiful downtown Burbank”, Casey quipped. “Same shit, anyway”, he added in a more serious tone.

Chen stared off at the plume of vapor. “Yeah. But I miss that shit”, he admitted. “Right now I even miss Mrs. Slocombe’s pussy.”

Casey rolled and came to his knees. “That’s either disgusting or silly. Let’s go see what’s steaming.”


Ten meters to Oran’s left, Antonio and Patrick rode along, watching the Scout at work. At first, Oran had studiously work to find the edge of the dangerous area, but he’d given that up; now he was just keeping a decent line where he knew to go much to the right was a bad idea – for which Runner was an immense help; the great cat could sense bad ground as fast as he could. Along the way, he’d figured out what the danger was – and it wasn’t traps anyone had built. He’d kept an eye on the two working their way through the safe entrance; he was far ahead now – time for a break. He signaled his companions.

“You won’t believe this”, the Scout told the pair of knights. “There aren’t any traps – well, not along here, and not much at the way in. It’s quicksand.”

Antonio stared at Oran, then looked up and down the valley. “The whole middle of the valley?” he asked, disbelieving. “How?”

“What am I, a geologist?” Oran shrugged. “I don’t even know why quicksand is quicksand – just how to handle it.” He looked at his most recent boundary marker and shuddered. “But it doesn’t all behave the same, so the best rule is keep clear.”

“I shall faithfully do so!” Patrick vowed, trusting a Scout to know such things. “But Scout Oran, just what is ‘quicksand’?”

Oran almost said something about how a guy could not know, but stomped on that response. “Sometimes sand or stuff like sand is mixed just right with water so it looks solid – rocks might sit on it, weeds grow in it, and stuff. But hit it hard, or put something heavy on it, and it sinks almost like in water. Then it doesn’t want to let go. Some people think you can drown, but really the danger is getting stuck – you can starve, or freeze, whatever. But sometimes you can actually run on it, but try to walk or stand still and you go down.”

It was plain on the Celt’s face that he wasn’t managing to imagine what Oran described, but he wasn’t going to doubt what a Scout said about dangers hidden in plain sight. “How can one know if there is this quicksand?” he asked.

“Usually by stepping in it”, Oran admitted. “Just remember it will be level, and where there’s water.” He looked east across his left shoulder. “Over there, three streams I see disappear into the ground. More do it on the west. All that water is going into the ground... somewhere.” He frowned, thinking. “So if your streams behave and stay where you can see them, maybe there won’t be quicksand?” The Scout thought about it for a moment. “No, I don’t think that works – some could disappear underground and you wouldn’t know.”

“But if the ground isn’t flat, it would flow, not sit there, right?” Antonio thought out loud. “So no quicksand on hills or mountains.” He flashed a smile at Patrick. “We’re pretty safe; we work in the hills and mountains.”

Patrick nodded, looking toward the plume of vapor. “Scout Oran, if this is quicksand, how is it I see buildings?”

Oran followed the gaze. “Yeah, if those are buildings. Stupid steam makes it all blurry. But they wouldn’t have a tricky way in if they weren’t hiding something, so...” – he chewed on his lower lip while he tried to picture the situation – “my guess is it’s like an island. This valley was carved by glaciers. Those funny hills sticking up show there were places they didn’t carve away. The middle is probably a big one that just isn’t high. The quicksand is all around like a lake, or a moat. So the first time they found it.... Yeah, they wanted to get to the steam, just like we do. They learned it was quicksand, and they built a way to them – I bet split logs to make a road, like Devon did in that one swamp. Once they were in, then they decided to make a way to keep people out who didn’t know the trick for getting in. So the entries aren’t paths surrounded by traps, they’re paths built through one big trap. The trap was there, they just built hidden ways in, for the people who knew.”

“Scouts”, Antonio decided. “The place is for Scouts. Who else would be able to get in without memorizing the route? Whatever they put in there, it’s Scout Central.”


“It’s gross!” Casey announced, shaking the water from his hand. “It tastes nasty!”

“Minerals”, Chen agreed, looking at the pond with its natural terraced border of stone streaked with yellow, red, black, orange, and green. The latter he figured was algae; the rest he wouldn’t bet on. “Bloody luck Ryan isn’t here; I know what these are, just can’t remember the name. Minerals hook to other minerals at the edges, slowly making rock – does it around waterfalls, like in the Grand Canyon... Havasu Falls I think is the famous one, but those got busted up by a flood. When they don’t get busted, they just keep building, and....” His eyes widened. “Casey, dig – along the edge here”, he urged, excited.

“Along the terraces?” Casey asked. That almost triggered the memory Chen wanted, but not quite. Chen nodded, already working at it.

They didn’t get far. It was sandy soil with really fine silt or clay filling between, but less than a quarter meter down they hit rock. The edge of the terraces around the hot water welling up merged right into that rock, which felt like sandstone but was colored like the terraces. “Wow”, Chen commented, sitting back and looking at the hole they’d made. “This was all sandy and stuff, okay? That’s the way the glaciers left it. But this water bubbled up through it. The minerals started to cement the sand and... bloody memory... yeah, ‘glacial flour’, they call it, rock ground so fine it’s like flour. All around the hot springs or what you call it, everything the glaciers left turned to” – he laughed – “call it ‘hot springs concrete’. That built this place, nice and solid. And....” Scout One jumped to his feet and looked back the way they’d come.

“Bloody hell”, he whispered. “They didn’t put traps around the place at all! It’s quicksand, all of it! The water bubbles up”, he explained, hands in motion in illustration, “and close by it turns things to stone. Stuff that doesn’t become stone, stuff that dissolves, it flows on. It makes the sand and stuff slippery, so you get a whole island of cemented rock in the middle of a lake of quicksand. The island keeps growing, slowly, but it just pushes the quicksand back.” Chen glanced west, the shortest direction to the valley’s edge. “So it stays an island until it hits the valley edge.” He shook his head at the immense uniqueness of the place. “Bloody lovely, is what it is.”

“Scouts did it”, Casey asserted several silent seconds later. “Who else would build an entrance no one but Scouts would find?”

Chen nodded. “Definitely. And that explains something.” He started jogging south, around the springs and their– “Travertine!” he exclaimed, stopping suddenly. “The terraces at Havasu Falls were called travertine. It’s a rock that builds up over thousands of years, microscopic layer by microscopic layer.”

“Yay”, Casey responded sarcastically. “You had to jog three steps to tell me that?”

Chen turned back with a sour look. “I could push you into that muck”, he noted, “but travertine grows slow, and I wouldn’t want to hurt it.” With that he started jogging again.


Rigel emerged from his tent to find Casey sitting by his fire. The Scout handed him a trencher without comment, then returned to his own. “Messy”, Rigel chided as he took his seat, noting the crumbs all around his Scout.

“My third”, Casey said out of the side of his mouth. “God, I miss hash browns!”

“Hungry much?” Rigel responded, amused. What was – rather, who was missing hit him. “Where’s Chen?”

“Rescuing their Scout. One explorer died in the quicksand, another is still stuck, their Scout is stranded, far enough in he couldn’t figure out the pattern farther, but got too tired to remember how he got there.” Casey’s words came out in staccato, fired off between bites of egg with bacon.

“Whoa. Quicksand? An explorer stuck? Pattern? How about start at the beginning and tell it all.” So Rigel learned what the two Scouts had, about getting in, who had established the place, why there was quicksand that kept it so secure – guesses by Chen that Ryan pronounced reasonable.

“The obstacle course is the bomb – Chen couldn’t even finish it. The whole thing is just to sharpen Scout skills. Okay, it wears a guy out, too – I haven’t had an appetite like this....” Casey looked down at his once-again empty trencher. “Can I have fifths?” he asked hopefully.

“No”, Rigel answered. “You’ll burst, and I don’t want to have to pick up pieces of Casey. Besides, it would be hard to explain to Streaker.”

>happy-hunter filled<

Casey laughed and surrendered his trencher, while looking around to his right. “Streaker says I’m ‘filled’. He’s hiding over there. Streaker, what are you playing?”

>surprise boy’s-boy< Casey stifled his laugh at Streaker’s image of Austin at ‘play’, and the following one of his cat not quite sinking claws into the squire’s backside. Being gay was something the cats found interesting, but not practical: they were too few to set aside reproduction for any reason at all. On the other hand, to them Austin was still definitely a cub, with all sorts of liberty to explore and enjoy. Casey considered it was good that Austin wasn’t a Scout; the cats’ attitude would have been a constant painful wound in his life.

>join boy’s-boy< Streaker recommended. >young pleasure<

Casey didn’t answer; he heard Austin’s it-can’t-be-morning-yet-fuck-where’s-breakfast? early footsteps approaching. He stood and took three steps toward Streaker’s position. The timing was perfect: Austin saw him and started to say something just as a large mass of fur erupted and sharp claws raked the squire’s pants down without scratching skin. Casey was ready; he caught Austin’s breakfast without losing a bit. The trencher was tempting, but Streaker had been firm – and besides, he didn’t want to miss a thing. Austin grabbed for his pants, which bent him forward, exposing his rear to Streaker’s rough tongue, which changed his reach from pants to buttocks, leaving the pants to fall – and Streaker settled his considerable weight on them, leaning against Austin’s ankles and purring.

“You got him to do that!” Austin charged Casey.

“I wish”, Casey replied. “I’m not that creative – awesome choreography, Streaker.” He held out the trencher. “Breakfast?”

Austin stepped out of his pants, to general laughter, though through Streaker Casey could sense disapproval from a pair of Celts, both Riders, near enough to see. That was something he’d attend to later – well, have Chen attend to; knighthood counted for a lot. There was no need to bother Rigel with a small deviation from the general acceptance the Celts mostly had for different ways. He didn’t get it, himself; they all swam in the nude, generally raced in the nude, shared sweat huts in the nude, so what was the big deal with breakfast in the nude? He was tempted to shed his own pants just to make a point, but then he’d have to explain.... Austin took Casey’s seat, so Casey settled himself down and called for Streaker to join him.

“Okay, I was at the obstacle course, right?” he recalled. “Right. It’s death, dude! Makes the Marine ones I saw in movies look like kid’s games. I didn’t get half through it – really, not a third – and I was dropping. I crawled out of there!” The Scout’s face changed, awe flavoring it. “Everything I know was in there, every Scout thing. I still ache... every muscle. There’s no focus on groups, the moves work everything, here, there, alone, together....” His sense of wonder was respected; no one said anything for half a minute.
“Anyway, that was near the springs – yeah, the steam there is from hot springs, and they formed an island from the quicksand... I said that, right?” Ryan nodded. “Okay, then. The course is south from the springs. We just looked it over, then, and tried the start. But we were sure there was trouble farther, so we ran south to find the lost explorers.
“Their Scout got into the maze – the way in – but couldn’t get out. That was after a rider missed the boundary – didn’t know it was there, duh! – and got in trouble. Horse balked, he pressed, horse threw him, he landed in the quicksand, and that’s when they learned they had a problem. A second guy went to help, but he got stuck.” Casey shuddered. “There wasn’t anything they could do, they just sat there while the first guy suffocated, or drowned, ‘cause he landed sideways and when he struggled his mouth and nose got covered. God, that had to be horrible!” He leaned back against Streaker for comfort. “So Chen was getting the Scout out – well, in, into the center, and we’d warned the party and told them help was coming, so I got to run and report. He looked at his empty trencher where it lay on the ground. “I thought I was hungry; that kid hadn’t eaten in three days.

“That’s it.”

“And this was supposed to be a vacation”, Rigel muttered.

Ryan laughed. “It still is. Casey, you’re having fun, right?” The young Scout nodded vigorously. “Austin?” The squire looked over at his pants, shrugged, then nodded. “See?” Ryan told his best friend. “The kids are having fun, I haven’t broken a sweat – we’re still on vacation.”

“And talking shop”, Rigel pointed out. “Look, this is like Scout headquarters, right? a secret Scout base, at least?”

“Not so secret any more”, Austin observed. Casey laughed.

“Whatever. I don’t know who built it or why, but this isn’t acknowledged Celt territory these days. That means we can – or I can”, he corrected himself, “claim it. Now, who’s head of the Scouts?” That being totally rhetorical, he didn’t even pause. “That makes one thing easy: this is now Scout Valley, with Sir Chen in charge. He can build a castle, whatever.
“That leaves two things: does this lead to the plains south of us? and if it does – well, I reserve right-of-way for a railroad.”


“You know I won’t build a castle”, Chen told Rigel over dying firelight. It was five days after Rigel’s designation of the valley as Chen’s; the trapped were rescued, injured cared for, even the Rider’s horse Healed enough it wouldn’t have to be put down – and his partner sent on to that semaphore station to request more supplies.

“I don’t care. I know you; you’ll do what it takes to keep this valley secure. You’ve got room for a town, which will grow around the rail station anyway. You’ve got a nice narrow breach of the hills on the south end that you can wall off, a day’s ride from the plains. There’s plenty of water, and some of the soil is good enough for farming. You won’t let the Scout facility just sit there, so you’ll do everything I said just to supply it and protect it and keep it running. And I think it’s a good bet that you’ll start recruiting and training regular scouts, not just ones withe the spark. So you’ll use this place, and make it strong, and defend it. Castle or not, you’ll do what a castle is for.”

Chen sighed. “Tie me down, will you? You know I won’t stay here much. First thing, I find a steward.”

“You’ll want a winter spot”, Ryan suggested. “This year is nothing after last, but all that means is we don’t really know what winter is supposed to be like. Oral and Druid accounts excepted”, he conceded to Anaph, who hadn’t said a thing. “And if those springs have the minerals I think they might, I’ll trade building materials for chemicals.”

It was a topic he and Chen had discussed briefly, one not without problems. “And if you take too much, you kill the quicksand”, Scout One asserted. “No go.”

“I know how to be careful, O Scout”, Ryan replied. “I’ve been playing with nitrocellulose, and I still have” – he paused and looked carefully at his hands – “all my fingers. Besides, I could leave you with fertilizer as a byproduct.”

“Don’t forget to elevate the town”, Devon put in. “Drain your sewers through a natural sand filter and into a marsh for treatment.”

“You get more wildlife that way, too”, Anaph said without moving. “And build soil. You’ll be building soil here a lot, even with farms. The Druids can send soil, too.”

“DruidSoil”, Casey cracked, the implied trademark heard in the tone of his delivery. “From dead things to live things!”

Chen laughed at that. “Whatever. I’ll let my steward take care of it. Rye, if you didn’t have hot springs in the Cavern, I’d try to steal yours.”




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Wow, great chapter. A new Scout-training facility, cool.

I wonder if "Horse Whisperer" is a Gifted Order too? Austin sure seems to have more of that than anyone else. That boy needs something to do, something that will make him happy.
 
The Colonel Bogie March, eh?
I loved the movie - I can still recall them building it as proper Brits would do, then marching cadence over it to bring the harmonic in to destroy the bridge they had just built. At least, that's my recollection. Here's a link to the clip in the movie where all of the men (POW's) march into morning call to the honour of the Colonel and the chagrin of the F'in' Japanese commandant, who is enraged by it.

[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dzWRlTgEB5Q&feature=fvst[/ame]


And, Hell YES, British sit-coms - watch them on PBS every Saturday Night.
Used to love The Good Neighbors, To the Manor Born, etc.
Mrs. Bucke't, lol.
As Time Goes By just restarted at the beginning for us this past weekend.
Now, THAT's what we could use - the Dr. to take us on a trip in the TARDIS to visit our crew. David Tenant wouldn't make a bad addition for a chapter or three, either, lol.
We currently have a "hybrid" - The Red Green Show - a la Canada - Duct Tape RULES!
Now - THERE's an invention Chief Wizard Ryan needs to work on - maybe with Lumina or Anaph - their knowledge of nature might help lead him to some natural adhesives that can be applied to cloth strips . . .

As to the REST of the Story - I agree, I love the idea of a Scout training facility, and the fact that it's built around a truss bridge on its side concept buried just under the surface of a massive quicksand pit with a calcified(? if I can use the term) island in the middle . . . Very interesting, sir.
 
I am truly digging Streaker and the other Cats! Wonderful beings are they! (!w!)

Brits, huh? Aren't they a lot further South? Haven't they been rather reclusive? When did they ... Oh! ... Wait! ... :slap:

Who says they're the same Brits? Was there maybe another group of Brits, from a different time, Snatched, too?? And, if so, where did they go? Why is this valley deserted? What happened here?? Could it maybe not be the "gem" that Chen, and the others, think??? :eek: :help:

Aw, Dearest Kuli! More mysteries, and questions! Write ON!! ..| (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:

"Da Dump! Duh Da Da DA DA Dump!" ...

... sweaty, triumphant pile of Scoutness ... (!) *SIGH!* :badgrin:
 
BTW, in case anyone noticed, I do realize that the name of Chen's horse and Oran's cat are both Runner.

Blame the cat.

:cool:




Actually I'm open to alternative suggestions for Oran's cat. Just keep in mind he chose Oran because Oran loves to run (not because he's a Lutheran :lol:).
 
Actually I'm open to alternative suggestions for Oran's cat. Just keep in mind he chose Oran because Oran loves to run (not because he's a Lutheran :lol:).

How about Swift? (Names don't have to be nouns just because they usually are in English...different species, different rules.)
 
I was going to ask if you had a "Bounder" since they go bounding around.

Swift isn't bad, either.
 
Vacation: II​



“End of detour, back to vacation?” It wasn’t so much a question of fact Lumina made, as of assurance, as she swung in beside Rigel – who, like the captain of a sinking ship, had come last up out of the little valley.

“Definitely vacation”, he replied. “I’m not making any more decisions till we reach the Springs.”

“What if there’s an invasion?” asked Austin impudently.

“You deal with it”, Rigel answered airily.

“I’m on vacation, too”.

“Tell them to wait”, Lumina declared. “Or the Healers won’t help them” – she paused – “because” – they all joined in – “I’m on vacation!”

That night there was a surprise. Ocean invited them all to come to the fire by her tent – one of the simplest tents among them. She bustled about, making sure everyone had tea, biscuits, honey....

Rita laughed finally. “All right, Ocean, we’re comfy. You’ve gone to a lot of trouble here – what’s the occasion?”

In response, Ocean composed herself and seated herself in her own chair. From a small chest, she drew something wrapped in paper. This she carefully unwrapped, placing the contents on her lap and almost tenderly setting the wrapping back in the chest. The suspicion that I was a book was confirmed as she opened the cover, flipped a page, settled more in her chair, and drew a breath.

The Herb Woman cleared her throat and looked around at her companions her audience. Then her attention went to the book; she began to read. “Chapter I,
An Unexpected Party.” Ocean ignored the gasp from Melanie and continued. “In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.”

Ryan was the one who broke the spell. “Holy frak”, he whispered in awe, “it’s The Hobbit! Ocean, is that the whole thing?!”

She smiled and nodded. “All of it, word for word. Now shut up”, she ordered. Her gaze lashed around the group, carrying the command to all. She repeated the first words, then went on. “It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a
shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped
hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with paneled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats - the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill - The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it - and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another. No going upstairs for the hobbit: bedrooms, bathrooms, cellars, pantries (lots of these), wardrobes (he had whole rooms devoted to clothes), kitchens, dining-rooms, all were on the same floor, and indeed on the same passage. The best rooms were all on the left-hand side (going in), for these were the only ones to have windows, deep-set round windows looking over his garden and meadows beyond, sloping down to the river.
This hobbit was a very well-to-do hobbit, and his name was Baggins.”

She had to stop. Crystal was weeping openly, Melanie not doing much better. Casey and Dmitri moved their seats to the girls and squeezed close. Ryan sat with head back, content in bliss; Rigel gazed raptly, biting his lower lip so hard Lumina could feel the pain – not that she was going to do anything to help; she was riveted in fascination and shock.

Anaph broke the spell. “Eraigh, yes?” he inquired softly.

Ocean nodded. “But not only. There’s an herb” – Chen grinned at the British version – “that enhances memory. I tried writing it down with just that, but I knew I was getting a lot wrong. I knew you’d done things with memory, so I asked Eraigh. He said it was a lot like learning a language from someone. It wasn’t perfect, but when I put the two together....” She looked beatific. “Yes, there’s another herb, in a tea – I used tsenantha, and suddenly I didn’t just remember, I saw the pages, like floating in front of me. I just read them, and two scribes got it all down.”

“What....” – Devon searched for a word – “inspired you?”

“Rita said something about Rigel referring to The Lord of the Rings. The people he was talking to didn’t know it. That was how you named the Rangers, right Rigel?” Their leader nodded. “Well, it seemed right that everyone should be able to read the story. I love the books, read them over and over till the pages were wearing out. Then they made the movie, hours and hours long, three movies. When I watched the movies, I said the words from the book, not out loud, but to myself. So I knew it was in my head enough I could remember it. So I did.”

“You are incredible”, Ryan declared quietly. “If we were reversed, I’d beg to have your baby. That thing you have is a treasure beyond value.”

“So do I keep reading?” Anyone else would have been teasing at least a little, but Ocean was very serious.

“If you don’t, I’ll have to declare it a crime and invent some dire punishment”, Rigel averred. “Ocean, I name you official reader to the Snatched. Please – fill our vacation with wonder.”

And she did. It became a nightly ritual, the Snatched gathering to listen as Ocean brought to life a tale they would have sadly said was lost. On the third night, Lumina served the tea, a lemony mix she only afterward admitted had tsenantha as an ingredient – lust a touch, since it was as poisonous as it was powerful. The mix made the story even more alive; they saw what she described. Austin expanded on the assistance the next night, digging out a pouch of mountain smoking weed.

“If there’s no heaven”, Tanner was heard to mutter the fifth night of the reading, “I’ll settle for this.”


Days later when the Springs came into sight, the Riders and handlers who’d been with them all the way separated quietly into their own column, drifting to the right of the rest. Only Patrick stayed with the Snatched as they made their way toward the growing castle on the north-northeast side of the springs themselves. Their slow pace definitely felt like vacation, or as vacation should, with no frantic running one way, then another, to try to do and see things better scheduled for triple the time... at least. Settling in did nothing to disturb the nightly reading sessions; arranging their rooms unfinished, they gathered anyway. That was when Ocean brought out her second surprise.

“When I was little, and learned to read”, she began, the book closed, “I still liked hearing the words, but I learned that reading them at the same time made it even better. I guessed maybe it would work for you, too.” With that, she opened her little trunk again, and pulled out a package just like the first one. Without unwrapping it, she passed it to her left, and drew out another, and another. She was interrupted by hugs from the other gals, as well as from Casey and a few others.

“All right, does everyone remember where we are?” Ocean asked once the copies were distributed. “Find it in your copies....”

“Riddles, dwarves, spiders, elves, barrels, and they got to Lake Town”, Casey responded. “Now read!” Austin nodded emphatic agreement, while Melanie and Crystal added theirs vocally.

“All right.” Ocean bowed to them from her seat. “Chapter eleven”, she began.


After that, it really was a vacation.




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And, now for something completely different . . . LOL
As soon as you started, I knew what it was, too.
If you hadn't included the graphic you did, I would have added
"There and Back Again", a Hobbits Tail . . .

Smaug
Goblins in the Mountains,
Gollum aka Sme'agol
Rivendell.

All those glorious memories from J R R Tolkien and our childhood - of course brought to the BIG Screen in spectacular fashion by Peter Jackson.

I've PM'd some of our NZ JUBbers and talked about wanting to visit the land of the Lord of the Rings, Hercules, and Xena, Warrior Princess.

The majestic beauty is so spectacular.

And she had her scribes write multiple copies, so each of them could enjoy the story along with her recitation.

We read to our kids in character at bedtime, growing up. My wife and I would snuggle into our King-sized bed with them and read the various and sundry childrens' books we have with them.

When Harry Potter came out, it became an instant requirement - we enjoyed exploring the pages together, in parts, inviting the kids to read, too.

All of our kids are voracious readers as a result.

Thanks, Kuli, this truly is a Vacation - for all of us.

And, the tale has so many parallels to their own fantastic journey . . .
(*8*)
 
Aw! ... :D (group)

Keep writing!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:
 
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Esteban sat on the mound of broken stone and listened to Bishop Theodoro preach. Their bishop never spoke long, only once anyone could recall more than a quarter hour, but he said more in just a few minutes than a council of clerics accomplished in a week. This time the young thief wished he'd built his stack of stone higher; Theodoro was almost whispering as he not so much preached but pleaded.

"But whose words are they?" came the voice, a soft, plaintive call with real pain in it. Esteban knew without needing top climb and look that Theodoro was lifting a bulky copy of the New Testament, in Latin, high in front of him; he could close his eyes and see Theodoro's hand tremble slightly as he offered the volume to the congregation. "They are the words of God!" came the vibrant cry, a joyous proclamation, yet at the end came the tone of complaint once again.

Esteban couldn't resist; he had to see, though it might cost him some hearing. His top scrap of stone went skittering off as he launched himself, running along the old wall, catching it just there and here, vaulting to the top and without pause leaping to catch a tree branch. Onto that one, then up a layer, up another, to grab one stripped of side limbs, one that gave under his weight and took him back into the tree he'd just passed under. Less than a second from touchdown, and he stretched out on a branch aimed right at a window which, broken out, Bishop Theodoro had said would stay that way until each poor family had a roof that didn't leak. Esteban hoped it was never fixed: he hated going to Mass, but he loved listening to their bishop.

He grinned in delight at the sight of that bishop standing almost as he'd imagined, bulky (old and worn, Esteban noted, not the usual fancy one for the cathedral) New Testament held up for all to regard.

>priest-father statue< The amusement in his friend's assertion brought a silent giggle to Esteban.

Heart-hunter waits to pounce, he though back at Pounces, using the cat's occasional name for the bishop. Esteban wished Casey would come back; he didn’t just miss his friend, but he wanted to know if a big cat was supposed to be that smart.

>now< The mental image was of Bishop Theodoro launching himself from the pulpit.

Esteban snapped his attention back to Theodoro, whose posture had gone from joyous to near-mourning, his countenance from confidence to dismay. "But can you read them?" the bishop asked, and Esteban didn't need one of don Antonio's far-lookers to know a tear crept down the bishop's cheek; he'd spied on enough private conversations between the bishop and his Centurion, Tacito Vargas, and almost as often as not the Decurion Terens Morales -- a changed man since he'd seen a Brother appear through the mists with only a solid wall behind him -- and a few times a man never named, dressed in a penitent's gray, to know that it really did give Theodoro pain that his people couldn't read any of God's words for themselves... and rarely heard them.

"I can", Theodoro stated. There was no superiority in it, rather a wistfulness. "Mostly", he added as almost an afterthought as he set the book on the edge of his pulpit and smoothed its rough edges. Chuckles and light laughter swept the hallowed ground, laughter of humor and affection -- after all, who else had a bishop who admitted he was less than perfect? Theodoro stroked the top of the book, then suddenly picked it up again, letting it fall open in his hand.

>priest-father trap-setter<

Esteban couldn't help himself; laughter got loose at the image from Pounces: the open book as the two sides of a spring-trap, Theodoro in the sort of clothes Esteban now wore in the woods.

>priest-father stealthing< Pounces agreed.

"The words of our Lord", the bishop whispered, flipping pages reverently. "Words of God from the Word of God." He sighed deeply, looking out again at his flock. "Yet what tongue are they in?" He lifted the book and read aloud. Esteban caught the word "petras", which he thought was "Peter", but then the word he thought was "legs" was really "laws", so what good was what he thought? Finished, Theodoro looked around again, now setting the book down near where he leaned so often on the edge of the pulpit people joked he would wear out the finish -- and the punch line, said proudly, was that he wouldn't let anyone fix it until all the poor had polished railings on their porches. It was a measure of Theodoro's stature in the community that even merchants who'd been chastised into lowering prices to help roof the people defended him -- only the extremely wealthy stood alone, hating him... the very people who'd been the subject of Theodoro's longest sermon to date.

"The words of our Lord, for us, yet not our words. Yet surely words must be understood, to do good." The bishop's finger flipped to a different page and marked it. He looked sad as he turned to the altar. "Even so, we come to the great sacrifice He gave us...." The words trailed off as he walked slowly from pulpit to altar. Halfway he seemed to falter, but when he turned to the congregation, there was a gleam in his eye, as of a boy about to tell something he shouldn't. "Here before us is the altar of God. We go with hearts lifted." Theodoro looked around as though getting ready to share a secret, and every person in the cathedral leaned forward in anticipation. "Hear now these words of our Lord:
"Venid á mí, todos los que estáis trabajados y cargados, que yo os haré descansar. Llevad mi yugo sobre vosotros, y aprended de mí, que soy manso y humilde de corazón; y hallaréis descanso para vuestras almas". -- Come to Me, all who labor and are burdened, for I will give you rest. Lift My yoke on yourselves, and learn from Me, that I am meek and humble of heart; and you shall find rest for your souls. But he wasn't looking at the people, or the book as he spoke; Theodoro looked at the altar, making clear where this invitation came from. Soft weeping arose in corners of a cathedral where reception of the sacrament had for generations been handed down as a duty, but now Theodoro showed them it was no duty, rather an answer to an invitation: Come to Me! At last he turned back to his people, his flock. "Porque mi yugo es fácil, y ligera mi carga." -- For my yoke is easy, and light is my load.

Esteban found he itched to jump down from his perch and go join the rest. He knew how Brother Thaddeus had become Father Theodoro and then Bishop Theodoro, but wondered if, as Casey had wondered out loud once, if they had just been God's tools to get the man He wanted anyway. He'd mostly scoffed at priests, but this priest.... well, it wasn't the first time the man had sent shivers down his spine.

He fell into the rhythm of the Mass, the Great Sacrament. With Theodoro, it became a family gathering, everyone brothers and sisters. He didn't have to say it, he projected it, in every nuance of voice and gesture. And he made the consecration a step into another universe, another time, the night before the centerpoint of history....

The young thief, concentrating on the elevation of the great piece of bread -- called the Host because the Son of God came to be in it -- almost missed the movement of a piece of wall. The Mass forgotten, he launched himself toward the next tree. Even before his feet left his branch, he realized he wasn't going to make it; it was too--

>branch comes to shadow-hunter< Pounces' images carried chastisement.

It was no longer too far; the mass of a great cat, even not fully grown, bent the branch low enough for Esteban's hands to grasp. When he swung underneath, Pounces left; the spring that gave him sent the spying thief farther than he could have hoped. He landed on a column across the street from the place where he'd let a nervous, trembling Brother Thaddeus into the cathedral garden. The stone gate was already closed, but he wasn't too late: the figure turning from it rotated Esteban's way, revealing his face.

YOU! he wanted to scream, but long and deeply embedded discipline held him. His mind raced, wondering why someone he and Casey had encountered in the square the morning of Theodoro's selection should be here: why was this cofradiador slipping into his bishop's garden? and how did he know about the secret entry? He didn’t know, but he meant to find out.


“Bishop.” The man dropped to one knee.

Any other bishop in the realm would have called for guards, to take the intruder away in chains. This one paused, regarded the man, and closed the door to his private study behind him. The kneeling man didn’t miss the hand signal behind the bishop’s back; he didn’t miss much of anything, which was why he had the job he did. But he found himself, now that he was close to this marvel – he refused to go along with the popular notion of a miracle; he’d figured out everything except the great portrait that first couldn’t be scrubbed off, and then just wasn’t there. That wasn’t for lack of trying; plying chemists and alchemists and painters and masons with gold had failed to bring forth anything. Of course he’d known immediately how the “miraculous” appearance in the cathedral garden had been done -- it was his job to know such entries and exits – but also of course he wasn’t going to mention it to anyone except those who paid him, and he only acknowledged one paymaster.

He didn’t move while Bishop Theodoro of Corazon dos Reyes circled around – just out of knife reach, he noted, a huge advance in worldliness for the man of God – examining him. His investigations had told him the man had become an uncannily sharp judge of men, rarely wrong on character, and he wasn’t about to give any clues by showing any reaction at all. But when the bishop spoke, he knew he needn’t have bothered.

“Cofradia”, Theodoro pronounced. “But without evil intent”, he added as the door swung in and Centurion Vargas appeared, sword half drawn. “Centurion, join us.” He smiled, a rather wan, tired smile. “And yes, you may bring Brother Watchdog.” He turned back to his visitor. “Señor Cofradiador, rise if you please. I have no extra chair to offer, but there is the book bench.

The intruder, accepted – he was too astute to think the bishop had yet welcomed him – for the moment, rose smoothly, and turned to look at the thinly-cushioned bench along the wall. He did want to examine it, but he was also thinking rapidly: he had no idea who “Brother Watchdog” might be, and that made things... interesting. The bench, he saw, wasn’t really that at all; it appeared to be a book case of inventive design: the lower shelf was covered in front by long cupboard doors, each perhaps a cubit – his quick, inexact private way of measuring things, since he hardly dared carry a meter bar with him – from hinge to catch. The top, second shelf was solidly closed on the front, but the small indentations in the cushioning, all evenly spaced along the wall, told him the top was hinged to lift. Since the hinges were actually a half-palm out from the wall, the lid was meant to be leaned back while a person sought within; this, he took as indication that the books on the lower shelf – a wealth of books! – were all of a size, while the upper bin – a proper shelf opened on the front – held the odd shapes and sizes, perhaps – no, certainly – scrolls as well, also of non-standard sizes. That Theodoro had installed such a thing in his study confirmed that he was at least as much the scholar as sources asserted. And of course the top was a very Theodoro-like touch: no ornate, showy covers, but simple, sturdy, and practical, serving a second use; in fact incompletely-cleaned stains told him it had been used for crude dining at least... four times, he counted. Curiosity satisfied, he sat, taking the measure of the construction in doing so.

He ventured a ploy. “Such long scrolls”, he commented.

Theodoro didn’t blink; more importantly to his visitor, he didn’t glance at his ordinary scroll rack or look puzzled. “De Venitri”, came the calm reply. “Rather vain, which he showed by insisting all his scrolls be longer than anyone else might have. Among other things.” Theodoro actually chuckled! His visitor was caught off guard by that; his information said the bishop was austere, and chaste to the point of looking down on – not condemning; it didn’t seem to be in Theodoro, formerly Thaddeus, to condemn – so much as a hint of anything sexual. Without willing it, he made a re-evaluation of his sources, and made a mental note to seek information from three others, rarely used, but perhaps now important. That this bishop should not merely chuckle, but himself hint at the sexual jokes made about the length of the de Venitri scrolls indicated something of a hypocrite – an extremely dubious notion; or sources getting it wrong – more likely, and something he would verify in the immediate future; or that the office was changing the man – highest probability, also verifiable.

“You have originals?” he asked, actually amazed. Out of the corner of his right eye he watched the Centurion re-enter the room, another man walking, almost gliding at his side. Every alarm in his brain went off as his mind screamed Inquisitor! and warned of betrayal.

“Only one, and only long enough to have it copied. Merely to borrow it – the gold would buy a townhouse.” But the bishop’s attention wasn’t on the subject, it was watching the intense, but to most men invisible, byplay between the two men who on different occasions had entered his cathedral uninvited.

Only Centurion Vargas was undisturbed by the next action of the former Inquisitor: there was no attack; he merely undid his robe and dropped it, showing rather convincingly he had no weapons. “Brother Shadow”, he said softly in greeting. In that moment, “Brother Shadow” understood that while he was facing one who had been an assassin of the Inquisition, it was that past tense which ruled – a thing unheard of, for one still breathing.

“Brother Watchdog”, he answered, bowing more than a little from his seat. While only a few of the Inquisition’s deliverers of death could claim his level of skill, they were nevertheless worthy of respect.

Theodoro laughed openly. “‘Brother Shadow’”, he quoted. “As good a name as any; I know you will never give a real one”, he said to his visitor. “Brother penitent and protector”, he said fondly, sit and join us.”

“Brother Shadow” had considered and evaluated the situation without conscious thought. “You came to kill the bishop”, he stated baldly. “You stayed to guard him.” His measure of Theodoro underwent another revision: the man was either a danger beyond measure, or perhaps truly a saint – he hoped the latter; the realm needed a saint.

Theodoro’s ‘Watchdog’ nodded curtly, turning to the centurion, though, with his attention. “Whence this name?” Barely audible, the three words carried more intensity and energy than all else said and unsaid so far.

Vargas sighed. “The Spirit speaks to the bishop. I told you.” The former Inquisitor had insisted the centurion say nothing about his self-appointed task.

The former Inquisitor turned to his bishop and dropped, painfully, to his knees. “Holy One”, he whispered, “forgive my presumption! Angels guard you; what need–“

Theodoro cut him off. “I am no more holy than any man”, he asserted. “Get up – you may kneel so to our Lord on the altar, but not to me. Brother Shadow did well; one knee is all a man gives to any man; two is for God alone.”

“Brother Shadow” cut off any response from “Brother Watchdog”. “Not for the High Bishop?” he asked, no inflection of tone betraying any judgment on the question.

Theodoro went behind the question. “Why did you come?”

“I was sent – with a question. Bishop Theodoro, today you read Holy Writ to the people in our own tongue. How far will you go?”

The bishop of Corazon dos Reyes studied his visitor anew. “It isn’t important to you what I answer. No, that isn’t true – I see you do care, but your job isn’t to act.”

The visitor’s world reeled. No one, save his Master, had read him like that since he was branded! Was it possible the Holy Spirit did speak to him? Should he be High Bishop? But such things were outside the bounds of his job; he set them aside, knowing his superiors would ask the same, which was their job. “Truth, bishop”, he acknowledged. “How far will you go?”

Theodoro swivelled his chair. That was a marvel itself, a thing already being copied in the town. It wasn’t, the cofradiador knew, the bishop’s own invention, nor a divine one, as popular opinion held; it had come from outside the realm – hard to accept, for most people, who didn’t believe there was anything outside except wilderness. Passed on by the bishop’s family in Padillo, the mechanism for the chair had come from a family long thought destroyed, the de la Vega, now rising in prosperity somewhere to the south, extending influence into the realm – and therefore, even apart from the connection to Theodoro, a matter for him to be concerned with. The same family had played a major part in putting Theodoro where he was; whether that was a good thing or a bad had not yet been decided by those whose duty it was to make those decisions. Despite himself, he realized he’d made his own decision: whatever the motives of the de la Vega, they had done a good thing.

The chair swivelled, not back, but all the way around. “Why does it concern you?”

“Brother Shadow” hadn’t known the chair could do that; certainly the versions being done by craftsmen couldn’t. It was a secret he decided he wouldn’t pass on. “Perhaps you should invite in the young spy outside, before the branch he is using breaks.”

“The thief is no threat”, Brother Watchdog asserted. “He keeps watch on behalf of the poor people, who love their bishop.”

“We have a spy, and you didn’t tell me?” Vargas seemed to loom larger. “Brother Shadow” laughed internally; this bishop had a whole hand of protectors, and they were very... proprietary.

“He is no threat”, the former assassin repeated. “He and his cat keep watch over the bishop. And he is devout – I believe he wishes to be at Mass, but considers being on guard his greater duty.”

Theodoro shook his head, a smile of amusement and something more lighting his expression. “Invite him in, centurion. Make plain that he is not under arrest, that I extend an invitation.”

“Brother Shadow” betrayed nothing, but inside his mind was racing. Had the former Inquisitor made the connection? No mere house cat of legend could be included in that phrase; if this was no mere house cat, then the woodsmen’s tales had substance – and if the tales had substance, then the mass slaughter of Inquisitors at the time of Theodoro’s elevation was indeed not perpetrated by demons, nor had the three since been. Yes, a giant cat would explain much!


Esteban knew he was caught; Centurion Vargas was already looking his way before he was even out the door. He sighed and started to slide backwards on his branch. And it was so pointless! The centurion was coming out, and hadn’t called any guards in, so the visitor was no danger!

“You’ll break that branch, and the bishop likes it.” Vargas’ voice was calm, evenly friendly, and that stopped Esteban more than the words. “He’d like you to come in.” Esteban tried to listen inside, to see if his heart was still beating. “Breaking his branch wouldn’t start things well. Wait a moment, and I’ll catch you down.”

“Brother Shadow” watched in amusement and interest as the once-gruff-and-practical
head of the bishop’s Guard caught the pair of young bare feet and steadied them, then gripped the youngster’s waist and set him down without any sign of strain. It was done with more concern and compassion than anything just a matter of duty. Businesslike demeanor returned, though, as a massive cat landed silently beside the boy, in a guarding but not threatening position. Yes! he exulted, those claws are big enough – I have found the ‘demons’! And possibly, he added, I should thank them – him. That he thought of doing so without asking his masters shocked him, and his gaze slowly turned to this unique bishop. What do you do to people? he asked silently. Theodoro caught his eye, but his only response was to turn to the image on the wall – a crucified Christ... with a happy, triumphant smile. The hardened cofradiador swallowed hard; that image – how had he not noticed it before? – challenged his entire world.

>sword-pack-leader... danger?<

“No, Pounces, I don’t think he’s a danger.” Esteban inspected the Captain of the Episcopal Guard at closer range than ever. The soldier’s left hand still rested on Esteban’s hip; the pressure said he was ready to thrust the thief out of the way if the cat moved. The right hand held his sword-grip. Seeing the two, Esteban wasn’t sure that Pounces could win any match.

>sword-pack leader... not danger. yet dangerous<

Esteban chuckled at the acknowledgment and agreement. “True, and true.” He brushed Vargas’ right hand from the blade and escaped the left to drop down and bestow a big hug on his friend. “See, Vargas? He’s my comrade.”

They’re communicating, realized “Brother Shadow” with chilling awe. The boy has to talk, or at least his lips move, but the cat.... He shuddered; as a guard, such a beast would more than complicate matters for any intruder.

Vargas led, Esteban followed, Pounces... came along. The cat was no follower, but didn’t try to lead; he made progress in the same direction as his human, but investigated a dozen things in the short distance from landing point to door. Vargas stopped, blocking the doorway. “Bishop, the young man... has a cat.”

>Pounces has shadow-hunter< that individual disagreed, making Esteban giggle.

“The cat also guards”, announced the former assassin.

Theodoro sighed, grinning in amusement, and shook his head. “Then the cat is invited also”, he decided. His morning meditation after Mass had certainly become educational, he mused. Some cofradia has interest in me, thieves provide guardians, and giant cats drop from trees. He rose as the trio entered, holding out his hand to his young guardian. “How are you named?” he asked, giving no sign of recognition.

“Esteban.” The thief took the bishop’s hand and waited. He tried to remember if he’d ever told then-Brother Thaddeus his name.

“Esteban, you have not been faithful at Mass.”

The thief almost choked. The study was full of dangerous men, and the bishop was concerned about his attendance at Mass! “I listen, from outside”, he stammered.

“As my guardian.” It wasn’t a question.

“Yes.” Esteban couldn’t remember how he was supposed to address a bishop, so he avoided it altogether, though he did speak firmly.

“This is your duty?”

“My...? I... yes, it is!” The insistence allowed no swerving.

“So is attendance to Mass”, Theodoro remarked mildly. “Though soldiers are given leave to pass, and forgiveness if duty causes them to miss. Ought I forgive you?”

Esteban couldn’t help the tears that came to his eyes. As a thief, on a job, he would never pay attention to them, so he didn’t now. What he did was say, “Oh, yes, bishop!”

Theodoro touched the crucifix on his chest, then Esteban’s forehead. “En el nombre del Padre, y del Hijo, y del Espiritu Santo, te cedo perdón por todos tus peccados. Este mano es el de nuestro Señor Jesucristo, y por El estas hecho limpio” – ...I grant you forgiveness for all your sins. This hand is the hand of our Lord Jesus Christ, and by Him you are made clean. That hand moved from Esteban’s forehead, where it had traced a small cross during the invocation of the Trinity, dropping nearly to his navel and touching with two joined fingers, then up to rest on the center of his chest, then outward to tap near each of his nipples in turn, and finally to rest, not quite in the center of his chest but a little to the left, over his heart.

And Esteban felt clean. He’d never in his life felt clean before, not deep down like this. Whatever others might have thought, in that moment Esteban was convinced that for all their rumors and tricks, it was really God who had put the man who stood before him where he was. “God did send you”, he whispered, and fell forward into two loving arms.

“Now”, Theodoro said a moment later gently pushing Esteban to his own seat, “you must once a month come to Mass; for the rest I give you dispensation – so long as you are listening, from close by. For the one day a month, we shall trust your cat–“

“He’s Pounces – that’s his name”, Esteban interrupted.

Theodoro nodded and smiled. “Then once each month, we shall trust Pounces to be enough guard on his own.” The bishop reached out as though to scratch the great cat’s head, but changed his mind and offered the relaxed curled hand for inspection. Pounces sniffed all around, then gave the bishop’s knuckles a big lick. At that, Vargas finally relaxed.

“Now you two”, Theodoro said, rounding on his Centurion and unofficial protector. “Talk together better. Centurion Vargas should have known of our young thief immediately he was noticed. Brother ‘Watchdog’, I name you Brother Sodalis – but do not be secret about protection, since you have given yourself this as penance.” He turned back to Esteban. “And you, thief-guardian, inform others when you learn things, others who care for me.” He looked back at Vargas and Brother Sodalis, but Esteban got his message.

So did “Brother Shadow”. This meeting will be told back to de la Vega, he recognized. This I must report. He examined Esteban more closely. And the boy knows how to contact them – should I follow? He decided against it; it was too far from his task, and his immediate duty was to report back. “Tell no one else of this meeting”, he instructed, looking right at Esteban. Memory struck then, and he cursed silently that it had failed him sooner: he’d seen this thief, in the square, the day Theodoro was named bishop! A companion had recognized him for what he was, at least in general, and he had acknowledged it, but considered it of little importance, a thief and his friend. That was no thief, he grasped now, it was... a foreigner, someone who didn’t quite fit, someone from “de la Vega”, he mouthed – and that was the one he needed. Esteban saw the mouthed name; he managed to keep his eyes from going too wide.

“Brother Shadow” stood and looked at Theodoro. “It concerns me because those are my orders. It is my task to be concerned where I am sent.”

“They’re trying to decide if they should protect you”, interrupted Brother Sodalis.

“He wants to”, Esteban suggested – except the cofradiador knew it wasn’t a suggestion; he was being read. He let himself smile as understanding came.

“Thief, with that cat, how can anyone escape you?” he asked.

Esteban looked at Pounces fondly. “They have to watch to escape us”, he replied, making it plural. “How far can Theodoro go and you stay on his side?”

“Brother Shadow” closed his eyes and wondered at the fact that he was having a conversation that was thoroughly out of his control. That wasn’t supposed to happen, but then what cofradiador had ever faced a scholar bishop -- one elevated by the people! -- a renegade Inquisitor assassin, perhaps the best Guard centurion in the realm, plus a skilled thief with a cat which read emotions on top of his own formidable assets? Now he wasn’t even being questioned by the bishop, but by a young thief who wasn’t unfamiliar to that bishop – nor to himself, for that matter. He’d have to report all this, if questioned – would he be believed? He shook his head at the sudden extreme strangeness of the world.

“Keep within the liturgy”, he replied, abandoning his instructions to let Theodoro commit himself. Esteban was right; he did want to protect the bishop. “Translate it, expound it, even add to it – carefully, as this day. Nothing else.”

“And if on the Feast of the Resurrection, I read the story for the people?” Theodoro asked, betraying no hint of whether the question was serious.

Feeling the cofradiador’s frustration, thanks to Pounces, Esteban answered. “Don’t read it – tell it.” He suddenly found he had an intensely interested audience. “If someone will get upset because you read them, then don’t read them. Isn’t a bishop God’s representative? So when you tell the story, the words are still God’s words, aren’t they? And that’s a day when everyone comes to Mass, even if they skip other days – even ma–, er, even thieves go for the Resurrection feast! So if you make a long sermon, people will understand. So don’t say, ‘This is what San Mateo wrote’, just say the words. And, isn’t it the story that counts, not who wrote it?”

Centurion Vargas laughed. “Send this boy to school, and make of him a lawyer”, he suggested, “and he will have the Count suing himself for smuggling! Bishop, is this not a solution?”

Theodoro was looking for “Brother Shadow’s” response. It began with a slow shake of his head. “No, yet yes. If you say the exact words, and nothing more, it would be no different than reading it. Yet if it is part of your own telling, it should pass.”

“Those who sent you will decide this”, the bishop stated.

Another, more vigorous head shake. “No. Your young thief is correct; my masters seek only to decide whether to protect you.” He decided to give trust. “Should you make yourself too eager a target, they will not.”

Theodoro stepped toward his seat; Esteban slipped out and plopped on the floor with Pounces, who was toying with a leather bookmark. “Too eager”, he mused as he landed and began to turn back and forth in the chair. “So others have said.” He thought of some in particular. “Perhaps it is a family trait. You know of whom I speak, Brother Shadow”, he said softly, leaning forward. “Do I endanger them?” Esteban was immediately alert.

Time for a gamble? “If they provide you written copies of any scriptures, yes.” From Esteban’s sharp intake of breath, the cofradiador knew his guess had substance. “Or if they pass you too much aid from outside the realm.” Again it was the thief who gave it away; Theodoro nodded as though it were some hypothetical notion, but sighed on noting Esteban’s reaction.

“Coin in the offering, only”, he informed his visitor.

“And copies of books”, Esteban added, feeling the urge to be honest.

“I pay for those, young Esteban. As I do for other things.” He turned to “Brother Shadow”. “I cannot say only ‘Brother Shadow’. Give a name I can call you.”

The cofradiador grinned for the first time. Looking over at Esteban, he said, “You may call me Dismas”. Bishop, Centurion, and former assassin shared a laugh, while Esteban looked bewildered.

“Dismas is said to be the name of the thief who was crucified with our Lord”, Vargas explained.

Dismas nodded. “Of all here, you saw me first. I honor that with this name.” He stood and bowed to Esteban, who looked both proud and confused.

Theodoro caught them all in a gaze which compelled attention. It was Dismas he addressed. “You will be watching me. That both Inquisitors and” – he glanced sideways at Brother Sodalis, who gave a little nod – “another have come to attempt my life grieves my heart. That I have protectors I did not ask for humbles my soul. For my sake, I would proceed as the Spirit calls through the Word of God; yet for their sake” – he looked over at Pounces and shook his head – “I heed your warning. Vargas, you have asked permission for more guards; the barracks will hold a score more with ease, true?”

“Thirty, with no changes”, the centurion answered.

His bishop nodded. “Another two decads, for now. The space for the third, if that can be set apart, give to Brother Sodalis. And you, young penitent thief”, he said, his right index finger pinioning Esteban from most of two meters away, “are to aid Brother Sodalis in finding some to provide a different protection.” Thief and former Inquisitor turned and stared at one another; their kind were natural enemies, but now....

Esteban broke the cold silence with an impudent grin. “He’ll have to keep up with them”, he declared. Sodalis closed his eyes and breathed deeply, but said nothing. Theodoro actually grinned.

Dismas was nodding. “And your use of Holy Scripture?”

Theodoro sighed. “I will restrain myself.” Defiance flashed, then. “For now – but not for always. The Word of the Lord is not bound, and I will not strive to bind it. That our Church has bound it so long is deep sin! I did not see this until made bishop, but I hear the hearts of our Lord’s flock, and those hearts weep for lack of the Word.” He leaned forward and pinned Dismas with a gaze that made the man want to melt into a corner. “I will remedy that lack, for a shepherd feeds his flock, he does not starve it.”

“The good shepherd does not lead his flock toward the wolves, or the lions”, Dismas countered, warning in his voice. “Each of your protectors here has stopped at least one threat.” He paused, in the middle of it glancing meaningfully at Pounces. “And the good shepherd does not walk into death and leave the flock alone.”

Esteban cleared his throat. “Bishop, the people are like a fire. Feed them lots at once, and you can get an inferno.”

Centurion Vargas chuckled. “Protector and advisor. He speaks well, this one. Too much too quickly, and you will have riots. In hearing the scriptures for ourselves, we are as raw recruits: burden us with too much, too quickly, and we will break.”

From anyone else in that city, Theodoro might not have received that. But from one he regarded as strong, dependable, steady.... “You include yourself, Tacito.” Vargas didn’t flinch under his bishop’s intense scrutiny. “That, I must heed. As I must also my thief”, he went on, bestowing a wry smile on Esteban, “who is more of the flock than any here, and of my... protector” – he looked half-sternly at Brother Sodalis – “who is experienced at... taming flocks.” The former assassin winced at the pointed absence of different words.

Theodoro seemed to gather himself. “Thus, Brother Dismas, you have what you wish. Go now, be Brother Shadow again. Tell your masters I move slowly.”

Dismas flashed a smile. “Until it is time to do otherwise, yes?”

“Even so.”




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Opiate of the masses, dangerous guarded treasure of the powerful, best doled out in small doses to maintain a controlled reaction. And, yet, something initially intended to be freely known (owned) by All.

Theo is slowly opening the floodgate. Those that have, for so long, vehemently hoarded their reservoir do have cause for concern. Each pose a danger to the other. Will they be able to coexist, or clash?

Keep writin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:
 
I love this. I wonder how many people would have recognized the name of Dismas if you hadn't identified it?

And whose man is the Bishop? He could just be very, very convincing; he could be a Saint of God; he could be getting guidance from the Stone, or even getting power from the Snatcher.

I kept hearing passages from Messiah while reading this! Namely these two:





Opiate of the masses

Marx wrote that in a time when the reputation of opiates was not nearly as negative as it is today. It's clear he was cautioning about religion, but much less clear that he was denouncing it entirely.
 
I love this. I wonder how many people would have recognized the name of Dismas if you hadn't identified it?

Having just spent an hour in the religion forum before writing that stretch, I found myself immediately wondering the same -- how many even in that forum would have gotten the reference? I could only think of two offhand, and when my mind pointed out that most ordinary people wouldn't, how to take care of that in the story was obvious.

Marx wrote that in a time when the reputation of opiates was not nearly as negative as it is today. It's clear he was cautioning about religion, but much less clear that he was denouncing it entirely.

I think he wrote very much more in the spirit of Proverbs, where it declares that beer is a gift from God, for comforting the heart and calming the spirit.

In moderation, obviously; too much all at once certainly doesn't have that effect.
 
Kuli:
That was a great installment to read this morning. I didn't have a chance to read all of it before I left for work, but I did finish it up.

A return to our good Bishop Theodoro, and his whole-hearted love of God and His Church - the people who make up the body and spirit of God.

All the more appropos for me, as we didn't make it to mass this weekend. And, unlike our thief, Esteban, I can't claim I was on guard duty.

I got a little confused; I thought Esteban was the one who went on bended knee before the bishop until later in the chapter.

An interesting cast of characters you have reminded us of, indeed. (And my scattered brain forgot to do more work on our project - forgive me.) Strange bedfellows, indeed - "Cofradia" meaning "Brotherhood" - is Brother Shadow?, Centurion of the Bishop's Guard, and Brother Protector? a former Inquisitor/Assassin turned protector, and our Thief Esteban and Pouncer. I need to re-read with more time - I am a bit confused as to who is who re: the Cofradia vs. Bros Shadow and Protector. I thought the Centurion was Brother Protector in the banter from the bishop but, as I was getting ready to type this up (in between trying to be productive at work), it dawned on me that I had the players a bit skewed. and I have to reattach Brother Sodalis and Dismas when I re-read.

The realization of (? - I have to relook - Dismas? The Inquisitor? Sodalis?!) of the mental link between Pouncer and Esteban, and how formidable that really is. And, ironically, the reassurance to Esteban that, Yes, the Big Cats ARE that intelligent and empowered, Pouncer is not Unique in that respect.

And the good, humble Bishop, chastising the "warring" factions with the common goal of his protection.

It was both extremely spiritually uplifting, even with the most humanistic of side comments from the good Bishop re: "scrolls", and humourous and reassuring.

As for the concerns about "who" he works for . . . I have no problem at all with the fact that House Escobar y Antonio de la Vega may both be lending aid. That is not at cross purposes to Theodoro's devout love of God and wanting All of His Flock (God's!) to know God's Word FIRST HAND. Both the Escobars And de la Vega (and by extension, Rigel et al) want the people to be free from the tyranny of the Inquisition and the corrupted "Church" and "not so nobility".

Thanks, Kuli, for a great installment. Keep it coming, lol.
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I'm sufficiently unhappy about the image I have for the next chapter that I feel compelled to say something not only about it, but about the images.

I may have something of a way with words, but I'm no artist at all. I know, usually, what I want at the end of a chapter to either express its flavor or direction or to emphasize something in it. Often I find what I need just floating on the web, generally if not I can play with something until it works.

But then there are the times like this one, where the chapter was ready to post three hours ago -- and since then I've been trying to patch together something that fits. I gave up; the image in general is fine, but the details of -- well, when you read the chapter you'll be able to figure out what's lacking and hopefully see why I spent three hours to get even as close as the image comes to what I wanted.

If there's a real artist among the readers, interested in helping with images, holler!


And now, hoping the chapter does better than the image....




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