Wow dude, i normally don't come on the story part of this website, because, i'll be honest, i like to look at the hot pictures that are posting on the porn forums.
i ventured to the story thread yesterday, and didn't know which story to click, i clicked yours cause it had a new post in it, and
i am so glad i did, i really really love this story, i like the fact that its based in reality,
i hate the stories of like two friends, one liek the other, they have a beer, and then they are fucking eachother, so unrealistic (at least to me), But trents avoidance, and stand off ish-ness (lol) is exactly what someone in his situation would do.
The reaction to his mom's accident was really touching, and i really liek where this story is going, as of this point, i honestly believe sex would almost detract from this story.
because i think alot of us were drawn to the innocence of this story, and the LACK of sex, which i like, so if they have sex, save it for liek volume 25

lol
also on a side note, i like the length of the chapter, i know i tried reading one story on here, and even though it was good, each chapter was extremely long, and i lost interest in it.
although now that im hooked, a longer volume wouldn't bother me.
keep up the good work dude, i'm a writer as well (not gay fiction though), who has had writers block for the longest, and im finally inspired to write something now.
thanks for sharing this story with us, and sorry for this rant/long post, but you deserve it