Jesse and Allan - Complete

[Jay-the-Dedicated]

Hey JUB, I'm posting the first two parts of an erotic fiction series of stories I started about 8 months ago, but never finished. I would like to someday continue this series as well as move on to some other erotic endeavors in fiction, so please feel free to review both parts I and II to the fullest extent, thanks

~Jay

The First Time: Jesse and Allan Part I:

By Jay-the_Dedicated:

One thing about my childhood that had always plagued me, especially now that I was entering college, is the stuttering realization that I had never been laid. Not once, in fact, I never even had the opportunity presented to me. I guess being a jock in the center of a large city high school doesn't always have it's perks, does it? Even now, my first day of college, and I've still never had “it.” Not that I was particularly pressured to anyway. Truth be told, I'm not attracted to women, and while I'm sure I never would have had any real problems had I came out in High School, there's a vast image to be upheld when you're on the football team and changing with the strongest guys in the entire school. Not to say I didn't look, I damn sure didn't look back though. After finishing High School I moved to the opposite side of the country, strangely enough, Bible Belt Central, Texas, a mid-sized city known as Amarillo. In all honesty, I was looking for a change of scenery, and I was looking for a school that would inevitably lead me to my future career as a Newscaster. I chose West Texas A&M, but decided to settle for the Junior College in the city as a starting place to get my basics down.

I got up the next morning for class and threw on a T-shirt, some blue jeans that were pretty tight, and I got up and looked myself up in the mirror. I was average sized, once muscular, I kind of let the muscles weaken out a bit during the summer break, but I still had that look. My eyes were dark blue, a stark contrast to my light skin and black hair, but I can't complain for the way I was made. After combing my short hair into subtle spikes, I grabbed my school books and proceeded out of my apartment door, stashing the bag into the backseat of my car. I drive a Chevy Malibu, so don't laugh, seriously.

I arrived at the brick Junior College about an hour early, enough time to sit down and have some breakfast in the cafeteria. Needless to say the place had some amazing breakfast burritos. And then I headed to my Introduction to Mass Communication class. After listening to the extremely skinny teacher give a boring introductory lecture for about 45 minutes, I began to drift, so I started to look around the classroom a bit. There were several guys and girls of many ages around the room. But one guy in particular caught my eye. He was masculine, built similarly to myself, had green eyes, deep tan skin, and brown hair...I had to grab myself after an instant because I immediately grew horny. He turned and looked at me, and smiled, his smooth lips curving upwards. He also had a goatee.

About thirty minutes later, the teacher said we could go, this was the only class I had on Mondays, so I was free for pretty much the rest of the day. I waited by the door for Mr. Sexy to cross my path, and sure enough, when he reached me, he stopped.

“Hi there,” he said. “I'm Allan.”

My voice cracked, but I managed to shove out a quick “I'm Jesse” before my jaw slammed shut again.

“Would you like to get a cup of coffee?” He asked me.

I looked at my watch, I wasn't used to drinking coffee at 11:20 in the morning, but after waking up so early, I could sure use a pick-me-up.

“Sure, why not?” I replied.

Strangely enough, he walked me to his car, a red Mustang, and told me to get in. At first it felt a little awkward, than I began to understand the gesture. He was going to drive me so that way only he would be burning gas...at least, that's what I was thinking.

He hit the highway at 60 miles an hour. About 5 minutes later, we were pulling up to an apartment building with green shutters and white walls. He led me up the stairs to his apartment, and we went inside. We sat down for a bit, and he brewed a pot of coffee. We talked for a few minutes over that one cup, and then he began to grin. I still had a hard-on from earlier, and he began looking off towards the door down the hall. He got up and I proceeded to follow him down the hallway. He grabbed me by the shoulders and tossed me on the bed, climbing on top of me and forcing his lips down against mine. I could feel the grizzled hairs of his goatee burning into my skin, and his seamless lips pressing into my own, until they gave way and his slick tongue slid into my mouth and began sliding up and down against mine. He was horny now, too, I could feel his hard cock rubbing against mine through our jeans, and I grew harder, so hard that I nearly blew my load right through them.

We kissed for several minutes, then he slid my shirt off, he began to take his tongue from my lips, down my ear and neck, and then proceeded to lick and suck on my nipples. With the erogenous zone activated I began to moan and squirm in pleasure as my hard cock began to throb and pulsate with the rhythm of his tongue. He then began to work his way down my stomach into my happy trail.

I felt his strong hands begin pulling my belt apart, and then the button and zipper of my blue jeans. His hand reached into my boxers and pulled out my cock, fully erect. I was not small by any stretch of the imagination, about 7 inches long, circumcised, and about an inch and a half thick, but when Allan instantly swallowed it, I began to feel like I was pretty small. He worked his wonderful mouth up and down the shaft, resting his tongue on the bottom of the mushroom head, I could feel his tongue playing with that spot, and I began to writhe in pleasure. I could only last for a minute or two before I exploded in his mouth. He was sucking and then I heard him start coughing as my cock began to throb, he pulled off and great white streams of semen continued to pour out of my cock. He bent down smiling and began to kiss me, I could taste my fresh semen on his tongue, and it made me hornier.

He stood up and began to undo his pants, his bulge was pretty decent sized. He dropped his underwear, and unveiled a seven and a half inch uncircumcised cock, the tight foreskin open just enough to expose his peehole. My cock throbbed as I lowered my lips to it...being a virgin, one of my fantasies had been playing with an uncut man, but I never expected it to me my first time.

Needless to say, all I could do was stare at first, I slowly began to lower my lips to it, forking my tongue out into the opening of his foreskin, gently licking underneath into the head. He began to seethe as I began to lower my lips further, pushing it back, forcing the moist head outward into my mouth and my waiting tongue. I began to run it slowly around the corona. I began to go deeper, getting the cock about halfway down before it began tickling the back of my throat, and I coughed and sputtered. I couldn't handle it all. Which made me feel bad, so I took my mouth off his cock and began to lick the shaft and working down to his balls. He moaned in pleasure.

He then reached down and picked me up, laying me back down on the bed, lying on top of me. I could feel his erect cock pulsing against my own, we rubbed and frotted for several minutes until I felt like I was going to cum again. What I didn't expect was what happened next.

Being a virgin, I knew at least that gay men had anal sex, but I didn't know there was a form of foreplay involved with it.

He turned me around and bent me over...I could feel him kissing my back, working his tongue downward until it stopped at the beginning of my ass crack. I could feel his strong hands pulling aside my supple butt cheeks, and then his tongue began working around my hole. I began to moan as I felt the warm slimy texture of his tongue enter my ass and begin licking around, and in and out. I was thinking to myself, “This must be what it feels like for a woman to be eaten out.” He called it rimming.

After I was nice and moist down there, I began to hear him making slick noises behind me, and then I felt something hard pressing against my asshole. It gave way, and he slid the length of his stuff uncut member into me.

My first reaction was sheer pain, but as he slid further inside, I could feel my cock growing stiffer and throbbing, it was pleasure and pain at the same time. He began to work his hips a little faster, bucking me doggie style for a few minutes...He pulled out and flipped me back onto my back, and then entered me again, bending down and kissing me. I could feel one of his strong hands fondling my balls and firm cock as he was fucking away at my asshole.

As he was jacking me off, I began to feel my cock growing stiffer. He let go of my cock but it didn't stop. I looked down at myself and was amazed. My cock had gotten so hard it had almost gained another quarter inch around, and I knew what was coming next.

My breath began to grow ragged, and I slowly began to moan and writhe. “Oh yeah,” Allan said, “Cum for me babe.”

After he said it, my cock began to throb and I shot for the second time, almost as thick as the first load, and almost the same amount. Within seconds my chin to my belly button was covered in streams of semen. I could feel my asshole gripping Allan's cock as I continued to cum. I began to shudder. It was like I was still cumming, only nothing was coming out.

Allan began to pump faster and harder, he began to growl and he muttered a quick “I'm cumming” before he pushed his full length into me hard. I could feel his hard cock throbbing in my ass and his hot cum spilling into me. Once the ejaculation passed, Allan collapsed on top of me, his cock still inside me, and begin to kiss me while rubbing my semen in between our hot, muscular bodies.

Afterwards we took a shower and he got horny enough looking at me to jerk out another load, surprisingly enough, he was about as big a cummer as I am, which I thought was totally hot.

After he dropped me back off at school, I thought I'd never see him again, of course, I came into class two days later and he was sitting in the back row. He invited me to sit next to him and we talked softly while the skinny professor was giving her lecture. When class was over that day he invited me out to lunch. It was a fairly happy time in my life. I'd experienced my first time with the perfect guy, and I hoped that I would get to have more experiences with him. It was my first time, and I hoped that it wasn't the last.

 

[Jay-the-Dedicated]

Re: Jesse and Allan

Race Me to the Top: Jesse and Allan Part II:

By Jay-the-Dedicated:

(Jesse)

I was dreaming, in this dream I was again the virgin I was six weeks ago, being fucked for the first time by Allan and his perfect cock, a cock that I've now seen 7 other times, sucked on 5 times, and had inside me 3 times. In this dream though, it seemed to last forever.

I awoke bathed in sweat. I threw the covers off of me in my bed and stood up. As the cool air of my bedroom hit me for the first time, I became aware of wetness on my boxers. Apparently I had shot a nice load in my sleep, and that meant it was time to clean up.

I took a quick shower, the hot water relaxing and allowing me to wash away the remaining sleep from my body. I walked out of the bathroom towel-drying my body. I had began working out again during the last six weeks, so I had recovered some of the toning from my high school years.

Glancing at the clock, which read 7:30 AM, I decided that it would be the perfect time to surprise him. I got dressed, gathered my school books, put on a thick winter coat, and headed out into the deep chill of Autumn mornings.

Fifteen minutes later, I approached an apartment building with white walls and green shutters, Allan's apartment complex. I exited my car and grabbed my cell phone from my pocket, dialing the 10 digits that would eventually lead my voice to his.

“Ring, Ring!” the earpiece toned into my ear. “Hello?” Came a gruff voice.

“Hey Allan, it's Jesse, look out the window.”

I glanced up at Allan's apartment, a lamp came on, and I could see the movement in the blinds of his window.

“Why hello there sexy!” I heard him say into the phone. “Get your pretty ass up here and I'll get ready and we'll go out for breakfast. Is it Jillian's class today?”

I responded yes and closed my cell phone. I climbed the three flights of stairs that would lead me to his door. By the time I got there, the door was unlocked, so I let myself in. Allan was in the shower, so I walked into his bedroom and sat down on the edge of his bed.

About 5 minutes later, he walked out, his tan body lean with muscles gently moving towards me. He bent down and kissed me deeply, his smooth tongue bringing with it the fresh taste of toothpaste and Listerine. I looked deep into his bright green eyes, effervescent and glowing in the lamplight. I knew at that moment that I truly loved this man. It didn't need to be said, and it never was, but I loved him, and I know he loved me too.



(Allan)

The sound of my phone ringing is what woke me up, my Nico Vega ringtone screaming out of the speaker in the back. I flipped it over and looked at the name on the screen, and my heart skipped a beat. It was Jesse, sweet, beautiful Jesse. I had gotten to know him a lot over the last several weeks. We both had similar goals, similar interests, and he had grown to be a terrific lover.

“Hello!” I spoke into the receiver.

After he told me to look out the window I got up and went into the living room, I was naked, my soft uncut cock flopping around as walked to my front door to unlock it for him. My apartment heater worked too well sometimes, and the only comfort I could find was in sleeping naked under a thin sheet. After unlocking the door I walked back into my bedroom and closed my bathroom door behind me. I climbed into the shower and turned the faucet on. The hot water hitting my face and body was relaxing in itself. I heard Jesse open the front door and walk into my bedroom. I heard the creak of my bed as he sat down, and I formed an image of him in my mind. Subconsciously my body reacted in the traditional manner, and I felt my cock begin to swell.

I finished cleaning up and I turned the shower off. I stepped out and towel dried off, quickly brushing my teeth and rinsing my mouth out with Listerine. I walked out with the towel wrapped around my waist and I saw Jesse.

I didn't know what to do, should I say good morning? Should I grab my clothes and go back into the bathroom and change? I made up my mind as soon as I looked into his eyes.

I bent over and kissed him deeply. He was so beautiful, his pale skin a stark contrast to his dark hair and gleaming sapphire eyes. Eyes that currently shone with passion...and something else, I noted, there was love in his eyes. Six weeks later, and he was already falling in love with me.

I had been hoping to find the right guy for sometime, this region that I called home was plagued with many young guys that spent their time fucking like rabbits. Different guys every night became old quickly with me, and my pursuit began to change. And then I met Jesse. I was so instantly turned on that I didn't care what happened. As it turned out, he was a virgin, and I got to be his first, surprisingly enough though, even with my boorish demeanor, and sexual experience. I have never bottomed for a man. I've never wanted to, at least not before Jesse. I seriously wanted him to, but now wasn't the time.

“Well, what are we going to do?” I asked him softly.

“You're going to skip breakfast.” Jesse replied.

As he said it, I became aware that the towel had dropped several inches from my robust behind, and I realized that he was staring at it. I could tell that he was excited, I could also tell that he wanted to be inside me. I shook my head.

“Fine,” I told him. “We'll make a deal, when we get to school, we'll race, whoever makes it to the fourth floor of the Business Building first gets to be the top tonight.”

He merely nodded. I swallowed nervously.

Two hours later, we arrived at the college. Me and Jesse got out, and as soon as we cleared the commons, we both took off in opposite directions. I saw him running towards the Business building stairs, and I noted out of the corner of my eye that the elevator in the adjoining building was open and empty, I ran inside and hit the fourth floor button. When the door opened, I ran through the double doors until I reached the classroom. Jesse had won, he was already there. I smiled, and nervously swallowed again.

After school I returned to my apartment, and began the lengthy process that would ensure that nothing nasty would happen when Jesse came over that evening. I had skipped each meal, and picked up an enema kit earlier that day. Pumping the warm liquid into myself seemed like a chore at first, but it wasn't that bad, at least not till I started to feel sick. After running all of the fluid out of my ass, I hopped back into the shower to make sure I smelled good for Jesse's visit.

When I got out I looked at the clock, it read 4:15 PM, I still had three hours to go until Jesse came over. I went out and grabbed a cup of coffee at the nearby Starbucks and spent some time perusing the internet for no reason at all. I looked at my watch. It was now 6:50.

I drove back to my apartment to find Jesse parked outside my building, sitting on the hood of his Silver Malibu. I pulled my Mustang in next to his car and rolled down the passenger side window.

“Excuse me, can I help you young man?” I was trying to be quirky, but it just didn't seem charming this time. I was nervous as could be, partially because I had never had anything inside my ass before, and for another reason as well. I was always the man, I was masculine. I played sports, still watched them on occasion. I was hoping to be a sports reporter someday. And I didn't think that being a bottom would reflect well on that image. I would soon be proven wrong though.

Jesse and I went up to the apartment, and I sat down on my bed taking my shoes and socks off. Jesse then jumped on me, unlacing my sweat pants as soon as he had me on my back and tugging them down violently to my ankles. I could feel his lips and teeth sucking on my cock through my boxers. He was being intentionally rough because I told him I liked a little teeth on my foreskin. Before I knew it he had my cock shoved down his throat. I didn't mention earlier how he had become quite the cocksucker, but he had...six weeks of education from me served him well sexually and romantically. As the sucking continued I began to remember the day I deflowered this beautiful guy six weeks prior, and I knew that Jesse would get his revenge today...if you could call it that, that is.

Jesse climbed up from servicing my hard uncut cock and kissed me hard on the lips, his sweet tongue sliding deep into my mouth. I returned the favor by running my tongue against his. I breathed him in deeply, and I trusted him.

“I want you inside me.” I told him.

A few minutes later I was laying in the doggie-style position on my hands and knees, getting rimmed for only the second time in my life. It was ecstasy beyond comprehension, the pulsing of his warm tongue causing a reverberation in my cock and balls. I heard him pull out my bottle of Astroglide that I normally kept under the bed, and suddenly I felt a sharp pain as something thin entered my asshole and began to wiggle around. It felt so good after a bit that I began to dreamily imagine what his cock would feel like. I got that wish next. I felt the rock hard head of Jesse's circumcised member push against the edge of my anus. It gave way and I was once again reeling from sharp pain, only this time it was worse. I squeezed my eyes shut and moaned deeply from it. I could feel Jesse's hand on my back pushing me downward and his sweet voice telling me to relax. I did.

Jesse began to move his hips outward, his stiff cock nearly exiting my anal opening, and then I felt it going back in. He continued this back and forth motion slowly for a few minutes, and sure enough, over time the pain began to ease. He began to start pumping faster, and surprisingly rough. For a young man that had never been on top, he sure had to be pretty rough to gain satisfaction. It hurt for the longest time, and then I noticed something else. Pleasure, spreading outward from my prostate gland into my abdomen. Stiffening my cock, drawing my balls up tighter, pulling my foreskin back slightly. It eased it's way into my back, and I began to moan...

“Yes Jesse, fuck me!” I yelled to him softly. “Fuck me!”

The bombardment of my anus continued, and then he climbed up, his stiff cock still inside me, and laid me on my side. He and I had done this position only once, and he liked it a lot. He lifted my right leg up and spread my ass cheeks a little, and then he was back inside. I twisted my neck around and kissed him, and kissed him, and kissed him harder. He fucked me harder. I kissed him harder. It seemed to get faster and harder and faster and harder...and then I couldn't control myself.

“Oh shit!” I yelled. “I'm fucking cumming!”

My cock erupted into a torrent of semen, it seemed to get on everything. I was so sensitive down there I couldn't grasp myself to control it. It landed on me, on my bed, my floor, my nightstand, my headboard, anything I was facing suddenly had thick drops of semen on it. My cock was even covered, as still more dribbled out of the opening in my foreskin. It was like Jesse described to me after his first time, as he continued to pound away, it still seemed like I was cumming, only I was done ejaculating.

I could feel Jesse begin to stiffen within me, and he bit down on my ear gently as he shoved his cock deep into me hard balls-deep and began to press it even further into my body, fucking me extremely hard as I felt his warm load spurting into me. He pulled out and I could feel some of it running down my ass-cheek. It was hot.

After I had managed to clean up my mess from earlier, I changed the bed-sheets and Jesse and I lay together in my bed completely naked. He was beautiful, he helped me come to the realization that it wouldn't tarnish my self image to be on bottom, not that I always would be. I think he and I will come to a new beginning in our sex life soon, since we know we can do both, we're going to switch it around some. We'll see what becomes of us romantically in the future, but for sure we're going to be continual sex partners. It's not the end of our adventures...or misadventures perhaps.

 

[Craiger]

Re: Jesse and Allan

Welcome to the story forum, Jay. I like the romance of a beginning relationship like Jesse and Allan's. Two hot young college men who have found each other and no need for anyone else. Looking forward to your continuing.

Craiger

 

[Binudeguy]

Re: Jesse and Allan

Very well written story. It left me hard!

 

[62624rd]

Re: Jesse and Allan

great story

 

[DA2FLBADBOYS]

Re: Jesse and Allan

very Hot story please write more

 

[Jay-the-Dedicated]

Separation: Jesse and Allan Part 3

By Jay-the-Dedicated

"Why does it always seem like some things are too good to be true?" Allan Terran asked himself as he glanced down at the letter sitting in his lap. After being together now for almost two years, his partner Jesse Thomson, had to leave to go to a university quite far away. Allan sat there, his green eyes turning blue with sorrow. The letter in his lap was already soaked with tears. It read:

Allan,

I've been accepted to a University down in Austin that has an excellent Mass Communication program. I will be able to continue my dreams of becoming a reporter. I've received the acceptance letter a bit late and have no choice but to move down there now. I'm sorry that I couldn't tell you this in person, and I would have called except that I had to cancel my phone bill for right now until I'm settled in downstate. I'm not sure what this means for us, but I'm really not comfortable with long-distance relationships, and I cannot trust myself right now, so let's put the relationship on hold for a while until we meet again. I love you and I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, but I really don't think we'd work like this anyway. I'm so sorry, at least we have our friendship.
Love,
Jesse​

Allan glanced down at the letter again and the tears began to flow freely this time. Jesse was so unexpected, he had torn down so many boundaries in Allan's life and had given him hope of a true relationship. Hope of true love.

Allan sat there a while longer in his bedroom and then gathered up the letter and the envelope and set them into the top drawer of his dresser, which was full of spare change, some odds and ends, and a DVD. Allan's gaze lingered on the DVD for a moment, it hadn't been here before. Allan picked it up. In Jesse's handwriting it read: "For Allen."

Allan walked into the living room and plugged the DVD into the player seated below the 52" TV he and Jesse had invested in after moving in together last year.

In moments, Jesse's face entered the TV screen, about twice life-size.

"Hey babe," Jesse said. "Welcome to Jesse's news. If you're watching this, you've probably already gotten the letter I sent explaining where I am and why I haven't come home in well over a week." Allan nodded.

"Well, I want you to know that while I'm down there, I will not seek a relationship, I'm mainly school focused right now and if I engage in any activities, they will be sexual only. Speaking of which, I wanted to leave you a little gift to remember me by."

The Jesse on the screen quickly began unbuttoning his shirt, revealing his slight build. He began to rub his nipples until they were hard and solid. Allan, sitting on the couch, became aware of wetness in his pants. He glanced down, his cock was rock-hard and dripping pre-cum. Jesse continued to strip on-screen until he was completely naked, all seven inches of his circumcised cock made two-fold by the size of the screen. Allan was also soon out of his pants, his uncircumcised member standing to attention and dribbling copious amounts of precum out of the opening in the foreskin.

Jesse grabbed a bottle of lube and began to masturbate. "I wish you were here to do this for me babe," digital Jesse said as he ran his fingers around the purple head of his erect member.

Allan began to masturbate too.

This went on for several moments until digital Jesse muttered a quick "I'm cumming" and semen began to shoot on his chest.

Allan continued to masturbate until he also reached climax, cum covering his nightshirt.

As soon as the endorphins wore off, Allan began to realize how alone he was now, and his tears began to flow freely again, he stumbled into the bedroom and lay down on Jesse's side of the bed, not bothering to pull up his pants, nor change his cum-soaked shirt. He lay there and breathe in Jesse's scent, and fell asleep crying.

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(Jesse)

I really don't know what made me do it honestly. I love Allan to death, but I was starting to feel trapped and confined. I just felt like my life wasn't going to go anywhere with him in that town. I guess that's what made me record that DVD, write that letter, and ship out of town as fast as my car would carry me. I wasn't lying about my acceptance to the University of Texas in Austin. As soon as I got here in fact, I had a dorm room waiting for me, and classes started the following week. Thankfully I had finished all of my basics courses during my stay in Amarillo, from here on out, classes would be focused mainly on my career. I couldn't wait.

I had a roommate in my dorm room, god was he a cutie, black hair, blue eyes, skinny, pale complected. He was totally straight though, if the posters of naked women on his side of the room were any indication. I thankfully had grown past that stage. I didn't need posters of pornographic material on my walls, although I wouldn't have minded a picture or two of Allan in all his glory. I really miss him. I really didn't want to hurt him, and honestly, I feel like shit for leaving him the way I did.

I began to linger again on the image of Allan naked, his supple buttocks, those intense green eyes, that gorgeous uncut cock. And before I knew it, I was in heaven, my hand flying back and forth on my penis like a piston. I was so into it that I didn't realize that my dorm-mate had wandered back into the room until he yelled: "What the fuck are you doing?!" I was abruptly brought out of my trance.

"Oh, I'm sorry dude," I said, making no effort to conceal my still throbbing cock. "I was just thinking about my partner back home, and well, you know how it is."

"Partner?" He asked. "Isn't that what queers and lesbos call the people they love but can't marry?"

"Yes," I replied. "I'm a fucking homosexual, why not go out and tell the whole dorm so they can begin a raiding party!"

"Wait, dude, I've got nothing against gay people, in fact." He reached out and put his hand over the head of my cock, feeling it, stroking it. I was fully hard again in an instant. "I'm actually bi-sexual, but have more experience with guys. I really wish my cock looked as nice as yours does." He stood up and began stripping off his clothes. In seconds he had revealed a seven-inch uncircumcised cock, just as pale as the rest of him.

"What's wrong with being uncircumcised?" I asked him. "My partner Allan is."

He reached out and grabbed my hand, guiding it towards his cock. I began to move it back and forth, and then I understood why. Unlike Allan, who could skin back at will, this boy, my dorm-mate, had phimosis. I actually found it quite attractive, and before I realized what I was doing, had begun sucking on it. The feel of his foreskin in my mouth reminded me so much of Allan that I almost busted my nut right then. It was such a nice reminder of what I had left behind that before I knew it, I could feel my dorm-mate's load dribbling out of the narrow opening into my mouth. I sucked it all out and swallowed it. Then looked up at him. His face was flushed, but damn he was cute.

"I'm sorry," he said. "I've never gotten off to oral before, but you're amazing."

I smiled at him, got up and shot my load all over his body.

Later, after we both had showered, we lay naked on my bed, arms wrapped around each other.

"I have a proposition for you," I began, then cleared my throat again. "While we're together on this campus, would it be possible for us to have a ‘friends with benefits’ type thing? I love my partner, but he's so far away from here that I won't be able to see him often, and you remind me of him somehow."

His blue eyes darkened in thought for a moment. "I suppose that would be fine, but while we're on the subject, we should be properly introduced. I'm James."

"Oh, sorry," I replied. "I'm Jesse."

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(Allan)

I awoke the following morning to the pain of my sore chest and stomach. For the last week since I received the letter from Jesse I have been completely unable to eat, the thought even of putting anything nourishing in my body had me bent double over the toilet seat heaving my empty guts out. I suppose I should move on, I'm quite sure that Jesse already has. I should stop lingering here.

I got up and began to look around the bedroom, our bedroom. And I began to pack up the things that reminded me of Jesse. His missing socks, a bottle of cologne on the dresser, several photographs taken during the two year duration of our relationship. I even changed the sheets on the bed back to the set of linens I had whenever I was still a bachelor. Finally, after getting everything out of the bedroom that reminded me of him, I moved on to the top drawer, grabbing the DVD and the tear-stained letter and envelope, throwing them on top of everything in the box, followed swiftly by my ring, my promise to be loyal to him. It was over.

Twenty minutes later I walked out of the shower and gave myself a once-over in the mirror. Being unable to eat for the last week or so had left me going somewhat to seed. I shrugged, I didn't care anymore. I was getting fat anyway thanks to Jesse's cooking. My body, which had once been rugged and built, was now stocky; I had quit manscaping, so there was quite a bit of hair on my chest and stomach. It seemed as though my skin was hanging off my bones though. It probably was. I quickly dressed and went to check the mailbox.

Inside was the acceptance letter to the University of Oklahoma I had been waiting on. I had received a full scholarship to the school so that I could continue my dream of becoming a Sports Journalist. Suddenly the dream seemed really far away. I didn't want to go without Jesse, but even before we had discussed it, he had blatantly said no. He was tired of this mid-sized city as it was, and Norman Oklahoma, where the main OU campus was, was even smaller by comparison. It was in the boonies too, not a very pleasant place for a gay man to live if they're out. If I was going to make this work, I'll have to jump right back into the closet, something I dread, but it's a sacrifice I am willing to make.

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(Jesse)

"I'm starting to really miss him." I thought as James was bent double with my cock in his mouth. "This dude couldn't give decent head if his life depended on it, his cock stinks really bad first thing in the morning, and he is always horny. I really think I made a mistake leaving like that, maybe I should call Allan and apologize."

I was suddenly brought out of my reverie by a sudden thought. "I turned my phone off!" Pushing James off of myself I jumped up and began to dig through the room, going through still-packed boxes, desk drawers, and the night-table, until finally I found my Droid sitting in the bottom of a box. I turned it on and ran out of the room, barely noticing that my pants were still down around my ankles. I went all the way to the receptionist's desk downstairs and found her blushing when I arrived.

"I need to use the phone!" I shouted excitedly at her. She started to giggle. It was then that I remembered, and quickly pulled my pajama bottoms up.

"Sorry about that," I told her. "The phone?"

"Ah yes, of course." She said, handing me the receiver. I began dialing Allan's number than paused. "What am I going to say?" I thought.

It didn't matter, the phone didn't even ring. A voice poured into my ear saying that the number had been disconnected. I hung up the phone and sank to the floor, tears welling up in my eyes. He wasn't there anymore. It really was over, and it's all my fault.

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In Austin, thunder booms and lightning strikes as a torrential downpour begins. In Amarillo, where Allan is still packing up his mustang to begin the journey to Oklahoma, a gentle wisp of fog moves into the early morning air, soon followed by a shroud that envelops the city.

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(Jesse)

Goddammit, will this rain ever stop? I asked myself as I continued to stare out the window. It had rained now for almost a week, and it did nothing to lighten my mood. Winter break was fast approaching, and I was still depressed. I had made a huge mistake in leaving like I did. The loss of Allan, and the realization of what I had done had finally settled on me. My dorm-mate, James, was no longer a sexual partner, but instead had become an ear to listen and a shoulder to cry on. My grades dropped. I had once had a 3.4 GPA, I was dropping near 2.9 now, I couldn't focus any longer.

(Allen)

Things have been only slightly better since I left Amarillo. Upon arriving in Norman several months ago, I had found the university much as I had imagined it. I had even settled into my job as the announcer for the sports program in the school. I would graduate at the end of the semester, finally earning my Bachelor's degree. I was about to turn 25 soon, hell, it was time for me to move on and settle into my career. I still had this lingering pain though at what I had almost had. True love. Here I am several months later with a shroud still covering my heart, unable to confide in anyone how I felt. Until I met Artemis anyway.

Artie was a Freshmen in the school, a jock who had entered the school on an athletic scholarship from the nearby town of Aida. He was the town hero actually. They'd probably be singing a different tune if they had known what I know about him. He was one of about 3 gay students I had met at the school, only known thanks to a Craigslist ad I had put out several weeks before looking for discreet company. Yeah, I was getting horny again, and I needed something other than my hand to compensate. I had turned the other three down, and pretty much given up on the ad itself, whenever I received another email asking to meet at a mall in Oklahoma City the following weekend. I don't really know why I did it, but I ended up there that weekend. I don't regret the decision at all.

I got up, my tiny dorm-room was cluttered and helter-skelter with random objects, clothes here and there, a few textbooks and study-guides thrown around as I abandoned studying for my Finals. Someone was knocking on the door, I got up and opened it.

Artemis was 6 feet, 4 inches tall, muscular yet thin, with jet black hair and a face still pockmarked by lingering acne. His eyes, a deep sapphire color shone with excitement as they settled on my face. I brought him inside.

Moments later we were both naked on the bedside, my lips pressed to Artie's left nipple, gently biting the erogenous zone until it was engorged and hard. I looked down. Artie was massive, I'm talking something like nine inches long and as big around as my wrist, circumcised, with no trace left of the scar and an engorged pink head that I loved to run my tongue along. This kid could be a porn-star if he wanted to. I found myself licking my way down his chest into the gentle fuzz that ran from his belly-button to his pubes, and before I knew it, I had swallowed about six inches of this nine inch fuck-tool.

Moments later, we had switched to a sixty-nine position, and I found myself staring into some of the greatest looking balls I had encountered. When he was standing they hung low, but in this position, and with me pleasuring their cock, they stood to attention constantly moving upward into him, then falling back into place. It was only the second time I had encountered a pair of balls that moved, and I didn't want to think of the first pair right now while I was burying my pain in sheer ecstasy.

Artemis flipped himself over me, grabbing a condom and some lube off of the nightstand, wrapping that massive tool of his up and slathering my asshole until it was wet and ready, and then he entered me, filling the void that Jesse had left behind with his behemoth cock.

It was over about fifteen minutes later, as I lay there covered in Artie's semen, and he was jerking off my uncut dick to completion. Tears began to fill my eyes as I climaxed; my own hot cum spilling all over my chest, pooling into my hairy bellybutton and then pouring over my lower stomach. I began to cry and Artemis reached down and pulled me into a hug.

"I know you miss him babe. Just like I know that you and I weren't destined to be together as partners. I've known since the day we met and you burst into tears with me inside you that you have been deeply hurt by that man. I'm really sorry."

He held me close until the tears quit coming. It had begun to snow outside the window and he and I watched the first flakes drift down from the sky.

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(Jesse)

It was the last day of term. I was sitting there sicker than a dog, crying into my pillow. The holidays drawing ever nearer didn't even have me excited in the least. James sat in the chair at his computer watching me from the corner of his eye.

"Come here," I said to him.

He got up, he was naked and as he came close I took his tightly foreskinned cock into my mouth and just sucked on it like a pacifier, roaming around the foreskin and just enjoying the feel of it, the reminder, of what I had once had and lost. I rolled over on my stomach and told James to enter me.

James wasn't even that great a top, but his cock felt almost right inside me. I wouldn't kiss him or hug him anymore...but as long as he could use me to get off, I didn't care. I was too deep into my depression to care anymore. I barely scraped my finals' scores, and it was recommended that I drop out of the school as I couldn't shack it and find somewhere less stressing on me. If only they knew the truth. I did take comfort in the fact that I could at least talk to James about some things. He understood. He was in a similar boat himself. He was 24 and had never had a single relationship. He had tried, but as soon as he had become sexually involved with both men and women, they tended to leave in revulsion because of his phimosis.

If I had met him before Allan, perhaps I would have considered him as a possible date...not now though. I just wanted someone to use me and make me feel like I deserved to feel.

James pulled his cock out of me and stripped the condom off, grabbing himself and jerking off all over my stomach. As the last few globs of semen dribbled out of his cock, I became aware of a strange sensation underneath my left arm. It was my phone. I picked it up and read the name on the screen. I was so shocked that I dropped the phone and it broke into pieces on the tile floor.

"NO!" I yelled as I tried to hit the answer button on the shattered screen. The phone was useless.

"Who was it?" James asked as he was pulling his pants on.

"It was Allan." I replied. Still in shock.

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(Allan)

I put down my cell. I had requested having it turned back on only recently in case I decided to call Jesse. I had finally brokered the courage to do so, but the phone cut off mid-ring, sending me directly to his voicemail. I had left the following message in case Jesse wanted to listen. "I miss you," it said.

I had returned to Amarillo, bringing Artemis along so that he could get a little freedom from the school, and his family in Aida. He had finally come out, and it wasn't as well received as he had hoped.

"I'm sorry Artie," I told him after he had gotten off the phone with his father, who had gone into a rampage and began calling his son a disgrace that would burn in hell so loud over the phone that I could hear.

Now he was here, with me. I guess some things are good I suppose. I still had my apartment here, I had loaned it to my sister so that she could have a break from my parents during the school year since it was really close to her school. She wasn't happy when I called her and told her that I wanted it back though.

After that day, when it had started snowing on the campus, I realized that I would do anything to have Jesse back, would go to any lengths to do so. That was why Artemis and I were sitting at the airport, waiting on the next plane to Austin. We only sat there for another 20 minutes or so. Soon came the call to board our plane. I turned my cell off and Artie and I went to the boarding gates.

(Jesse)

"Dammit!" I yelled as I hung up the phone for the twelfth time. There was still no answer from Allan. I had rushed right out after the accident and gotten a replacement phone. Hoping to call him back. But the effort seemed pointless, he probably just pocket dialed me by accident and didn't realize it. I was starting to give up again. Things had taken a real turn for the worse weather-wise. After getting back from the Verizon store the rain turned into a sleet storm. It was hard to believe it was getting this cold down here in Austin. I went back into my dorm-room and checked the weather on the TV. A norther had just come through the area, causing the constant rain to become an ice-storm. "It's a good thing I don't have any reason to be out in this." I thought as I continued to watch the weather report.

(Allen)

Our plane landed at a quarter to four. The weather outside was treacherous, sleet, rain and ice all falling from the sky. We stopped at the rental car place and rented a Prius from the lovely lady at the counter and began the drive to the UT campus. I pulled my phone out of the pocket and called the campus asking for directions to the dorm where Jesse lived. Artemis began grabbing my shoulder while I was on the phone with the receptionist. I shrugged him off and continued talking.

The phone was suddenly jerked out of my hand by a collision against the rear of the car, we were thrown forward and began to skid on the ice. I dropped the phone into my lap and began turning the wheel. We continued to skid until the car pulled up on the right side. The tires continued to slide.

I began to see Jesse's face in my mind as we flew off the road, the car colliding with a tree...

(Jesse)

It was almost 5:30 in the evening and it was starting to get dark. I was about to turn off the news and go get something to eat in the commons whenever my phone started to ring. I didn't recognize the number, so I picked up.

"Hello," I said into the receiver.

"May I speak with Jesse Thomson please?" The voice was female, but familiar. It took Jesse a moment to remember who it was.

"This is he, Mrs. Terran." I replied.

"Oh, thank god, I didn't know who else to call." She sounded relieved. "What's wrong?" I replied.

"Allan's been in a terrible car accident." She said.

"I'm afraid I can't help you Mrs. Terran, I don't live in Amarillo anymore, I'm in Austin."

"That's why I'm calling you; Allan went to Austin to find you."

I dropped the phone in shock. It was unbelievable.

"Jesse! Jesse!!" Allan's mother continued to scream through the receiver.

I picked it back up and asked her what hospital he was in.

I began to get my coat on, whenever James walked into the room.

"What's wrong, dude?" He asked.

"Allan came here to find me, he was in a car accident, I have to get to Saint David's Hospital immediately." I replied.

James thought for a second, then began putting on his own winter things.

"Hey, what are you doing?" I asked, a bit aggravated.

He turned and faced me, angry. "Think! Dude, the weather is shit right now, your little car can't drive in this near as well as my Suburban can, would you like to get there safely or end up sharing the same fate?"

Tears began to fill my eyes, and I pulled James into a rough hug. "You're such a good friend." I told him.

"Now let's go find your prince charming!" James said and we rushed out the door.

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Artemis was lucky. He managed to get out of the crash with only a bump on the head and a broken arm, and maybe some whiplash. But not Allan. Allan suffered a severe concussion and was currently in Intensive Care in a coma. They had also had to rush him into an emergency surgery to remove some tree branches that had impaled him, hitting several of his key organs. He kept stopping doctors trying to get an update on his condition, but all they did was tell him to sit in the waiting room and let them do their job. He was in so much shock. If it hadn't have been for that accident happening behind them, and Allan distracted while talking on the phone, they might have arrived at the university safely. He began to wonder if anyone had been able to reach Allan's former partner yet. If Allan's phone had survived the crash, he might have attempted to call himself.

The double doors at the end of the hall flew open, and in entered two young men in their twenties. One was about five foot ten, with sandy blonde hair and blue eyes. The other was pallid, pale, very similar to how Artemis himself would have looked had he been 6 foot even and slightly underfed. Except for his eyes, they were a much more vibrant shade than his were. He was a looker. Artemis had to quickly think of something else before he popped a boner in these tight jeans. He watched the other one for a moment, and then realization dawned on him of who this guy was.

He moved closer to listen to what he was saying to the nurse at the counter. "...'m Jesse Thomson, I'm his partner, why can't I see him?"

The nurse began to type on her keyboard, and Artemis moved closer.

"Excuse me," he said to Jesse. "But you're Allan's former partner?"

The guy who had named himself Jesse turned and looked at Artemis for the first time. "Yes I am."

Artemis held out a hand. "I'm Artemis, but you can call me Artie, Al and I hooked up at school and we became close friends."

A shadow passed over Jesse's forehead and he offered his hand in return, not looking Artemis in the eyes. "I'm Jesse, and this is my friend James. I guess Allan and I are guilty of the same crime I suppose."

Artemis quickly shook hands with James and pulled Jesse aside.

"I want you to listen closely to what I have to say. You might not like what you are about to hear, but I think you need to. When Allan and I first met, we were simply sexually involved. But it became something much more meaningful after that first sexual experience, I knew that Allan was a victim of heartbreak from the moment he burst into tears while sitting on my dick. I'm big enough to make men cry, sure, but it had never happened to me before, so I investigated it. Come to find out he was attempting to recover from the shock of losing his two-year partner. That loss almost destroyed him. I don't know what it was that made you do what you did. But I convinced Allan to confront you with these feelings he had been harboring, and that's why we were coming down here in the first place. So he could make his peace with you and see what would happen. I have grown to care for Allan, he's been the closest friend I've ever had since we met 3 months ago. And I hope to god that the pain of seeing you again doesn't make things worse than they already are." Artemis began to breathe heavily.

"Worse than they already are?!" Jesse turned to him, eyes wide.

"Allan's in Intensive Care in a coma, he's suffered a severe concussion, possible brain damage, has a damaged kidney and punctured lung. And the doctors aren't so sure if he's going to make it." Artemis replied.

Jesse got up and returned to harrassing the receptionist to see Allan.

Meanwhile, James sat down next to Artemis.

"You know, I overheard what you said about caring for Allan earlier. I had a similar speech prepared for him if I were to meet him someday. I think it was really brave what you said." He said.

Artemis turned to look at James. "I guess it was, wasn't it?" He replied.

"You know," James began. "Jesse has had a similar 4 months to what Allan's had. At first, things were great between us, we were just friends with benefits. And then one day I believe he realized just exactly what he had done. After that, he sunk into a depression. He'd still suck my dick and let me fuck him. But he wouldn't pay any attention to me other than sucking on my dick. He'd just keep it in his mouth like a pacifier. It was really sad. I don't think he realized it...but one time I was fucking him and he kept muttering the words 'I deserve to be treated like a little bitch, I deserve to feel like I'm someone's whore, I brought this on myself now I have to live with it.'" James took a breath. "After that day, I tried my best to comfort him, but it seemed in vain. He began to fail classes, he stopped eating, and near the end of the term, I basically had to drag him out of bed just to study for his finals, which he barely passed. That call from Allan was such an unexpected surprise to him that he dropped the phone and broke the damn thing. And then he got the call about Allan, and he was ready to rush here and probably end up a patient himself if need be. I really wish I had a man devoted to me like that." James sighed.

Artemis and James sat there in silence.

Jesse had finally managed to get a doctors attention and explained the situation, about how he was Allan's partner once and how he was asked by Allan's mother, who couldn't be there yet, to go in and see him. The doctor turned and beckoned him through the double-doors on the opposite side of the hall.

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(Jesse)

Why the fuck is my heart beating so fast? I'm so scared and nervous and sad all at the same time. He's not dead, he just can't be. These thoughts invaded my mind as I followed the doctor down the hall to the Intensive Care Unit.

Finally we passed through another set of double doors and entered a room full of beds. There was only one conscious patient in the room, some old guy that looked like he wouldn't be around much longer. And then I saw him.

Allan lay in a bed at the end of the ward, a blanket covering his body to the torso. bandages wrapping around his head, part of his face, and parting the hair on his chest as it crossed down his torso. There were lines and tubes running every which way from his body, an IV in his left wrist, wires from the heart monitor coming out of his chest bandages, and what looked suspiciously like a catheter line running out between his legs. He was also wearing a mask connected to a breathing machine at the edge of his bed.

I went and pulled up a chair. As soon as the doctor left I placed my hand on Allan's chest. It rose and fell unnaturally. My eyes began to fill with tears at the sight of the man I loved covered head to toe in bandages.

"Oh Allan," I cried in his ear. "I've wanted to see you again for so long, I just never wanted it to be like this."

I started to cry, burying my face in Allan's chest hair, his chest still as comfortable as I remember. My sobbing running in time with Allan's pulse, dictated by the machine at the foot of his bed.

I don't know how long I was there, I just remember someone coming up to me and laying their hand on my shoulder. I wasn't allowed to stay there anymore...I turned and looked at Allan's bruised face, and I bent down and laid a kiss on his forehead.

"I love you Allan, please don't leave me." I said as I was led away from him and back out into the hallway. I found my way back to the waiting room and found James there. I didn't see Artemis.

"Where did Artemis go?" I asked James.

"Oh, he went to go rent a hotel room, his injuries were minor so he was discharged hours ago. He said something about going to rest. We should probably do the same."

"You can go if you want to," I replied. "But I'm staying here in case something changes."

James nodded his understanding.

"I'm going to go and get us something to eat then. You need to keep your strength up."

"Okay," I replied.

While James was gone I went to the restroom then called Allan's mother and filled her in on the situation. She said that she would be on a plane headed this way if it weren't for the worsening weather. Apparently Amarillo was being hit by a massive snowstorm. And Austin had cancelled flights due to unsafe runways. I went and sat back down after promising her I would keep her updated on any changes.

It was now 10:30 PM.

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"Geez, what a bummer," James thought as he was coming back up the stairs with food for himself and Jesse. He walked back into the waiting room and found Jesse curled up asleep in a chair by the TV. He sat down and started eating the cheeseburger he had bought from the cafeteria.

It was now 11:15 PM.

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Artemis slept restlessly, the pain in his arm needling him awake, he was also worried about Allan, and about Jesse. He wondered what would happen to him if Allan were to die. What Jesse might do, especially if what James had told him earlier was true. He didn't want to think about it. He popped a painkiller and then attempted to lay down again.

The clock on the bedside table chimed 12:00 AM

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The sound of running feet back and forth shook Jesse from his slumber. He saw the night doctor from the ICU running towards him. Paralyzing fear overtook him at that moment.

"You'd better come with me," the doctor said.

Jesse got up and followed the doctor back down the hallway. Instead of going back to the Intensive Care ward they turned in the opposite direction and walked into an Operating Room. Allan's lifeless body was surrounded by a doctor and three nurses, there was alot of noise in the room, the sound of the machine buzzing as Allan flatlined, the metallic whine of a difibrillator as the electric pads charged, the sound of the doctor yelling instructions to the nurses.

Jesse couldn't take it anymore, tears welled up in his eyes, and he began to scream.

"Don't you do it Allan! Don't leave me all alone like this! Fight, and come back to me! I love you more than life itself!" He paused, trying to catch his breath.

"You came here to find me! I'm here, and I'm not leaving, don't you dare die!"

His body began to react on its own, propelling him forward until he was suddenly beside the bed, the doctor yelling at him to move out of the way. His fists raised themselves and he began to punch Allan in the chest.

"DON'T YOU DARE DIE! DON'T LEAVE ME ALLAN! I LOVE YOU TOO FUCKING MUCH!" He screamed.

His fists continued to punch Allan, and then he stopped. The flatlining continued, and Jesse's tears began to pour from his eyes.

"You'd better call it." One of the nurses muttered to the doctor.

Jesse leaned forward and began to kiss Allan, sliding his tongue between his true love's lips and down into him, breathing his love deep into Allan. He stood up, and a single tear fell from his eyes, landing on Allan's lips, marking the kiss there.

One of the nurses rushed forward and began to move Jesse away from the body. He was unable to move himself, and great sobs began to pour from him, he collapsed, falling to his knees, and then falling flat on the floor, praying to anyone to restore his love.

Moments passed, what seemed an eternity in silence.

"Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep-beep-beep-beep" The machines flatline scream suddenly returned to a gentle pulse, and a single moan escaped from Allan's lips. "Jesse?" He muttered groggily.

Jesse turned and clambered as fast as he could from the floor, rushing back to the bed. He grabbed one of Allan's hands in his own and squeezed it, feeling the warmth of life returning to it.

He stared down into Allan's green eyes. "I love you" he muttered.

"I love you too," he muttered back.

It was 2:00 AM.

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(Allan)

After the car accident, I was merely floating, feeling myself drifting farther and farther away. I know that I died sometime that night, but then I heard a voice calling me back, it was Jesse. I didn't have the strength left to fight anymore. But his kiss gave me what I needed. He saved me. I've wanted to see him again so badly, and when I opened his eyes and saw him there. I was whole again, I was complete. I had nearly given up on him, and he came back to me.

"I love you," Jesse uttered above me.

"I love you too," I told him back.

And then Jesse leaned forward and kissed me again. I didn't want it to end.

They wheeled me out of Intensive Care and put me in a room the next day. And Jesse was there...he never left.

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A week later, a group of four exited Saint David's Hospital together. Allan, being wheeled by Jesse, their relationship renewed, followed by Artemis and James, the two friends that through their rather unexpected actions, not only helped get Jesse and Allan back together, but found each other as well. As Allan began to heal in the following weeks, he and Jesse made plans to return to Amarillo together, and resume their lives where they left off. Finally, it was to be their last day in Austin, Allan had just received clearance from the hospital to travel.

"Where are James and Artie?" Allan asked.

"Off doing the nasty in our dorm-room," Jesse replied "You'd think they'd have the decency to find a hotel room."

Allan laughed. "Well, we have one, and I think I'm up for it now." He winked at Jesse and playfully slapped him in the butt.

Jesse rolled over on the bed and gave Allan a big kiss. "Well, what are you waiting for, let's get out of these clothes."

Jesse bent down and pulled Allan's cock out of his pants, rubbing it against his face. "I've missed this so much." He opened his mouth and stuck his tongue out, rolling it around the head gently sliding under Allan's foreskin. Soon, Allan was at his erect 8 inches.

"You know, I've missed this too," Allan replied as lifted Jesse up to kiss him and began sliding his cock back and forth against Jesse's asshole.

Later, as the couple lay together soaked in each other’s semen, Allan still inside Jesse, Jesse couldn't help but think how he could lay like this forever.

THE END​

 

[Craiger]

Re: Jesse and Allan

Wow, Jay, that was quite a twist. My sympathy lies with Allan though.
At least up to this point he doesn't have a "friend with benefits." I wonder how much Jesse really loves Allan by his feelings of being trapped in Amarillo. Situations like this, at least in my opinion, call for talking it out with ones partner. Even the possibility of Allan being accepted to UofT as well. But, then again, this is your story and I eagerly wait to read more before I form a solid judgment.....lol
It's all well written though.

Craiger

 

[techie70]

Re: Jesse and Allan

Great story Jay!

 

[techie70]

Re: Jesse and Allan

Nicely done Jay! Teared up a bit with the hospital scene.

 

[Jay-the-Dedicated]

I would like to thank everyone for their patience in allowing me to finish Seperation: Jesse and Allan part 3, any more critiques will be much obliged...but I'm finished with Jesse and Allan as regular characters...I would however like to explore the relationship of James/Artemis and include Jesse/Allan as side characters in that story. But first, I plan to move on to an erotic fantasy I've been thinking on seeing as how no one ever seems to like the fantasy genre whenever it comes to erotic fiction...I plan to step up and write a few...so keep ur eyes peeled for my next set of stories.

 

[Craiger]

Hey Jay,

I like the way Jesse and Allan ended. I jumped to quickly to condemn Jesse before the story finished. All's well with the world now.....lol Look forward to more of your writing.

Craiger

 

[sheep]

Great story Jay!