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Lost in a Dream

This story is so fucking hot I need to read all of it. I read the firts chapter and the end of the last one. got so boned i want to real the whole fucking thing. You are like a jizz wizard with a magic dick. it got me boned. and i like it. its a great sotry and hot guys. i'll be back. i think it weird but i like it a lot. plus i get a boner. ha
 
These past few chapters are amazing! I love the way all of the characters interact with each other, especially the repartee between Jason and Matt, it adds a certain element of mateship that otherwise wouldn't be apparent.
I'm actually happy I haven't had a chance to read through them until now otherwise I would have been left on the cliffhanger of Evan choosing between Lukas and Aiden! How cruel it would be to be left in such suspense.
You are an amazing writer and I hope that you enjoy writing this story as much as I, and everyone else, enjoys reading it.
Please keep up the excellent work.

Have you considered turning these chapters and the one's to come into a book?
 
Hey everyone! I thought I'd drop by and say that Chapter 16 is really close. Keep an eye out for it! I'm working on a couple of the next edits, but those may or may not be done by the time I post 16.

I think I need to clean up. That was an amazing chapter, tense with emotion but ending in a climax of...well a climax!:sex:

Thanks sheep :) I'm really happy with how it turned out!

Wow, Matt! That was intense. The entire chapter was awesome. I hope Matt realizes that he is the glue that holds all the rest of the gang together. He exudes the wisdom of an old soul. Still there are more ends to tie up. Who is Aiden's text from? When will Lukas be willing to talk to Evan? Where is Kevin fitting in all this? Questions, questions..... I'll wait for the next chapter...lol

Craiger

He may or may not realize it yet but I think he will! He's just trying to be a good person, and something tells me he's doing a darn good job at that!

Passions and emotions run so high among these guys, its a wonder they have the time and energy left for the more mundane aspects of their daily lives! A great new chapter Matt.

Yeah, I'm starting to wonder if college is even possible for these guys... They're getting to be pretty naughty! :)

I absolutely love your characters, especially Matt of course. And your storyline, because it is completely original, weird at times but so believable and unpredictable. And of course the sex, which is not just awesome in its eroticism but also helps give great insight into your characters and the emotions, values and desires that drive their lives. I'm sure that a lot of guys who read Chapter 15 ended up with an experience much like sheep's. But I don't hear them complaining about the way you presented it. So I sure won't complain about the multiple messes you caused at my house. ;) :)

This story is the best thing going on JUB right now in my opinion (sorry sheep and other JUB writers who may be reading this). Please keep posting and let us know when you update anymore chapters. The new versions are well worth going back to reread.

Thank you HR. I've worked quite hard on the characters. Some more than others! But I hope each will have their own spotlight at some point in Matt's life. Whether that is good or bad, I don't even know yet. Like I've told you a handful of times already, I'm just glad you guys are enjoying reading this as much as I am enjoying writing this.

This story is so fucking hot I need to read all of it. I read the firts chapter and the end of the last one. got so boned i want to real the whole fucking thing. You are like a jizz wizard with a magic dick. it got me boned. and i like it. its a great sotry and hot guys. i'll be back. i think it weird but i like it a lot. plus i get a boner. ha

Thanks for joining us, Billy! Even if you cheated and read ahead... Thanks for the comment and thanks for the laugh, I know for a fact I've never been a "jizz wizard with a magic dick"! I'll take it as a compliment!

These past few chapters are amazing! I love the way all of the characters interact with each other, especially the repartee between Jason and Matt, it adds a certain element of mateship that otherwise wouldn't be apparent.
I'm actually happy I haven't had a chance to read through them until now otherwise I would have been left on the cliffhanger of Evan choosing between Lukas and Aiden! How cruel it would be to be left in such suspense.
You are an amazing writer and I hope that you enjoy writing this story as much as I, and everyone else, enjoys reading it.
Please keep up the excellent work.

Have you considered turning these chapters and the one's to come into a book?

Thank you for sticking with the story, pianoninja!! It is most certainly a pleasure to write! Although, I don't always get to enjoy it as much as some do... I did enjoy 15 quite a bit, though! I am most definitely going to be continuing, so don't you worry! And I haven't thought much about turning this into a book. ;) I definitely need a solid end point, and I haven't quite found that yet. I will, though. I definitely will! But thank you for the incredible compliment. It's really hard for me to believe that this could have turned out the way it has (so far)!!

ANYWAY... I'll be back soon with chapter 16! You can count on that! (ALSO: I hope I didn't get anyone's hopes up for this post. Just stay excited for me for when 16 gets here!)

Matt
 
Like I said, Chapter 16 was really close! I've got a couple ideas for 17 and I will be starting that shortly! For now, though, enjoy! (I have been working on some edits of past chapters, but none are ready to be sent off to Auto yet! I'll let you know when they are up!)

Matt

Lost in a Dream, Chapter 16

I awoke Thursday morning to a ... surprise. A wet surprise. I lifted my head to look between my legs and saw that Brayden had my cock in his mouth. Not anymore! My heart started pounding and my breaths shortened; I was in heaven.

“Oh my goodness, Brayden!” I said as he slowly worked my rapidly rising meat. The feeling of his hot mouth had me lost for words. My mouth hung open as I watched his nose hit my pubes. Luckily for me, I had just cum twice before bed. I hoped that would mean this was going to last longer, because this was the best alarm clock I had ever had.

The whole scene had me in awe. It was the way his tongue gently caressed the shaft as he sucked the strength right out of me. It was the way his hands switched from softly touching my body to lightly pinching my nipples. The only imperfection on the moment was he was so focused on me that he wouldn’t let me do anything to him.

I honestly had no clue how long he had been at it or what time it was. I was in pure ecstasy and he knew it. He took his mouth off of my cock and I could instantly feel the cool air in contrast to the warmth of his saliva. I didn’t have to worry about that for long, as he quickly smothered my cock with his hot mouth again. The overriding sensations from my cock had reached their limit; I was ready. I looked down at Brayden at the precise moment he looked up. I saw hunger. I saw desire. I saw passion. His eyes told a wonderful story and I could no longer deny him his prize.

I felt my balls retract up towards my tense body. Brayden pulled off, as he apparently decided he’d watch the result of his wake-up call. I looked up to see my cock erupt, but all I saw was stars.

My eyes shot open. My body and mind were overwhelmed with sensations. My eyes shot open! I expected to see Brayden between my legs. But he wasn’t there. He was still cuddled next to me where we fell asleep. As I tried to gather my thoughts and make sense of it all, my cock rapidly deflated and there was, I saw clearly, a mess on my chest and stomach. Was I that amped up over sex that, even though I had cum twice just hours ago, I could have such a vivid wet dream?

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“So,” Jason started as I walked into his room, “Brayden tells me you had a wet dream last night.” A sly grin slid across his face. With anyone else I might have been embarrassed, but Jason couldn’t get to me anymore.

“Yeah,” I said as I matched his tone, “that boy gets me so riled up at night. Even though I had spent two loads with him before bed, I couldn’t help but let my mind take over in my sleep!”

Jason opened his mouth to say something, but I think he was stunned by the lack of subtlety in my voice. I continued, “And even when I woke up, I was frickin’ hard as a rock at the thought of what we might do later!” I tried my best to keep a poker face while I said this, but my personality took over after. I started to laugh as Jason and Brayden looked on in awe.

“I don’t wanna know what you fed him, Brayden,” Jason started, “but keep it up. He’s grown so much as a person since he met you. I can’t even believe it myself!” Brayden blushed at the compliment and I grinned from ear to ear.

But, Jason was right. I was comfortable with myself around him before, but never around other people. He said that I seemed proud of my catch. I was very proud I could get Brayden. And I got the feeling that Brayden was proud he could get me. As my mind started to wander, Jason’s room got another visitor.

“Lukas!” I heard Brayden say as he entered the room.

“Hey guys!” Lukas said with a smile. I assumed he would want things to start to go back to normal and I was more than willing to help out. “So, Matt.” He started. Uh oh. “Brayden told me --”

“Dang it Brayden!” I said as I interrupted Lukas. Brayden grinned from ear to ear as he saw my reaction. “Quit tellin’ people about that! Wet dreams are perfectly normal for horny guys!” As soon as I mentioned the wet dream, he started to laugh. I realized too late that wasn’t what Lukas was going to say.

“Well, that’s not what Brayden told me, but nice!” Lukas said as he gave me a thumbs up sign and a smile. “What I was going to say was that Brayden told me you talked to Aiden and Evan after you talked to me. Thanks.” He said with a half smile.

“Actually, they both came and talked to me.” I corrected, “But, that whole thing was so messed up I wanted to do my best to help out my friends.” I said with a smile.

“Aiden talked to you too?” He said, surprised. “What did he say?”

“That’s something he can tell you better than I can, Lukas!” I said. “I’ll text him now and tell him that you wanna talk to him!”

After a subject change in our conversation, I got a reply from Aiden. “Ok. About what?” I told him about what we had just talked about and that it would be better to hear it from the man himself. After I got the last response, I looked at my phone in confusion.

Jason looked at me and noticed my confusion, “What did he say?”

“He said he’s waiting up by Lukas’ room. How the heck did he get there so fast?” I said as I relayed the last message. Lukas said he’d see us later and left to go talk with Aiden.

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Brayden and I decided we were going to my hometown to visit my parents in the hospital that afternoon. I wasn’t as worried about them as I had been, but I still wanted to see them. And I suspected they wanted to see more of Brayden!

When we got there, though, we were quite surprised to find their room empty. I suppose I’m not really surprised, but it would have been nice to get a phone call! I pulled out my cell phone and dialed my dad’s number.

“Hello?” A voice said from the other line.

“Dad,” I said, “do you have anything that you think I should know about your visit to the hospital?”

“Oh shit!” He exclaimed, “Sorry, son. Does that mean you’re in town and at the hospital?”

“Yeah, Brayden’s with me.” I said, “We’ll go visit Dean so it won’t be a total waste of time!”

“Are you sticking around for dinner? You know you’re always welcome back at home.” I asked Brayden if he’d be all right with dinner with my parents. He looked nervous, but I told him I’d have more to worry about than he would!

“Yeah, dad, we’ll stick around. See you soon!” I said as I hung up the phone.

Brayden and I walked to Dean’s room and saw he was watching TV. “That’s gotta be getting old by now, right?” I said as I walked into the room. He turned his head and saw me and smiled.

“You came!” He said excitedly. I expected him to be happy I was here, but not excited.

“Sure did! We came to visit my parents,” I said as I pointed to Brayden, “but they got released and didn’t tell me. So, we decided to visit you so we didn’t waste two hours of total driving tonight!”

“I see!” He said, “And... who’s this you brought?”

“This,” I said as I pulled Brayden forward and put my arm around his shoulders, “is my boyfriend, Brayden.” I didn’t think he’d care since he didn’t react to me when I told him I had a lover. “Remember when I told you how I knew it would hurt more to lose a lover than a twin?” I asked.

He nodded in response. “If I lost my twin,” I said as I started to get choked up, “it would be hard. Through thick and thin, he’ll always be my twin. But,” I said as I turned my head and looked Brayden in the eyes, “I know that I’ve got someone here that can help me get over that.” My eyes started to water, “If I lost Brayden...” I said as I searched for words. “If I lost Brayden,” I repeated as my voice lowered to a whisper, “I wouldn’t know what I would do. I would be lost.” Brayden’s eyes watered at that thought. I pulled him into a hug and squeezed tight. We had a silent conversation in that simple little hug. I could feel he didn’t want to let me go, as I didn’t want to let him go.

“I think I understand.” Dean said as he looked on. “I mean, I don’t just hear what you’re saying, I see it.” He looked at us and smiled. “You know, I’ve never really had any gay friends before.” He said, “Well, at least I’ve never had any openly gay friends before.”

I smiled at the sentiment and said, “You know, I never thought I’d be so open. But, I realized that if people don’t like me or any of my friends for who we are, they could go fuck themselves.”

Brayden turned his head and looked at me, shocked. “Matt!”

“What! It’s true. Hate criminals. Don’t hate people who aren’t afraid to love!”

Brayden smiled, “Well, I know that. I was actually just surprised you said ‘fuck’!”

“You should know by now I use it when I mean it!” I said as I laughed. “Dean, that’s not a word you’ll hear from me much. So remember how I said it, ‘cause it could be a while before you hear it again!” I decided it would be a good time to change the conversation. “So, Dean, when do you get outta here?”

“Nice distraction.” He said with a laugh, “But, they say I could be out by tomorrow night. I just have to find a ride back up to school.”

“Up to school?” I asked, “Does that mean you go to State?” He nodded. “Nice. That’s where we go! Call me when you’re about ready to go and I can be here in an hour!” I said as I gave him my phone number.

“What about your classes?”

“I’ll e-mail my professors and tell them my parents are getting out but I don’t know when. Don’t worry about that! A couple missed classes won’t kill me.” I said as Brayden and I got ready to leave. “See ya tomorrow, then!”

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As I pulled up to my childhood home, I noticed right away that this wasn’t going to be an ordinary dinner. Aside from Bryan’s car, I saw my grandpa’s car parked in my old spot. “Well, this should be interesting.” I said to Brayden as I parked. “That’s my grandpa’s car out front. We’ll find out if this is good or bad before too long. For now, it’s interesting.” I said as we walked to the house.

Mom greeted us at the door when we walked in. “Boys! It’s good to see you. We’re sorry we didn’t tell you we got out, things got hectic!”

“Good to see you too, mom!” Brayden said as he received his hug. He smiled as they broke apart.

“Yeah, good to see ya, Mom. Where’s everyone else? If I’m not mistaken, Bryan and Grandpa are here.” I said as I scanned the room.

“I told them to wait out back while I make dinner. You boys go on and join them!” She said as she ushered us to the back door.

“I’ll be right out. I’ve gotta make a pit stop!” I said as I wandered to the bathroom.

Once I was finished, I made my way outside to find Brayden and my grandpa chatting by a couple of his hand-made bird feeders. My grandpa was a tinkerer. He always had to fiddle with something. I stood next to my dad and Bryan as they talked. “He’s not being too brutal with him, is he?” I asked as we watched.

“Doesn’t look like it,” Bryan said, “but, we didn’t tell him you two were boyfriends.”

“That’s okay.” I said, “I’d rather be here if he needed a rescue.”

Soon enough, Mom announced that dinner would be ready. We all headed inside and found our spots at the dining room table. The conversation changed from time to time, but ended up on the topic I feared the most.

“So, Matt,” my grandpa started, “have you got a beautiful girlfriend yet?” Oh boy. My heart started pounding when he asked this. How would he respond to Brayden and me?

“Nope!” I said proudly, “No girlfriends for me. Ever.” I said as a silence crept over the room. Awkward! “But, this young man you met earlier is my boyfriend.” I said as I looked into Brayden’s eyes and smiled.

Seconds seemed like minutes as everyone waited for my grandpa’s response. I thought he might say something to me. Instead, he turned to my father and said, “I knew you shouldn’t have raised someone else’s son.”

I looked on at him in shock. A twinge of anger. Confusion. What was I supposed to say to that? I grabbed Brayden’s hand under the table and clutched it.

“Don’t you dare tell me how to raise my own children.” My dad said in response. “That has nothing to do with what he likes in life and you have no place to judge that.” I squeezed Brayden’s hand a little tighter for a moment. He squeezed back.

“Not one word makes Matt or Brayden any different than the type of person you already knew them as.” My mom added. “They are who they are and I will always love them.”

Grandpa had nothing else to say; he sat and thought to himself for the rest of the meal. The rest of us continued to eat and chat until it was time for Brayden and I to head back to school.

Before we could go, my grandpa stopped me. “Matt, I’m sorry for what I said at the table. I was confused and I don’t understand.”

“Thanks, gramps,” I said as I smiled, “it’s a hard concept to understand. For everyone.”

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After we got back from the hospital visit and dinner with my parents, Brayden and I had a quiet night. Brayden had showered and I had somehow kept my hands to myself. I decided it was time for a shower of my own.

When I got back, Brayden was buck-ass naked. Well, there went my chance at staying clean! “Brayden, why do we shower at night if we’re just gonna fuck and get all sweaty?” I said as I tried to get him to laugh.

“Oh, so you think you’re gonna get fucked tonight?” Brayden said, which sure piqued my curiosity.

“What, you don’t want this?” I said as I turned and lowered my towel so he could see about half of my cheeks.

“I didn’t say that!” He said as he stood up and then shut me up with a simple kiss. At least, it started as a simple kiss. His soft, warm tongue pushed its way between my lips and started to explore as he sucked my tongue into his mouth. I followed his every move. He’d test how deep his tongue would go and so would I. He’d feel every inch of my teeth and I'd feel his right back. He tried to tie our tongues in a knot. At first I didn’t even notice his hands had drifted to my ass until his fingers softly caressed my cheeks. What did this boy have in mind?

He broke our kiss as we both took in a deep breath. His hot breath gave me shivers as his lips and tongue tickled my neck. He slowly, passionately moved to my chest. He payed extra attention to my sensitive nipples. I felt his warm breath, followed by a wet kiss, followed by the cooling sensation around each spot his mouth had been. His hands gently caressed my body moved down it inch by inch. I was definitely going to get stamina practice tonight.

My soft cock jumped when his chin brushed against it. Well, it was a soft as it normally was when I was around Brayden. I shuddered as I saw his mouth open and felt his hot breath against the head. He looked up at me and smiled. “Let me know when you’re close. This one’s gotta last.” I gazed into his eyes and saw the desire I had seen in my dream. The hunger. Passion. This better not be another dream!

I nodded in agreement that this blow job was going to last . I wanted it to last as much as he did. I gasped when he closed his eyes and his mouth took hold of my cock. I was rapidly hardening and Brayden continued to suckle on my cock head. His slow, deep motion had me like steel. His tongue glided and swirled around the head whenever he was at the top of his motion.

“Brayden, I’m getting close!” I said as he looked up at me one last time. I had to pull out and close my eyes or I would lose it right there. I pulled him up to be face to face with me. I kissed him and said, “That was the best.” Another kiss. I was turned on by the fact my tongue was exploring the same place my cock had just been. “Now it's my turn,” I said and I kissed him one more time.

I moved my kisses down to his neck as I tried to induce the same sensations he gave me. A gentle, warm breath on his neck followed quickly by a loving kiss. Each kiss incited more and more passion in me. More desire. A thirst for one thing and one thing only.

I traced the outlines of his nipples with my tongue. He gasped. I flicked my tongue over the teat and followed up with a soft kiss. I moved my hand up to join my mouth as I switched nipples. I repeated the tactic. Trace, flick, kiss. I looked up at Brayden as I began to move down. His eyes were glued to mine as I continued down his body. My hands had drifted from his nipples to his ass cheeks as my kisses had reached his abs. I kissed down the middle of them until I reached his belly button. I planned to continue, but his cock was pointed straight up and surprised me as it jabbed into the underside of my jaw. I felt his cool pre-cum as I jerked away in surprise.

I looked up at Brayden and smiled slyly. I slowly licked up from the base of his shaft, only stopping for effect. I took the head of his cock in my mouth and swirled my tongue around. I softly rubbed the underside of his head with my tongue as I prepared for more. I tasted his sweet natural mix as I sucked inch by inch down his cock. As I worked, I practiced at getting closer and closer to his pubes. Once I could feel my nose pressed all the way against him and my lips all the way to the base of his cock, I knew I had mastered it. Mastered him. I was willing to do anything to make my man happy and I was glad if this was just a small piece of the puzzle.

I moaned while his cock was fully inside my mouth, and that caused him to moan. “Holy fuck, Matt. If you do that again I’m gonna lose it!” That was all I needed to know before I left him on the edge. I caught my breath as I saw his wet cock still leaking in front of me. I looked up and said, “What’s next?”

“Now,” he said as looked me in the eyes and smiled, “you get to fuck me. I’m ready. I want to feel you inside of me as you felt me inside of you!” My eyes watered as I knew he meant it. I would have been just as happy letting him fuck me, but it made me that much happier knowing he wanted to feel the same.

We moved over to the flat futon and he got on his hands and knees as I grabbed a condom and lube from the dresser. When I saw his position I said, “No, Brayden. I don’t want to fuck you. I want to be able to look you in the eyes and make love.” My own heart melted as the words poured from my mouth. I hope he felt the same!

He nodded in excitement as I helped to flip him over. I laid down in between his legs and decided to try something he hadn’t. I stared at his asshole as it winked in anticipation. I leaned in and licked. I had no clue what it would be like, but I noticed right away it tasted just like the rest of his body. Clean. Thank God! I continued to swirl my tongue around his puckering entrance as he moaned in excitement. I inserted my tongue in and repeated the process. He squirmed and continued to moan and said, “Holy fuck! I...” he started, “This is... Fuck!” He said with an apparent loss for words.

As I rimmed his asshole, I grabbed the bottle of lube and squirted some on my finger. As soon as I had finished with my tongue, I applied the lube with my fingers. I used one of those lubed-up fingers to gently press against the entrance of his awaiting asshole. He pulsed around my finger as I felt all around his hot insides. I gently pulled in and out to prepare him for later. I slowly continued as I looked back up to Brayden. His eyes were clenched shut and he looked incredibly nervous. “Brayden, if it’s ever too much, tell me to stop. I want you to enjoy this, too!” He nodded without opening his eyes, but I knew he wanted more.

I pulled all the way back with my finger and then lined up another for entry. It took more pressure, but I eased in both fingers. I moved them in and out gently. After I added more lube, I prepared for a third finger. I looked up at him in concern and his eyes were still clenched. When he noticed I had stopped, he opened them and said, “Don’t stop!”

So I didn’t. I have to admit, I don’t know if I would have done this many fingers if he hadn’t done it to me already. I knew it could be too much, but I think we both knew it would help the final step. With my free hand, I grabbed the condom package and ripped it open with the help of my teeth. After I pulled my lubed fingers out to help with the condom, Brayden said, “Hurry up! I want you in me, now!” I thought I was hard before that, but I felt another throb of blood make me even harder.

Once the condom was on, I slopped on more lube and lined up. “Okay Brayden. You’re in charge now.”

“Go slow.” He said as I pushed the head of my cock gently against his well-lubed asshole. “A little faster than that.” I pushed a little harder and felt his asshole open up for me. My senses were already going wild as I could feel the muscles of his asshole contrasting with the cool of the lube. After I had gotten the head in, he said, “Okay, stop for a minute.” I looked up at him and I could see he was taking deep breaths.

“Brayden, is it too much?” I asked, concerned.

“Fuck no. I just need a minute to get used to it. Just like you did,” he said as he smiled weakly. “Okay. Go slow again.” I pushed into him slowly as I felt his asshole wrapping around my cock. Inch by inch I felt his inner warmth. I slowly pushed as I waited for him to tell me to stop. But that never came. I was inside Brayden, to the hilt. And it felt incredible. I fully expected him to tell me to stop and wait, but instead he said, “Ok. Fuck me!”

“I will not fuck you, Brayden. Not yet.” I said as I slowly pulled out. “But, like I said before, I will make love. You’re not just someone I’m fucking to get my rocks off.” I said as I gently pushed in. And then out. Slowly. Carefully.

Brayden looked at me and smiled. “I love you so much, Matt!” I started to move my hips around as I hastened my pace. I watched Brayden’s eyes with every movement. I wanted to see the feelings in his eyes as everything happened. I don’t know exactly what I did, but Brayden’s eyes widened as he tensed up and said, “Oh, fuck! I’m cumming!” I saw squirt after squirt shoot up and hit his chest. As he caught his breath and looked into my eyes, I got that last trigger I needed to push me over the edge. I pulled out and took the condom off as I prepared to cum. Brayden grabbed my cock and pulled me closer as he urged me to orgasm. My body tensed up as he stroked my throbbing cock. I let loose. I could feel his hand milking the cum out of me as I came all over him.

That,” A voice said from the door, “was fucking hot!”




To be continued...
 
Oh-er!:mad: “That,” A voice said from the door, “was fucking hot!”
 
I know I told you in my PM how fantastic this chapter is from start to finish. The sexy dream sequence, the banter with Jason, the hospital visit and visit to see Matt's parents ... They're all beautifully crafted and show us so much about the guys and what really motivates and drives their lives. You show us the inside story, not just the veneer and that sets this story apart from so many others. Then there was the final scene in Chapter 16. Auto beat me to saying what I wanted to say and that is: It was so fucking hot!

I was so hard and so close to blowing my load when I read your next to final paragraph:

Brayden looked at me and smiled. “I love you so much, Matt!” I started to move my hips around as I hastened my pace. I watched Brayden’s eyes with every movement. I wanted to see the feelings in his eyes as everything happened. I don’t know exactly what I did, but Brayden’s eyes widened as he tensed up and said, “Oh, fuck! I’m cumming!” I saw squirt after squirt shoot up and hit his chest. As he caught his breath and looked into my eyes, I got that last trigger I needed to push me over the edge. I pulled out and took the condom off as I prepared to cum. Brayden grabbed my cock and pulled me closer as he urged me to orgasm. My body tensed up as he stroked my throbbing cock. I let loose. I could feel his hand milking the cum out of me as I came all over him.

I thought/felt/believed as I read the final words "as I came all over him" that I'd take another stroke or two, feel my nuts tighten, my cock throb and shoot my load.

But then I read that one last sentence. I was shocked. Literally scared by it. Taken totally by surprise! I was left there stunned. My rock hard cock still firmly gripped in my right hand. My shiny cock head with its dribble of pre still leaking from its lips. Too frozen to finish myself off as I had certainly intended to.

As my cock finally softened I understood just how deeply you have drawn me into your story. How real you have made it for me and I guess for most of your readers. It is masterful and powerful and intoxicatingly sexy. Don't worry about me, by now I have cum rereading it and throughly enjoyed it to the last sticky drop. Thanks so much for what you share. I
 
And he is a frisbee player? Imagine if he was a swimmer. Speaking of swimmers, a few thousand of them blasted through my jeans on reading this. Can you give us some warning to unleash the beast before you write hot stuff like this the next time? Whew! I need to turn on the A/C now!
 
Lordy, Matt! I don't think I can add much more to the sentiments stated above. You have certainly opened an entirely new phase in your writing. Not only the compassionate part of Matt, but the deep sensual exchange between he and Brayden. It's going to be hard trying to get to sleep tonight... One thing they both have to learn, however, is to make sure the door is locked......... :-) I wish it had been me making that last statement. Great chapter!

Craiger
 
I said Id write to this when i read it all. i did and it is like other guys say so fucking hot! I fucking jizzed so hard to that last part you wrote. If were were the guy at the door i couldnt be wriitn this now cuz wed be fucking all three of us on that fusion and there'd be so much jizz flying i could drown both of you happy. you guys are really in love and that makes it so good when your fucking and suckin for each other like you do. jakcing your jizz and suckin a guys jizz out is like the most guys can do for each other and you make it fun like it is. i liked your folks. they did good. this is like the best story. now get us more of it.
 
Oh-er!:mad: “That,” A voice said from the door, “was fucking hot!”

Thank you Auto, was it you at the door?? ;)

I know I told you in my PM how fantastic this chapter is from start to finish. The sexy dream sequence, the banter with Jason, the hospital visit and visit to see Matt's parents ... They're all beautifully crafted and show us so much about the guys and what really motivates and drives their lives. You show us the inside story, not just the veneer and that sets this story apart from so many others. Then there was the final scene in Chapter 16. Auto beat me to saying what I wanted to say and that is: It was so fucking hot!

I was so hard and so close to blowing my load when I read your next to final paragraph:

I thought/felt/believed as I read the final words "as I came all over him" that I'd take another stroke or two, feel my nuts tighten, my cock throb and shoot my load.

But then I read that one last sentence. I was shocked. Literally scared by it. Taken totally by surprise! I was left there stunned. My rock hard cock still firmly gripped in my right hand. My shiny cock head with its dribble of pre still leaking from its lips. Too frozen to finish myself off as I had certainly intended to.

As my cock finally softened I understood just how deeply you have drawn me into your story. How real you have made it for me and I guess for most of your readers. It is masterful and powerful and intoxicatingly sexy. Don't worry about me, by now I have cum rereading it and throughly enjoyed it to the last sticky drop. Thanks so much for what you share.

When I started writing 16, I had no intention of that ending the way it did. As I was writing, I got an idea, and, well, it stuck. You and everyone else will see how this ending has an impact on the rest of the story quite soon. The reality is what makes this so special to me and everyone else. Thanks! I think I've said this many times now, but I really do write this as if I were the one in Matt's shoes. I've thrown myself into the story and I'm really loving the response!!

And he is a frisbee player? Imagine if he was a swimmer. Speaking of swimmers, a few thousand of them blasted through my jeans on reading this. Can you give us some warning to unleash the beast before you write hot stuff like this the next time? Whew! I need to turn on the A/C now!

[-X Don't diss the Frisbee guys!! And the swimmer, well, that's what Brayden's there for! Here's the warning you wanted for 17. ;)

Lordy, Matt! I don't think I can add much more to the sentiments stated above. You have certainly opened an entirely new phase in your writing. Not only the compassionate part of Matt, but the deep sensual exchange between he and Brayden. It's going to be hard trying to get to sleep tonight... One thing they both have to learn, however, is to make sure the door is locked......... :-) I wish it had been me making that last statement. Great chapter!

Craiger

I think a part of all of us wanted to be right there, myself included! Even after I had first written that, I didn't know who was there. But by the time it was posted, I did. Sometimes, it just cums to me, I guess!

I said Id write to this when i read it all. i did and it is like other guys say so fucking hot! I fucking jizzed so hard to that last part you wrote. If were were the guy at the door i couldnt be wriitn this now cuz wed be fucking all three of us on that fusion and there'd be so much jizz flying i could drown both of you happy. you guys are really in love and that makes it so good when your fucking and suckin for each other like you do. jakcing your jizz and suckin a guys jizz out is like the most guys can do for each other and you make it fun like it is. i liked your folks. they did good. this is like the best story. now get us more of it.

Glad to see you caught up, Billy! But you did catch up awfully fast... did you read anything other than the sex scenes?? :) Do I need to quiz you on some things? :) I hope you realize I'm teasing! More of it is cumming, VERY soon! I can't promise a specific date, but Chapter 17 is written.

So, unfortunately for all of you who are waiting for the next chapter, I have to say that it's not quite ready. It's done, and I have a start on the next chapter, but like the rest, they will be posted in due time. I am going to be writing to everyone who's commented just as a personal thank you to those who have stuck with it. If you've read Lost in a Dream and would like a thank you, send me a PM and comment! If I haven't sent you a PM by the end of tonight (10/10/12), then send me a PM to see if I forgot! ;) Believe me when I say the reaction is what makes all of this worth it. I had no idea this is how it would turn out and I am oh so thankful it has. So from me to you for the billionth time, thank you!

Matt
 
Yesterday I read over this last chapter with the excitement of seeing what's going on in the world of Matt and, to my delight, I got a lot more than I bargained for.
Today I am still racking my brain trying to figure out who the voice at the door is!
I got rather excited to see the most recent post was from justanothershyguy only to find out that more waiting is required until we get to find out who is at the door.
I did enjoy the rest of chapter 16 especially where Matt and Brayden get to the hospital only to find that Matts parents had already been released and forgotten to mention it. I'm also looking forward to possibly getting to hear more from Dean.
All in all a GREAT chapter, I'm held in suspense until the next.

@justanothershyguy
I know you wish to wait until you post the next chapter but please don't wait too long, the anticipation is killing me!
 
Yesterday I read over this last chapter with the excitement of seeing what's going on in the world of Matt and, to my delight, I got a lot more than I bargained for.
Today I am still racking my brain trying to figure out who the voice at the door is!
I got rather excited to see the most recent post was from justanothershyguy only to find out that more waiting is required until we get to find out who is at the door.
I did enjoy the rest of chapter 16 especially where Matt and Brayden get to the hospital only to find that Matts parents had already been released and forgotten to mention it. I'm also looking forward to possibly getting to hear more from Dean.
All in all a GREAT chapter, I'm held in suspense until the next.

@justanothershyguy
I know you wish to wait until you post the next chapter but please don't wait too long, the anticipation is killing me!

Glad to see you've returned! I really didn't mean to wait this long, unfortunately things got busy!

Anyway, I can tell everyone now that this is the post you've been waiting for *drumroll, please* No more anticipation to find out who is at the door. In the end, I think I will still surprise you, as I didn't expect it to turn out like it did!

Anyway, I'm really, really happy with how it turned out and I'm really proud of how the whole story has gone and is going. Thank you for being my loyal readers!

Matt

Lost in a Dream, Chapter 17

‘That was fucking hot!’ The words rang through my head like a broken record. ‘That was fucking hot...’ The familiar voice echoed in my head. ‘... Fucking hot...’ My eyes widened as I looked down at Brayden. He was absolutely covered in cum. My cum. His cum. Our cum. His hand was still wrapped firmly around my hard, leaking cock. My mind started to relive the amazing sex that preceded what my eyes now . . .

I snapped back to reality and turned my head rapidly towards the door. My heart jumped into my throat. I felt beyond mortified. “What the fuck!” I blurted as I saw Lukas and Evan standing in the doorway. I tried to cover myself, but I realized it didn’t matter. There was nothing I could hide that they hadn’t seen already. “What are you guys doing here?!” I half whispered, half yelled.

“Oh,” Lukas started, “Uh...”

His pause gave Evan a chance to answer instead. “I texted Lukas and asked if we could talk and he said he’d only talk if you were there."

“Uh, okay.” I said and then asked, “So why are you guys holding hands?”

Both of them looked down and immediately separated. Their cheeks flushed with embarrassment.

“Oh, please,” Brayden said, “that’s the least of your embarrassment right now. Looks like Matt and I weren’t the only one’s who enjoyed that fuck!”

I giggled at Brayden’s comment when I looked down and saw Evan and Lukas’s predicament. Evan looked down and tried to hide himself. “Evan, please. We’re identical twins.” I said trying to lighten the mood. “Besides, you definitely don’t need me for help anymore, Lukas.”

“Yes I do!” he contested.

“No, you don’t!” I said calmly with a smile. “You were just holding Evan’s hand. You didn’t even seem to notice until I mentioned it. Believe me when I say this, Lukas. You don’t need my help with this!” From the look in his eyes I could tell he was pleading for my help. Our silent conversation ended as I shook my head back and forth.

“Ok Lukas,” Evan said as he turned around to leave, “let’s go talk.” After they walked out the door, Brayden and I laid down on our backs on the futon. I tried to catch my breath and calm my heart as we relaxed.

“Holy shit, Matt!” a familiar voice said from the doorway. I bolted upright and saw Jason standing there with a shit-eating grin smothering his face. His eyes seemed to be focused on my shock and nudity. He shook his head and laughed to himself as he started to walk away. “Get yourself cleaned up and open a damn window. It fuckin’ reeks of sex in here!” He shut the door in his exit and I collapsed next to Brayden a second time.

I couldn’t help but laugh at the whole situation. “Next time, we gotta lock the door and wait until later,” I said and with that Brayden joined in my the laughing.

After our laughing fit ended, I rolled onto my side and looked towards Brayden. He turned his head and smiled as our eyes connected. For the first time since we were interrupted, I relaxed. His eyes soothed me. His soul beckoned for me to calm down, and I did.

I didn’t really know what to say. I felt like I wanted to say something, but I didn’t know what. Or even about what. As I thought, Brayden saved me from my mental conundrum. “Was that everything you expected?” he said as our eyes reconnected.

I thought for a couple seconds as I bit my lower lip. “You know what?” I started, “I didn’t really know what to expect. It was definitely better than what I hoped. Was it everything you expected, babe?”

“Yeah!” Brayden said as his face lit up. “Sure it hurt, but I thought it would. I had no idea how good it could feel at the same time.”

“So I did okay?” I asked, concerned about my performance.

“Absolutely!” He said with a big smile plastered over his face. “You were fantastic. It was fantastic!”

I leaned forward, pressed my lips against his and we kissed. “As were you!” I said when are lips parted. We laid there enjoying the moment as we stared into one another’s eyes.

Several long, wonderful moments passed and we both decided to take Jason’s advice and get cleaned up. I opened the window before we headed to the shower. Brayden tried to convince me to share and save water, but I told him I wasn’t ready to be caught twice in one night.

Somehow, after we returned to the room, we managed to keep our hands to ourselves and catch up on some homework. After a sufficiently terrifying yet exciting evening, the night had finally settled down. We had finally settled down.

I went to bed that night comfortably in the arms of my warm lover. I fit neatly into the contours of his body, like he did to mine. Were we perfect for each other? I was starting to think so. My eyes closed and I drifted off into sleep with a soft smile across my face.

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I didn’t really know how it happened, but I found myself under the hot spray of a morning shower. I liked a good, hot shower to wake me up in the morning.

I had wrongly assumed that this was a normal shower, though, when a pair of firm but gentle hands rubbed soap across my back. I turned my head slightly to the side to see Brayden had joined me. I smiled, but realized we were still in the communal dorm showers, albeit behind the curtain. “Brayden!” I whispered, “What if we get caught?”

“As long as you don’t make too much noise, we won’t!” he said as his hands began to rub the tension out of my shoulders. That felt good. That felt damn good. His thumbs gently and masterfully pushed and prodded the tension from my shoulders and neck. A soft moan escaped my mouth as I closed my eyes and leaned back against him.

“Like that? Shh!” he said as he touched a finger to my lips. I looked up at him and saw the love in his eyes. He pushed his hips forward and I felt the head of his cock push and then rub as it slipped against my left ass cheek.

As my head rested against his shoulder, he turned his head so his lips could meet mine. My left hand fell to my side and found Brayden’s semi-hard cock. I gently stroked it as his right hand snaked its way under my arm and to my own cock. I was semi-hard like he was, but quickly rising to the occasion. It only took three slow, long strokes until I was hard, throbbing, and leaking. I matched his rhythm and could feel the heat of his own hard cock trapped between my hand and my hip.

I felt Brayden begin to speed up. I tried to match his motion as I rested against his body. His lips pressed firmly against my lips for the second time. This time, his tongue forced its way into my mouth. It was so soft and gentle as it moved about. I tried my best to reciprocate the feelings his tongue was giving me, but I couldn’t focus on multitasking like he could.

I was fast approaching my limit as Brayden’s tongue danced in my mouth and his hand stroked the pleasure right out of me. It made me feel like I was a puppet and he was the master. I had no control over my own body and I didn’t care. I was on the verge of euphoria. The more he worked, the more it seemed like he knew my body better than I did. Stroke and squeeze. Stroke and twist. Whatever he did, I could feel the ultimate pressure building up in my loins.

He released the kiss once he felt my body start to tense up. He must have been able to feel my balls rise and hug my body. He knew what was coming. I knew, too. One last stroke after the kiss, and all I saw was stars.

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I opened my eyes and tried to regain my senses. I looked down and sighed as I rubbed my eyes. Brayden’s hand was wrapped firmly around my spent cock and my stomach had a few globs of hot cum rapidly cooling in the early morning air. I realized how cold I was and that I had forgotten to close the window before bed last night. A rush of cold air passed over me and I shivered.

“Had another sexy dream, I see?” Brayden said softly.

“Yeah. Apparently I really did want a shower with you!” I said with a laugh. “Wait, what are you doing awake so early?” I said as I realized it was still quite dark in the room. “Did I wake you?”

“No, you didn’t wake me.” He said using a finger to scoop up a dollop of cum. “I didn’t sleep very well. And then I saw and felt you squirming around, so I pulled up the covers and saw you were hard and leaking! I grabbed you and it was like my hand was the trigger and your cock was the gun.” Brayden said as he scooped another glob of cum onto his finger. This time, he offered it to me and I happily accepted. “I just didn’t sleep well.” He said, then added, “At all.”

“Aww,” I said as I turned my head to face him, “what’s wrong?” It appeared as if his eyes held a heavy burden for him. It was probably just because he hadn’t gotten much sleep.

“It’s nothing bad, really. It’s just ...” He started and then stopped to think. He took a deep breath and said, “It’s just, I didn’t know what would you think of it!”

“Brayden, I love you and you love me. If there’s ever anything, we can get over it. I’m sure of that.” I said with a smile.

“Okay,” he said as he took a deep breath. After he exhaled, he continued. “Last night I saw Evan and Lukas out of the corner of my eye as soon as they walked into the room. And I got even hornier with them watching.” He looked at me as if hoping for a good response. I thought for a few moments before I realized I hadn’t said anything. “Matt? Please say something!” he pleaded.

I smiled and said, “Sorry! I didn’t expect that!” I looked at him as he sighed and relaxed. “Well, I didn’t know what to expect!”

“You never seem to!” He said with a smirk.

I shot him a playful glare as I continued, “But I’m glad you told me. Now I know that I have to be the one to lock the doors and shut the blinds!” I giggled as Brayden rolled his eyes.

“You know I wouldn’t do anything like that to you, right?” He asked as his smile faded.

I smiled again, “Yes, my love.” He smiled, so I leaned forward and kissed him tenderly on the lips. It did make me wonder, though. Was I enough for him? I had to shake that thought off, though. Of course I was. He said so!

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Friday was mostly a normal day for me, aside from waking up with my boyfriend’s hand wrapped around my cock. I made it through all of my classes without trouble. I talked with Kevin in Spanish and he told me when his and Aiden’s game was. So I now had something else to look forward to on Saturday.

I was on my way back to my room when I realized I was walking behind Evan and Lukas. And they didn’t notice me! I followed them back to Lukas’ room and was standing at the door when Lukas began to shut it.

“Oh my God, Matt!” he said as he clutched his heart. “How did you get there so fast?” he exclaimed.

“I followed you guys into the building and you didn’t notice me!” I said smiling and nodding toward Evan, “So. Did you guys talk?”

Lukas smiled as big as I had ever seen him smile. It was the smile I had hoped to see ever since he first told me about his love for Evan. He turned around as Evan walked forward and they grabbed each other’s hand. “Yup!” Lukas said as they looked at one another and smiled. They look great when they’re happy!

“Good, because I couldn’t stand being mad at one and sad for the other!” I said and gave them each a quick hug. “So, what are you then?” I asked. I hoped to draw out if they had decided on their relationship.

“What do you mean?” Lukas said as his forehead scrunched in confusion.

“Well,” I started, “are you fuck buddies? Boyfriends? Just friends?”

Evan looked at me and laughed. “Lukas is my boyfriend, and I am his!”

I smiled at both of them and my phone started to ring. I pulled out my phone and saw a number I didn’t recognize. I congratulated them and told them I’d talk to them later.

“Hello?”

“Hi, is this Matt?” A familiar voice said from the other line.

I thought for a moment as I wondered who this was, “Yep, that’s me. Who is this? I don’t have the number saved.”

“Oh, sorry! This is Dean. From the hospital,” he said as he clarified the familiar voice.

“I knew your voice sounded familiar! Are you getting released, then?” I said as I walked towards my room.

“Yep!” He said, excitedly. Or, at least, he sounded excited. I would have been ecstatic to get out if I had been in the hospital as long as he had been. I told him I’d give him a call when I was at the hospital.

Since I was probably going to miss my afternoon classes, I wrote my professors a quick note that explained the situation. I may have left out a couple details, but what they didn’t know wouldn’t hurt them!

The drive to the hospital was fortunately uneventful. My mind wandered a bit more than normal at first, so I turned up the radio and sang my heart out. It was a great distraction and before too long I was there. I got out of the car and waited for Dean outside the front door of the hospital for a few short minutes after I called him.

As he walked out, he looked like a new man. He didn’t seem gloomy anymore. I can’t believe I hadn’t noticed this side of him before! It wasn’t just that he was practically glowing; he looked good. No, he looked great! His dark hair blew around in the wind as I took note of his appearance. He was taller than me, but shorter than Brayden. He was muscled, but not muscular like Kevin or Aiden. His dark eyes were a compliment to his brilliant smile. As I scanned his body, I couldn’t help but notice the bulge in his jeans. ‘I wonder what he looks like naked...’ I thought as he approached. Wait, why did I care about that? Why did I just think that?

Before long, Dean and I were on the road. Fortunately, he had a lot to talk about and I got to listen. I was glad that Dean brought up most of our conversation topics, because I’d have run out of conversational topics long ago. After I parked next to the dorm he lived in, he thanked me for the ride. I told him I was glad to help out for a friend.

“You know,” he said as he unbuckled and turned his head, “my sister would have loved you. You’re a lot like her.”

“I wish I could have, Dean. I hope it’s a long time before I know the pain you feel.” I said with a weak smile as he opened the door and stepped out of the car. As he walked away, he waved at me and mouthed what I thought was ‘thank you.’

The drive back to my dorm was quiet. I didn’t have the music on since it was such a short drive, but I wish I would have. It would have stopped me from over-thinking. Did I see Dean so much differently because I was horny? ‘Yeah, that’s gotta be it.’ I thought.

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While Brayden and I were cuddled together as we watched a movie at Jason’s, I had to resist the hardest temptation I ever had. It was like he was a Christmas present and I had to wait just a couple more hours to open it. Every time I’d look at him, I’d throb a little. I’d leak a little. A shudder would travel up my body. I really was that horny.

It was just Kelsey and Jason in the room aside from Brayden and me. I have to admit that I was really glad Kelsey was there. If she wasn’t, I’d probably have straddled Brayden’s legs and have my tongue down his throat by now. Jason had already seen us naked, but I didn’t want to make Kelsey uncomfortable. At one point in the movie, Brayden set his hand on my thigh and I jumped in my spot.

Jason saw me flinch, but I don’t think he saw Brayden’s hand. “Jeez, Matt, this isn’t even a horror flick!” He said with a laugh. Brayden’s hand travelled up my thigh and I shuddered again. This time, I gasped a little. Thankfully I didn’t moan.

“Yeah, I know,” I said to Jason as I tried to ignore Brayden’s movement, “I guess I’m just a little on edge tonight.”

“Want a beer?” He asked as he got up and went to his mini-fridge.

“I’m not 21.” I said.

“Who cares? I’m not a cop. It’ll take the edge off!” Jason said as he offered me the beer in his hand.

“Not tonight, Jase. Maybe another time.” Brayden looked at me, concerned. I think he knew there was something more to that, but I also think he knew not to pursue it with Jason and Kelsey around.

Somehow, Brayden and I were able to keep our hands mostly to ourselves throughout the rest of the movie. After we got to our room, well, that was a different story. Once the lock on the door clicked, we latched together at the lips.

I invaded his mouth with a fiery passion. My hands rested at the back of his head, gently holding it in place. His hands moved to the back of my head where he softly ran his fingers through my hair. I think the force behind my tongue’s assault surprised Brayden; he didn’t reciprocate my actions at first. When he did, his tongue snaked and squirmed its way into my mouth. It felt so smooth and I moaned when he tickled the hard palate. Our tongues twisted together as they tarried; neither of us wanted to be the one to stop. My tongue slid along his teeth and his along mine. This wasn’t about exploration or something new. I enjoyed the warmth he brought to my mouth and my heart, and judging by the hard tool in his pants, he enjoyed my presence too.

As we continued to make out, my hands dropped to his waist and I worked at the last remaining resistance: his belt. After that was undone, his pants dropped like a lead weight. I was still lip-locked with him, so I couldn’t see what was left. My gentle touch could tell he had underwear of some kind. Further exploration lead me to discover that his hard cock was trapped in a pair of boxer briefs. My favorite part of anything wasn’t what color or what design, rather the object of my lust found inside. Instead of pulling those down on the spot, I decided to let my hands travel upwards on his body.

I let my fingers graze along the edges of each muscle on his chest. I quivered at the vibrations as he softly moaned in my mouth when I tweaked each of his nipples. Satisfied with the reaction, I stopped and started to pull his shirt off. He raised his hands to help, and when we got to neck level, we broke the kiss and I pulled his shirt the rest of the way off. As he pulled me toward the futon, I finally got a look at his boxer briefs. Their black color was a compliment to his skin, and his excitement was evident. If you couldn’t tell he was rock hard, you would have certainly noticed the glimmer of light in the spot where his pre-cum leaked through.

He started to kiss me again. His tongue invaded my mouth first this time and his hands attempted to strip me of my clothes. I broke the kiss and stopped him; I had better plans. He looked at me, confused, so I smiled slyly and told him to sit. He still looked confused, but he obeyed.

I began my strip show by clutching my shirt with my arms crossed in front of me. With my feet planted, I leaned back as I moved my hips back and forth. Inch by inch I raised my shirt. Just before I thought my navel was visible, I turned my body around in one continuous motion. Instead of leaning back, I pushed my ass out as much as I could. I continued to move my hips back and forth as I oh-so-slowly worked my shirt up my back. Once my hands were at chest level, I rotated back around and pulled my shirt off in one last motion. I threw the shirt off to the side and began to rotate my hips in a circle, like I had an invisible, slow-moving hula hoop spinning around me. I unsnapped the button on my snug jeans and carefully unzipped. I wasn’t worried anything would get caught, I just wanted to take my time.

I looked down at Brayden and saw him biting his lower lip. I continued my slow strip as I rocked my hips back and forth and back and forth, each motion inched my jeans down my legs. The tightness of the jeans brought my boxers down along with them. I turned around as I thought I might be showing too much. I could feel the cool air on my exposed cheeks as my jeans slid the rest of the way down my legs. As I stepped out of those, I gripped the waistband of my boxers. A few inches and there would be nothing left to hide. I turned around and revealed to Brayden just how hard I was. I was still covered, but I leaked pre-cum through each new part of cloth my cock head touched. With my erection still covered, I grabbed the bottom of the boxers and scrunched them up. I turned back around so my back faced Brayden. My ass was covered again, so I moved my hips back and forth and inched my boxers down to reveal the rest of my ass.

I bent down and pulled my boxers all of the way off. I made sure my ass stuck as high in the air as it could go. After they were off, I rotated my hips a couple more times and turned around to face Brayden in all of my glory.

He gasped when he saw my cock. It stuck straight out and bounced as I walked forward and straddled his still-covered cock. I looked down and saw the pre-cum ooze out as my cock rested against his stomach. His hand travelled to my cock and he scooped up a bit of pre-cum that had begun to trickle out and on to his stomach. He offered it to me, and I graciously accepted. As I sucked on his finger, I scooped up some on my own finger and offered it to him.

Once we pulled our fingers out of each other’s mouth, we exchanged several kisses. In the process, I pulled his boxer briefs as far down as I could. Once we broke the last kiss, he stepped out and said, “Okay. My turn!”

“No!” I said as he laid me down on the futon, “I need you in me, right now, one way or another.” I pleaded to him.

He smiled and said, “Okay, we’ll suck each other at the same time. Whoever gets close first, pat the other on the ass and we’ll know when to slow down. We’re gonna cum at the same time.” I was so excited for that moment that I didn’t think one cum would be enough for my cock to soften.

With my drooling cock pointing at his face and his drooling cock pointing at mine, I felt a familiar warmth engulf my cock as I started on him. I did my best to focus on the task at hand (well, technically at mouth). With all the pleasure he was giving me, I had a real struggle to keep focused. Each swirl of his tongue around the head of my cock would make me moan. Each moan made him moan. The back and forth action, pleasure for pleasure, caused us to race towards the finish line. When I felt his nose in my pubes and my head at the back of his throat, I had to tap. He slowed his actions, but must have been close, because he never quit sucking. Once I felt his cock at the back of my throat, I could tell he was close, too.

I moaned one more time, and that sent him over the edge. I felt him tense up in my arms and take my cock to the hilt. He returned the moan I gave to him, sending me into a blissful orgasm. I pulled off his cock a little so I could gather as much cum as I could in my mouth. He did the same. Shot after shot flooded my mouth. I let some of his cum dribble out of the corner of my mouth so there wasn’t too much in at once.

After he turned around with his cum-filled mouth, he looked me in the eyes and swallowed. I took that as permission to swallow his load, so I swallowed his sweet essence. After it was all down, I kind of missed it. I missed how sweet it was. How hot it was. He quickly returned his lips to mine and we made out all over again. There was a slight after taste of cum on his tongue as both of us searched for anything we might have missed.

The only extra cum either of us found was what had dribbled out of the corner of my mouth. It wasn’t much, but it was enough. He shared it with me and we both savored the flavor as it swirled between mouths and tongues. It wasn’t about the sex between us anymore tonight. I could feel the cool air as it tickled my wet, soft cock.

“That was the best yet,” I said as I smiled and looked into Brayden’s eyes, “I loved that mutual pleasure. We have to do that more!”

He smiled in return and agreed, “Yeah. It’s too bad we can’t fuck each other at the same time!” Too bad, indeed. “The lead up was everything in that, Matt. You teased me so much. But I loved every minute of it.” He said as his smile widened. “I love you so much!”

“I love you too, Brayden. And I don’t just love you for what you do to me, I love you for who you are!” I said as I kissed him.

We laid in a loving embrace for several long minutes. I enjoyed each one more than the last; I didn’t want him to let go. I didn’t want to get up. But we both did so we could shower and go to bed. After our separate showers, we returned to the room and got in bed, naked and dry. Everything was just right. He made me feel safe, loved and comfortable at the same time. He was just as much a part of me as I was. I hope I made him feel the same!




To be continued...
 
Well, that was certainly worth the agonizing cliffhanger..... :-) Bravo, Matt. I truly like the way you are writing this. It is extremely hard to not feel every kiss, caress, and intimate experience between Matt and Brayden. So much so, that I may become "lost in a dream" tonight. At least I hope........... Thanks!!!!

Craiger
 
I can hardly believe the intensity of feeling you convey through your writing. Your characters don't just come to life; they are alive! They are not realistic; they are real. Their lives twist and turn with all the unexpectedness and randomness of modern life. To be so close to these guys as their first love opens before them and in them and between them is a pleasure to share.

At the end of Chapter 16, I was left stunned and still achingly hard. Now, after reading this ... twice or more start to finish ... I am so completely satisfied ... as a reader, as a friend and, of course sexually. This chapter has truly drained me and I have only you to thank.

At the end you wrote this short paragraph: “That was the best yet,” I said as I smiled and looked into Brayden’s eyes, “I loved that mutual pleasure. We have to do that more!”, I couldn't have agreed more. "We have to do that more."
 
Hr makes your story sound nice its all he says it is. he knows that stuff but i can tell you its jizzed up fucking hot! like i to;d you your a jizz master and got a magic cock. tell that to hr make me jizz every time reading this. im jizzed that your going on telling this story even though it like ended with them happy and everything in bed again. there's still oots of stuff they havent done i bet you tell it all. maybe they shud havwe a 4 way with those guys at the door next time. thatd be really hot ha
 
Another hot chapter!

Thanks again, Auto!

Well, that was certainly worth the agonizing cliffhanger..... :-) Bravo, Matt. I truly like the way you are writing this. It is extremely hard to not feel every kiss, caress, and intimate experience between Matt and Brayden. So much so, that I may become "lost in a dream" tonight. At least I hope........... Thanks!!!!

Craiger

You're welcome! Thanks for reading!

I can hardly believe the intensity of feeling you convey through your writing. Your characters don't just come to life; they are alive! They are not realistic; they are real. Their lives twist and turn with all the unexpectedness and randomness of modern life. To be so close to these guys as their first love opens before them and in them and between them is a pleasure to share.

At the end of Chapter 16, I was left stunned and still achingly hard. Now, after reading this ... twice or more start to finish ... I am so completely satisfied ... as a reader, as a friend and, of course sexually. This chapter has truly drained me and I have only you to thank.

At the end you wrote this short paragraph: “That was the best yet,” I said as I smiled and looked into Brayden’s eyes, “I loved that mutual pleasure. We have to do that more!”, I couldn't have agreed more. "We have to do that more."

They really are alive, HR. And it's all about to get even more real for them.

Hr makes your story sound nice its all he says it is. he knows that stuff but i can tell you its jizzed up fucking hot! like i to;d you your a jizz master and got a magic cock. tell that to hr make me jizz every time reading this. im jizzed that your going on telling this story even though it like ended with them happy and everything in bed again. there's still oots of stuff they havent done i bet you tell it all. maybe they shud havwe a 4 way with those guys at the door next time. thatd be really hot ha

Oooh, I'm a jizz master now! Another acclaim I am unsure I can live up to! You know, I don't have to tell anything to HR when he's reading what you write, too... Ha!

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Okay, everyone. Good news! I have returned with tidings and Chapter 18! I delayed it a couple of days because I've been working on 19, also, and didn't want to get way behind. So, without further delay, I bring to you...

Lost in a Dream, Chapter 18

I awoke Saturday morning to a cold and lonely bed. After a few minutes, I decided that I wasn’t going to be able to fall back asleep. I rolled over and saw the clock flash 12:00. Damn. I could see I was in my own room, so I got up and got dressed.

After I left my room, I wandered across the hall and heard what sounded like a party going on in Jason’s room. I knocked because I was curious and a peppy Jason answered the door. “Hey, Matt!” he said with excitement and a big smile.

“Hey Jase,” I said flatly.

His smile quickly faded into a curious frown, “That’s it? Are you okay?” He asked as I glanced around the room. I didn’t recognize everyone in the room, but I noticed Kelsey, Brayden, Evan, Lukas, Aiden, Kevin and even Dean. Why was Dean there? Nobody knew him but Brayden and me.

“Yeah, I guess I’m okay. Just not feelin’ it today.” I said. I didn’t know what my deal was.

“Oh, okay! Come on in!” he said as he ushered me into the room, as happy as he was when he saw me. Now that I had gotten an even better look at everyone, I couldn’t help but notice how happy they all were. Whenever someone noticed me, they smiled. Not just some weak smile to acknowledge my presence, but as if they really wanted me there. Everyone smiled like Brayden does when we look each other in the eyes. And for some reason, it didn’t make me feel any better. If anything, it made me feel worse. Why was I the cloudy day at this sunshine party?

I felt like an awkward teenager all over again. I was the one no one talked to, even though everyone seemed so happy to see me. Every once and a while, someone would glance my way. If I noticed it, they’d look away and continue to chat up whoever it was they were with. I started to pay more attention to Brayden and who he talked to. I didn’t recognize him, but the longer I watched him, the more voices I started to hear. It wasn’t ever anything specific, in fact, most of it was incredibly vague. I could never recognize whose voice was saying it, either.

... He was good, but you were better ...

That voice wasn’t Brayden’s, though, I’d recognize his anywhere. The more I looked, the more I felt wronged. He was perfectly happy despite my glum attitude.

... It just wasn’t quite enough ... He’s got room for improvement ...

Why did all of this hurt so much? I didn’t even know what they were talking about. The more I thought about it and the more I watched Brayden talk, the louder everything got. It started to sound like they were yelling. All of them, yelling in my head. My head spun as I sat in silence. I felt numb. I felt lost.

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Fortunately for my sanity, that was just a dream. I woke up warm and cozy next to my lovely Brayden. That was the best feeling! Brayden’s arm was draped over my chest and I felt a gentle tweak at my nipple. He was awake!

I turned my head and rolled over to face him, and I was greeted with his genuine, bright smile. “Good morning, love!” he said.

This was so different from that dream. I didn’t feel so gloomy anymore. His smile broke through the grey clouds like a ray of sunshine. I smiled back and said, “Good morning! Did ya sleep well?”

“Yeah, I did! Thank you for making it all better! I know now I’ve got nothing to worry about!” he said as he leaned forward and gave me a kiss. “Can I ask you a question?”

I giggled and said, “You just did! If there’s another, yes. You can always ask.”

He rolled his eyes at my humor, but smiled as he asked, “Why don’t you drink? I mean, surely someone has offered you some.”

I bit my bottom lip as I thought for a few moments. “Well, I guess when I was in the closet, I was afraid I would come out.” I said with a pause, “But, I guess that cat’s outta the bag. I s’pose it can’t hurt now as long as I’m in control!”

“Good!” he said with a smile, “because Kevin told me they were probably going to have another party after the game. I think it would be fun to unwind a little bit!”

I looked at him and smiled again, “Yeah, it would be fun.” I still had a little reservation about it, but I trusted Brayden. I looked over at the clock and saw it was 9:50. “Oh crap!” I exclaimed, “Frisbee at 10 and I still have to wake Jase!”

I practically jumped out of bed and raced to his door. I rapped on it a couple times. Fortunately, he was up. I went back to my room and got dressed and told Brayden to get dressed too. “Come on!” I said, “You’re playing this time. You’ll like it!”

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After a couple hours, we had finished with our frisbee game. Brayden warned us that he’d have to take it easy so he didn’t get hurt, and Jason and I understood. Thankfully he didn’t and he told us that he enjoyed the game.

We decided to go out to buffet style pizza out of tradition. Or, at least, we decided we’d start a new tradition. We invited others, but all except Kelsey had eaten by the time we finished with our game.

Once we got back, I noticed I had a text from Evan. He wanted to talk about something before we went to the football game. So I told him I’d come up and see him.

When I walked into the room, he asked, “Have you found yourself to be hornier lately?”

Interesting question. Where was he going with this? “Uh ...” I said as I thought, “More than normal yesterday afternoon, but that’s about it.”

“Oh ...” he said, almost dejected, “Not at night at all lately?”

“Nope. Well, Brayden and I have been taking care of that, if you know what I mean.” I said as I winked.

“Of course,” he said with a grin. “Lukas and I walked in on you, remember?”

“Yeah,” I said. I wish I didn’t remember, though. “What are you getting at with this?” I questioned as my face scrunched up.

“One last question. Okay?” I nodded and he continued, “Good. Has anything weird happened to you, sexually?”

“Yeah. I had wet dreams a couple of the past nights. Not last night, though,” I said. Evan grinned slyly, so I said, “Don’t judge me! It’s embarrassing enough!”

He laughed and said, “I don’t judge because of that. Besides, I was grinning because I think I know why. After Wednesday and Thursday, right?” I nodded. “This may not make sense, but hear me out, okay?” he said as he looked at me to continue. I nodded again. “Okay. I think there’s some weird hormonal connection between us.”

“What?!” I exclaimed as the words sunk in. That sounded weird, but I suppose it did make some sense.

“You heard me ...” he said as he paused, “Those nights you had your wet dreams? I had to jack off furiously. Both nights. I didn’t know I could be that horny. I know for sure the second night you had a pretty awesome fuck fest with Brayden. Is it safe to assume you did something similar the night before?” I laughed at his description. Fuck fest? Hardly!

I nodded my head as everything started to sink in. “You said you were horny yesterday, and that wasn’t normal, right?” he said. I nodded again. “Lukas and I jacked each other off a couple times. It was fucking awesome!”

Was this in some strange way why I was so horny?

“Well, it all makes sense. But, at the same time, it doesn't. Why, after all of this time, why now?” I said, thinking out loud. “Whatever it is, maybe we should try and hold out until night time for a while. To see if something really is going on between us. Okay?” I asked as I looked for his approval.

“Okay,” He said with a nod and a smile. “You know, you got me thinking after that night Lukas and I walked in on you and Brayden. You remember when you told me that I didn’t have to worry about covering up because we were identical. Well, I mean, I’m sure we are in that department, but what about everything else? Personality? Hobbies? Music? I don’t know shit about you!”

I laughed at his comment, but it was completely true. He was my twin and even though we looked alike, we had to be different in some ways.

“Personality wise," I said, "I’m introverted. That might surprise you now, but that's because I warm up well to most people! It just takes some time and sometimes a few awkward moments. You?”

“Sounds about right. I do most of the talking in conversations though, and from what I’ve gauged from you, you’re mostly a listener,” he said.

“Yeah, I definitely listen. I could probably dominate a conversation if I had enough passion about the subject, but I’m definitely not one to interrupt!”

“That,” he said with a smile, “I’ve gathered already. I’ve also gathered that you don’t fuckin’ swear like I do. What the fuck is up with that?” he asked with a laugh.

I laughed with him and smiled as I said, “It’s nothing, really. I just don’t think it’s a big deal. I do swear, just not much. And I tend to avoid cursing unless the situation is worth it!”

He laughed, but I think he understood. At least, he didn’t pursue it anymore.

“I think that pretty much covers personality. At least, it covers the basics! What about hobbies? If you had an hour of free time and the resources to do something, what would you do?” he asked. Interesting question!

“Probably a sport of some kind. Frisbee, football, softball, and others. I’m not great at any one in particular, but I’m pretty good at all of them. You? What would you do with your hour?”

“You don’t seem like the jock type, so I’m kinda surprised!” he said with a smile, “But not everything is as it appears! I’d find something to do so I could hang out with friends. Casual sports and board games would be a good bet!”

“Nice,” I said. “As for music, I’ll generally listen to whatever as long as it’s not country. It’s just not for me and my ears.”

He frowned and said, “Dang!” Then, a smile formed on his face. “Just kidding, I’m like that too. No country, no problem!”

“Cool. Do you sing? Play an instrument?” I asked.

“Nothing professionally, but I’ve dabbled with guitar and piano before. And I’ll sing a song on occasion. Usually drunk occasions, but we’re underage so that’s never happened!” he said with a wink.

I laughed at his remark and said, “Yeah. I sing when I’m alone, but that’s about it. Never played piano or guitar. Unless Guitar Hero counts. Jason had that for a while last year!”

“Nope, that doesn’t count!” he said. I already felt that I’d learned a lot more about him and we really only picked three topics. It was a good feeling!

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Before long, Jason, Kelsey, Brayden, Lukas, Evan, and I all had on our school colors and were ready to root for our team. If the first game was any indicator, we were actually going to be pretty good. It turned out to be a good indicator after all, because the team won behind an outstanding performance by Aiden and his blockers. Kevin had a nice game too, but it wasn’t as good as his second half of the last game.

The six of us waited for Kevin and Aiden after the game to congratulate them. When they came out of the locker room area, Kevin saw us and pulled Aiden our way. We started walking back to the dorm and, since there was a group of eight of us, there were several conversations happening at once. I managed to pull Aiden back a few feet so I could ask him something that had been bothering me.

“So, Aiden, who’s the lucky guy?” I asked.

“What?” He looked at me confused, so I rolled my eyes. “How did you know? Can you really tell?” he said concerned.

“Only because I know what to look for! So, I’ll ask again, who’s the lucky guy and when do I get to meet him?”

He smiled, looked forward and nodded. Right at Kevin.

I looked at him with a shocked smile and giggled and congratulated him. “Sometime you’ll have to tell me all about it!” Good for you, Aiden!

After we got to the dorm, Aiden and Kevin split off and went to get something to eat. Kevin told Brayden he’d send him the address to the house once he knew where it was. I actually got excited for this party!

Jason noticed, and said, “So much for no drinking...”

I smiled and said, “You were right, I need to loosen up a bit. Brayden will make sure I don’t do anything I’ll regret!” Brayden smiled and patted me on the back.

Jason shook his head and said, “Well, whatever. I hope you have a good time, and if you need a ride, call me. I’m not on duty tonight!” I hoped I was going to have a good time, too!

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Once Brayden had learned from Kevin where the party was going to be, we both got ready to go. It was almost 11:00 already, so I knew it would be a late night. Fortunately, I didn’t have to dress up. I already had the guy I planned to sleep with tonight.

I gave Jason my keys so I wouldn’t have to worry about them and I let him use my car to drive us there and back. As soon as we were inside, I realized that this was just like I expected a house party to be. There was loud music, alcohol everywhere, people everywhere, and even the red cups. I looked around to see if I knew anyone in particular and I was really surprised when I saw Dean.

“Dean!” I yelled as I walked over to him. “Nice to see you here!”

“Hey Matt!” he said once I reached him. “Good to see you, too. Who got you to come?”

‘What?’ I thought to myself at first and then realized he was talking about who I came here with. “Brayden, of course!” Well, I suppose my answer would have been the same either way.

As the party carried on, Dean asked me to be his partner for a game of beer pong. I told him I’d never played before, but he said he didn’t care. I hadn’t had anything to drink yet, so I accepted cautiously. Brayden was over talking with some girl, so I warned Brayden that it could get interesting.

It turned out Dean was really good at beer pong. And I wasn’t too bad myself. We won several games in a row and I was definitely feeling the beer. Dean was fine, but it didn’t take much for a guy my size to feel the beer. Finally we lost, so we couldn’t keep on playing. I should have been glad that we lost, but I did have fun!

The party slowly died down as people retired for the night. Some left to go to the bars, and some just passed out somewhere. Brayden was still talking with that girl I had seen him with earlier. He didn’t appear to be drunk, but I didn’t know how much he drank. I noticed he kept laughing and smiling. It kind of upset me. Was I getting jealous? Who knows what I was thinking in my drunken state. I really shouldn’t have had to worry, I knew he loved me. He said so!

I’ve heard before that people say you’re either a happy drunk or a mad drunk. I was very fortunate to be a happy drunk. Dean kept calling me ‘giggly.’ But it was true! I was enjoying myself!

Somehow, the kitchen had cleared of people and I found myself alone with Dean. I wasn’t happy anymore. For some reason, I was sad. Nervous. What was going on? Dean said something, so I smiled out of politeness. I shouldn’t have, because the next thing I knew he leaned forward and kissed me on the lips. I stood there wide-eyed and stunned. I felt his tongue start to push it’s way in, prodding at my own tongue. Trying to get me to match his actions. But I didn’t know what to do! Why didn’t I stop him?

And then my worst fear hit me like a thousand pound weight on my shoulders. “Matt?” I heard from behind me. A soft, gentle voice. It wasn’t a question; it was more of a plea. I’d recognize that voice anywhere. Oh my God. No. That couldn’t have just happened. No!

I pushed Dean away and turned around. Yup, my worst fear was confirmed. Brayden. Standing right there. I would rather take a thousand unwarranted, hate-filled punches from Evan’s attacker than this. All I could do was stare. Straight into his eyes. Right at his tears as they streamed down his cheeks. All I could do was stare as he turned around and pushed his way out of the house.

Seeing him walk away was the worst feeling I’d ever had. The pit that had formed in my gut was nothing compared to the hole that was now in my heart. All of those moments we had shared just walked away as he did. Not looking back.

I finally moved as I saw him at the front door. Out of desperation, I ran after him, but it was too late. He wasn’t going to listen. He shouldn’t have to. He deserved better than that. Fuck, I didn’t even know what to say. That it was Dean’s fault? That was partially true, but I could have stopped him. I’d stopped Aiden before.

I stopped on the front porch of the house and watched him walk away. He never looked back. I saw his hand reach up and wipe the tears away several different times. Fuck! What the fuck was my fucking problem!

I don’t know how long I sat and hoped Brayden would turn around and come back. I sat there, crying to myself, not caring who saw. Aiden sat down by me at one point and rubbed my back, but he didn’t know what happened. And I wasn’t going to tell him tonight. And then, my phone rang. Jason. Fuck. “Hello?” I said weakly into my cellphone. My hand trembled as I tried to control my voice.

“Matt? What the fuck happened? Why is Brayden here and you’re not?”

I started bawling. “He’s gone, Jase,” I said with a sniffle. “He’s gone!” I could feel the cold tears fall down each side of my cheek as I spoke.

“No, he’s not Matt. He’s back in your guys’ room right now.”

“NO!” I yelled through the tears. “You don’t get it, Jase. He’s gone,” I said with another sniffle. The way I said ‘gone’ gave me the chills. “And it’s all my fucking fault.” Another tear fell out of the corner of my eye. I looked down at my shirt and could see the wet drip marks. I hung up the phone because I had nothing left to say. Seconds later, Jason called back.

“Why the fuck did you hang up?” He asked. He wasn’t angry. Probably just confused.

I sniffled. “I don’t have anything to say anymore,” I said. “I’m just so fucking stupid!”

“I thought you didn’t have anything to say?”

“Don’t try and make me laugh because it’s not going to work. All I want to do is huddle up in a corner and fall asleep.” I said honestly.

“Okay, where are you?” he asked. So I told him.

Five minutes later, he had picked me up and we were on the way back to the dorm. Another five minute and we were back to the dorm. I discovered soon enough that Brayden had packed some clothes and left, but didn’t say where he was going to anyone.

My Brayden was gone and I was left alone with Jason in my empty room.“What happened?” he asked as we stood facing each other awkwardly.

My eyes teared up at the thought of the truth. “Uhm...” I stumbled as my voice quivered, “Dean kissed me and... I... I didn’t stop him.” I stopped and thought of Brayden’s face. I thought of the way his eyes looked. It was different than any look I had ever seen in his eyes. It wasn’t love. It wasn’t shock. Hell, it wasn’t even lust. I have seen those before. This was something different. A form of confusion with an unsettling pain. That’s what I would have felt.

Jason said something, but I was so lost in my thoughts I didn’t hear. I didn’t even realize he said anything until he shook my shoulder. “Matt? Are you going to be okay?”

I thought hard at that question. I wanted to say ‘Yes.’ But, that wasn’t true. My eyes teared up again as I shook my head side to side. “There’s only one way I’ll be okay, Jase,” I said as my voice croaked. “And I don’t deserve his love. Not anymore.” I couldn’t even say his name.

I told Jase to keep my keys and check on me in the morning, just in case. It wasn't until Jason went back to his own room that I saw the shirt Brayden had worn to the party. I picked it up and smelled. I didn’t even notice before, but he had used the same cologne as the first time we went out to eat. It was just as intoxicating as I remembered. I held on close to that shirt as I laid down in bed. I felt cold. Alone. Vulnerable. Nothing felt right anymore.




To be continued...
 
Oh no! This is a tragedy! But, I have to remember that the best of relationships have their bumps and this has to be the case now. Matt, you have such a talent of digging deep into your readers emotions. Whether they are good or bad, the feeling is intense. I don't know if I can wait too long for chapter 19......

Craiger
 
I suspect my reaction to this last chapter was like so many other readers: shock and awe. Shock at how quickly Matt's perfect union with Brayden fell apart. And awe at how your telling of the events and its effects on Brayden and Matt captured their pain and anguish and how deeply I felt it myself. I really didn't know what to say for a day or so. But my hat is off to you for keeping reality, humanity and sincerity in this unusual and powerful story. Like your characters, I need relief from this pain and can only hope that the chapters ahead show them finding their way back together.

The whole turn of events leaves me wondering if other fans of this story were affected as deeply as I was.
 
You're toying with my emotions now. That's not nice. I didn't see it coming.
 
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