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My new sex toy.....Tyler

Pleased to see you are getting plenty of good reaction to your story!

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“Come on, let’s go,” I said as I stood up.

Tyler got up and timidly put on his shorts. We had to swim to shore and I guess it would have been hard for him to swim while holding them but on the other hand, I think he was just being shy.

As we hiked back up to my truck my feet started to get hot from walking on the sun baked dust on the trail. It was so hot that we were dry by the time we got back up to the top.

“You wanna go again, or should we get out of here?” I asked

“Let’s go,” Tyler said

I wrapped just a towel around myself and jumped in my truck. I didn’t want to get my socks dirty so I drove home barefoot. I could feel gritty dirt on the pedals under my dusty bare feet.

Tyler’s dusty blond hair with its dark roots was messed up after swimming and then drying in the sun. I have had boyfriends that would work for an hour to achieve that look. His tan skin was golden in the sun coming through the window. Then it all sank in at once, I was going home to have sex with him. That golden skin was going to be mine to feel, to play with, to kiss, lick, and rub against. I couldn’t wait to run my hands through his hair. Then my mind flashed forward and I pictured the warmth of his body surrounding my dick as I am deep inside him.


I turned away from Tyler to look at the road and realized that I don’t really remember the last mile. For safety’s sake I stopped thinking about sex.


When we got to my house I grabbed the garden hose and we sprayed off our dirty feet on the lawn. Tyler was very quiet. I could hardly get him to talk. I walked inside and Tyler followed me. I sat down on the couch and Tyler sat at the other end. With no attempt at subtlety I moved over right next to him. I put my hand on his bare knee and then slid it up his leg a few inches. Tyler took a deep breath and pulled his stomach in tight. Other than that he seemed frozen. I moved my hand the rest of the way up his leg and pushed up his shorts so I could feel all the way up his inner thigh. I actually think he was trembling a little.


I moved myself onto the floor facing him from between his legs. I reached up and grabbed both sides of the waistband of his shorts. As I pulled them off he helped by lifting up his ass. His shorts reached his knees to reveal his perfectly erect penis. He had nothing to be ashamed of. I pulled his shorts off and tossed them behind me. His shaved balls looked like they were getting squished between the muscles in his upper legs. As I pushed his knees apart his balls fell down in between his legs, hanging low due to the heat.


I looked up into at Tyler’s eyes, waiting for him to return eye contact. I wanted him to look at my face. Once his timid, puppy dog eyes looked down at me I bit my lower lip and looked at his body. I wanted him to see me looking, to feel my eyes looking at his body. I wanted him to see how turned on I was, how much I needed him. Then I reached up and put my hand on his chest. I looked him in the eyes again as my hands slid down his chest and around his torso to the top of his ass cheeks. I drew him toward me so I could get a better position for sucking his dick. He watched as I bent over and took his dick into my mouth. When I closed my lips around it I was aware of him tensing up his stomach. His hands were still on the couch at his sides, they had not moved since he sat down.


He had a little drip of pre-cum on his dick that flavored my mouth. His warm dick felt smooth in my mouth as I bobbed up and down on it. I stopped this movement for a moment and swished my tongue across the head of his shaft. I was very aware that if I went much longer he would probably release his cum into my mouth. As much as I wanted his cum, I knew that would be the end of my playtime with my new toy.


Tyler’s head was leaning back against the couch and his eyes were closed until I stopped. He lifted his head and looked at me. I stood on the couch with my feet on either side of him. I couched down until my hard dick was at the same height as Tyler’s mouth. I grabbed the base of my shaft and traced around Tyler’s lips with the head of my dick. His mouth was open a little but not enough. I slowly pushed my dick into his mouth and he opened up. After I was in he kept his mouth open.


“Wrap your lips around it,” I said softly to him


When he did I felt the warmth of his mouth all around my dick. He didn’t move so I slowly started fucking his mouth. He had such a good looking face and I loved to see my dick poking in and out of it. After a little while I stopped thrusting and grabbed his head. I pulled his face to me, then away. I did this a few times until he figured out I wanted him to do the work for a while. I put my hands behind my head and leaned back as far as I could without falling backwards. Stretching the muscles I had worked out earlier in the day intensified the pleasure that Tyler was giving me.


Standing naked on my couch with my cock deep inside such a cute guy’s mouth I felt like a king. Ruler of my house, getting serviced anyway I wanted. I was so horny I couldn’t stand it. I wanted more. I wanted to be deep inside him. I pulled my dick out from his mouth and moved him to the floor on all fours. There, between his tight butt cheeks I saw what I wanted above all else.


His asshole puckered up a little then released. He must be thinking about what was about to happen. I spat on my hand and rubbed it onto my hard penis as I gazed at his asshole, thinking how good the grip of his hole is going to feel on my dick. I thought how good it was going to feel when I ejaculated all my cum deep inside that hole.


I put one hand on his lower back and used the other to guide the head of my dick to my goal. When my head touched his hole he puckered up again. I let some more spit slowly drop from my mouth so that it landed just above his hole. I used my dick to smother it all around his ass hole. I slowly pushed my penis through my spit into Tyler. He groaned and eventually reached behind himself and placed his hand on my abs in an attempt to ease the pain. I only had a little further to go so I finished putting it in him. After I was completely bottomed out in him I stopped and gave him a moment. He took his hand off my abs and placed it back on the floor. He took short little breaths and attempted to find a position that may be more comfortable for him. He placed his forehead on the ground, and then pushed himself back up again.


“Ohhh, god that hurts!” he said with a deep throaty groan.


After a few moments I started making short strokes within his tight ass hole. The strokes got longer and longer until I was humping him with my full seven inches. As I fucked him I felt the golden tan skin on his back with my hands. I reached up and grabbed his beautiful dusty blond hair and pulled his head back and turned it so I could see the side of his face. He grimaced with every thrust of my body. I released his hair and ran my hand down his back, across his ass cheek, and down his hairy thigh.


Physically, I wasn’t ready to cum yet, but mentally I was more than ready. I didn’t care about making this last any longer, I wanted to cum. I grabbed Tyler’s hips and held him firmly in front of me. I added some strength and speed to my thrusts to hurry up my orgasm. I started to fuck him hard and I started to feel the orgasm’s sensation slowly build. A few more thrusts of my dick into Tyler and I felt the full orgasmic wave tingle all over my body. I felt my balls twitch upward towards in my crotch and my dick hole open up as a large load of cum spurt from my body and enter Tyler’s body seven inches deep in his ass hole. When my cum came out it felt it was under pressure. These were not short spurts, but longer pressurized bursts of cum. My biceps were flexed as I was pulling Tyler into me with such force, holding him still so I could release my cum as deep as possible inside him.


My orgasm slowly dissipated and all the muscles that were tensed up relaxed. Now that my primal instincts to fuck Tyler subsided I felt a little bad about riding him so hard for his first time. I decided I needed to get him off, but I knew he was full of my cum that would probably start to leak out. I took Tyler into the bathroom so it wouldn’t get on the carpet. I got down on my knees in front of him and started vigorously sucking his dick. Since I had already ejaculated I wasn’t into it as much as I had been earlier, but I was determined to make him cum. My cum covered dick had gone limp and I could feel it thump against my leg along with my dick sucking motions.


In an attempt to speed things along I reached around Tyler’s body and felt his ass hole with my finger. I rubbed its outer surface gently. My rubbing must have relaxed it because I felt my cum start to ooze from his hole. I used my cum as a lubricant and started to finger his hole while sucking his dick.


“I am going to cum,” Tyler whispered as he tried to pull his dick from my mouth. With one hand on his ass cheek and the other still banging his hole I pulled him closer to me so he couldn’t pull away.

“I can’t stop it,” he said with a little louder voice.


Then I tasted his salty discharge pulsate into my mouth. He grabbed my head and thrust very gently into my mouth as he finished ejaculating into it. I saved all his cum on my tongue until he was done, then I swallowed it all at once. I stood up and went around behind Tyler and gave him a big bear hug as I kissed his neck.


“Let’s get cleaned up,” I said

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The next day


I was sitting on the couch, having showered, shaved. I was wearing nothing but a towel, waiting for Tyler to come over. I got up and looked out the window. No one was in sight. I looked at my watch, it was still early.


A few moments later I heard a knock at the door.


“Finally” I thought.


I got up and swung the door open. It wasn’t Tyler. I had never seen this guy before. He was a lot bigger than me. And he looked pissed.


“Can I help you?” I asked


“You Ryan?”


“Yeah.”


As soon as I answered he pushed the door open with one hand and grabbed my throat with the other. He pushed me backwards and my towel fell off. He kept pushing me until I was up against the wall. He had a tight grip on my neck but he wasn’t squeezing so hard that I couldn’t breathe. By the looks of his arms and chest I was breathing because he chose to let me, not because he couldn’t squeeze harder.



To be continued……..
 
Uh Oh, it Sounds like Big Brother is pissed.

Good Chapter, HotOne.

Looking forward, with some trepidation, to the next.

Thanks!
 
Seduction, satisfaction and now the possibility of retribution...

One hot story!
 
You know how to write a story that gets me rock hard and rockin'. You're doing a great job. But don't move this story along too fast. I want this to last and last and last. Keep me hard. Keep me happy. Keep writing more about your new sex toy ... Tyler.
 
That was a great chapter. Even It kept me hard all the way through. Who is the mystery guest. Cant wait until the next part.
 
Wow, what a great chapter. I can't wait to see where this is going.
 
“You stay the fuck away from Tyler, my little brother,” he said in a quiet but very pissed off voice. “He is not gay, he is just confused. If I find out you touched him again or that you told anyone about what you did with him I will be back. Do we understand each other?”

I smiled defiantly and started to get a little aroused at being manhandled by Tyler’s older brother. I looked him up and down making it very obvious that I was checking him out.

“I think Tyler is old enough to make his own decisions,” I said. My lack of fear annoyed him.

He squeezed a little harder and replied “I am not fucking around here, hands off!” Had I been able get a breath to speak I might have told him to slap me like a bitch. He must not have realized how turned on I was by this.

Then something happened that made this all a little more clear. He didn’t make it obvious like I did, but he looked up and down at my naked body. It was very quick, but the expression on his face afterwards confirmed what I never could have imagined, he was gay. I feel he may not even know it, or that he is in denial. I think his rage is more than just watching out for Tyler. I think there are elements of jealousy and frustration that are driving him to come see me, maybe even a little curiosity.


Frustrated, he let go of my neck and walked out the door leaving it open. I walked out the front door onto my top step not caring if anyone sees me naked. I had to see what this guy drives. As soon as I saw him get into a black Ford Mustang I took a step back into the house. The little old lady from across the street had stopped clipping her hedge and was looking my direction. I smiled and waved, she waved back looking confused and I closed my door.

I immediately called Tyler.

“Hey, what’s up?” I said when Tyler answered

“Just got out of the shower, my brother and I lifted weights this morning.”

At this point I don’t think he knows his brother came over to “talk” to me.

“You wanna do something?” Tyler asked.

“You at your house?”

“Yeah.”

“I’ll pick you up.” As I pulled up to Tyler’s house there was no black car. I was hoping that there would be. I would have loved to see his face when Tyler got into my truck.

We bought some sub sandwiches and drove out to the quarry. I backed my truck up to the cliff overlooking the water in the quarry and we sat on the tailgate to eat. It was just starting to get hot so I took off my shirt. Tyler did the same. He was in shorts, I was wearing jeans. Tyler’s muscles looked toned since he just worked out.

As we started eating Tyler said “I talked to my brother this morning.”

“Oh yeah?”

“I hope you’re not mad, but I told him about us. I have always been really open with my brother about everything except my feelings about guys. After yesterday I felt like I needed to tell him.”

“How did he take it?” I asked

“He didn’t seem happy about it, but I didn’t expect him to. He asked a few questions and then left right after lifting.”

“What did he ask you?”

“Who you were, where you lived, and what we did.”

“Did you actually tell him what we did?”

“Yeah.”

“What did you tell him?”

“I told him we had sex and he asked what we did. I got a little frustrated with him. I mean did he really expect me to talk specifics about getting fucked in the ass with him?”

I was surprised that Tyler picked me out as being gay right away, and yet he hasn’t figured out his own brother is gay when he is so bad at hiding it. I decided not to tell Tyler about his brother’s visit.

“How do you feel about yesterday? Did you have fun?” I asked

“I couldn’t sleep last night! All I could think about was that I actually had sex with a guy.”

“Was it what you expected?”

“I guess it was rougher than I expected. Isn’t it funny how others view gays as being sissies? There was nothing sissy about having sex with you!”

“No, I would have to agree with you, anybody can slip their dick into a pussy and hump a woman, feeling her soft skin while gently making love to her. But to get held down and fucked in the ass by a guy like you did yesterday, that takes a man.”

Laughing Tyler replied “Stop it, your turning me on.”

I laughed with him and washed down a bite of my sandwich with a big gulp of soda.

“So, do you have a job?” I asked

“Yeah, I work at the pool. I work at the front desk, clean the pool, and wash towels. It doesn’t pay really well but I like it.”

“See a lot of hot guys too huh?”

“Let’s just say I don’t let the towel basket get very full in the men’s locker room.”

“Be careful, some people out there have really good gaydar.”

“I’m careful,” he laughed. “So what do you do?”

“I am a firefighter/EMT.”

“No shit?”

“Yeah, I work eight twenty-four hour shifts a month. Best job in the world.”

“Do any of the guys there know you’re gay?”

“No, but I know about one of them. He forgot to clear the history from his computer. At one time I had thought about telling him and maybe hooking up, but I decided it might get complicated because we work together.”

“Yeah, I can understand that. Uhm, I work in a few hours, and I was just wondering if maybe you wanted to come over to my house for a little while before I go?” Tyler said in a quiet, coy voice

“Do you live alone?”

“Just my brother and me, but he should be gone for a while.”

I got off the tailgate of my truck and walked up in between Tyler’s legs as he sat on there. I placed my hands just above his knees on his muscular thighs.

“What do you want to do?” I asked as I moved my face closer to his.

“Uh, ya know, what we did yesterday,” he said, a little embarrassed

“No, specifically, what do you want to do?”

Tyler stammered a little and said, “Ya know, sex.”

“If I said we would do whatever you wanted, what would you want to do?” I said as I moved my hands up his legs, feeling his slightly sweaty hairy thighs.

“I guess I would like to try putting it in you.”

“Putting what in me?”

“My dick,” he said with a little more confidence

“Where do you want to put it?”

“I want to put it in your ass,” he said with a smirk, finally getting in to the game

“Are you going to just stick it in there and leave it?”

“No, I am going to stick it in there and fuck you with it.”

“Are you going to screw me gently, like I am a girl?”

I moved my right hand all the way up his shorts and grabbed his hard dick and squeezed it.

“I am going to ravage your ass and give you a full load of my cum deep inside you,” Tyler said

“If you’re man enough to take charge I will let you have me. If you start to act like a sissy then I am going to take charge and fuck you instead.”

Tyler grabbed my wrist and pulled my hand out from his shorts.

“Get in the truck Ryan. We are going to my house.”

I smiled and picked up my shirt off the tailgate. I opened the truck door and threw my shirt on the seat. Tyler was getting in the other side and looked at me aggressively.

As we pulled up to Tyler’s house and there was no black car. We went inside and Tyler led the way to his bedroom. His room had a good smell to it. A smell I remembered on him when I got close to him, a smell that was on him, and in his clothes. I wasn’t sure if it was cologne or deodorant, but I liked it.

I closed Tyler’s door and he turned around and started to kiss me. It was a slow gentle kiss with our bare chests touching each other. It was nice, but not what I was in the mood for. He lost his aggressive edge so I grabbed his shoulders and pulled my face away from his. I put my palm flat against his chest and pushed him backwards onto his bed. I got up on the bed straddling him and was about to unbutton his shorts when he flipped me over onto my back with a wrestling move that completely blindsided me. He probably saw a shocked expression on my face, then a smirk as I realized he was asserting himself.

He started rubbing my crotch through my jeans very hard. To unbutton my pants he put two fingers into them behind the button. Feeling his fingers against my stomach made me take a deep breath and suck in my stomach. I reached behind my head and grabbed the rungs of his headboard. Tyler opened up my jeans and pulled them off my ass as I lifted it off the bed to help. Then he backed off of the bed and grabbed the legs of my jeans and pulled them off me. He jumped up in between my legs and took my dick in his mouth. He was not gentle with it at all. He sucked hard, twisted his head around, and aggressively stroked my dick with his hand. The feeling made me squirm around with pleasure. I held tightly to the headboard behind me. At one point I was pulling on it so hard I was starting to get worried that I was going to break off the rungs.

My eyes were closed and my arms were flexed as I pulled on the headboard when I felt his mouth leave my dick. I looked at him and he was backing off the bed looking straight into my eyes. He dropped his shorts and stepped out of them without breaking eye contact with me. I felt the bed depress near my legs as he got back onto it. His hands felt warm as he grabbed my ankles and lifted them up until I could feel my legs come up against my chest. Tyler let my legs rest on his shoulders as he lubed up his penis with his spit. He grabbed one of my ankles and pushed it up a little further as his other hand guided his dick into me. He was pushing it in slowly and gently.

“Do you want me to wear a dress when we are done?” I said

His expression changed and he bit his lower lip and shoved his dick into me until his hips slammed against my body. It left a burning sensation in my ass hole. He started thrusting into me very hard. With every stab of his cock I could feel an immense pressure inside my ass. I watched his sweaty body as it moved back and forth, his abs all tensed up from his thrusting motion.

I saw something change behind Tyler. The door opened slightly. I saw his brother peeking in.

“Oh my god yes! Fuck me harder!” I screamed playing it up for his brother, trying to piss him off.

Tyler leaned forward into me rolling me into a ball and squeezing me. He started moving his hips quickly and power fucking me. I looked up and his brother had left. Tyler was fucking me really hard but all of a sudden I felt a massive thrust and he pushed himself into me as hard as he could. He held it in me and a moment later I felt him pulsate inside me and a warm shot of cum pulse into my insides. Tyler was squeezing me so hard it hurt. He didn’t pull out to get another stroke. He just stayed deep inside me and squirted shots of cum into me. His grip on me loosened after the pulses of cum stopped. He relaxed on top of me, and we rested for a moment.

“Holy shit Tyler, look at the time.” He only had fifteen minutes to get dressed and get to work. I watched as he wiped the cum off of his semi hard dick and get dressed.

“Feel free to stay and take a shower if you want,” Tyler told me as he ran out the door.

I stayed in his bed and relaxed. My ass wasn’t really sore but I could feel that I had been fucked hard. I was enjoying the feeling of being in Tyler’s bed, imagining him sleeping naked in the sheets that I was laying in. Then the door swung open and Tyler’s brother filled the doorway.

“Hey man, what’s up?” I said as I got up from Tyler’s bed

“Are you completely stupid?”

I walked over to him and put my hand on his skin tight t-shirt covering massive chest.

“You don’t really think I am stupid do you?” I said as I moved my hand across his chest and over to his bicep.

“Stop it,” he said as I gently rubbed his crotch through his sweat pants.

“You stop me,” I suggested. He closed his eyes and I continued rubbing him. After I felt he was hard I got down on my knees and pulled down his sweats just enough to uncover his dick. I was surprised to see that his little brother had about an inch on him. I had just put his dick in my mouth when he pulled it away from me and left the room. I followed him to the living room still naked. He sat down on the couch and I stood in front of him.

“What?” He said in a very loud voice.

“This isn’t about your brother, is it?” I asked. He didn’t say anything, he just sat there.

“You’re gay.” I said.

“Fuck you! I am not gay!”

“A straight guy would have stopped me when I touched his chest. You let me put your dick in my mouth! You don’t have to admit it to me. My interest is in your brother, not you.”

He got up off the couch and went to Tyler’s room. He came out carrying my jeans. As he walked by me he grabbed my arm and pulled me to the door. He threw my jeans halfway down their sidewalk and pushed me outside and closed the door. I walked down the warm sidewalk and put my jeans on. He didn’t give me my shoes and socks so I drove home wearing only my jeans.

After Tyler got off work he brought by a pizza. I didn’t tell him about the run in with his brother. I didn’t mind his brother hating me, but I didn’t want this to come between them. We watched TV and ate pizza. After he finished eating he climbed behind me on the couch and started rubbing my shoulders.

This was very different for me. I don’t think I have ever had a boyfriend that did things like Tyler did for me. I started to like more than just his body. I actually liked him. I started to realize how shallow my past relationships had been. I don’t even know if I would call them relationships. They were just hookups.

After a while I switched places with Tyler and rubbed his shoulders. We watched TV until I started to fall asleep.

“Come on, let’s go to bed,” Tyler said.

We went into my room and got naked and climbed into bed. I was feeling weird thinking about how different my relationship with Tyler was. I felt good that it was becoming something more, but I felt bad about treating him like a piece of meat, and even worse for going down on his brother. I had my back to Tyler and he moved up behind me pressing his naked body to mine. He put his arm over me and he drifted off the sleep. His body was so warm and soft against me but the joy that I felt being there with Tyler was ruined by what I had done. Eventually I fell asleep.

The next day I woke up and Tyler was gone. The smell of bacon filled the house. I put on some sweat pants and went downstairs. Tyler was at the stove wearing only his boxer briefs, and holding a spatula.

“I was about to wake you.” He looked so happy to see me, and it ate a hole in my stomach.

“I can’t believe you made breakfast. It looks great,” I said trying not to show my pain.

“Don’t get any ideas about putting me in a dress and apron, it won’t happen!” He said pointing the spatula at me.

We enjoyed breakfast together and I had to start my twenty-four hour shift at the fire department shortly after.

I came downstairs wearing my dark blue “Dist #5 Fire Dept” T-shirt with “Firefighter/EMT written on the back. I loved it because the short sleeves hugged my biceps tightly. My arms always looked bigger when I wore this shirt. I also had on my black pants. They looked like slacks but they were thicker material and had pockets on the side for some of the equipment I carry with me.

“Oh, my god! You look so hot in that!” Tyler said as he walked up and felt both of my biceps as he faced me.

“I’ll see you tomorrow huh?” I said.

“Ok, I’ll meet you here.”

I turned to walk out and I felt Tyler’s hand grab my ass.

“Ohh, I love those pants on you!” Tyler said clenching his teeth.

Laughing I said “See you tomorrow.” As I walked out the door.

During the day I swapped text messages with Tyler.

“Need dick, bring some home tomorrow!” Tyler wrote

“How bout a shake?”

“A shake?”

“A protein shake, with a meat straw?”

“Fuck yes, I haven’t tasted that yet.”

“I got plenty”

“Hey. Bro is home - TTL.

Then I got a fire call. It was just a car fire. While I was driving the truck back to the station I got a text. I looked at the screen and saw it was from Tyler. I couldn’t wait to get into my room to read it. I didn’t dare read it in front of others.

After getting out of my gear and into my room I opened my phone and clicked ‘read message.’ It felt like I had been stabbed in the stomach.

“Bro told me – fuck off and die – we’re done!”

I sat down slowly on my bed as the text gradually tore a hole in me. My heart was pounding, my hands were instantly sweaty, and the phone felt slick in my hand.



To be continued…
 
Dear Hot1980,
You're developing this story nicely.
From an almost forced issue to a more balanced turn about fair play, what do YOU want to do today.

Then there's that ugly twist of fate.
The big brother, being overprotective through his own inability to look in the mirror. Followed by the confrontation and "proving", to the anger/vengeance of said Big Bro, poisoning what was developing into a REAL relationship, not just casual sex, wham, bam, thank you man, see ya around, maybe.

I look forward to your future chapters, to see how you work the characters, further developing them, fleshing them out through their actions/reactions to each other.

Thanks for investing your time and energy into bringing us this story.
:wave: :=D: (*8*)
 
You already know how crazy this story is driving me. And, yeah, it got my nut in no time at all. Thanks!
 
Again, another great chapter. Keep it up. I can't wait to see how this develops.
 
Dear Hot1980,
You're developing this story nicely.
From an almost forced issue to a more balanced turn about fair play, what do YOU want to do today.

Then there's that ugly twist of fate.
The big brother, being overprotective through his own inability to look in the mirror. Followed by the confrontation and "proving", to the anger/vengeance of said Big Bro, poisoning what was developing into a REAL relationship, not just casual sex, wham, bam, thank you man, see ya around, maybe.

I look forward to your future chapters, to see how you work the characters, further developing them, fleshing them out through their actions/reactions to each other.

Thanks for investing your time and energy into bringing us this story.
:wave: :=D: (*8*)

Thank you for you wonderful analysis! It usually takes me about 5 or 6 hours per chapter because I want there to be some meaning behind there actions. I want the story to have some depth to it instead of just a glimpse into someone’s normal old day. Thank you for appreciating it! Next chapter probably Tue or Wed.
 
Excellent! THis story is coming along splendidly!


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