ok girls i need your help with another one of my stories

[fabulouslyghetto]

so I'm smack dab in the middle of finishing chapter 1 when my laptop overheats and shuts off. did i have my work saved? no, duh! so before i start over i want to test this premise.

it's a short story, would post it here if we still have a stories section, theme is your standard "see what it's like on the other side," a trans stripper commits suicide after being bullied by some clients, her sisters who are witches exact revenge by cursing the gentlemen who tormented her, turning them from successful protorype heteronormative yuppies into-- a photogenic waitress who works in a sports bar, an illegal immigrant latina that doesn't speak english and a draq queen. right before my computer shut off there was some cool multi-verse type stuff going on, from now on i swear to god i'm saving my work and backing it up too.

 

[Peloso]

Is this another script? Because if it is I hope you're not aiming any higher than, say, Rob Schneider.

 

[Harke the Boeotarch]

so I'm smack dab in the middle of finishing chapter 1 when my laptop overheats and shuts off. did i have my work saved? no, duh! so before i start over i want to test this premise.

it's a short story, would post it here if we still have a stories section, theme is your standard "see what it's like on the other side," a trans stripper commits suicide after being bullied by some clients, her sisters who are witches exact revenge by cursing the gentlemen who tormented her, turning them from successful protorype heteronormative yuppies into-- a photogenic waitress who works in a sports bar, an illegal immigrant latina that doesn't speak english and a draq queen. right before my computer shut off there was some cool multi-verse type stuff going on, from now on i swear to god i'm saving my work and backing it up too.

This synopsis isn´t working for me:

1). If she´s a stripper she wouldn´t likely have had any self-respect to begin with.

I think she gets raped by the yuppies who say it´s theft, because she´s a sexworker, and then gets stabbed to death at home by her obvious on the DL boyfriend for not bringing him any money.

2). Her sisters are Hillary Clinton (The Supreme) and Lucy Liu (if Ann Boleyn can be black anything goes).

3). You´re turning them into the wrong stuff, also, one of them is already a drag queen.

4). Everybody is doing the multiverse already. Even Mike Tyson smokes toad vernom these days.
Think of something better.

 

[fabulouslyghetto]

This synopsis isn´t working for me:

1). If she´s a stripper she wouldn´t likely have had any self-respect to begin with.

I think she gets raped by the yuppies who say it´s theft, because she´s a sexworker, and then gets stabbed to death at home by her obvious on the DL boyfriend for not bringing him any money.

2). Her sisters are Hillary Clinton (The Supreme) and Lucy Liu (if Ann Boleyn can be black anything goes).

3). You´re turning them into the wrong stuff, also, one of them is already a drag queen.

4). Everybody is doing the multiverse already. Even Mike Tyson smokes toad vernom these days.
Think of something better.

Strippers have self respect! You have any idea how hard it is to shake what your mama gave you wearing nothing but tassles over your nipples and a pair of ass-less stirrups?

also, you're my ex, what are you even doing in my threads? just had to come crawlin back for another slice of chocolate cake, huh?

 

[fabulouslyghetto]

Also I was being facetious about the multi-verse, it's not really a thing. The story starts with one of the witches tormenting her captor so the other 2 witches open portals that create a singular doorway between the three separate locations so they can chastise her for procrastinating.

 

[Sebazz]

So she had to suffer transphobia and dysphoria and go through painful and expensive surgeries when her sisters could have made her cisgender and rich in the fist place? They're the real villains in this story

 

[Alistair]

Is there any gay sex in the story? Can’t the straight guys get railed by a bunch of dudes instead of being turned into women?

 

[fabulouslyghetto]

Is there any gay sex in the story? Can’t the straight guys get railed by a bunch of dudes instead of being turned into women?

I can make one of the witches revenge-bang one of the guys dad's. Cursed him AND plowed his father like a $40 trick.