The Original Gay Porn Community - Free Gay Movies and Photos, Gay Porn Site Reviews and Adult Gay Forums

  • Welcome To Just Us Boys - The World's Largest Gay Message Board Community

    In order to comply with recent US Supreme Court rulings regarding adult content, we will be making changes in the future to require that you log into your account to view adult content on the site.
    If you do not have an account, please register.
    REGISTER HERE - 100% FREE / We Will Never Sell Your Info

    To register, turn off your VPN; you can re-enable the VPN after registration. You must maintain an active email address on your account: disposable email addresses cannot be used to register.

Once in a Lifetime

Kessel,

I really hope I didn't upset you. !oops!You are really a fantastic writer. I always admire your creativity and cliffhanging writing style. NOw I feel bad that you want to rewriting it and worry that some readers will bombbard me because I pointed out something in your story. Trust me I had it before from another writer. That's why I don't post comment much. Only for my true favorite stories :kiss::gogirl::=D:*|*
 
Hey, Kessel, There is nothing wrong with this chapter, it reads & flows very well !
Please Please continue this great story, More please
Harry
 
You didn't upset me! lol I never get upset!

It's just, I had it pictured perfectly in my head, but when I typed it, it came out BAD

I don't know...maybe I will re-write it or not...it just depends on if you guys like it or not.

Doesn't matter if I like it or not, it's you guys lol.

I wasn't upset, don't worry.

-Kessel (!)
 
Damn....Kessel, this story is addictive.
I've just read it from the begging, all of it in like a couple of hours, non stop.
I think your story i fantastic.
If this is an experience you have lived, then I'm sure you'll never forget it.
Lucky you.;)
The emotion of it has me roped right in.:eek:

If I could say one thing to Dan ...chill out and go with the flow. He needs to stop over analysing everything and just be in the moment with his man.:cool:

Really looking forward to more.
Ciao
 
Kessel, please believe we like this chapter .... we like the whole story, and we would like you to continue with the next chapter.. PLEASE
Harry
 
Well, I like the critizism (Can't spell lol) that I get, helps me get better at it.

I won't re-write then, I'll make the next one better.

I won't try to defend my writing, if this chapter sucks, then it sucks lol.

re-write it? nah ill leave it...

sigh...may be a while till the next one haha...

Until next time, Homie G-dogs,

Word Up!

-Kessel
 
Please don't rewrite it. I think it is great the way it is and then the cliffhanger. I don't think I'll be able to stand waiting for the next chapter. The only mistakes that I noticed were the ones that polarnyc mentioned but that was minor, and anyway who am I to say anything. I can't write anything without a typo. I think my fingers go faster than my brain lol.
 
im going to go crazy

so i started right? i write some...then edit it...then re-edit it...then RE re-edit it...

im going CRAZY! im hitting walls here and there!!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:confused::grrr::confused::grrr::confused::grrr:
 
Hey dear Guy, take five ........ just walk away and do something else, when you're not trying to type, your mind will have a chance to work things thro'
Hugs
Harry
 
Alright guys, im working on it in my spare time. ive been editing adn re-editng lol.

im not gonna make any promises on when ill have it up, cause i suck at fulfulling that lol. it wont be long, i promise. :D

-Kessel
 
wow man:eek:, i just finished reading all the chapters:D, and i have to say that i wanna be your #1 fan (!)lol, wow especially the last chapter, it was excellent, so don’t worry about it anymore, leave it like that and keep going with the next chapter ..|. i swear to god that I’ll be waiting for it like a crazy lol!oops!, i dunno why (well actually I do lol, because of your good writing skills and your amazing talent) but you really caught me with this story, amazing work dude, CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


BTW thax for sharing this amazing story with us dude!!!!!:=D::kiss:
 
Ok so..
im at home, on friday night, date-less, and B_O_R_E_D
anyway ive been writing it in my spare time and stuff. editing and re-editing...so on and so forth...

so heres a little peek... oh and, my goal is to make the next one,
B-E-T-T-E-R
and
L_O_N_G_E_R
than all the last ones...;)

HERES A PEEK! ;)

I hung up the phone and I got up from the couch where me and Tom were sitting. I couldn't believe what Mary had just told me over the phone. I got up, got my jacket and ran to the door. Tom stood up.
"What's wrong?"
"It's Monica...she needs help...i gotta go Tom."
I opened the door and a blast of cold air ran over me.
"Wait...I'll come help!" He said.
"No...It's between me and Monica...she wouldn't want me to tell..."
I took a step out the door and he stopped me.
"Just sit down and stop for two seconds and tell me what's happening..."
"I can't...I have to go!" I was getting mad at him trying to stop me.
"I said...sit the FUCK DOWN!" He yelled at me. I stared in shock. I shook my head and ran off to my car, without him.

yeah it sucks, but i figured maybe a few of ya guys might like a peek.
it wont be long!
-Kessel
 
i just find this story, i love it, cannot wait for update!! i bet nick is in love with his brother,
 
man, just makes me want this update more. but its all good loved the sneak peek. :)
 
well, all this while I was just a silent-reader...but your story made me wanna ask for more...this is the first story I've read that doesn't need the excessed of orgy sexual storyline to excites the reader...hope to see the updates from you soon...
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top