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Out of The Mist

Hi, Deano! :wave:

I'm very happy to hear you're finding my little yarn interesting. I'm not sure where you are in the story, but I have to warn you. When I started it I had NO idea where it was going. So, you'll likely discover some odd plot twists in order for me to work my way out of a few binds. :lol:

When I was writing, funtimes had not yet begun writing "The Coming of Josh". I also know he hasn't had time to read this story, because his story is keeping him pounding away at his keyboard, with excellent results. That said, I found the similarities between our stories somewhat amusing, when I was recently re-reading this one. One of these days, you'll have to let me know which ones you might have spotted, like "special" showers, talking about food, etc.

I'm definitely looking forward to more of Your thoughts, as you plow your way through this. THANK YOU for reading!

HUGS, bro!! (*8*) :kiss:
Chaz :luv:
 
Hey Chaz,

I am on chapter 53 at the minute, the stories are definitely different style up to where I have read, the Mrs Nuemann as Matriarch of the town is interesting, she seems to be involved in all aspects of town life, the storm scene where the guys go to point break and how they took on the rage of the storm in away was greatly described and I enjoyed reading it, Ryan is definitely a surprising character on being out there at the time the longest, it seemed that he enjoyed the rush of it all.

Ollie and Dave seem to be developing into an interesting couple as well, from how they met to Ollie moving in for a supposed week whilst Ryan is training. It's great they are including Ryan into the team and not dismissing him off, it made me laugh the chapter where Ryan and Frank shared a bed and the morning results of Ryan being sprawled all over Frank, interesting to see how that develops.

The people going missing what I don't know and obviously the mystery of the whole town and the officer being found at sea far away from where he went missing, I am being to think that is a town secret and they have found out.... or maybe I completely wrong...

Thanks again for pushing in the direction of your writing Chaz

Have a good'un bud, I will get to read more in meantime :gogirl: ..|

Take care man Deano x
 
Hi Deano,

I'm enjoying your reactions, and I'm having a difficult time keeping my tongue in check. :-$

Imagine that! :rolleyes: :lol:

I'm so tempted to say a few things, but I don't want to influence your experience. [-X

I'm hoping you continue to find this interesting. \:/

Keep Smilin'! (*8*) :kiss:
Chaz :luv:
 
Kyanimal,

Wanted to tell you again how much I liked reading your story its a very good read. You are a very good writer if I didn't tell you all of this earlier.

Brian
 
Hey Chaz! I've read all of your "little yarn" too, and like Brian, Friend and Deano, I really enjoyed it. A thriller and a love story, with super hot guys that we were really starting to care about, and who have hot sex together. What an excellent combination. A great yarn, and I enjoyed the way you put it together, giving the different characters a voice so we got the perspective of each. Nicely done.

I only wish there was more!

Cheers, HF
 
Aw geeze, guys! I don't know what to say! !oops! Other than, THANK YOU! (group)

So, yeah, all of your nice comments have brought this story bubbling back up in the goo of my glob of gray matter. :rolleyes:

Not sure if that's going to translate into anymore typing. At this point, y'all know as much about that as I do! :cool:

Of course ... No Matter What ...

Keep Smilin'!! (*8*) :kiss:
Chaz :luv:
 
Hey Chaz,

I am just rereading I feel I may have missed some parts in the first chapters, I am back up to chapter 63, when everything is coming together, Ryan's family are involved in the murder/disappearance of the people of the town. But I have enjoyed your telling as I have said previously giving each character a voice and how there actions cause the people around them. This is definitely a gem of a story you have written, I would like to see more of a the guys.

Thanks Chaz, it's always great discussing your story and I enjoy your experiences when you tell us in FT story of your history and what you have done. You have experienced many things and they give us guys a picture of your life, Thank you again.

Take Care Buddy much luv Deano x
 
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