POETRY - Can you write a Poem?

[ShihTzuTylenol]

WOW! I just wrote a piece the other night called Brut Sweet...

...........but it's too soon to release it just yet.........
because........*sniffle*.......oh nevermind

**throws self on bed/balling eyes out**

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

Question:
does --> ( * ) look like a butthole bending over to anyone else, or am I just a sick puppy? hehe and be kind, remember I'm fragile right nowl

 

[Lefty]

Gusty,

Come join me in the Cool Waters.

Let the gentle fragrance and the

soothing attars lave away the

emotional hell you are smouldering in.

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

**frantically looks up lave in dictionary**

 

[LadyMontage]

WOW! I just wrote a piece the other night called Brut Sweet...

...........but it's too soon to release it just yet.........
because........*sniffle*.......oh nevermind

**throws self on bed/balling eyes out**

*Huggles him and pats his head* Don't cry! :O
I hope you share with us all very soon ^^

 

[Lefty]

^
Careful pseudo Lady

Gusty is pseudo sweet

to the point of being a walking

pseudo diabetes attack.

We love him but a spoon full of vinegar

and that boy goes down.

ask Marvin Poppins.

 

[wenchine-mahtapasikan]

Ah, the Phunk. 'Tis time.

PSAIEHNSS 001A: An experiment with experimentation

Nooka, dat shit t'ain't psyence, I dun sat deah an tole yuuuuu. But I shudda knowed that you ain't know, ain't nobody be reached from where can't even Doom reach you. Doom be like "I'ma git you", but then it like:
"Sorry, the number you have reached is out of service; please hang up and try again."
Whut I had said was, "dis 'ight hur, ain't psyence."
Ain't no lub.
Ain't no livin.
Ain't no dreemz.
Dat shit fo da brootifull peepul.
Like nookaaaaaaaaaa... please. Ain't nothin fo me hur, ain't nevah been no nothin but nothin and I done gave fo everyTING at least once. Ain't nothin left to give but mahself, and dat just be da jankiest.
Iz YOU doom? 'Cause you ain't got no powah hur, da worms done been leff me and you a just starve lookin' like dat. Ain't gon' be no mo moanz. Get it? Got it?
Good!

 

[LadyMontage]

^
Careful pseudo Lady

Gusty is pseudo sweet

to the point of being a walking

pseudo diabetes attack.

We love him but a spoon full of vinegar

and that boy goes down.

ask Marvin Poppins.

*Giggle* I appreciate the warning Lefty I am sure my pure sweetness would cause someone diabetes.

 

[ShihTzuTylenol]

*Huggles him and pats his head* Don't cry! :O
I hope you share with us all very soon ^^

**sniffles**
okay
**blowing nose**
we'll see....

 

[EJMichaels]

Question:
does --> ( * ) look like a butthole bending over to anyone else, or am I just a sick puppy? hehe and be kind, remember I'm fragile right nowl

When you're not fragile, I'll ask if I can ignore the "or" in the question so I can answer it correctly.

 

[LadyMontage]

**sniffles**
okay
**blowing nose**
we'll see....

Good! Smile! :'D

 

[wenchine-mahtapasikan]

Everything can be Anything but Nothing can be Something: a cryptic cry for uncedo


Everythang be everythang
But I'd a let go uh da world dat stay spinnin any how
Ta grab maself a piece uh dat schweet schweet
Nuffin kinda luvin

Me maself and mines
We got some workin out ta do
If we a get along long enough ta go along long enough
Ta find
This circle steady been a downward helix
Crawling into my I
Crawling into my I
This circle steady been a downward helix
To find
If we a get along long enough ta go along long enough
We got some workin out ta do
Me
maself
and
...
Mines designed ta prime dis blind mind
With less and less
Deepa an' deepa
Steepa an' a steepa
Till da creepa an' a creepa
Wif dat nuffin kinna luvin
Sex on da bleak
Footprints in da bland
Stranded l'eah as planned
Ain't no fuckin sand
Come to find nuffin been deah all along

Steady been l'ight l'eah when all y'all couldn't
Shouldn't
Wouldn't
Didn't
and juss plain
Wasn't

Now I da bride
Nuffin da groom
Ta be married in dis
Lovely tomb
Groom kissed da bride
Bride kiss da groom

Cheapened by da dozen
This new ta be found luvin
Came ta find
I done been nuffin

 

[Lefty]

Just what the fuck
you saying Chuck
It's all hard luck?
It all does suck?
They swing, you duck
The shit and muck
my young friend Chuck
Just what the fuck?

 

[LadyMontage]

Just what the fuck
you saying Chuck
It's all hard luck?
It all does suck?
They swing, you duck
The shit and muck
my young friend Chuck
Just what the fuck?

You Lefty Have very interesting writing. I'm guessing this is about an ex boyfriend or lover? I rarely use cursing in my writing. I think I'm going to post one where I actually did now. Still your writing is very interesting and I am quite fond of it.

 

[LadyMontage]

Violent & Prim
Brett Crandall
March 22nd 2011
6:14 PM

I've always slammed the curtains in a violent way
I have many faces, which many you will not understand

The darkness seems everlasting and bitterly surreal
I am surrounded by several walls without an exit
I am rushed with adrenaline and attack my nightmares surely

Slamming my hardened heart against a brick wall. Thank you.

(*) I will give myself only to the divine
After spiraling down to the despair and nauseating silence.
I can smile naturally and falsely as if nothing ever happened
After being tortured and every vein stripped form my heart

(**) I will violently shatter every fragment left
After being risen from the bittersweet darkened void
I can twitch indifferently with a half hollow heart beating
After being loved with lying lips and every vein bitterly torn

Given so many choices and different appearing paths
There is no right answer because it was never made clear

Following the voice of the soothing and artificial
Will always force a dramatic entrance so grand
With an ending so aggravating and painful

I walked with determination and continued to fail. Thank you.

(*)(**) Repeat

You can only give yourself to me at a distance
Only after giving yourself only to her and twisted kindness
I will crawl across this broken wasteland
Because the scent keeping me alive is none other than your own

You can never feel that hidden face I carry
You can never grace its presence again
My fingers crack and elbows twist
A nightmare becomes a reality once again

(((Ok so I didn't post one with cursing but, hey, it's my newest piece.)))

 

[Lefty]

Maturity Lament

Getting old is giving me fits

In my youth I had some zits

Now its tough to just take shits

Once the lumps in my shorts

were there when I played cavorts

with all the other local sports

That lump in my Depends

And the message that it sends

Cometh now from the other ends.

Once I worried when to shave

if it was just the pussy I'd crave

or to my cock was I a slave

I've gone through life sucking tits

Even mens with hairy pits

I'm growing old and nothing fits

Lets reverse and I'll take the pimple

If I just could get back that sweet dimple

When I was young and life was simple

--------------------------

Well boys and girls........

is this any better?

By the way Lady M, thx for the nice words.... the Chuck
was directed at a special person here but I didn't want
to rat him out by using his JUB name.

 

[DonQuixote]

Wenchie,
A dark gansta rap?
The mood is black
Are we under attack?

Lady Montague,
Are you blue, too?

The curse of the verse
seems to look to the worse,
the depths of the night,
instead of bright light.

And Lefty, Dear Lefty,
the star shining bright.
Direct to the heart,
You give us a start,
(then sour it with a fart?! lol)

 

[Lefty]

I think I am crushed.

JUBs greatest critic and evaluator of

creative exposition obviously did not like

my latest extrapolation of human emotion.

 

[DonQuixote]

I think I am crushed.
JUBs greatest critic and evaluator of
creative exposition obviously did not like
my latest extrapolation of human emotion.

My dearest Chum,
Don't be so glum.
Your verse wasn't Ho Hum.

My mind is tired,
as you can see,
my wit's been waning
and from the Poetry
thread I've been draining.

I haven't been up
to exquisite expose',
Why my brain's mush
I cannot say.

 

[Lefty]

Donnie,

I hope you can do better than that

With some sleep under your hat

I won't start a fight

but you go nighty night.