Hi everyone, I thought I'd share this story with you guys. It's my attempt at writing a love/crime fiction story.
I've just got to warn you first that story is plot-driven so there will be love scenes in it but its not the point of the story. So if you're looking to get off, I'd suggest looking elsewhere.
I'm going to apologise first for the multitude of characters introduced in this chapter. Theres a lot but bear with me, most of them are important as the story progresses.
But other than that, welcome to Regression. I hope you enjoy the read.
Late! Late! I was very, very late.
The sudden downpour didn’t help much either. I was struggling to keep the umbrella standing as I frantically meandered my way through the busy peak hour streets of Sydney. Why would anyone even choose this place as a venue? It was a nightmare to get to ever since those streets got closed. I scurried past the crowd of people being careful not to trip. However, as soon as I got into a sprint, I was forced to halt.
The flashing ‘red man’ had me standing impatiently. I was only five minutes away! Instead of panicking, I steadied my umbrella and pulled out my phone to check the time. 6.46 p.m. The dinner had started 46 minutes ago. I shouldn’t’ have stayed back at the lab, I completely lost track of time. The red man became green and I started to hurry. I didn’t even know why I was so concerned; it wasn’t like I was overjoyed when the invitation came. If it weren’t for the sentimental 10-year guilt trip, the invitation would have gone into the trash. Yet, I felt oddly excited. Maybe that’s why I was sprinting. Maybe somewhere deep inside me, I had wanted to go to this all along.
I caught my breath as I approached the familiar double wooden doors. It was closed. I suddenly felt very nervous like a boy on his first day of high school. It was a little ironic actually. Should I knock? I doubt anyone would hear me in this rain. Instead, I took a breath, step forward and pushed.
***
Arriving early was usual for Detective George Odin. Instinctively, he scanned the area before proceeding forward. The courtyard was like he last remembered, dusty, battered and worn out. He didn’t mind it though; this place was ‘home’ and he hoped it never changes.
“George!”
Odin saw the man before his name was called. Max Geyers. Max has become the man everyone envisaged him to be - broad shoulders, tall and booming but very, very kind.
“Good to see you,” Max smiled as he approached.
“You too, Max. It’s been ten years huh?”
“Yeah it has. Come on in. You’re early but a couple of people are here already.”
Odin proceeded through the double wooden doors and into the hall. The immaculate red bricks had faded to a dusty orange throughout the years. Even though this place stopped operating for ten years, the squeaky, clean tiles that lined the floor remained exact. Odin was quite surprised when he heard the venue would be here. He had thought it became abandoned after he left, and had pictured on of those old, creepy buildings that rotted from the abstinence of human care. Yet, the hall still remained quite robust. Either Max had somehow found a way to breathe life into this place or it never really rotted away.
Ever since the government decided to axe the cathedral, Odin was positive this place would be next. They didn’t. The building stayed and over the years had faded into the background of the busy Sydney streets. Today, the hall looked decadent. It was littered with those fancy round tables used at weddings, arranged in an outwards circular pattern forming a semi-circle shaped floor space at the front. Odin also spotted a DJ stand on the stage and a makeshift bar area to the right. The ceiling was decorated with fancy lights converging into a magnificent centerpiece. Max really did go all out. As Odin marveled at the lighting, he caught sight of Matthew Pinton in his peripheral.
“It’s amazing huh?” Pinton said as he approached.
“Yeah, Max went all out didn’t he?”
“Well of course, it’s been ten years. And apparently everyone’s coming tonight.” Pinton answered.
“Everyone?” Odin went wide-eyed. He wasn’t aware everyone would be coming.
“Yep. All one hundred and twenty something of us.”
Odin was shocked at first, but then he was glad. Everyone would be here. That was a good thing. Suddenly, he felt his heart flutter a little and he didn’t know why. Actually, Odin did know why but he didn’t want to acknowledge it.
“How did Max manage to pull that off?”
“Who knows? He has his ways. Come one lets go and sit,” Pinton said.
Odin followed. Pinto and him were quite good friends in high school. They kept in contact quite frequently afterwards until Odin realized Pinton and most of everyone he hung around with were either meatheads or bullies. The communication got sparse, as the years past and he haven’t spoken to most of the guys in a while. He was quite curious how everyone was doing though. Odin arrived at the table to be greeted by Ben Stevenson.
“Ben,” Odin said. “How have you been?”
Stevenson looked up. Odin noticed that he was bulkier, although he wasn’t sure whether it was ‘muscle’ fat or ‘fat’ fat.
“George! Good to see you man. I’m okay. How are you?”
The night mostly continued this way. As the halls filled, Odin felt strange seeing so many familiar faces that wasn’t so familiar at all. Most of the boys he hung out with came up and spoke briefly before sitting down. They laughed and joked but somehow it all felt a little forced. Odin wasn’t sure if he would have hung out with these guys if he had the chance to do over. His interest waned as the conversations turned into girls and ‘conquests’ – he was a little sick that these types of conversations still dominated the minds of 28-year-old men. Instead, Odin looked around the room. The hall was definitely filled by now. Odin was only looking for him. As he continued to search, someone plopped down on the chair next to him and his attention was pulled back.
“Spacing out like the good ol’days George?”
“Brendan!” Odin exclaimed. He was happy to see his best friend again. They haven’t spoken since Brendan had a promotion and had to suddenly move to London. He knew Brendan was back in town but he hasn’t had time to catch up with his old friend.
“Congratulations on your promotion by the way,” Odin said. “Becoming a partner must feel great.”
“Yeah. But not as col as becoming a detective.” Brendan laughed.
This made Odin feel a little sad. He had always been happy being in the police force and he knew that he had made the right decision. However, he couldn’t help but think where he would have been now if he continued his law degree.
Brendan had started talking to other guys at the table so Odin scanned the room again. He still couldn’t find him. Where was he? It’s past six and rapidly approaching half past. Didn’t Pinton say everyone would be here tonight?
***
The door was much heavier than I expected. It required a few good push to budge. As I entered the hall, the chatter stopped. Everyone’s eyes were suddenly on me. My palms started sweating. Stop it! Calm down, your palms haven’t sweated in years.
“Kayden. You’re here.” I looked up towards the stage. It was Max Geyers speaking to me.
“That makes everyone.” Max continued.
I swiftly unfolded my umbrella and made my way to the right most table in the second circular row thing. I had quickly spotted Will when I entered the hall. I sat down next to Will and silently waved hello to the rest of the guys. Apparently Max had been in a middle of some speech.
“Great interruption there. Max was going on and on about the most pointless thing,” Will muttered.
It felt like we were in year 10 math class again.
“Was that why everyone looked at me?” I muttered back.
“Yeah. We were all looking for a reason to get him to shut up. Why were you late anyways?”
“Got sidetracked at the lab.” I answered casually.
“As per usu-.”
“Will you too shut it?” Lester whispered. He was glaring from across the table.
We smiled at him playfully but stopped talking to look towards the stage. However, Max seemed finished. He announced dinner service was to begin and disappeared behind the stage. Not long afterwards, waiters came out with entrées.
The dinner was the usual, nothing too exciting. Even though I called these guys my closest group of friends, I haven’t spoken to most of them in over three years. Life had a way of holding you up. The only person I kept in regular contact with was Will. He had become a vet after school and was doing what he loved. Animals always meant so much to him. Sitting to Will’s left was Josh who was talking about some kind project he was currently working on. Josh became a graphics designer after high school and was now working at Metticulous, a design firm in the city. Across the table was James and Lester, we used to call them ‘love birds’ since they did everything together. James became a pharmacist and Lester was working as a freelance architect. Lastly, on Lester’s right was Pete. I kind of had a falling out with Peter after graduation. He was the one that was obsessed with popularity but realized that he wasn’t so popular outside of high school. He was the only one of us who didn’t make it to university. I’m not really sure what he does now but I did hear he had a brief modeling stint. And that brings the table round full circle back to me.
“So Kayden, I heard you’re back at uni again?” Pete asked. It wasn’t really a question though. I answered him anyways.
“I actually finished my dissertation last November. I’m due to fly out soon.” The guys stopped their conversations mid-sentence and looked over to us. It felt a little tense.
“Fly out?” Pete continued.
“Yeah. To London.”
“London?”
“Yeah I did my doctorate over there.”
There was a slight pause.
“So was it difficult? I assume PhDs are quite challenging… even for you.” Pete asked.
“Um, this is my third doctorate. I was personally asked to undertake the research as a favour for the university so I wasn’t really being assessed.”
Silence.
I wasn’t quite sure if that was what Pete wanted to know so I continued talking trying to diffuse the awkwardness.
“What do you do now?” I asked.
“Nothing.”
Pete just stared at me. I felt a little nervous. The tension was so tight right now, I wasn’t sure if the other guys were even breathing.
“You know what Kayden, I’m sick of you getting EVERYTHING handed to you. You think you’re so much better than everything else but really you’re just pathetic.” Pete spat out before getting up and walking away.
I felt like I just got slapped.
“I’m so sorry Kayden, he’s a little… sensitive,” Lester said. “Don’t let him get to you though. He’s just - ”
“Don’t worry about it Lest,” I stood up. “I need a little fresh air.”
I headed out into the courtyard and stood over the balcony watching the cars past below. The rain had cleared up a little was now a light sprinkle. I shouldn’t have come tonight; I knew everything would turn out awkward and uncomfortable. I had closed this chapter of my life quite tightly; there were just too many things that hurt me. I turned around quickly to leave and bumped head first into something quite bulky. He grabbed me before I could fall. I looked up and came face to face with the warmest smile and the most golden brown eyes I have ever seen. My heart skipped a little. After so many years, he still resembled the boy that turned around and smiled at me on the first day of Junior English.
“George,” I quietly breathed out.
“Kayden,” he replied smiling at me.
I couldn’t help but smile too. “How are you?”
“Good. I saw you come out and thought I’d come too.”
“Remember this day ten years ago George? We didn’t even say good bye,” I said.
George’s eyes bore into mine with an intensity that was so unique to him. “You were the one that left. I didn’t want you to go.”
The tone he used made me feel so guilty. I did leave, and because of that I remained silent. Instead of replying, I set my gaze out to the night.
“Did you get even my messages? Or my emails?” George asked.
“I did.”
“Did you read them?”
“No.”
I could feel George looking at me. I turned to face him and notice a glint on his hand.
“I came back to Sydney three years ago, you were engaged,” I said trying to be as emotionless as I can. “And from the looks of it, you’re married now.”
My eyes gazed down to the ring on his fourth finger. It was his turn to remain silent and look out into the night sky. My insides felt a little hollow. It was the same feeling I get every time I thought about him. I put on a brave smile. It felt like I was in year 12 and getting my heart broken all over again.
George looked back at me. “So do you live here now?” he asked.
“Yeah, I just accepted a job in Sydney last month. I work at–”
My sentence was cut short by the blood-curdling scream that pierced through the blanket of night. It came from inside. George’s body went tense and his eyes narrowed. He looked at me quickly and then ran inside. I followed. The hall was a complete chaos. Everyone was everywhere. Chairs and tables knocked over. Utensils lay scattered on the floor. People ran in a multitude of directions shouting incomprehensibly. George made a beeline for the stage; a group of people was gathered up front. I made my way forward pushing through the disarray of people. The sight that greeted me made my blood run cold.
~
That's all for now. I appreciate any comment/critique you have.
I've just got to warn you first that story is plot-driven so there will be love scenes in it but its not the point of the story. So if you're looking to get off, I'd suggest looking elsewhere.
I'm going to apologise first for the multitude of characters introduced in this chapter. Theres a lot but bear with me, most of them are important as the story progresses.
But other than that, welcome to Regression. I hope you enjoy the read.
Chapter 1: Reunion
Late! Late! I was very, very late.
The sudden downpour didn’t help much either. I was struggling to keep the umbrella standing as I frantically meandered my way through the busy peak hour streets of Sydney. Why would anyone even choose this place as a venue? It was a nightmare to get to ever since those streets got closed. I scurried past the crowd of people being careful not to trip. However, as soon as I got into a sprint, I was forced to halt.
The flashing ‘red man’ had me standing impatiently. I was only five minutes away! Instead of panicking, I steadied my umbrella and pulled out my phone to check the time. 6.46 p.m. The dinner had started 46 minutes ago. I shouldn’t’ have stayed back at the lab, I completely lost track of time. The red man became green and I started to hurry. I didn’t even know why I was so concerned; it wasn’t like I was overjoyed when the invitation came. If it weren’t for the sentimental 10-year guilt trip, the invitation would have gone into the trash. Yet, I felt oddly excited. Maybe that’s why I was sprinting. Maybe somewhere deep inside me, I had wanted to go to this all along.
I caught my breath as I approached the familiar double wooden doors. It was closed. I suddenly felt very nervous like a boy on his first day of high school. It was a little ironic actually. Should I knock? I doubt anyone would hear me in this rain. Instead, I took a breath, step forward and pushed.
***
Arriving early was usual for Detective George Odin. Instinctively, he scanned the area before proceeding forward. The courtyard was like he last remembered, dusty, battered and worn out. He didn’t mind it though; this place was ‘home’ and he hoped it never changes.
“George!”
Odin saw the man before his name was called. Max Geyers. Max has become the man everyone envisaged him to be - broad shoulders, tall and booming but very, very kind.
“Good to see you,” Max smiled as he approached.
“You too, Max. It’s been ten years huh?”
“Yeah it has. Come on in. You’re early but a couple of people are here already.”
Odin proceeded through the double wooden doors and into the hall. The immaculate red bricks had faded to a dusty orange throughout the years. Even though this place stopped operating for ten years, the squeaky, clean tiles that lined the floor remained exact. Odin was quite surprised when he heard the venue would be here. He had thought it became abandoned after he left, and had pictured on of those old, creepy buildings that rotted from the abstinence of human care. Yet, the hall still remained quite robust. Either Max had somehow found a way to breathe life into this place or it never really rotted away.
Ever since the government decided to axe the cathedral, Odin was positive this place would be next. They didn’t. The building stayed and over the years had faded into the background of the busy Sydney streets. Today, the hall looked decadent. It was littered with those fancy round tables used at weddings, arranged in an outwards circular pattern forming a semi-circle shaped floor space at the front. Odin also spotted a DJ stand on the stage and a makeshift bar area to the right. The ceiling was decorated with fancy lights converging into a magnificent centerpiece. Max really did go all out. As Odin marveled at the lighting, he caught sight of Matthew Pinton in his peripheral.
“It’s amazing huh?” Pinton said as he approached.
“Yeah, Max went all out didn’t he?”
“Well of course, it’s been ten years. And apparently everyone’s coming tonight.” Pinton answered.
“Everyone?” Odin went wide-eyed. He wasn’t aware everyone would be coming.
“Yep. All one hundred and twenty something of us.”
Odin was shocked at first, but then he was glad. Everyone would be here. That was a good thing. Suddenly, he felt his heart flutter a little and he didn’t know why. Actually, Odin did know why but he didn’t want to acknowledge it.
“How did Max manage to pull that off?”
“Who knows? He has his ways. Come one lets go and sit,” Pinton said.
Odin followed. Pinto and him were quite good friends in high school. They kept in contact quite frequently afterwards until Odin realized Pinton and most of everyone he hung around with were either meatheads or bullies. The communication got sparse, as the years past and he haven’t spoken to most of the guys in a while. He was quite curious how everyone was doing though. Odin arrived at the table to be greeted by Ben Stevenson.
“Ben,” Odin said. “How have you been?”
Stevenson looked up. Odin noticed that he was bulkier, although he wasn’t sure whether it was ‘muscle’ fat or ‘fat’ fat.
“George! Good to see you man. I’m okay. How are you?”
The night mostly continued this way. As the halls filled, Odin felt strange seeing so many familiar faces that wasn’t so familiar at all. Most of the boys he hung out with came up and spoke briefly before sitting down. They laughed and joked but somehow it all felt a little forced. Odin wasn’t sure if he would have hung out with these guys if he had the chance to do over. His interest waned as the conversations turned into girls and ‘conquests’ – he was a little sick that these types of conversations still dominated the minds of 28-year-old men. Instead, Odin looked around the room. The hall was definitely filled by now. Odin was only looking for him. As he continued to search, someone plopped down on the chair next to him and his attention was pulled back.
“Spacing out like the good ol’days George?”
“Brendan!” Odin exclaimed. He was happy to see his best friend again. They haven’t spoken since Brendan had a promotion and had to suddenly move to London. He knew Brendan was back in town but he hasn’t had time to catch up with his old friend.
“Congratulations on your promotion by the way,” Odin said. “Becoming a partner must feel great.”
“Yeah. But not as col as becoming a detective.” Brendan laughed.
This made Odin feel a little sad. He had always been happy being in the police force and he knew that he had made the right decision. However, he couldn’t help but think where he would have been now if he continued his law degree.
Brendan had started talking to other guys at the table so Odin scanned the room again. He still couldn’t find him. Where was he? It’s past six and rapidly approaching half past. Didn’t Pinton say everyone would be here tonight?
***
The door was much heavier than I expected. It required a few good push to budge. As I entered the hall, the chatter stopped. Everyone’s eyes were suddenly on me. My palms started sweating. Stop it! Calm down, your palms haven’t sweated in years.
“Kayden. You’re here.” I looked up towards the stage. It was Max Geyers speaking to me.
“That makes everyone.” Max continued.
I swiftly unfolded my umbrella and made my way to the right most table in the second circular row thing. I had quickly spotted Will when I entered the hall. I sat down next to Will and silently waved hello to the rest of the guys. Apparently Max had been in a middle of some speech.
“Great interruption there. Max was going on and on about the most pointless thing,” Will muttered.
It felt like we were in year 10 math class again.
“Was that why everyone looked at me?” I muttered back.
“Yeah. We were all looking for a reason to get him to shut up. Why were you late anyways?”
“Got sidetracked at the lab.” I answered casually.
“As per usu-.”
“Will you too shut it?” Lester whispered. He was glaring from across the table.
We smiled at him playfully but stopped talking to look towards the stage. However, Max seemed finished. He announced dinner service was to begin and disappeared behind the stage. Not long afterwards, waiters came out with entrées.
The dinner was the usual, nothing too exciting. Even though I called these guys my closest group of friends, I haven’t spoken to most of them in over three years. Life had a way of holding you up. The only person I kept in regular contact with was Will. He had become a vet after school and was doing what he loved. Animals always meant so much to him. Sitting to Will’s left was Josh who was talking about some kind project he was currently working on. Josh became a graphics designer after high school and was now working at Metticulous, a design firm in the city. Across the table was James and Lester, we used to call them ‘love birds’ since they did everything together. James became a pharmacist and Lester was working as a freelance architect. Lastly, on Lester’s right was Pete. I kind of had a falling out with Peter after graduation. He was the one that was obsessed with popularity but realized that he wasn’t so popular outside of high school. He was the only one of us who didn’t make it to university. I’m not really sure what he does now but I did hear he had a brief modeling stint. And that brings the table round full circle back to me.
“So Kayden, I heard you’re back at uni again?” Pete asked. It wasn’t really a question though. I answered him anyways.
“I actually finished my dissertation last November. I’m due to fly out soon.” The guys stopped their conversations mid-sentence and looked over to us. It felt a little tense.
“Fly out?” Pete continued.
“Yeah. To London.”
“London?”
“Yeah I did my doctorate over there.”
There was a slight pause.
“So was it difficult? I assume PhDs are quite challenging… even for you.” Pete asked.
“Um, this is my third doctorate. I was personally asked to undertake the research as a favour for the university so I wasn’t really being assessed.”
Silence.
I wasn’t quite sure if that was what Pete wanted to know so I continued talking trying to diffuse the awkwardness.
“What do you do now?” I asked.
“Nothing.”
Pete just stared at me. I felt a little nervous. The tension was so tight right now, I wasn’t sure if the other guys were even breathing.
“You know what Kayden, I’m sick of you getting EVERYTHING handed to you. You think you’re so much better than everything else but really you’re just pathetic.” Pete spat out before getting up and walking away.
I felt like I just got slapped.
“I’m so sorry Kayden, he’s a little… sensitive,” Lester said. “Don’t let him get to you though. He’s just - ”
“Don’t worry about it Lest,” I stood up. “I need a little fresh air.”
I headed out into the courtyard and stood over the balcony watching the cars past below. The rain had cleared up a little was now a light sprinkle. I shouldn’t have come tonight; I knew everything would turn out awkward and uncomfortable. I had closed this chapter of my life quite tightly; there were just too many things that hurt me. I turned around quickly to leave and bumped head first into something quite bulky. He grabbed me before I could fall. I looked up and came face to face with the warmest smile and the most golden brown eyes I have ever seen. My heart skipped a little. After so many years, he still resembled the boy that turned around and smiled at me on the first day of Junior English.
“George,” I quietly breathed out.
“Kayden,” he replied smiling at me.
I couldn’t help but smile too. “How are you?”
“Good. I saw you come out and thought I’d come too.”
“Remember this day ten years ago George? We didn’t even say good bye,” I said.
George’s eyes bore into mine with an intensity that was so unique to him. “You were the one that left. I didn’t want you to go.”
The tone he used made me feel so guilty. I did leave, and because of that I remained silent. Instead of replying, I set my gaze out to the night.
“Did you get even my messages? Or my emails?” George asked.
“I did.”
“Did you read them?”
“No.”
I could feel George looking at me. I turned to face him and notice a glint on his hand.
“I came back to Sydney three years ago, you were engaged,” I said trying to be as emotionless as I can. “And from the looks of it, you’re married now.”
My eyes gazed down to the ring on his fourth finger. It was his turn to remain silent and look out into the night sky. My insides felt a little hollow. It was the same feeling I get every time I thought about him. I put on a brave smile. It felt like I was in year 12 and getting my heart broken all over again.
George looked back at me. “So do you live here now?” he asked.
“Yeah, I just accepted a job in Sydney last month. I work at–”
My sentence was cut short by the blood-curdling scream that pierced through the blanket of night. It came from inside. George’s body went tense and his eyes narrowed. He looked at me quickly and then ran inside. I followed. The hall was a complete chaos. Everyone was everywhere. Chairs and tables knocked over. Utensils lay scattered on the floor. People ran in a multitude of directions shouting incomprehensibly. George made a beeline for the stage; a group of people was gathered up front. I made my way forward pushing through the disarray of people. The sight that greeted me made my blood run cold.
~
That's all for now. I appreciate any comment/critique you have.









