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This is my first attempt at gay fiction. Well, this is the sixth draft of this story. I've changed names, and even point of view by this version, and I hope to finish it, this time. It's a complete fantasy, and the only thing that's even remotely true is the setting. I want it to be a balance between love/character motives, and hardcore action. I apologize for any inaccuracies, plot holes, or other inconstancies, and I value constructive comments.
Part One
I knew that this year would be the best. It was my last year in high school, and come hell or high water I was taking the marching band straight to first place at state contest. The podium wobbled with age as I stepped down off of it, after a long rehearsal on the sun-baked soccer field.
“Am I still giving you a ride home?” I heard the other drum major, Alyssa, ask. I smiled at her. She had brown hair, drawn back into a pony-tail, and I probably would have found her attractive, if I liked girls that way.
“Yeah, I think so,” I said, as I wiped sweat off my brow, from the sun. It was far too hot to be September. She smiled back at me.
“I’ll take the podium in, if you get the yard markers,” she said. I nodded, and ran to the other end of the field, and started picking up the orange markers dotting the yard lines. It was then that I noticed movement on the adjacent field. I saw two people practicing with a soccer ball. They were both shirtless, and sweaty. I couldn’t help but stare as I slowed my pace to pickup the markers.
Instantly, I recognized both of them. The brunet was Mark, and the redhead was Alex. I had spoken to them before in class, but I didn’t know them well enough to call them friends. I had been lusting over them ever since I stepped foot into high school, especially Alex. Since I was still deeply in the closet, I knew it was a bad idea to stare, but something made me.
By the time I had picked up all of the yard markers, and was on my way to the band trailer, Mark had gone inside, and I had lost sight of Alex. Alyssa had already gone inside. I heard a ball being kicked, and turned around just in time to see a soccer ball whizzing towards me. It knocked the orange yard makers out of my arms.
“Sorry! My bad!” I heard Alex say, as he jumped over the fence and ran over to me. My eyes took a quick survey of his tanned, muscular body, and I swallowed unconsciously.
“It’s okay…,” I said. No harm was done, and he was really hot, so I couldn’t hold any thoughts of anger against him. He was hot in many ways. He was literally hot, with sweat dripping off of his face, and the smell of him just managed to barely waft over to me. I swallowed, while I focused on picking up the meaningly plastic markers, to avoid staring at his perfect, exposed chest.
“Let me help you,” Alex said, as he reached down to pick up some of the triangular plastic markers. I nodded, and finished picking up the rest of them, as he got his ball. I stole covert glances at him, as we walked over to the trailer, and put them away. “You sound really good,” Alex said, as I closed the door on the trailer, and locked the padlock.
“What?” I asked, airily, being too busy thinking about him to remember much of anything.
“The band. You guys sounded good,” he explained.
“Oh, thanks,” I said, trying to sound casual.
“Hey, David, how’d you do on that last chemistry quiz?” he asked, while toying with the soccer ball in his hands.
“Pretty good,” I said, extremely pleased that he remembered my name, but not wanting to reveal my perfect score. I always got perfect scores, but I tried to avoid the image of the apple-polisher or know-it-all. Coming into my fourth year with a 4.0, I wished I had a better sex life, and merely an okay grade-point average. Better would have been having one at all, besides with my right hand.
“Do you think you could help me get ready for the test? I’m really having trouble, this year.” He said, with what I note of what I thought was hope that I chalked up to an abysmal grade in chemistry, but wished that we could at least be friends.
“Sure,” I said, quickly. I couldn’t pass up an opportunity to spend time with this Adonis, even when I knew I had no chance of anything more happening. He gave me another glittering smile. I decided it would be safer to look at his face, than to ogle his handsome torso.
“We could go over to my house now, if you’re not busy,” he suggested, still toying with the ball.
I looked into his green eyes, and there was nothing I could say but, “Yes,” to his request. He smiled.
“Cool. I’m hot and sweaty, so I’ll go change. I’ll meet you back at my car,” he said, before pointing to his car, and running off to the locker room entrance. I murmured my acceptance, when I really wanted him to push me down on the grass and fuck me senseless. I shook my head to get thoughts like that out of my head, and ran back inside the school to get my bag, and tell Alyssa I didn’t need a ride. I left a message at home, telling my over-protective parents where I would be. When I came back out, I didn’t see him, so I went over to his car, and waited.
I didn’t know much about cars, but I knew that a new Mustang was fairly expensive, and made a mental note to pretend to be impressed by it, as I leaned up against it. “Calm down. He’s straight. Don’t be gay,” I told myself, as I tried to remember the formulae for polyatomic ions. “For God’s sake, don’t stare at his crotch,” I chided myself with little success, as I saw him walking across the grass to the car.
“Are you ready to go?” he asked, as he unlocked the car with the key remote. I nodded, and got in, after he did. “You’ve got a really cool car,” I said, trying to leave no room for an awkward silence. If not his lover, I could at least be his friend, I decided.
“Thanks. My parents gave it to me for my birthday, this year,” Alex said, with another glittering smile, as he backed the car out.
“Cool,” I said, giving him a weak echo of his smile, as he sped out of the parking lot. My pep-talk to myself wasn’t working, as I cautiously watched him drive. Even the way the muscles in his arms moved as he steered was sexy.
“Thanks for helping me. I really appreciate it,” Alex said, as we came to a stoplight.
“It’s no problem,” I said, managing to sound a little more casual then I had before.
“So, are you and Alyssa an item?” he asked me, as we came to a stoplight.
“No, we’re just friends. I don’t have a girlfriend,” I said. I felt my face get a little hot, and I wanted to look away, but I couldn’t escape is deep, green eyes.
“Cool. I don’t either,” he said. I didn’t understand the signal I got from him then, and my eighteen year-old, hormone-addled brain was too confused to make a decision on what to say next. We didn’t say much for the rest of the way to his house. When his house came into view, it gave me something to look at to avoid him noticing I was staring at him.
We pulled into the garage, and went inside, to the kitchen. I noticed immediately that it was stark white, and completely clean. It even smelled like antiseptics, not at all like a family kitchen, as if it didn’t get cooked in very often. I was too busy watching Alex to find out the next move to notice a furry shape move quickly across the room. I didn’t notice, until it jumped up on me, and knocked me back into Alex. I felt him steady me, and I looked down to see a golden retriever, with his tail wagging.
“I’m so sorry. Get down, Sam!” Alex said. I didn’t really mind, as it brought Alex and me into close contact. The dog jumped down, but Alex’s hands lingered on my shoulders, before I carefully moved away. I petted the dog, as he realized I wasn’t an intruder, and as I realized he was a big pushover, and not really a ferocious predator. “Sorry, he does that, sometimes. He doesn’t bite,” Alex said, again.
“It’s okay. I’m used to big dogs,” I said, as I thought about my own dog. I watched covertly as Alex put the dog out in the backyard, and went over to the refrigerator. I swallowed as I noticed his perfect ass again, as he looked for something.
“Do you want something to drink?” he asked. “I have Coke and Sprite.”
“Sure. I’ll have a Sprite,” I said, as I let my eyes linger on him, knowing he couldn’t see me. He turned around and handed me the cold can. I took it gratefully. Close-up, he seemed bigger, and more defined, even with his shirt on.
“Come on, let’s go up to my room,” he said. I nodded, and followed. I was giddy on the inside to be invited up to his inner sanctum. I followed him through the immaculate living room, and up a few flights of stairs, to his room, which I guessed was all the way up in the attic. He opened the door, and I was sure of it, as I saw the vaulted ceiling, with rafters exposed. I was much more comfortable in his room, than in the other parts of the house.
It looked like someone actually lived here, and was just messy enough to be normal, but not a total pig sty. I saw an old couch opposite a TV, and the bed, desk, and door to the bathroom were on the other end. The red comforter was lying neatly on the bed.
“I won’t bite. I promise,” Alex said, with a grin, shaking me out of my reverie. While I was looking around from the door, he had already sat on the couch. I blushed, and sat down next to him.
“So… um, what do you need help with?” I asked, really trying hard not to sound nervous, before taking a sip of my soda. I pulled my chemistry book and a pencil out of my bag. He pulled his own book out, and pulled out a piece of paper.
“Well… I did the review. Can you look it over, for me?” he asked, also nursing his can of Coke.
“Sure,” I said, before taking it. I looked it over, and noticed that about half of his answers were right, and the rest were completely wrong. I erased them, quickly, and my heart fell when I saw him look embarrassed. I scooted a little closer to him, and put my book and his review on my lap, so he could see.
As I started explaining things, I was able to keep my eyes more under control, stealing glances only when he wrote something down. I noticed that he too scooted closer to me, and after a while, our legs touched, and he didn’t pull back. He started touching my hand when he talked, and I didn’t stop him. If this was how straight guys were friends, I defiantly wanted to be his friend. By the time we had finished our sodas, he seemed to be very close to me.
“Do you mind if I ask you a question that isn’t about chemistry?” he asked, as I was fixing one of his equations. I looked up.
“Sure,” I said, not expecting much of it.
“Well… You know how I asked if you were with that girl, and you said no?” he started. I nodded. “Well, do you have a… boyfriend?” he asked, quietly.
I was taken a little aback. Had he noticed that I was staring at him? What kind of question was that? “Um… no, I don’t,” I said, just as quietly.
“Well, are you… looking for one?” he asked, barely above a whisper.
I almost asked him to repeat himself. My heart wanted to shout yes, but my brain wouldn’t let it. Then I saw something in his eyes, something that told me it was okay. “Y-yes,” I said, nervously. Instantly, my brain reminded me that I had just told a straight jock that I was gay, and that was a bad thing to do. I swallowed. “I… I…,” I stammered, as I moved to stand up. I had to get away.
“Wait…,” he said, and put his hand on my chin. I turned back to him, just in time for his lips to press into mine. I felt my eyes get big, before I closed them, and kissed him back. “I’m looking, too,” he said, quietly, after the kiss was broken. He rubbed my forearm, tenderly. “God, I’ve wanted to do that for a long time,” he said, smiling. I smiled back at him.
“Me too,” I said, as I finally realized that this straight jock wasn’t so straight, and was in to me. He kissed me again softly. Our books fell away, as we kissed again, and again. He wrapped his arms around me, and slowly lowered me back on the couch, still kissing me, as we kicked off our shoes. I felt his tongue slip into my mouth, and I returned the favor, while exploring his back with my hands. “This is so hot,” I said, after what seemed like fifteen minutes of making out on his couch.
“Want it to get hotter?” Alex asked, with his eyes gleaming.
To Be Continued...
Part One
I knew that this year would be the best. It was my last year in high school, and come hell or high water I was taking the marching band straight to first place at state contest. The podium wobbled with age as I stepped down off of it, after a long rehearsal on the sun-baked soccer field.
“Am I still giving you a ride home?” I heard the other drum major, Alyssa, ask. I smiled at her. She had brown hair, drawn back into a pony-tail, and I probably would have found her attractive, if I liked girls that way.
“Yeah, I think so,” I said, as I wiped sweat off my brow, from the sun. It was far too hot to be September. She smiled back at me.
“I’ll take the podium in, if you get the yard markers,” she said. I nodded, and ran to the other end of the field, and started picking up the orange markers dotting the yard lines. It was then that I noticed movement on the adjacent field. I saw two people practicing with a soccer ball. They were both shirtless, and sweaty. I couldn’t help but stare as I slowed my pace to pickup the markers.
Instantly, I recognized both of them. The brunet was Mark, and the redhead was Alex. I had spoken to them before in class, but I didn’t know them well enough to call them friends. I had been lusting over them ever since I stepped foot into high school, especially Alex. Since I was still deeply in the closet, I knew it was a bad idea to stare, but something made me.
By the time I had picked up all of the yard markers, and was on my way to the band trailer, Mark had gone inside, and I had lost sight of Alex. Alyssa had already gone inside. I heard a ball being kicked, and turned around just in time to see a soccer ball whizzing towards me. It knocked the orange yard makers out of my arms.
“Sorry! My bad!” I heard Alex say, as he jumped over the fence and ran over to me. My eyes took a quick survey of his tanned, muscular body, and I swallowed unconsciously.
“It’s okay…,” I said. No harm was done, and he was really hot, so I couldn’t hold any thoughts of anger against him. He was hot in many ways. He was literally hot, with sweat dripping off of his face, and the smell of him just managed to barely waft over to me. I swallowed, while I focused on picking up the meaningly plastic markers, to avoid staring at his perfect, exposed chest.
“Let me help you,” Alex said, as he reached down to pick up some of the triangular plastic markers. I nodded, and finished picking up the rest of them, as he got his ball. I stole covert glances at him, as we walked over to the trailer, and put them away. “You sound really good,” Alex said, as I closed the door on the trailer, and locked the padlock.
“What?” I asked, airily, being too busy thinking about him to remember much of anything.
“The band. You guys sounded good,” he explained.
“Oh, thanks,” I said, trying to sound casual.
“Hey, David, how’d you do on that last chemistry quiz?” he asked, while toying with the soccer ball in his hands.
“Pretty good,” I said, extremely pleased that he remembered my name, but not wanting to reveal my perfect score. I always got perfect scores, but I tried to avoid the image of the apple-polisher or know-it-all. Coming into my fourth year with a 4.0, I wished I had a better sex life, and merely an okay grade-point average. Better would have been having one at all, besides with my right hand.
“Do you think you could help me get ready for the test? I’m really having trouble, this year.” He said, with what I note of what I thought was hope that I chalked up to an abysmal grade in chemistry, but wished that we could at least be friends.
“Sure,” I said, quickly. I couldn’t pass up an opportunity to spend time with this Adonis, even when I knew I had no chance of anything more happening. He gave me another glittering smile. I decided it would be safer to look at his face, than to ogle his handsome torso.
“We could go over to my house now, if you’re not busy,” he suggested, still toying with the ball.
I looked into his green eyes, and there was nothing I could say but, “Yes,” to his request. He smiled.
“Cool. I’m hot and sweaty, so I’ll go change. I’ll meet you back at my car,” he said, before pointing to his car, and running off to the locker room entrance. I murmured my acceptance, when I really wanted him to push me down on the grass and fuck me senseless. I shook my head to get thoughts like that out of my head, and ran back inside the school to get my bag, and tell Alyssa I didn’t need a ride. I left a message at home, telling my over-protective parents where I would be. When I came back out, I didn’t see him, so I went over to his car, and waited.
I didn’t know much about cars, but I knew that a new Mustang was fairly expensive, and made a mental note to pretend to be impressed by it, as I leaned up against it. “Calm down. He’s straight. Don’t be gay,” I told myself, as I tried to remember the formulae for polyatomic ions. “For God’s sake, don’t stare at his crotch,” I chided myself with little success, as I saw him walking across the grass to the car.
“Are you ready to go?” he asked, as he unlocked the car with the key remote. I nodded, and got in, after he did. “You’ve got a really cool car,” I said, trying to leave no room for an awkward silence. If not his lover, I could at least be his friend, I decided.
“Thanks. My parents gave it to me for my birthday, this year,” Alex said, with another glittering smile, as he backed the car out.
“Cool,” I said, giving him a weak echo of his smile, as he sped out of the parking lot. My pep-talk to myself wasn’t working, as I cautiously watched him drive. Even the way the muscles in his arms moved as he steered was sexy.
“Thanks for helping me. I really appreciate it,” Alex said, as we came to a stoplight.
“It’s no problem,” I said, managing to sound a little more casual then I had before.
“So, are you and Alyssa an item?” he asked me, as we came to a stoplight.
“No, we’re just friends. I don’t have a girlfriend,” I said. I felt my face get a little hot, and I wanted to look away, but I couldn’t escape is deep, green eyes.
“Cool. I don’t either,” he said. I didn’t understand the signal I got from him then, and my eighteen year-old, hormone-addled brain was too confused to make a decision on what to say next. We didn’t say much for the rest of the way to his house. When his house came into view, it gave me something to look at to avoid him noticing I was staring at him.
We pulled into the garage, and went inside, to the kitchen. I noticed immediately that it was stark white, and completely clean. It even smelled like antiseptics, not at all like a family kitchen, as if it didn’t get cooked in very often. I was too busy watching Alex to find out the next move to notice a furry shape move quickly across the room. I didn’t notice, until it jumped up on me, and knocked me back into Alex. I felt him steady me, and I looked down to see a golden retriever, with his tail wagging.
“I’m so sorry. Get down, Sam!” Alex said. I didn’t really mind, as it brought Alex and me into close contact. The dog jumped down, but Alex’s hands lingered on my shoulders, before I carefully moved away. I petted the dog, as he realized I wasn’t an intruder, and as I realized he was a big pushover, and not really a ferocious predator. “Sorry, he does that, sometimes. He doesn’t bite,” Alex said, again.
“It’s okay. I’m used to big dogs,” I said, as I thought about my own dog. I watched covertly as Alex put the dog out in the backyard, and went over to the refrigerator. I swallowed as I noticed his perfect ass again, as he looked for something.
“Do you want something to drink?” he asked. “I have Coke and Sprite.”
“Sure. I’ll have a Sprite,” I said, as I let my eyes linger on him, knowing he couldn’t see me. He turned around and handed me the cold can. I took it gratefully. Close-up, he seemed bigger, and more defined, even with his shirt on.
“Come on, let’s go up to my room,” he said. I nodded, and followed. I was giddy on the inside to be invited up to his inner sanctum. I followed him through the immaculate living room, and up a few flights of stairs, to his room, which I guessed was all the way up in the attic. He opened the door, and I was sure of it, as I saw the vaulted ceiling, with rafters exposed. I was much more comfortable in his room, than in the other parts of the house.
It looked like someone actually lived here, and was just messy enough to be normal, but not a total pig sty. I saw an old couch opposite a TV, and the bed, desk, and door to the bathroom were on the other end. The red comforter was lying neatly on the bed.
“I won’t bite. I promise,” Alex said, with a grin, shaking me out of my reverie. While I was looking around from the door, he had already sat on the couch. I blushed, and sat down next to him.
“So… um, what do you need help with?” I asked, really trying hard not to sound nervous, before taking a sip of my soda. I pulled my chemistry book and a pencil out of my bag. He pulled his own book out, and pulled out a piece of paper.
“Well… I did the review. Can you look it over, for me?” he asked, also nursing his can of Coke.
“Sure,” I said, before taking it. I looked it over, and noticed that about half of his answers were right, and the rest were completely wrong. I erased them, quickly, and my heart fell when I saw him look embarrassed. I scooted a little closer to him, and put my book and his review on my lap, so he could see.
As I started explaining things, I was able to keep my eyes more under control, stealing glances only when he wrote something down. I noticed that he too scooted closer to me, and after a while, our legs touched, and he didn’t pull back. He started touching my hand when he talked, and I didn’t stop him. If this was how straight guys were friends, I defiantly wanted to be his friend. By the time we had finished our sodas, he seemed to be very close to me.
“Do you mind if I ask you a question that isn’t about chemistry?” he asked, as I was fixing one of his equations. I looked up.
“Sure,” I said, not expecting much of it.
“Well… You know how I asked if you were with that girl, and you said no?” he started. I nodded. “Well, do you have a… boyfriend?” he asked, quietly.
I was taken a little aback. Had he noticed that I was staring at him? What kind of question was that? “Um… no, I don’t,” I said, just as quietly.
“Well, are you… looking for one?” he asked, barely above a whisper.
I almost asked him to repeat himself. My heart wanted to shout yes, but my brain wouldn’t let it. Then I saw something in his eyes, something that told me it was okay. “Y-yes,” I said, nervously. Instantly, my brain reminded me that I had just told a straight jock that I was gay, and that was a bad thing to do. I swallowed. “I… I…,” I stammered, as I moved to stand up. I had to get away.
“Wait…,” he said, and put his hand on my chin. I turned back to him, just in time for his lips to press into mine. I felt my eyes get big, before I closed them, and kissed him back. “I’m looking, too,” he said, quietly, after the kiss was broken. He rubbed my forearm, tenderly. “God, I’ve wanted to do that for a long time,” he said, smiling. I smiled back at him.
“Me too,” I said, as I finally realized that this straight jock wasn’t so straight, and was in to me. He kissed me again softly. Our books fell away, as we kissed again, and again. He wrapped his arms around me, and slowly lowered me back on the couch, still kissing me, as we kicked off our shoes. I felt his tongue slip into my mouth, and I returned the favor, while exploring his back with my hands. “This is so hot,” I said, after what seemed like fifteen minutes of making out on his couch.
“Want it to get hotter?” Alex asked, with his eyes gleaming.
To Be Continued...


















The game itself is short. You'll like what happens after.