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Stargate SG-1 - Last Mission

^^ Thanks.

The sequel is coming along, but it's a whole lot tougher to write than I expected it would be. It's going where I want it to go, but it's turning out a lot harder to get there than I thought it would.

Unfortunately, I suppose, as the storyline advances and I get new ideas, I sometimes have to go back to earlier chapters and do a small rewrite in order to build a proper lead-in. I want to make sure the earlier chapters are complete before I post them, so it may be a week or so before the sequel begins.
 
Already I'm offering apologies. I came up with a new ending today which is far more satisfying (to me, at least) than the one I had originally planned. To reach that ending, I must go back practically to the beginning and start over again so I can get to that ending.

Sorry, but it may be a bit 'later' than 'sooner' before I can begin posting the sequel.

If it's any consolation, it should expand the story a few more chapters than originally planned.
 
^^ Thanks, martyman. I tried to keep the characters' language and actions as true as possible. Fortunately, they're not difficult characters to write for. I've seen the first 5 seasons many times in reruns. Season 6 (with Jonas) Season 7 (with Daniel's return) and Season 8, I've seen twice. I'm watching Season 9 now for the first time.

I won't say anything about the sequel I'm writing except to say that it ends in Season 9 after Carter returns to rejoin SG-1. The new characters will be brought into the story and you will meet Mitchell, Landry, Dr. Lam, and - yes! - Vala. . . and the Space Monkeys will meet them, too :twisted:

As far as other stories on the net, this is the only one I've posted. I may post others now, but they will not be as involved or as long as this one. When I finish the sequel, there will be no others. They will have to be created in the minds of the readers.
 
AAAAAARRRRG!!

Sorry. More rewrites are necessary. I discovered 2 major reference mistakes in the sequel and I will have to rewrite at least several portions of several chapters and one entire chapter to fix the mistakes.

They're minor details, I suppose, but die-hard Stargate fans will undoubtedly pick up on them. I would rather it be true to the television show.

On the positive side, though, I will probably be posting Chapter 1 of 'Aftermath' near the end of this week, possibly on Friday, Feb. 10.

My apologies for the long wait, but this new story is extremely involved and far more complex than I imagined it would be when I started it. It's something of a roller coaster ride. I just hope it's as rewarding to read as it is to write.
 
Dredging up stories from my favorite JUB author for everyone to see again
 
AS both an SG-1 fan - I'm currently watching the whole series off DVD, and of Neil's wonderful writing, I read this awhile ago, and sent him PM's as I progressed.

I'm posting this note to bump the story back to the top, so a new generation of fans can enjoy the wonderful way Neil recrafted the original SG-1 premise.

Enjoy, guys.
:wave:
 
Bringing this back up for some fresh air - and fresh reading!
 
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