Sunshine in the Train

[karlossus]

I would think the length of the story depends on your desire to continue. As long as you have an audience "the show must go on". And it is an erotic show!

Craiger

THX for that, I have just worked out the next part, so enjoy

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How embarrassing he is making this in public eye! What an idiot! This is more than flirting. He is making it so obvious, I thought. Come on, just push your old friend away and go to his place and do what you promise to do. No, this is just the second time we meet. You said you would do anything and everything for him if he could meet you down in the subway station again. Yes, but...no more but, here is the chance. Think of your miserable years past. Watching porno alone at night and every night. And all you want is a man. But he is more than a man, he is a handsome gorgeous young man and he is totally into you. Do you want to spend another night alone? No, I want a man, a real man. So, go for it. So here is the plan....

“Okay, but allow me to talk to him so he won't be in our way.” I told Dave.

“That's my boy.” He gave me a wicked smile and I walked to Logan, who was still there.

“Hey, sorry to keep you waiting.” I said, looking apologetic.

“It's okay.” He ran his fingers through his hair like nothing happened.

“Actually, you don't have to wait for me 'cos Dave and I have something to talk about.” I told him, tried to sound nice and hoped he walked away.

“Actually, I also have something to talk with you. You know, you are one of those high school friends I have around and all are gone and now you are the only one left so I can talk to you...” he started to get me into a conversation now.

“Logan, not tonight. I really have something urgent to take care tonight.” I began to feel anxious 'cos it lasts a little longer than I have expected and I decided to cut it short.

“But I have...” He began again.

“Logan.” and I stopped him.

“Alright, can we talk tomorrow in lunch time or dinner time?” He finally gave in.

“Why not. I'll see you tomorrow night” I hugged him goodbye and ran away. He went away too.

Seeing him walk away, I turned and felt my lips met something. He kissed me passionately and grabbed my hands and then asked me where we could go. And so I led him to my place and my feet simply glided with my arm round his waist. We walked past the crowded streets, shopping malls, parking lots, fast food shops and at last, I brought him home. And I didn't have to spend another night alone.

He started kissing me barely before we set our feet out of the lift. When I kicked opened the door, he had already pushed me on my couch, with his hands massaging my chest and his lips locked on mine. I slid off his shirt and his jeans and sucked his pink nipples and touched his growing bulge inside his underwear. I touched it with my tongue and slid it off and a pink mushroom poked out pointing at my nostril and I could smell a red rose. It became bigger and bigger right in front of my eyes. I decided to have it in my mouth and my lips went closer to welcome the rose.

And then my door bell rang!

 

[kcm17480]

I definitly want to see where this story goes. I like how this story is shaping up.

 

[harry113]

Wow! Karlossus you certainly stopped on a cliffhanger!!
More please ... soon ...
Thanks
Harry

 

[Craiger]

Karlossus,

What a master storyteller! The old door bell cliffhanger is really good! lol And by that, you have us all hooked and anticipating the next chapter. Don't be too long in keeping us in suspense.

Craiger

 

[karlossus]

Karlossus,

What a master storyteller! The old door bell cliffhanger is really good! lol And by that, you have us all hooked and anticipating the next chapter. Don't be too long in keeping us in suspense.

Craiger

thx for all the nice responses from all of you
get closer and lend me your ears and let me whisper a secret
this chapter starts the beginning of the drammatic ending



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what the hell. Who is ringing my bell, I am busy, I yelled but no voice came out of my mouth. Since I was just in the middle of something and so I decided to ignore it and pretended I was not home. When i sticked out my tongue, I was drooling again the bell rang. I looked up. Oh, don't stop, his doggy eyes told me. Okay, hold your red rose, I told him keeping my head down. Yes, sir, he grinned.

“Sonny, I know you are there.” a voice howled outside my door.
“Oh my god. That's my mum.” I totally freaked out, got up on my feet and directed him to put on his underwear, socks, jeans, shirts.
“Couldn't we wait it out, baby.” he ran his finger through my hair and remained on the spot not in any mood to move.
“No, you've got to get dress...” I told him, “yes mum, I am coming because I was moving some stuff with my PA.” I yelled while he got dressed.

I went to the door and opened it. My mum's plump face was right in front of me.
“What takes you so long, sonny?” she asked, with her foot crossing the threshold.
“I needed to move something back to my office. Ah, yes, this is my PA, Dave.” I simply used the chance to explain about the matter. And Dave gave me an eye for this.
“Yes, mama. How are you?” he squeezed a smile and held out his hand to have a friendly handshake.
“Good, very nice to see you, Dave.” my mum took his hand, “my dear, if you don't mind, please have dinner here because a good cook is gonna cook tonight.” She just scurried into the kitchen and unloaded her stuff.
“Right, every Christmas eve...oh my goodness, I forgot today is the Christmas eve.” I was rather shocked at the thought.

“So the first time and already meet the parent?” he smiled, looked to the kitchen, seeing my mum was busy in it and planted me another kiss.
“Don't.” I whispered, “she didn't know it yet.”
“Mama, do you need help. I am also a great chef myself.” he offered to help and went inside.
“Really, that's nice. And it's a rare talent for handsome young man.”
“Really?”
“Absolutely. Now tell me, how many girls have fallen for that”
“Nobody tells me I am good, mama, you are the first.”
and their conversation went on for forty minutes and the meals were served. And so we had our Christmas eve dinner.

And dessert was also served and we had a good time chatting. So, you left daddy to come here, I asked. No, I did what i did every Christmas eve since you left home and this year it's different because i also have to visit your brother, mum told me, and I will stay there for a few days with my grandchildren. Oh, yeah, I have to take the ten o'clock train..oh, yes, now it's just nine o'clock...so I have plenty of time...tell me....

“Well, BOSS I will come back tomorrow and move out the stuff,” Dave suggested.
“Oh, please stay a little bit longer and I can go with you to the station.” my mum proposed, smiling as she usually did.
“I bet you guys have lots to catch up, so...” he walked towards the door and my mum walked him to the door while I cleaned the dishes.

“Goodbye, mama,” he said.
“Bye! And treat my son nice,” she whispered and called, “sonny, come and say goodbye to Dave” and she went back to the kitchen. I came out of the kitchen.
“Take care of the red red rose 'cos I will pluck it tomorrow.” I kissed him.
“Your mum knew it.” he said.
“What!” I felt the cold ran down my spine.

 

[arogersb]

I don't know how I missed this story ... an exciting and erotic story. I am sure that Logan had something important to tell Milo - maybe a high school crush on him? Here I go, predicting what'll happen next. I'll just have to wait like the rest. But don't make it a long wait!

Justin

P.S. I, too, love the line about the numbers

 

[karlossus]

I don't know how I missed this story ... an exciting and erotic story. I am sure that Logan had something important to tell Milo - maybe a high school crush on him? Here I go, predicting what'll happen next. I'll just have to wait like the rest. But don't make it a long wait!

Justin

P.S. I, too, love the line about the numbers

thx justin,
i really value responses from you guys
also, the numbers...um, my secret weapon to seduce
here i promise all of you for having the patience: i will finish the story 3 days before valentines day---my secret plan, cos they are hot, hot hot

so, there are just three or four more episodes to go---justin, you are so right, but i can assure all of you that your patience worth it cos the ending will be like what happen in valentines day

so, the next 3 episodes are my favourite and i think i can post the next one on monday
again, thx to all of you -- you guys are sweet, do you know that

 

[Craiger]

Karlossus,

I am sad that there are only three more episodes. However, I know they will be just as exciting as the others. All stories must come to a final chapter, but I am sure that you have many more ideas out there to entertain us. This, I will definitely look forward to.

Craiger

 

[karlossus]

[QUOTE
I am sad that there are only three more episodes. However, I know they will be just as exciting as the others. All stories must come to a final chapter, but I am sure that you have many more ideas out there to entertain us. This, I will definitely look forward to.

Craiger[/QUOTE]



hi Craiger,
dont be sad, all stories come to an end, but this is my first piece of fiction,
ya know what i mean

now, i keep my promise and here is the next part, enjoy, gais
................................ part 6 ........................................................................


Milo Ivanitch, open your eyes and do your work! Mr. Longbut howled again.
Yes, Mr. Longbut, I am working, I replied.
If I see you close your eyes and not do your job, you will see what happen, he left his words and passed.
I put my hands on my note on my desk. A note from my mother the night before, she gave me this before she left my apartment for my brother's home.

Dear son,
Please don't be surprised I found out about this, my child. For this, I’ve found out years ago.
From the day you left home after your graduation, I used to worry about you and thought you would feel lonely sometimes. Now I can see that you really grew up and lead an independent life. And I am glad that you have found Dave. He is such a gorgeous guy and good man.
So I hope he will treat you kind and I wish you joy and happiness with him. But above all these, I wish you love, my child.
Beneath is Dave’s phone number, so give him a call.
Ps: don't ask me how I get it. Mummy knows some tricks.
Love,
Mum

His number. I was so glad that mum could get me his number.
Well, I have to get him into my home, shouldn't I? I could not help let out a scream of joy in my office
No screaming, please, Milo Ivanitch. My colleagues complained.
Sorry, I said and picked up my phone and dialed the number.
“Sorry, the number you have dialed is currently engaged. Please call later.”
What a great disappointment! I hang up and got my attention back to my paper work.

Half an hour before lunch, my phone woke me up from my tedious work.
“Hi, Milo, it's Logan.” the other end came his excited voice.
“Yes, Milo Ivanitch is speaking.” I said, unable to remain calm after I got the number.
“I have something that I need to talk to you and wonder if you still remember the...” he was excited somehow because I sensed the joy and excitement in his voice.
“Oh, yes, the dinner, right.” I said.
“yes, should I come to pick you up?” he asked.
Alright, I blurt it out before I wanted to tell him that we better met somewhere than a pick-up. That's not good to look at in this schizophrenic, homophobic world I lived in. but it was just too late. He had already hung up.
At exactly six o'clock, Logan was not waiting out of the company building, but outside my office.
“What are you waiting for, dude?” my colleagues asked, streaming out for home.
“Milo,” earnestly, he replied with a big smile hanging on his face.
“MILO IVANITCH, MOVE YOU FAT ASS! A HOTTIE WAITING FOR YOU!” my colleagues' howling really got me out of my office.

The first thing I noticed about him when I cast my eyes on him was his hair color. It was no longer dark hair. Blond.
“What happen to your hair, Logan” I was just so curious why in one night, his hair became all blond.
“That’s my real hair.” he said.
“Shall we go now?” he stretched his hand, wanting to get my hand.
“I’m not a little girl, my dear.” when I said this, I almost bent by my own laughter.
His face became immediate red.

Before we went for dinner, I called Dave again to see if he could come over to my place to finish off what we had left unfinished the night before.
But I was shocked when I heard “...the number you have dialed is out of service.”
Lost, angry, confused, I hang up and went for dinner with a blond hunky Logan.

 

[Jacketman]

you keep teasing us.

 

[Craiger]

Karlossus,

What a fun chapter. That's why I don't want it to end. You come up with the greatest lines. “I’m not a little girl, my dear.” when I said this, I almost bent by my own laughter.

OK, now getting back to seriousness. Logan sounds really hot and I have a feeling I know what he is going to tell Milo. But, I have been known to be wrong....

Don't keep us in the dark too long.

Craiger

 

[kcm17480]

Please do continue because I find this story interesting.

 

[karlossus]

Please do continue because I find this story interesting.

ah, thx so much
now i dont know if you gais want to read a chapter or 2 about milo and logan
tel me after reading this chapter
i kinda want to further develop some details
and i dont know if you gais particularly mind there are a few chapters though as much as i wanna finish 3 days before st valentines day
now i dunt know if i could

i know that this remind something to some of you; maybe similar experience you have on a train

please let me know if you gais want more

so, heres the new chapter
........................................ part 7 .......................................

Dear Logan, what do you want to tell me? I asked, pulling a chair and sat down in the restaurant.
Dear Milo, I ...am glad that we are ...still here ....years after we graduated. ...Toast for our reunion. He took up a glass of wine and blushed.
Yeah, that's a good one. I raised mine too....
Dishes were ordered and served and wines were filled into our empty glasses. We gulped a few glasses and we talked of the good old days. We both laughed a few good laughter for our dumbness back in those days as if time had never passed and stopped for our memory.

Ah, those days. I was in the school volleyball team and he was the captain. We enjoyed a reputation of a pair of formidable powerful outside hitters. Well, since we were in the same team in the same year, we had a lot of time doing dump things. Fun things like teasing each other in the locker room about nakedness were plenty. I always had a secret crush on him. Of course, he was a bit dump and never knew. In high school, he was the blond and had a face that could melt all the passionate hearts of screaming girls.
After a few drinks, then I remembered and all the memories came back at all once and I felt like I was in the school locker room having fun again. The only difference was that we were no longer kids; we now had our own career and friend circles. And we drank a few more glasses and I could feel my face burning.

Milo, ...do you know that ...I have....have a little crush on you since high school, his tongue seemed twisted again.
Oh, really, that's the first time I ever heard from you, I cried, come on, toast for that
No, it's true! It's just I didn't have the chance to tell you and then graduation came. It's like all happened in one second and you were gone. Milo, do you know how happy I was to see you again.
Oh, me too. Very happy to see you again. I was not able to catch what he meant or maybe, I was a bit drunk.
I love you. Do you feel the same? He asked, holding my hand.
“Let me tell you something, buddy. I used to have a big crush on you...”
Okay, I wanna stay in your place! He interrupted me and yelled for the waiter to pay the bill. Before I was finished, he had already beckoned the waiter and paid the bill.

So we left with heavy steps; we walked out the restaurant and dragged our feet for a few hours and we finally went home. I forgot how long i took to unlock the door and flung him on my couch.
Ouch, he gave out a cry.
What? I asked.
It hit my head.
Silly boy. It's gonna be okay. I held his head and messaged his forehead.
All of a sudden, he pushed me on the couch, climbed on me and held my face.

“Dear little Milo, do you need some after-dinner exercises?” His doggy eyes got closer and stared at me.
“Oh, no, I was feeling way too hot.” I struggled out of his embrace. Oh, my ears were just so hot that they were like fire burning. I untied my tie, my shirt, my belt, my long pants, my socks and only then, I felt cooler. But i felt his two hands clenched my waist and a warm kiss on my face.

Logan must have been feeling so hot that he also stripped off his shirts and pants and socks. I felt his chest hair moved from side to side at my back and his hands moving around my abs and went further down. It was just the heat that I pushed him away. And there he fell forward onto my dinning table and clenched the table.
“Come,” he became wildly excited and called out to me, “into my happy valley, baby.”
I pushed up my heavy eyelids and rubbed my eyes and saw him bent over on my dinning table, with his back facing upwards.

Further down his muscular back, a bony spine ran down to his happy valley, where the rosy bush grew. A fresh fragrance invaded my nostrils; I opened my eyes: deep down the bush was a blossoming rosebud..

 

[Craiger]

Oh oh, I knew Milo and Logan were going to get it on..... Logan is quite aggressive isn't he? Great chapter, and yes, let's hear more about those two.

Look forward to hearing it all.

Craiger

 

[harry113]

Oooooo!! Yes please
Let us hear more about Milo & Logan!!!
Thanks karlossus
Harry

 

[karlossus]

Oooooo!! Yes please
Let us hear more about Milo & Logan!!!
Thanks karlossus
Harry

hi all, st valentine is getting closer and i wish you gais happiness and love and all the wild excitement in that day
and so is my story, and everything will be leading to the ending
keep your eyes open dudes

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I opened my eyes. I knew I did that with Logan, who was lying next to me, with his body covered in a sheet on my bed. I could see that there was a smile hanging in his face. The morning sun rose and blessed us with the tender touches of the sun light through my bed room windows. A breeze touch his hair and I could see that his hair shining more bright than the sun light.

The night before had been a hilarious one if not the most electrifying one. When he bent over on the table, I was so shocked that he would do this for me. It was very eye opening for me. I walked closer and gently touched his back and slowly I slided down my hands down until i reached the thick bushes. Deep down the secret garden, I found a fountain and my hand simply touched the surface, not knowing whether to go on the exploration.
“Ah, that's good.” he let out a slight moan.
“Do you really want me to do it, Logan” my lips moved a bit.
“I've been waiting for this for so long, don't you understand.” he turned his head.

So, I knelt down and got my head facing his happy valley. I could smell the fresh fragrance from the bushy crack. I closed my eyes and just let my tongue sneaking out from the cave and reached the crack and so, I licked it with my saliva running about the holy hole. Logan was totally enjoying it and his moaning kept coming like loads he would shoot in time of great excitement. But I just felt something wrong and I just threw up at his back, so full of the digested food I had eaten...

I almost smiled when thinking about this embarrassing situation the night before. I stroked his hair. He was not up yet, deep in sleep like a little baby, smooth skin, and fragrant breath coming out from him. I gave a light kiss on his face.

And that night was Christmas night and my first time.

What Logan did after i threw up was totally touching and sweet.
“Are you okay,” he got up on his feet and ignored what had left on his back.
“Can I take you to the shower.” he asked.
“Have you eaten something unclean.” he raised the question.
Then I fell on the floor and he just grabbed my shoulder and put me UP on his shoulder and walked towards the washroom.
“You dirty little pig.” he patted at my butt when I was hung on his muscular shoulder.


He put me down and I felt the water coming from above and cooled both of us. I went out the tub and threw up all I had at the toilet bowl. And he turned his back to me and asked me what if the smell could not be removed. I walked into the tub and took my shampoo to wash his back.
“Why are you using shampoo, baby.” he looked at me in disbelief.
“This is the shampoo that have the fresh odor of chrysanthemum,” I said, “and it suits your little bud.” I added.
“Right.” he suddenly planted a kiss on me, “you are the best.”

I dried him up with a towel and herded him to my bed room and he held me from behind my back and pushed me to lay down at my back. I looked at him and felt his body temperature and it was so warm that I closed my eyes and I felt a thousand kissed fell on me like shooting stars. So naturally my legs went up on his shoulders and I felt a burning feeling into me. It was both strange and natural that I stretched my hands and put my arms around his neck and I kissed him on the lips and he grabbed my butt and he stood UP rooted on the spot and he thrust up and into me and it was gaining momentum and it got....

It's already eight thirty when I made to my office. On the way, I was thinking about what he told me before I left home: he asked if he could move in and took good care of me. I said I would think about it.
Should I let him move in and live with me? I do not really have any idea about this. I kept thinking about it until...

“MILO IVANITCH, SOMEONE SENT YOU A BUNCH OF NINETY NINE ROSES. LOOK WHO' SENT YOU THE FLOWERS.” my colleagues screamed while my first step set into the office.

 

[Craiger]

Hey, we have a real romance going on here. And, you Karlossus, are just as romantic. Write more soon.

Craiger

 

[harry113]

OOoooo Karlossus,l 99 red roses!!!
Thing is ...... which guy sent them????
Thanks
Harry

 

[karlossus]

OOoooo Karlossus,l 99 red roses!!!
Thing is ...... which guy sent them????
Thanks
Harry

thx harry, OOOOOooooo, who the guy, unveil in this chapter
craiger, oooo, what will happen when romance turns ....
sorry for keeping you waiting for so long
okay, here is it
................part 9.......................................

My colleagues handed over the flowers, took out the card, urged me unfold the card. It was such a beautifully decorated card, with gilded letters inscribed on the cover:

Your Love. “...and I will always love.....” ​

When I unfolded the card, the music came out and enchanted all the colleagues in the office before I could fold it up again. My face was burning. “Milo Ivanitch, who exactly sent you this?” they looked at me with intensity. “Ehhh....I have no idea,” I said, “I have to find out who has such good taste?” my colleagues gave a good laughter about my humor and went back to work.

Logan, Logan, how I loved you. I never expected you to do this for me. When I cast a look at the roses, I saw his passionate heart burning with fire. Maybe, I should give him a call and thank him for the flowers. What should I say to him? I love him? He said he wanted to move in and live with me. Should I say yes to his request? I have had enough of living alone. Is he the one? Why not? He has the combination of all I need. A muscular body, pretty face, light blond hair, and most important of all, a passionate heart and love....

So, my fingers ran for the phone and I decided to give him a call. “Hi, Logan, it's me.” I was excited. “Hi, Milo, I am so happy you call me.” He was excited, too. “Yes, I am happy too. And thank you.” my face burnt. “You have something you wanna tell me” his voice was cute.
“Yeah, you are so right. Do you have time tonight?” I said. “So you wanna have another pillow fight like this morning?” he said, happily.
“Actually, I wanna ask you to come over to have dinner and there's something we need to talk?” I said. “That's great you ask me to dinner tonight. But what's the stuff... oh, you wanna me to move in and ...” he was wildly excited for my words. “I'll tell you tonight!” I said jocularly, “so be on time.”

“Yes, sweetie.” he said.

And so I planned to have a dinner with Logan. Another night. And so the night came quickly dancing outside the windowpanes. And my colleagues were already streaming out of the office building when my head shot up from my piles of documents. Goodbye, Milo, they giggled and left. Goodbye, I waved them. Time for me to go. I barely walked out the office building before I bumped into a solid thing. I opened my eyes and looked. It was a beautiful face.

“Milo Ivanitch,” the voice said. “Dddddd...ave.” I cried out loud. He immediately gave me a good hug and held my hands and walked. I was enchanted by his fresh look. He told me that he had been away on work in the continent and did not have the time to say goodbye with some friends of his. And he told that he had seen so many exotic things that he would like to take me to see in the next trip....and he showed me air tickets!

And so, we walked and walked and walked and we were in my home again. His hand was around my shoulder and the jokes sparked off like fireworks. So happily I giggled, so lightly I turned my door lock and the door was open.

“Milo, you are late.” Logan's voice cried out and turned his head from the candle lit dinner and saw Dave and I on the door step.

“What is he doing here?” his eyes bulged with disbelief, terror, betrayal.

 

[harry113]

Oh Dear!!"!
Fight time!!!??? Who will win??
More please Karlossus .... Soon!!
Thanks
Harry