Swim Team

[UkrainianForever]

Chapter three was fantastic!
I can't wait for the next

 

[Kyanimal]

O.K., Sheep! Now I'm PISSED!!

You've gone and left "Us" HANGING!!! (Well ... "Animal" isn't exactly "Hanging", and THAT'S the PROBlem!! )

Jeebus!, Dude!! It ain't nice to get "Us" ALL Cranked UP, and then blithely leave "Us", with oozing pre-cum lubing our palms and shafts, and our tongues hanging out! That just ain't "Right", Man!!

SO! Get your paws off your junk and back to your keyboard!!

"Us" NEED MORE!!!

And, stop that Smilin' shit! "Us" KNOWS you did that on purpose!!
Chaz

 

[DonQuixote]

Sheep,
I think your readers are enjoying your literary talents.

(Cliff)hangers and all - well, maybe polevaulting is a bit closer to what's happening, lol.

 

[sheep]

Another fabulous chapter Sheep

Thanks Haunted. I love the progression of your story. It isn't developing like the first few chapters indicated. The primary fetish has all but disappeared and it's now about a subject dear to our hearts. I applaud your work and hope more readers will give it the time it deserves. I wouldn't miss a chapter. It can be disheartening when there isn't much feedback but we both know, they are out there and reading.

Sheep,
Are we being led to a slaughter? This kind, I think we would all enjoy!
Some hot Pasta, before more Hot Passion?
And, oh, the low hanging fruit we get to fondle on the way.
(Or suckle, as the case may be.)
You've been hanging back all these years, just building your own story in your mind. And we're the ones who are benefitting!
Thanks!!

Thanks, Don but pat yourself on the back. You are the guy that takes badly punctuated prose, corrects it and makes it flow. I think you are right. I've been benefitting from all the great writers here. I've also had this idea brewing for some time. The only thing hotter than a swimmers body in a Speedo is one without the Speedo

it means i is askered of the dark and it is
dark in that closet....uh I mean bedroom.
I is a good boy...now, batteries?

Lefty, If you have one of those [STRIKE]dildos[/STRIKE]police special 4 'D' cell flashlights you will get through a chapter of filth, not that you would be reading it, rather, stacking it neatly in your closet.

I know I like it! And I wonder.......hmmm....

Your username is what I am as I write this stuff

Keep it cuming you tease! Loving the story.

I shall. Chapter 4 should raise its uncut head on Wednesday.

Okay Mr. Sheep,
Your editor and my friend...Mr. Positive Mental Attitude,
Father to Rebecca of Sunnybrook Farm, Twin brother of
Dorothy in OZ is trying to bring us together.
Cool, if Donnie the "Q" says you are a good guy, I trust
my brother. Plus, your dirty story is damn good. Now,
sit your butt down and write or I will nail you in a Bio Blog.
Hell I may anyway, soon as I know you a bit better. LOL
-30-

I'm the guy that told DQ I was a good guy. What part of that do you not understand?

You continue to keep your fans happy with this story - nice one!

Who is like us were it not for Autolycus, the very man who has made me covet a possible animated member for the team.

What a delightful way to wake from a nap. Laying there wrapped in the arms of one stud and opening my eyes to another, who, by the way, kisses me. I probably would have thought I had gone to heaven. Now where's that genie to grant my wish
Great chapter, Sheep.
Craiger

That thought went to my mind at the time until I remembered I'm a card carrying member of the atheist party. Ah well, reality can be better than a dream. I'm really glad you like the story.

Chapter three was fantastic!
I can't wait for the next

Thanks! Just for that, I could put in a good word to get you a try-out for the team. If you don't make the cut, you could be towel boy, if you don't mind a bunch of testosterone charged, smooth bodied swimmers asking for favours

O.K., Sheep! Now I'm PISSED!!
You've gone and left "Us" HANGING!!! (Well ... "Animal" isn't exactly "Hanging", and THAT'S the PROBlem!!
Jeebus!, Dude!! It ain't nice to get "Us" ALL Cranked UP, and then blithely leave "Us", with oozing pre-cum lubing our palms and shafts, and our tongues hanging out! : That just ain't "Right", Man!!
SO! Get your paws off your junk and back to your keyboard!!
"Us" NEED MORE!!!
And, stop that Smilin' shit! "Us" KNOWS you did that on purpose!!
Chaz

Look at it this way. I saved you a bunch of lube, and, in these HARD economic times, a penny saved is, well you know. I can give cliff hangers or cute stories that start with "Once upon a time," with the southern USA translation "Y'all ain't gonna believe this shit..." and ending with "...and they all lived happily ever after." Your choice

Damn you, Sheep. You've left me really hard and really horny. And did I mention I'm fucking hard now. I want to hear a knock at the door and James to be there so the fun can start again. I wanna cum! Please, make me cum with the next chapter. I know you can do it.

James knocked at my door. He knocks really harrrrd. After you read chapter 4, I want you to send me a picture showing your cum saturated undies.

Wednesday chapter 4 gets posted. I especially want to hear from those of you that manage to cum without even touching yourselves

 

[hardreader]

Hardreader: Damn you, Sheep. You've left me really hard and really horny. And did I mention I'm fucking hard now. I want to hear a knock at the door and James to be there so the fun can start again. I wanna cum! Please, make me cum with the next chapter. I know you can do it.

Sheep: James knocked at my door. He knocks really harrrrd. After you read chapter 4, I want you to send me a picture showing your cum saturated undies.

Hardreader: OK. I just got to read Chapter 4. I thought you got me fucking hard with the last chapter. Now I'm throbbing and aching to cum, you cum-crazed bastard of a so-called porn writer. I'm loving being teased to the edge like this. Can I hold this load till tomorrow and blow an extra huge load for a picture of my cum saturated undies? I doubt I'll wait, but I gotta say my pre-cum is tasting so good right now that I think I'll just read this chapter again and enjoy some more of the sweet slime I'm leaking. Looking forward to tomorrow's installment. Once again I say, 'I wanna cum! Please, make me cum with the next chapter. I know you can do it.'

 

[Lefty]

What is sad is that normally hard reader is such a practical and pragmatic

guy...poor bastard only has one weakness .. he believes everything he reads

and things get his little swimmers in a turmoil. The Australian crawl or simple

back stroke won't do him. From the moment he dives in until the last splash

before it is time to speedo into the showers.

Sheep, pool your resources...don't throw in the towel. Save this lamb from

the ultimate slaughter and he drowns himself in...well, lets just leave it at

drowns himself.

(ok sheep, just 'member this was donnie the fish's idea)

 

[vampsrock1992]

This Story Is Awsoem I Caint Wait To Read More It Is Fantastic It Would Be Cool To See The 3 Boys In The Story To Be In A Relationship Together.

 

[DonQuixote]

HardReader,
Unless Sheep sent you an advance copy of Chapter 4, you only just finished reading Chapter 3 - just want to make sure you didn't think Sheep meant the chapter you just read, that's all.

(This can get confusing, since I'm just slightly ahead of the curve in cumdom, as it were. It's a HARD job, but somebody has to do it, and you had all the fun with ITIK I-III, not to mention a few other side excursions. p.s. Tell the boys - all 5 of them, I said hi.)

 

[bamaboi69]

dude fucking amazing

 

[sheep]

HardReader,
Unless Sheep sent you an advance copy of Chapter 4, you only just finished reading Chapter 3 - just want to make sure you didn't think Sheep meant the chapter you just read, that's all.

(This can get confusing, since I'm just slightly ahead of the curve in cumdom, as it were. It's a HARD job, but somebody has to do it, and you had all the fun with ITIK I-III, not to mention a few other side excursions. p.s. Tell the boys - all 5 of them, I said hi.)

Hardreader you only read chapter 3. You ain't seen nuttin yet. Chapter 4 took forever as I would write a few paragraphs, get caught up in it, blow, and have to go to the local Mac store to buy a new keyboard. Then the process repeats.

Take pity on poor Don who is caught up in this time/space continuum, never really sure if he read something or [STRIKE]blew[/STRIKE] imagined it. Don't try to get info from him because I have threatened him with burning bamboo splints stuffed up his fingernails for revealing anything.

bamaboi69 thanks for reading, and thanks to all the other readers that have joined. I would love to hear from any and all. Thanks to those who have rated the thread. I didn't expect to see a rating so soon and such a good one. You guys rock!

 

[Lefty]

Sheep,

Donnie actually likes bamboo shoots under his nails,

both finger and toe. The incineration process will

further inflame his ardor.

Toothpicks at the eyelids or short sheeting his bunk bed.

That will get to him. Oh, and play "Sympathy for the Devil"

continuously when he is trying to read.......

btw, less posting and more creative writing please...my

Kindle and your Story both need attention.. I can

charge up the Kindle but am waiting for you to rekindle me.

Great work...just not enough of it...lol.

 

[DonQuixote]

Hey, Lefty, just remember, at least One of the three of us has a full time job.

And, Sheep has his own business, which may require that he actually show up now and again, too.

 

[Lefty]

Hey Dairy Queen....

being witty and clever and supportive and coy is a full full time job...

and I am an old man...show some respect you young fucking whipper
snapper. I was encouraging the man in his literary efforts. Obviously
the post said he was doing great and I was eagerly anticipating his
future endeavors.

sorry we seem to be on different elevators tonight...watch your sugar.

 

[DonQuixote]

Leftykins,
I knew what you were doing, I was just razzing you back, as is our wont.

Time for me to call it a day.
Take care.

 

[Lefty]

once again

dive into the sheets pillow boy

nighty night

 

[hardreader]

OK, there are a few things I do really well and counting isn't among them. Most of what I'm good at is a lot more fun than that. So it was Chapter 3 I read and not. My point remains the same, I can't wait much longer for you to get my nut. So Sheep, let's do it!

 

[sheep]

©2011-2012 Sheep. All rights reserved. Copyright registered and protected. It is illegal to copy, post or publish without the written consent of the author. This story is NOT in the public domain

Chapter four

The shower was a walk-in with a glass wall and door and had a normal shower head, a hand shower, a rain head right in the center, 2 body jets, and a control you needed an engineering degree to operate. It was thermostatic, so the water temperature wouldn’t change if someone flushed the toilet. The shower was 3 ft by 5 ft and held two comfortably; three would be delightful. With all the heads spraying we got wet real quick so I shut off all but the hand shower. I soaped up James, Robb soaped up me, and James took care of Robb. We paid particular attention to those hard to reach areas made easier by James sticking his ass out as much as he could. I got a little more gel on my finger and slowly pushed it into his most private place with him pushing back on my finger. The look on his face was angelic. He was in a place he dreamt of being and the reality was better than the dream. I started to withdraw and he said, “No, don’t stop, please don’t stop.”

I used two fingers and massaged his prostate and listened to his contented moans. Not wanting to run out of hot water, I backed him up to one of the jets after turning it on. The jets are more effective than a bidet. I like my boys clean. Then I shampooed his crotch and cleaned his foreskin, which was clean anyway. It fully retracted when he was hard, which made cleaning an easy, quick job. I finished up by giving him a shampoo. I find that to be erotic and by the smile on his face he did, too. Robb got the shave cream and lathered up the pubic region and his balls, and I took care of his ass. As James had been using a trimmer on his pubes, it was pretty easy to give him the prepubescent look. I held the hand shower so Robb could keep flushing the razor. I helped by holding the skin on his cock tight for Robb. Thankfully, Robb kept the happy trail which looked so enticing when he was in a Speedo. Robb helped hold his ass cheeks apart so I could tidy up with the razor in there. We gave him a good, thorough rinse and cleaned his feet. His personal hygiene was impeccable.


“James, time to test your washing ability on Robb,” I said.

He looked at me and grinned and crouched down in front of Robb, sucking his cock into his mouth. I don’t know if cock-sucking is a hard-wired skill, like babies sucking a tit, but James looked pretty comfortable with it, and as proof his cock sprang to attention. Robb voted with his cock which was also hard. As for me, I was boned, watching my best friend pleasuring my swim buddy, who had taken my virginity just twenty-four hours earlier.

I was afraid I would feel jealous, but strangely, I didn’t. I loved James; I had for years, and also felt really close to Robb. I know James loved me like only a best friend can, and it was apparent Robb had feelings for me, even if they were primarily lust. Jealousy wasn’t going to raise its ugly head. Tonight was all about fun and a celebration of our sexuality. Robb said if anyone had boundaries, they should express them now, to prevent anyone from being uncomfortable. He recounted how his older brother raped him when he came home drunk. Because of this, he didn’t want to be fucked. James said he would try anything once, and I said I would try anything twice. They both looked at me and said “Ho”, to which I responded, “Na uh. I don’t charge for it, so, I guess you should call me ’Slut’.”


We started off kissing and petting, switching things up frequently, to keep things interesting, and to make sure nobody was left out. Two would kiss while the other one would suck and massage the others’ balls. We constantly changed things around. We were all so much into each other that nothing was disappointing, just different. I thought to myself how glad I was I didn’t prepare garlic bread with the dinner. My mind was trying to plan what would happen. I knew Robb could only top; I knew I wanted to bottom for James and top him as well. I finally decided I wasn’t going to plan anything, that way I wouldn’t be disappointed. Robb could fuck me; James, too. I didn’t care.

I was sucking face with James when he whispered in my ear, “Scott, I want you to fuck me -- I want to feel you inside me -- I want to feel your love flood into me.”


Nothing could have turned me on more than hearing him say that to me. I got him in the doggy position, and started rimming him. Robb figured out what to do and deep throated him, with James face fucking him. My tongue was in a very happy place. If someone told me a day earlier that I would be eating a guy’s ass, I would have thought they were insane. Now I was the one that was insane -- with lust and love. My tongue probed deeper and deeper; the moans coming from James as he was being rimmed and sucked were unbelievably hot. I was afraid I would shoot just listening to him. He was my hero, and I was giving him my best.
I spit on my fingers, and slowly probed his inner sanctum. The combination of finger fucking, licking his ass and my fingers, to keep them wet and slippery, made me dizzy with lust. If pheromones exist in humans, there were clouds of them tonight. I couldn’t stop if the cottage was on fire. I had to fuck my friend, and had to do it now.

“Baby, are you sure you are ready for this?”, I asked.

“Scott, fuck me, now, any way you want.”

“Babes, this is your first time. If you sit on my cock, you can control how much cock you take.”

“Scott, no, I want you in control.”

“Lie on your tummy, and I will be on top of you. That way Robb can fuck me at the same time. But first, I want you to suck me, and get me really wet”, I suggested.

James had difficulty getting much of my big dick in his mouth -- he gagged. I told him to take it slow. which was better for me, too, because I wanted to fuck him, not cum in his mouth. I was super horny, so I pulled out of his mouth, grabbed the lube, and gave my cock a good covering of the slippery stuff. I also applied it freely to my fingers and worked on his hole, getting it slippery and stretching him in preparation for the main event. His moans indicated he loved it and was ready. I gently pressed into him.

“Scott, it hurts!”

“Sorry babes, I’ll go slow until the pain subsides.”
I didn’t move; rather, I let him get used to my big ‘little’ head before I went deeper.

“Scott, I think you can push in a little more now.”

I slowly slipped in a bit deeper but could feel him writhing in pain.

“James, try to relax; push out like you are taking a dump, and breathe deeply. That should make it easier on you.”

I could feel he was following my instructions.


“More, Scott but slowly.”


I inched in a little and slowly withdrew until only my head was inside, then entered again, developing a slow rhythm.


“Mmm, baby, it’s feeling nice now, give me more” James remarked.


And so it went until I was all the way in. The feel of his tight ass gripping my cock was sensational.


“I love how it feels inside me and the feeling of your weight on top of me -- it gives me a secure feeling”, James remarked.


“Robb, I want you to plow me now”, I said.

After lubing us both, he got positioned with his dick aimed at my hole, and as I pulled out from James, I felt Robb pushing into me. It felt incredible, pushing in or pulling out and getting drilled -- so many sensations; I was in sensory overload and loving it. All three of us were moaning now, with me being the loudest. Robb was loosening me up, and if things went the way I hoped, when Robb came I wanted James to fuck me. His big, thick, uncut, 8” cock was going to hurt me, like I was hurting him.

Faster and deeper was James request, and naturally I obliged, which made Robb happy, too. We were all slamming together with loud slapping sounds. Robb was drilling me really hard, and I had my cheeks clenched tightly around his love pole.

“Scott”, he uttered in a high-pitched, ragged voice, “I’m going to cum... oh shit... can’t... stop.”

He fucked me hard and rough, shooting rope after rope deep inside me. His cock got really thick, and it felt so good, I had to stop fucking James, to keep from shooting my wad as well.

Robb kissed me long and hard on the back of my neck, and I was doing the same to James. As Robb pulled out of me with a pop, I withdrew from James’ tight hole. James sat up in bed and I pulled him tight to me, caressing him tightly, and probing his mouth with my tongue.

“If topping you, Scott, is half as good and being your bottom, I’m going to be a happy boy!”

I sucked his pre-cum soaked cock into my mouth, and massaged his balls, which squirted more of his sweet, natural lube into my mouth. I pushed his foreskin back and forth licking its taste into my hungry mouth.

“Do you want to lube us, or should I,” I inquired.

James said he wanted to try it because he hasn’t done anything like that.

He aimed the lube bottle in my hole and squeezed hard, roughly stuffing a finger in my ass, and then two. He hit my prostate, sending waves of pleasure through me. Then he lubed three fingers and shoved them in, twisting and turning. I think he must have watched gay porn; I’m glad he did.
“Doggy style?” he asked.

“Don’t ask me; you are in control now”, I said.
I assumed the position, and heard the unmistakable sounds of him lubing his massive cock. What with Robb lubing me and cumming in me, then James lubing me up, I was worried he wouldn’t be able to get enough traction to make himself cum.

Although getting royally fucked by Robb, it hurt like hell when James shoved it in.
“Babes, please go slower, or you will split me in two.”

He did slow down, but with that monster, it still hurt. Well, I asked for it. He was my best bud, and he had just been fucked by me, so I decided to shut up and take it like a man.

I was getting used to his size when he reached around and started jerking me off in sync with his pistoning of my ass. I was back in nirvana, moaning like a whore in heat. He was biting my neck which was somehow erotic. I was getting close.

“Robb, I want your face under my cock”.

My Bambi, who was watching James’ plundering my ass intently, did as requested. He had been standing there jacking off.

“James, fuck me hard and fast. Give me all of you. Fuck me!”, I demanded.

James did as requested; I think he grew another inch in length and girth. His hand was flying, and wrapped tightly around my cock. He moaned loudly, on the verge of orgasm. Suddenly, his other hand grabbed my balls and squeezed hard.
“Scott, I love you more than you can know.”

As his first volley blasted against my prostate, I lost it, too, and fired round after round of hot, thick cum all over Robb’s face. I even heard it ‘splat’.

James was withdrawing completely, then ramming Mr. Big deep inside me. Some ropes of cum fired inside me, while others blasted against my hole. His whole body shook on the last of his shots, and he literally fell sideways in exhaustion on the bed.

Robb found this all too enticing, and kneeled beside James’ head and shot his second load of the night at James’ open mouth. The sight was a real turn-on, so I moved over and kissed James, sucking the large load from his face and mouth, and shared it with Robb, who hungrily accepted.

We literally collapsed on top of one another, totally spent, gasping for air. We all pulled whatever man-flesh that was near to us and kissed. I had heard that the problem with threesomes was that someone always gets left out part way through. We disproved that theory!


I crawled out of the pile of torsos, legs, arms, and penises and got the shower running. “Alright guys, time to get cleaned up for bed” I announced. We all enjoyed washing each other’s beautiful bodies. Amazingly, all of us got hard again even after the steamy lovemaking.


You thought I was going to say sex. No, it was much more than that. I was happy that James and Robb had bonded. Both James, whom I’d known since we were kids, and Robb, who I’d had a soft spot in my heart for almost a year, would become an integral part of my life. We would love each other, have sex with each other and all together, and love would be the operative word. Jealousy wasn’t allowed in our relationship.

After a shooter to relax us, we climbed into bed. Nothing was said, but I ended up in the middle. I slept through the night with nothing to interrupt the peaceful feeling that I now had.

to be continued ...

 

[Kyanimal]

Comments? NOW?? You're kidding, right??? I need some time to catch my breath!

Keep smilin'!!
Chaz

 

[vampsrock1992]

awsome story caint wait to see whats to come.

 

[Lefty]

FYI..

Haunted ^

Is a newbie and his first blog is a way too short short story.

Enjoy the boy, he could be a welcome member to the flock.