Thanks for commenting. I'm sorry for all of the technical detail in this chapter. There will be a lot in the next chapter as well but it's part of the story. Hot times are coming too
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Thanks for commenting. I'm sorry for all of the technical detail in this chapter. There will be a lot in the next chapter as well but it's part of the story. Hot times are coming too
Sheep,
It's a great chapter - yes, you have a lot of technical stuff, but life is sometimes like that - it's not ALWAYS a non-stop cumfest party.
I hope all can get back to their communal polyamory for all, but I know what's going on in the particular needs arena.
It's a great chapter - yes, you have a lot of technical stuff, but life is sometimes like that - it's not ALWAYS a non-stop cumfest party.
I hope all can get back to their communal polyamory for all, but I know what's going on in the particular needs arena.
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Hmmm ...
Seems Scott and Jesse are no longer quite on the same page.
Butt, at least they're back in the same chapter(s). And, that means there's still Hope!
All the more reasons to ... No Matter What ...
Keep Smilin'!!
Chaz
Seems Scott and Jesse are no longer quite on the same page.
Butt, at least they're back in the same chapter(s). And, that means there's still Hope!
All the more reasons to ... No Matter What ...
Keep Smilin'!!
Chaz
Sheep, now i know why it takes you a long time between 2 chapters, its all because the research you are doing about the Organ and / or the O’Bryden products. Its vey technical and you need to learn about all that which must not be an easy thing. Anyway congrat. for the job and making it very interesting. Just can't wait for another Hot part to come 
I have the next chapter written. I wrote a long reply to Calagang and posted it but it still hasn't shown up. When they get this site working, I'll post it.
Try re-posting your long reply to Calagang - it seems better now.
The first chapters shot out of the computer quite quickly but as time goes by, there's so much re-reading to get it right. Last week I actually read it from start to finish and made a few notes. You are quite correct regarding the research. I thought it would be fairly easy for me, having some background in organ but I've been away from it for quite awhile. Virtual pipe organs are very recent inventions. You know what happens when you search for something on the net -- you end up going off in all directions because what you found first sucks you into it.Sheep, now i know why it takes you a long time between 2 chapters, its all because the research you are doing about the Organ and / or the O’Bryden products. Its very technical and you need to learn about all that which must not be an easy thing. Anyway congrat. for the job and making it very interesting. Just can't wait for another Hot part to come
There isn't a company called O'Bryden but there is a watersports manufacturer called O'Brien and a marine fittings company called Brydon Brass mfg co. I'm sure O'Brien's ski vests would never rip and cause a fatality. They are one of the top names in the business.
Chapter 79 weighs in at over 6000 words, many being technical detail. The pace should pick up in Chapter 80. Don't despair because 79 is loaded with sex as well as detail. I need to get further into ch 80 before I can post 79 to make sure it flows.
Chapter 42 - Oh my fucking god! This chapter was amazing. So glad I kept reading. Couldn't keep my hand off my cock during this one. You write a great story but the sex in ch. 42 was top notch. I couldn't get through the whole chapter without blowing a load. Amazing. Thanks.
Sheep - Well, chapter 44 was another amazing chapter. Your writing gives me such pleasure. But you have to let me go to sleep. I have to work tomorrow.
In answer to your question, my favorite character is Scott. I love his caring heart and his fucking luck at meeting guys that end up being great lovers. I also am crazy about the twins, even though we just met them. But, I am wondering about Ray and what his deal is. Also Connor seems to peak my curiously (and my cock).
Can't wait for chapter 45.
In answer to your question, my favorite character is Scott. I love his caring heart and his fucking luck at meeting guys that end up being great lovers. I also am crazy about the twins, even though we just met them. But, I am wondering about Ray and what his deal is. Also Connor seems to peak my curiously (and my cock).
Can't wait for chapter 45.
Sheep - Well, chapter 44 was another amazing chapter. Your writing gives me such pleasure. But you have to let me go to sleep. I have to work tomorrow.
In answer to your question, my favorite character is Scott. I love his caring heart and his fucking luck at meeting guys that end up being great lovers. I also am crazy about the twins, even though we just met them. But, I am wondering about Ray and what his deal is. Also Connor seems to peak my curiously (and my cock).
Can't wait for chapter 45.
After reading your review of Ch 44, I read it again. I hope you can appreciate the fact that my writing is slow when the blood flow is going to the little head and I have only one hand on the keyboard!
I wanted to get the story to the beginning of the fall semester today but as luck would have it, we have been busy with work. Ch 79 is finished but I need to get well into Ch 80 before I upload it.
Thanks for your kind words. It means a lot knowing people are actually out there reading and enjoying my work!
Sheep - you are awesome! Love this story. Is it just a story or did you really live this? If you did, you have my undying admiration and jealousy. I love all the boys, butt still my fave is handsome, cock loving Scott. I have his love of being a great bottom. I also love learning the back stories on these boys. Your descriptions of their trials is so sensitive. Thanks.
Sheep - chapter 52, what a chapter. Wow! I didn't expect this. For the twins to lose Caul is tragic and supremely sad. You are doing a great job of writing this story. Are you sure this isn't real life about real people? I would want to hug (and suck) all of their sadness away. I continue to read...
Sheep, I didn't realize that you are still writing this amazing saga. I'm so excited (even aroused) that you responded to my post. Keep it cumming. I hope you at least get to Scott's graduation from the U of T.
And I totally understand having to do things one-handed. I thank you so much for the fantasies that I have lived (and creamed) in the past weeks thanks to your writing. Thanks SO much. Back to reading...
And I totally understand having to do things one-handed. I thank you so much for the fantasies that I have lived (and creamed) in the past weeks thanks to your writing. Thanks SO much. Back to reading...
Sheep - chapter 52, what a chapter. Wow! I didn't expect this. For the twins to lose Caul is tragic and supremely sad. You are doing a great job of writing this story. Are you sure this isn't real life about real people? I would want to hug (and suck) all of their sadness away. I continue to read...
Clover55 - You ask a very valid question which I will attempt to answer to your satisfaction. The truth in fiction is not what has physically happened, but the emotion behind it. My goal as the writer is to make the reader feel something, to evoke a response. What you feel is the truth inside you, not necessarily the logistics of the story.
The difference between non-fiction and fiction is the heading and the work: in non-fiction, by the fact of stating it is true, it has credibility and therefore can seem unbelievable; for fiction, the writer must make you believe the story is true whether it is or isn't. The answer is yours: truth or fiction, you decide.
