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Swim Team

I should have the next chapter posted this weekend.*|*

Yeah! (!) Another Great reason for putting off doing my taxes! :badgrin: ..|

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv: :slap:
 
Or, you COULD get them done, NOW, so you're all ready for when the chapter is. . .

Just Sayin'
 
Or, you COULD get them done, NOW, so you're all ready for when the chapter is. . .

Just Sayin'

HA! Obviously you don't have your "Professional Procrastinators" Card! :lol:

Well ... to be honest ... I don't have one either. Just haven't gotten around to getting it! :badgrin: :slap:

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:
 
Sure I do. I can still "talk a good talk" lol.

Besides, SOMETIMES, actually getting things out of the way so you can really SAVOUR what cums later, is well worth it!

Just Sayin' . . .
 
"Never put off till tomorrow ... what you can do the day after!" _ "Ziggy" :lol:
 
Swim Team

Chapter forty-three



© 2011-12 Sheep. All rights reserved. Copyright protected.
It is illegal to copy, post or publish without the written consent of the author. This story is NOT in the public domain

Previously...
Jesse started licking cum from my face as Jeff pulled out. Jesse then gave me a cum drenched kiss and I had a violent ejaculation into Josh’s tight ass. He moaned as he flexed his ass muscles while I continued shooting. Jesse continued licking up the mess, feeding it to me. I was having a full body orgasm. Josh continued riding my still hard cock which normally would be too sensitive, but I was really into it. When Jesse fed all of the cum to me, I got Josh off me and I flipped Jesse on his tummy. I licked his ass, fucked him and came again in about thirty seconds, collapsing on him where I fell asleep.
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I woke early in the morning. It was still dark but I could make out Jesse sleeping tightly against me. Jeff and Josh spooned in the other bed. I needed to pee so I slipped out without waking Jesse and went through the big room to the bathroom. As I peed James came in and joined me.

“I’m sorry I didn’t get to sleep with you after coming all the way down here. Are we okay?” he said.

“Sorry babes, everything’s fine, I forgot to tell you that we are coming up to the cottage on Friday so we can sleep together then, unless you want to share a bed with Jesse and me now,” I said.

“Lets cuddle.”

James spooned behind me. His hard cock was aligned perfectly. I loved the pressure of him against my ass but we were both tired and slept easily in that position. Jesse didn’t wake up.


The sun didn’t wake me up this morning. Jeff gave me a gentle prod to wake me to ask if it was alright to sand the drywall so they could put the final coat of filler on it. I told them it was fine, and asked if they could open the window and close the door to let the dust blow outside.

Today was going to be a busy day. James and Jesse were awake, so after a cummy morning breath kiss we hit the shower after dispensing with two of the four esses. Naturally we were all hard but not overly horny in spite of having Ryan join us so the shower went quickly. I noticed it was raining.

“Scott, can you look up the weather on the computer?” Ryan asked.

“Mate, I have my laptop in my closet. Come with me and we can check it out,” Jesse said.

“I swore I would never be in the closet again but for you I’ll make an exception,” Ryan said.

The weather office confirmed rain for the next two days, heavy at times, clearing Thursday night.

I was happy it was going to rain to get rid of the oppressive humidity that had been hanging over the city for a few days. Ryan was positively giddy.

“I guess that means we can leave for Ottawa this morning and have all day tomorrow in Ottawa. I’ve never been there and want to find out if the city turns politicians into assholes or if it just goes with the territory,” Ryan said.

“Vlad is from Ottawa and isn’t an asshole. If you tour the Parliament buildings, see if that affects either of you. Will you need to talk to your dad about switching cars?” I asked.

“No, mom drives him to the train station so we are good to go anytime,” Ryan said.

We all dressed. I couldn’t hear any work going on so I decided to let June sleep until she was ready to get up. I closed the door and went downstairs to make coffee. Jeff and Josh were sanding in the library with the door closed and I could barely hear it so I went down and made coffee, getting the stuff out and ready to prepare breakfast.

I started bacon and sausage simmering in the large covered iron skillets while I set the table. Scrambled eggs were easy for a big group so I got them ready to cook and put the bread and butter by the toaster. All I needed was some people. I went up to check on the library to find they finished sanding the inside and were working on the exterior walls.

“As soon as they get up I’ll have breakfast ready. Do you guys want to buy the lumber for the cedar deck today?” I asked.

“That’s a good idea but we still need to build and stain the shelving and crown molding. Are we still going to your cottage for the weekend?” Jeff asked.

“Absolutely. Vlad and Ryan are heading off to Ottawa this morning and will meet us up there on Friday afternoon. We usually leave by ten in the morning. I don’t know if Kyle is bringing Raph but you guys can come up with us if you want,” I said.

Vlad and Ryan came down carrying Vlad’s three empty suitcases and two he borrowed from Jesse. James and his mom were next, followed a few minutes later by Kyle, Jesse, Robb and Danny. I went downstairs and resumed cooking. Robb came to help, anticipating my next move, pouring coffee for all and making a fresh pot, while cranking out toast. Vlad dispensed his various pills and put the bottles in his overnight bag.

We were having a gentle rain with no wind. I went outside only to find it cool for the first time since the evenings at the cottage. Josh and Jeff came down. We all sat down and had a good meal to start the day.

“I don’t know about anybody else, but I think I was asleep before my head hit the pillow. The bed was very comfortable. There were no squeaky bedsprings. Perhaps James’ dad and I could visit with you for a few weeks in the winter, like a second honeymoon?” June said.

“Mom, give it a rest. It’s not going to happen!” James said.

“Son, I’m just pulling your chain. We wouldn’t do that to you,” She said.

We refilled our coffees and sat by the fireplace and turned it on to counter the dampness in the cool air.

“Kyle, have you talked to Raph about the cottage? Can he make it?” I asked.

“Yeah, I guess I forgot to tell you. He has an install on Friday so we can come up in his truck Friday afternoon when he is done.”

“That’s great! We can all be together for one more blast of Summer. I should print off maps for you guys. I’ll be right back,” I said.

I ran upstairs, turned on the computer and found the map I made with all the information on it and printed three copies. I noticed email from Adam confirming dinner tonight so I gave him the address and some special instructions ending it with ‘see you around six’. Josh & Jeff came upstairs and prepared to put on the final coat of topping on the drywall. I asked Jeff if he had time today if he could finish off the wine cooler.

“Sure, thats a small job. Perhaps we can get the lumber for the bookcases and paneling. Shall we replicate the plain Tudor oak paneling with recessed panels in medium oak stain like your old library?” Jeff asked.

“Yes, I took some pictures. I’ll print them for you to show details. Tell me when you want to meet to get the lumber and paint. Perhaps it will look like something when you have your meeting tomorrow afternoon,” I said.

I printed off detail shots of the library in the old house and gave them and the map to the cottage to Jeff then returned to the hearth to give Kyle and Ryan maps to the cottage, and went to the kitchen to phone Ted, the Lawyer. I told his secretary I needed a half hour with Ted and asked when was a good time today for that. She booked me in for 11:45. I returned to the fireplace area and told the boys that Collins and Adam were coming for dinner tonight around six, trying not to laugh about my plan.

“Shall we do steaks on the barbie, Mate?” Jesse asked.

“Sounds good to me. All in favour?”

It was unanimous.

I gathered up all the house keys and dumped them in an envelope with the garage door remotes. I had my iPad with me with some notes for Ted. June was anxious to go shopping. James got roped into going with her. She went up to brush her teeth giving me a chance to say goodbye to James. We just hugged for a long time finally letting go only to notice his mom quickly turn on the balcony. Well that’s a bit awkward I said to myself. James whispered in my ear to ‘not sweat it’ so I didn’t. Perhaps I would have if we had our tongues down each others throats. I drew James a rough map of how to get to the Eaton Centre. I’m sure she could find anything she wanted there.

“I’m going to meet Jeff and Josh at the building supply. Could some of you guys help bring up the lumber? It’s for the shelving and paneling so please handle with care. I’m off to see the lawyer. I’ll pick up beer for the weekend on the way home. Another thing, could somebody bring the two armchairs and two extension leaves for the table from the locker?” I asked.

I said bye to Vlad and Ryan asking him to drive carefully and let me know how your trip is going.

Ryan and Vlad, James and June and I left at the same time. Vlad was excited that Ryan was going to introduce him to his mother. It was a big deal for both of them. Oh, to be a fly on the wall!


My first stop was the bank. I went to the ATM and inserted the card for Vlad’s joint account and got a printout of the balance of his chequing account. I checked balances for all the sub accounts; savings, CD’s and US dollar accounts which were all joint accounts. I was flabbergasted. I put the printout in my wallet with the card and got some cash out of my own account. I sat in the car for a few minutes trying to absorb the numbers I saw.

Next stop was the building supply. I met the boys there and got a lesson in selecting the best hardwoods for the project. I’ve swung a hammer from time to time but compared to Jeff, I was a wood butcher. He was so knowledgeable. We got primer, ceiling paint, another gallon of the dark Taupe for the walls and the stain and lacquer for the library millwork. I paid the bill and they loaded it in Jeff’s truck. I took off to meet the lawyer.


“I want to thank you, Scott for helping Ryan. He phoned me last night to tell me about his new friend Vlad. I’ve never heard him sound so happy. He told me it appears they are an item and he was taking Vlad to Ottawa to get his clothes tomorrow,” Ted said, as he shook hands and put his other hand on my shoulder for emphasis.

“Actually, they will be on their way soon. Because of the rain, Ryan got an extra day off, for five days in a row. Right about now Ryan will be introducing Vlad to his mother and coming out to her. Actually Vlad is one of the reasons I wanted to talk to you. We were in the bank together and Vlad called me over when I was finished and had me sign some papers. He opened an account at a branch around the corner from the loft and made it joint with me. Curiosity got the better of me this morning and I did a balance check from the ATM with the card they gave me. I had no idea he was wealthy. When I commented on his clothes, he said he would go without eating just to get a new jacket if he really wanted it,” I said.

“I’m happy he did it. I advised him to, with someone with whom he trusts his life. He said there was only one person and it’s you, which I already knew. As I represent him, I can’t reveal any details other than to say his love of my nephew won’t materially impact anything.”

I handed him the keys to the old house, saying I had a meeting set up with my financial consultant for Monday and the entire proceeds of the house sale less brokerage and legal costs would be going to my financial consultant for investment. He knows how I think but the funds he is working with are a small part of my net worth. I haven’t done anything about changing my will which predates my parents death. I have a family now -- my loft mates are my family and I want them to be able to remain in the loft should anything happen to me. I went on to say that I could see a time when Ryan may be one of us and as such and with Robb and Vlad also being your clients, there is a conflict of interest and I would be happy to sign off on the conflict.

The other thing I added was if any of them permanently vacated, their place could be let to another swim team member or other person after a 90 day trial provided it went to a vote with a majority. I’m sure there are lots of other clauses that need to be added to protect me and my investments while I am alive. Also it’s possible I would want to buy us a winter get-away and perhaps update the cottage. I told him I wanted to make it possible to assist any of the loft mates with low interest student loans if they needed assistance. I stressed the need for flexibility as it was likely some of us would meet a life partner and shouldn’t be financially hurt because of love.

“I want to leave these ideas with you. I don’t expect you to come up with all of this now, but if there is anything I should be doing with the portfolio under professional management, I want to pick up the cheque for the house sale from you before 10:30 on Monday, and you can advise me at that time,” I said.

I got up to leave and Ted came over, his eyes shining from fluid released by the tear ducts, and gave me a bear hug.

“This isn’t from Ted Crawford, the lawyer, it’s from Ted, the uncle. You’re amazing. Your whole group is amazing. If you ever walk in the Gay Pride Parade, I would consider it an honour to walk with you.”


My head was spinning with the fact the boys not only loved me but trusted me and valued my friendship. I was spinning knowing Vlad trusted me with his extreme wealth of which it seemed I had only seen the tip of the ice burg. I guess it wasn’t so strange considering he trusted me with his life. I was pretty impressed that big gruff Ted was a softie inside that “don’t fuck with me” exterior.

On the way home I picked up six cases of beer because the weekend was coming up and the beer store had lots in stock. I chuckled to myself thinking about their sales modified smart inventory system, having a visual in my mind of skids of Fourex at the store the next time!

I took the beer up on the freight elevator which had an unpleasant acrid odor. It seemed familiar but I just couldn’t place it. Jesse helped me take in the beer. I returned to park my car. I timed it perfectly. The boys had finished carrying the lumber to the library. Jesse got out the steaks for dinner. I told him there might be an extra person for dinner so he exchanged a package of three for two packages of two.

Robb and Danny came in carrying the two dining armchairs and left to get the extension leaves. I went over to Kyle’s place, knocked and waited, thinking he must have gone back to sleep. Finally he opened the door a crack. He was all wet.

“Hey Scott, I just got out of the shower. What’s up?” he asked opening the door exposing his nudity to me.

“This is,” I said, as I fondled his pretty hard-on which was aimed at my face.

“We want to bring back your table and chairs but I see this isn’t the best time,” I said.

“Can you hold off on the table? I want to get off with you to be blunt,” he said.

“You are coming for dinner and fun and games like you never imagined tonight. Don’t get off now. Take my word for it.

“I don’t think my boner will go away,” he said.

“I tell you what. Why don’t you take Jesse, Danny and Robb to the park and kick the soccer ball around? Turn that sexual energy into physical and burn it off,” I suggested.

“Okay, I’ll get my kit and be over in a few. We can bring the table over then.
Maybe after, we can soak, have a sauna or swim. It’s been crappy weather but it’s stopped raining now,” Kyle said.


I got a call from James saying his mom’s shopping went well and that she offered to buy him new pyjamas so he rolled his eyes and she laughed hysterically. They were on their way back to Muskoka. I told the boys to get ready as Kyle would be here shortly. It was time to kick the ball around. I gave Jesse the key to the Expedition.

“Hide this in your jockstrap while you are playing, mate,” I said.

Kyle came. They took the table and chairs and departed.

Jeff and Josh had the saw set up. Jeff was measuring for the lumber cuts as Josh sanded the drywall, getting it ready for the primer.

I sat down at my computer while it was still quiet and got my bookkeeping up to date. I had been keeping notes on my iPad but needed to set up the guys accounts in my accounting system. It’s mind numbing work for creative people but somebody had to do it. I finished the same time as Jeff finished his measures.

Jeff got all the pieces out for the wine cooler, and began its completion. I put the extension leaves in the dining table, centered it under the light and spray waxed and polished it, finishing by putting the big tablecloth on it and arranging the chairs around it. It sat ten comfortably. Upstairs, Josh was applying the primer coat.


The boys returned home from soccer with Kyle, all looking a little dirty and smelling a lot dirty. They grabbed towels, soap and Speedos and headed over to the sauna. I stripped the beds and ran the sheets through the laundry knowing they would get all funky again tonight. Call me a classy bitch but I hated having guests sleep or play in a well used bed. When I was putting the sheets in the dryer, I saw the boys dash over to the pool with one more boy! I thought it was Danny but this boy had straight long blond hair. This called for a closer look. I went out to see them fooling around in the pool. I got the introduction to Gabe who looked and sounded like he was 14 but in fact had just turned 18. He was from South America and was on his winter break from university visiting a friend he met on the internet.

“Did I hear correctly that you are 18? Pardon me for saying but you look closer to 14,” I said.

“Is the same thing everybody say to me. I was born some weeks before I should. I am only 165 cm and 55 kg, my voice has not changed and I don’t shave yet, and my name is Gabe,” he said.

He had the cutest accent and giggle. ‘18’ sounded like aye-cheen and ‘changed’ came out change-ed like it was two words. His body and legs were hairless and his legs were very athletic looking. Finish it off with blue-green eyes and that weapon of ass destruction in his Speedo and it spelled perfection. I told him he was welcome to drop in some time but he said he had to be careful as he did not want to upset his host. I suggested a daytime visit if his host was at work during the day and then excused myself. The boys could work out the logistics. I wanted to do a photo shoot with him as much as anything.


Josh was sanding the library interior when I got back and the loft smelled of contact cement. All the stainless panels were in place with bits of masking tape holding everything together until the glue set. Jeff’s goal for today was to have one coat of paint on the library.

Watching people work was tiring. I was kicking myself around the block for not going for a sauna with the boys so I decided to shower. The wall jets almost made me cum so I turned them off and used the rain head and thought of June talking about getting romantic with the mister and my boner died. As I dried myself, the others came in all giddy and went into the shower. I warned them to not cum because we had company coming. They were all rock hard so I presumed they liked Gabe as much as I did. My nuts ached.

I made the bed and checked on progress. The boys were almost finished with a coat on everything. In the morning they could final coat the ceiling and exterior. I told them they were welcome to shower when they finished and presumed they would stay overnight again.

“Scott, it’s nice of you to ask. We need to go home but we can stay for dinner and a little while after,” Josh said.


Everything started happening at once. Kyle showed up after getting dressed. I checked my email finding one from Collins saying they were bringing their tooth brushes and he was bringing a change of clothes so if they had too much to drink, he could leave in the morning from the loft and go directly to work. I tried to keep my twin fascination down to a dull roar. I opened a window a bit on the main floor because I could still smell the contact cement. The boys returned from their showers, going on and on about the cock on little Gabe. Jeff and Josh needed to clean up the painting equipment and would shower after that. Jesse and Robb messed around in the kitchen getting things ready.

“Mate, I’m making you a drink. You look apprehensive,” Jesse said.

“I d-don’t think I’m apprehensive. I just can’t get over Gabe. He is so beautiful and perfect. I would like to see his passport to confirm he is over 18,” I said.

“When you talk to him you will know. Here ya go mate -- Cuba Libra, light on the Coke,” Jesse said.

Danny ran around with a duster. Jeff and Josh reappeared looking sexy and hot. Jeff removed the masking tape from the wine cooler and polished it to get rid of all the finger prints. It certainly looked part of the kitchen now. Jesse wrapped the potatoes in foil after washing them. He thoughtfully did an extra one and put them all in the oven to partially cook. The phone rang. They were at the door so I buzzed them in. I went to the foyer, closing the door behind me. I opened the door to see them getting off the elevator. This is the first time I saw Adam and Aaron at the same time and I almost jizzed my undies. I couldn’t tell them apart but Collins told me who was who. I told Adam he could come in and stay in the foyer and listen; I guessed it would be a ten minute wait.

I escorted Collins and Aaron pretending to be Adam into the bar. Robb was there like a shot; Jesse was already there, and Danny and Kyle ditched their dusters and came over right away. Introductions were made. Robb and Jesse told ‘Adam’ how good he looked and were pleasant to Collins as well. ‘Adam’ put his arm around Robb saying how much he looked forward to a repeat performance. Poor Robb. We could almost hear his cock go sproing. Jesse got everyone a beer and a single malt scotch for Collins served in one of moms crystal glasses. Kyle was pretty surprised how Robb and ‘Adam’ carried on. By now they had kissed several times. He looked at Collins for any sign of anger but there was none.

Robb and ‘Adam’ were now groping each other.

“Suck it Robb just like last time. I’m so fucking horny. I almost went into a cubicle to jack off this afternoon but I wanted to pump that hot thick cream down your throat, so what are you waiting for? Suck that cock,” he said.

Robb didn’t need an engraved invitation. He dropped to his knees, unbuckled ‘Adam’s’ belt, yanked his pant’s down getting slapped in the face from his big cock as he dressed commando. Robb put his hand around it and played with it.

“Am I losing my mind? I thought you were circumcised.”


To be continued ...

I'm always looking for comments, good or bad, and to rate the story if you haven't, yet. I'm not sure but you may have to sign up for a free account to vote or make comments but it only takes a minute, which is considerably less than the hundreds of hours I've spent writing and DonQuixote has spent editing it.

Today I am announcing a contest. The story, unfortunately must end, so today I am announcing a contest. I am soliciting your ideas for how Swim Team ends. The person that comes up with the best idea, and not necessarily the way I plan its completion, will get a mention when the story is published. I know, all that, and a couple of bucks will get you a cup of coffee!

Thanks in advance for your participation, and for your continued support. It means the world :)

 
Sheep,
A nice bit of reparte'e w/ James' mom - she's a great lady!

Lots of work and finishing going on.

Then, there's the "Candid Camera-esque moment at the end - with the Classic '60's "to be continued" at the most evocative (that's A word for it, lol) moment!
 
WOW! EVERYONE is Working SO hard, including Scott, I'm surprised ANYONE has any energy left to "PLAY"!! (Let alone "Play" as HARD as they do!) (!) :badgrin:

Butt, I guess that's how you put together an Awesome 'Crib', and all pitch in to keep it running smoothly, and being fed really well. ..| By the time it's finished, though, school will be kicking in, and the guys will have to be practicing/working out, and studying, on top of all their chores! #-o Might Scott consider hiring some cooking/cleaning staff? :D

Tremendous FAMILY you've got going 'here'! AH! To be Young again! (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:

P.S. Today was laundry AND taxes day! ](*,)
 
Letter to:
Chaz KY-Animal
CheeseHead Land, WI

From: The ICPP (International Confederation of Professional Procrastinators)
Subject: Rescission of your Membership Card

Pursuant to the Articles of Incorporation of the International Confederation of Professional Procrastinators, Chapter 4, part 15, you have been found guilty of exercising Due Diligence in the preparation and filing of your Income Taxes. Said preparation and filing was commenced and completed prior to the file by date, and no extension was requested.

A penalty has also been assessed requiring you to give the entire extended swim Team Family, INCLUDING the Recording Secretary and Copy Editor, Head at a time to be determined that is mutually convenient to all parties.
 
Letter to:
Chaz KY-Animal
CheeseHead Land, WI

From: The ICPP (International Confederation of Professional Procrastinators)
Subject: Rescission of your Membership Card

Pursuant to the Articles of Incorporation of the International Confederation of Professional Procrastinators, Chapter 4, part 15, you have been found guilty of exercising Due Diligence in the preparation and filing of your Income Taxes. Said preparation and filing was commenced and completed prior to the file by date, and no extension was requested.

A penalty has also been assessed requiring you to give the entire extended swim Team Family, INCLUDING the Recording Secretary and Copy Editor, Head at a time to be determined that is mutually convenient to all parties.

Letter to: The ICPP (International Confederation of Professional Procrastinators)
Somewhere north of THE City, on the (Right) East Coast

From: Chaz KY-Animal
CheeseHead Land, WI

Subject: Rescission of my Membership Card

Pursuant to the established fact that I never got around to applying for, let alone receiving, a Membership Card from your august ORGANization, your aforementioned relinquishing of such is a moot POINT! #-o

However, though the incidence in question may be due grounds for a 'virtual' rescission, I would like to point out that I have not yet written, nor mailed, any checks that are due! Nor am I planning to until I absolutely MUST! [-X

In spite of all that, the penalty that You have assigned, though also moot, is still being taken under advisement, and Serious consideration. :bj: (!w!) (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:
 
Letter to: The ICPP (International Confederation of Professional Procrastinators)
Somewhere north of THE City, on the (Right) East Coast

From: Chaz KY-Animal
CheeseHead Land, WI

Subject: Rescission of my Membership Card

Pursuant to the established fact that I never got around to applying for, let alone receiving, a Membership Card from your august ORGANization, your aforementioned relinquishing of such is a moot POINT! #-o

However, though the incidence in question may be due grounds for a 'virtual' rescission, I would like to point out that I have not yet written, nor mailed, any checks that are due! Nor am I planning to until I absolutely MUST! [-X

In spite of all that, the penalty that You have assigned, though also moot, is still being taken under advisement, and Serious consideration. :bj: (!w!) (group)

Keep smilin'!! :kiss:(*8*)
Chaz :luv:
DonQuixote and Kyaniaml you are just ssssssssssooooooooooooooo FUCKING fUNNY
 
We have our moments.
Thankfully, Sheep if a pleasant, easy-going host.
 
Regarding the ending. Seems to me that we have to get them back into school and the swim team functioning as one crazed sex machine before we can even consider an ending. If it is a matter of energy or time, just space the chapters out a bit. BTW, I don't really think this really needs to end. There is also the matter of Vlad's health; whichever way you decide to go with that, plus a lot more. Face it, you have a winner on your hands. RBRCNDR(*8*):kiss:
 
Regarding the ending. Seems to me that we have to get them back into school and the swim team functioning as one crazed sex machine before we can even consider an ending. If it is a matter of energy or time, just space the chapters out a bit. BTW, I don't really think this really needs to end. There is also the matter of Vlad's health; whichever way you decide to go with that, plus a lot more. Face it, you have a winner on your hands. RBRCNDR(*8*):kiss:

You are right. They have turned into sex crazed animals. Hopefully with the responsibilities of school, the swim team, Jesse on the soccer team and James on the hockey team, they will be happy with only one ejaculation a day. Scott might get busy freelancing for the "Daily", and of course the loft should be finished shortly. I know Coach will change strategies for their training so all the boys will be in perfect physical condition. Absolutely perfect! I don't think for a moment they will be so studious as to forego a few beer busts for which the loft will be ideal.

Vlad sees the doctor in a week, so we should have a better idea of which way it is going for him. He seems so much improved. Scott is a stickler for detail but I hope he can skip over much of it once things are under control. I think he is afraid of making a mistake and being judged "from the grave" by his father.

There is always the possibility of making it a multiple part story.

I've received a number of thoughtful comments regarding the end, with the most common one being, "Don't you dare!"

The only thing I can tell you at this stage is that the fat lady hasn't sung yet so keep that towel ready. The next chapter is written. If you guys like it as much as I do, get a couple of extra towels ready. The only other one that knows what happens is Donny and I bribed him to keep him quiet. :twisted:

Just one more thing. I hope you didn't take it seriously when I said they would be happy with sex only once a day. I see no basis for that :sex:
 
As I did not get the predetermined number of comments, I regret to inform you that further work on this story has ceased. Thanks to all those that have supported me in the past year.
2012/04/01
 
As I did not get the predetermined number of comments, I regret to inform you that further work on this story has ceased. Thanks to all those that have supported me in the past year.
2012/04/01
You know that you nearly get me on that one Sheep, good try anyway(!):wave::kiss:
 
Sheep,
Wot? Do we look like Fools du April?

Good try, though, lol.

 
As I did not get the predetermined number of comments, I regret to inform you that further work on this story has ceased. Thanks to all those that have supported me in the past year.
2012/04/01

WTF is a thread bonus point? Sounds like some April 1 korny humour.

I meant work has ceased for today, not like forever ya know?:^o
 
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