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The Shower [ Formerly entitled: Jack]

Re: Jack, Part One

You have to continue with this story. It's just to good to stop now that you opened up pandora's box.
 
Re: Jack, Part One

man such a great story...why dont u continue and maybe introduce one or two more characters.
 
Re: Jack, Part One

Oh man, I was hoping you would continue this one (-;
 
Re: Jack, Part One

I agree with all your fans, please continue the tale. Imagination can do wonders if you let it. Sorry I havent posted ealier, but I've been off line for a while.
 
Re: Jack, Part One

Well, I do have a couple of ideas for this story continuing, so perhaps I will stretch it out a bit. Thanks to all those out there who reply to the stories in this forum- it really does make a difference to those of us who are writing them.
 
Re: Jack, Part One

Glad to hear that you have more to write on this particular story. You write very well and I am sure you won't have trouble in continuing. Reading about the beginning of a new relationship such as Gabe's and Jack's is quite a turn on. Can't wait to continue reading.

Craiger
 
Re: Jack, Part One

I've actually written some more on this story, guys, but I didn't like the line the story was starting to take. So I scrapped it, and came up with something else. Normally, I just write the story as it flows through my head, with very little editing after thoughts are on paper. I've struggled with this story a bit more, but don't worry- I'll get it. And thanks to all for your support.
 
Re: Jack, Part One

I hope you will come up with a part you like. This is a very good story!!!
 
Jack and I returned to my house in silence, each immersed in our own thoughts. I eased to a stop by my front gate, and sat a moment before turning to Jack.

"Why don't you go shower, then come back over and we'll talk about our...situation."

"Ok," he mumbled quietly, then got out and trudged across the street to his house. I watched the muscles in his calves flex with each step, then shook my head as I realized just how far gone I was over this great kid. I moved slowly up the sidewalk and inside to grab a beer. I needed one.

Two minutes later, I heard the screen door slam and looked up to see Jack shirtless and holding a change of clothes in his left arm.

"Hey, Jack, I thought the water was fixed on your side of the street. Has it messed up again?"

"Not that I know of, Gabe, I just thought you might like to help me scrub my back," he said with a sly grin.

I grinned myself, and slugged down the rest of my beer before slamming the bottle down on the table. I stripped off my own shirt as we headed for the bathroom.

Jack reached in to turn on the shower and adjust the temperature, and I found myself studying the play of muscles across his broad, beautifully tanned back as he did so. He had really filled out in the last year or so, and my dick was rock-hard in anticipation of what was to come.

He stooped, and slid his boxers and shorts to the floor in one motion. I couldn't resist reaching out to touch that perfect ass, and he jumped when I gave it a quick squeeze. He turned and looked me up and down.

"Why am I the only one naked here?"

I quickly shucked off my blue jeans and boxer briefs, and we stood there contempating each others' naked bodies for a moment before he turned and stepped into the streaming water. I followed right behind and pulled the curtain shut behind us.

He faced the water, and as it splashed off his chest and streamed across his shoulders and down his back I reached for the bar of soap. I worked up a lather, and slowly ran the soap down and up that perfect back, then down again to the top of that perfect ass. I could feel, or hear, or sense- whatever- his breath quicken as my hands played across his back. I ran the soap across his ass, repeatedly, giving perhaps a little extra attention to the cleft between his cheeks, just to make sure it was cleaned thoroughly. He moaned as I did so.

I relinquished my ass ministrations, and straightened back up, still running the bar of soap over his body. I slid around under his arms, and thoroughly soaped his chest and stomach. I chuckled as I rested my chin on his shoulder.

"What?"

"I was just thinking, I'm gonna have to get another bar of soap if I keep working this one over your abs- that eight-pack is going to wear this bar down."

He laughed with me, and I continued to circle my hands around his front side, pausing briefly at his chest to tweak a nipple with my thumb. He groaned, and leaned back into me. I ran the soap up to his neck, and leaned forward to grasp his earlobe lightly with my teeth as I descended back down below his navel to the top of his pubes. I suckled lightly on his lobe, then stuck my tongue in his ear, quickly in and out. He shivered.

I pressed up against him as I continued bathing him, my rigid member pressed against him just above the crack of his ass. I kept my hands moving around his front side, down towards his groin and swooping away before making any contact with his manhood. He groaned as I teased him.

I bent to soap his legs, which put me right at ass level. Unable to resist the opportunity, I ran my tongue along the crack of his ass as I'd wanted to in my fantasies. He shivered again as I reached between his legs with my other hand to briefly fondle his balls, then stopped to switch the soap to that hand so I could lather up his right leg. I worked up slowly, again passing by his groin on the way up. I could feel him shaking as he undoubtedly longed for me to go for the goods.

He turned suddenly, and I dropped the soap. He pressed up close, so that our two rigid cocks were pressed up against each other.

"You wanna play, huh?"

He reached down, and grasped our two cocks together with one hand, sliding very slowly up and down. Ecstasy!

He leaned in, and our lips met, softly at first then with increasing intensity. His tongue probed at my lips, and I opened to receive it as he increased the speed of his hand down below. The sensation created by the friction was incredible. I reached up to drape my arms across his shoulders and pull him even closer, if possible.

His hand worked up and down, and we were unable to maintain the kiss as we both drew closer to orgasm. I leaned back, and we both looked down at his piston-like motions. I reached under to play with both of our ball sacs, and felt them tighten at the same time as we squirted simultaneously. He spurted great streams of cum, almost to his shoulder, and I was nearly as impressive myself.

His motion stopped as we both dribbled to a stop, but he maintained his hold on both of our dicks. We leaned in to kiss again, then stopped to grin idiotically at each other.

"Holy fuck," Jack exclaimed, "did that really just happen?"

I knew exactly how he felt.
 
That was hot as hell, if I do say so myself! I got worked up just previewing it before submission.
 
This story is awesome and you wanted to stop it. I'm sure glad that you let your imagination run wild because you are doing an incredible job. Can't wait for more of this very hot tale.
 
Jack lay prone on the bed, still naked after that incredible shower, and I was propped beside him, leaning on my left elbow and slowly trailing my fingers up and down his body. He shivered occasionally when I came across a sensitive zone. His perfect ass garnered a lot of my attention, with its downy fuzz, and I had to restrain myself (for the moment) from burying my face in it.

With his chin resting on his hands as he faced the headboard, Jack finally spoke. "Wow, Gabe, that was even better than I thought it would be! You know, I've really been thinking about us a lot, especially since you moved in here, but even before that. I'd been wondering how to tell you my secret, and how you were gonna feel about it."

"Oh, yeah," I replied, stretching up to cover the nape of his neck with a couple of kisses, "I gotta say, I'm glad you did! I've had a hard time coming to grips with it, myself."

He moaned slightly as I blew gently in his ear and nuzzled the lobe. "For someone having such a 'hard time' with things, you sure have adjusted quickly," he said, grinning and jumping slightly as I grazed his balls between his legs with a finger.

"I guess you bring out the best in me, Jack," I said, slowly kissing my way down his back. No longer able to resist, I pushed his legs further apart so I could spread those magnificent cheeks. I leaned in to blow gently into his hole, then gave it some attention with my tongue. He writhed on the bed as I did so, causing my target to move, and I laughed.

"What, you don't like that?"

"I love it," he said, "but are you sure you've never done this before?"

I laughed again. "I'm sure, but I did have a girfriend who loved some ass attention, so I took a chance that you might, too. At worst, you'd have told me stop."

"No, no, by all means, continue," he said, rolling back into position.

I pushed his left leg up further, bent at the knee, so I could gain better access, then attacked with my tongue. He groaned as I worked in and around his hole, then slid a hand up to scratch lightly at his balls.

"Jeez, Gabe, I'm gonna cum without touching my dick if you keep that up," Jack said, muffled slightly by having his face half-buried in the pillow.

"Hmm, I do like a challenge," I replied with a grin, then flipped him over.

He was hard as a rock as I pushed his legs back, and I thought to myself I wish I had ever been that limber. With his knees back by his head, and the tip of his cock poking him in the belly, his hole stretched slightly and I re-attacked. I probed deeply with my tongue, while running a finger up and down the crack of his ass. As I dipped and plunged, I could feel his body stiffening, and moments later his ass tightened and he began to erupt as his legs descended, shooting his creamy streams up around his shoulders and face. What a sight!

Jack lay back with a dreamy half-smile on his face, then glanced down to where I lay partway down the bed. He grinned mischievously.

"Not bad, but let me see what I can do!"

"If you insist," I replied, stretching my arms above my head with a self-satisfied smirk on my lips, "but don't expect such quick success! I'm older, and can control myself much longer."

"We'll see about that," he cried, jackknifing quickly and fastening his lips on my still-erect cock. He bobbed up and down a few times, then began sucking.

As blow-job expertise goes, he wasn't that good. But for pleasure, knowing that this was something we'd both been fantasizing about, it was head and shoulders above any other blow-job I'd ever had. I lay back with my eyes closed and let him work.

As he circled the head of my cock with his tongue, then licked my slit, I felt my balls churning rather unexpectedly. I never came this fast, but as he reached up to tweak one of my nipples, I exploded. I had no time to warn Jack, but he must have sensed it, anyway, and he pulled off just in time to avoid a mouthful. He reached out and worked my cock up and down, helping to drain every last drop.

I lay back, panting a little from the exertion, and looked up at Jack to see him grinning like the cat that ate the canary.

"More control, huh?"

I grinned sheepishly, then pulled him down into a hug. Our naked bodies met, and it felt right.
 
If you have an imagination like that, I want you working me over!
 
wow! hot story gogetter, can't wait for the next part.
it would be good to add tension to the story to make it dramatic like if they almost get caught having sex. LOL.
cheers for a horny read
 
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