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The following is a FICTIONAL story that I take full credit for creating and writing. I have a lot more material to follow with this story but I wanted to post the main introduction, of this would-be series, so I can start to get some feedback. The majority of the setting for this particular chapter only is at a college campus and a college locker room. You'll notice that I did not give the main character's object of affection a name. I simply describe his features but do not call him by any name as to avoid any potential confusion or force a name that may not sit well with you. Sometimes I've read stories that begin arousing me, then I discover the guy in the story has the same name as my dad or some other real person I know and it makes reading the story weird to me. Hope you understand. More importantly, I hope you enjoy this beginning. Please give me your feedback. Thanks!
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He tackled me down on the ground and held me there as he slowly rubbed his long, thick, growing cock up my face. Then he quickly pulsated his hips up and down, as if he were skull fucking me. He looked down at me with a sly grin and winked. As he got up, I could see the enormous bulge in his mesh soccer shorts. Sweat from his defined, muscular chest was left on my face. I could taste a bit of it soaking on my lips. He walked away from me with such an arrogant swagger that left me feeling weak and belittled. He proudly marched back over to the rest of the team and exchanged some high-fives while laughing and receiving their praise. I felt so embarrassed, but in a strange way, I was suddenly intrigued by him.

I never thought about a guy in a sexual way before; and I knew I wasn't a fag. But still, after his quick display of dominance over me and his obvious fierce sex drive, I was left wondering more about him. After just feeling how big his flaccid cock was through his shorts and feeling it grow against my face, I was real curious to know just how big and hard it can get. I knew it had to be much bigger than my own dick. I was never happy with the size of mine which is probably why I've never been confident enough to sleep with many girls. I only had sex four times. So for a guy that is nearly two years younger than me, who is in better shape, that also has a bigger cock; it all makes me envious, and yet, somewhat infatuated with him. Suddenly, a ton of thoughts and questions were running through my head:

Is his cock smooth?
Does he have any hair on his balls and cock?
Is he circumcised?
How often does he fuck?
Is he a big cum shooter?
Does he like to be dominant and make his bitches do whatever he wants, like swallow a big load from his cock?
Is he rough and aggressive when he fucks?
How long can he fuck and how many times can he go?

I started to get aroused thinking about this. I really wanted to know, but had to snap out of it. I was the new kid on the team and this was my first practice on the field with them. I'm not gay. I shouldn't be thinking about this stuff. I figured since he was the team captain, he was just showing off to the guys. I considered it to be my hazing, so to speak. I wanted to fit in so I got up and laughed it off. As I did, the coach blew his whistle and told us to hit the showers.

There were twelve of us on the team and I still didn't know anyone yet So, I kept to myself. I'd never taken a shower with guys around so I was a little nervous. I went to my locker, dropped my shorts, and threw a towel around me real quick. I walked into the shower room and was relieved to discover that there were small dividers between the guys, with a door, that was a little more than waist high. I was really happy about that because even though I had only been thinking about him, I was worried that I'd start to bat my eyes at some of the other guys on my team, because they seemed to be just like him too. It was obvious that these guys were like a fraternity and had no problem showering in front of each other. There were no gay antics going on. In fact, they only talked about girls, fucking girls, fucking more girls, and who has the fastest car among them. I walked straight ahead to the first available shower stall and began to wash up.

After a minute or two, he walked in and entered the stall right next to me. I couldn't believe it. Only a thin plastic divider was between me and his naked body. I really wanted to peek over, but I restrained myself. I didn't want to be caught looking at the team captain's naked body in front of everyone on my very first day. He didn't say anything to me or even acknowledge me. No one did. Instead, he talked to the other guys about the same locker room talk as always: Tight Pussy, Big Tits, Sweet Ass, and fast cars. I finished showering as fast as possible and when I was done, I wrapped my towel around me and left.

I went to my locker and got dressed. I had to hang around a bit longer and finish setting up my new equipment in the locker. All the guys were gone except for him. I didn't even realize he was still there until he walked over to me and said, "What's up?" Wearing just his towel, the water dripped from his wet, wavy, dirty blonde hair. He wore his towel real low and I noticed a thin trail of hair from his belly down to his cock. The water also gleamed around the edges and crevasses of his pecs and abs. His ice blue eyes pierced right into me. I was in awe. I know I must have looked like I was about to drool over him. I kept trying to keep myself from looking right down at his cock but I couldn't resist. My eyes quickly glanced down, and, sure enough I saw the head of his cock bulging against the wet towel. He caught me looking and just smirked. Almost as if he's used to that and knows he's hot. I finally said, "Hey."

He took a few steps closer to me. I was feeling nervous and awkward. I mean, I just met the guy earlier in the day and now he was practically naked, dripping wet, and standing less than a foot in front of me. He was so close to me, I bet if he got a hard on, it'd poke me. I could tell he was completely comfortable with himself. He carried his cockiness very well. Yet another reason I envied and admired him. He patted me real hard on my arm and said, "Good job out there, kid."

"Kid?" I thought to myself. I'm almost two years older than him. I'm hardly a kid.

He continued, "I think you have a lot of potential."

"Thanks." I said back, but still felt uncertain about his approach.

"Yeah. I'm glad you joined the team. You're really gonna have a good time with us."

"Cool. I'm looking forward to it," I told him.

He shot me that same sly grin from before when he had me pinned down and said, "yeah, me too, kid."

I was wondering if he was ever going to apologize or mention at all what happened earlier on the field. But, he didn't bring it up and I wasn't about to right now. He began to walk away, but then suddenly stopped in his tracks and turned back around to me. "I noticed you rode a bike. It looks like rain is coming," he said with some legitimate concern.

"Yeah, but I don't live too far," I replied.

"Well, I have big Jeep that you could toss your bike in the back of," he told me. Then his tone got deeper and his eyes became more fixed on mine. He grabbed his cock and balls to adjust them under his towel, and asked, "you want a ride, kid?"

He saw me watch him grab his junk. I didn't reply immediately because my mind was racing with so many thoughts. He raised his eyebrows at me and said, "c'mon, I know you want to."

I finally responded and accepted the offer.

He pulled his Jeep up and I threw my bike in the back. I got in next to him and he took off fast. He was wearing a backwards hat that made his wavy hair stick out over his face a little. Despite the approaching storm clouds, he wore his shades and looked damn cool in them. He wore a pair of jeans with rips over his knees and a basketball jersey that really exposed a good portion of his chest. As I said before, I never checked guys out like the way I just did, but something about his presence, the way he dressed, talked, walked, and drove his car was so damn. . . hot and sexy. I knew he got laid as often as he wanted.

I gave him directions to my house but he didn't seem to be paying attention to me. He was more interested in his stereo system sounding loud enough and checking out girls in other cars. In fact, with the music as loud as it was, we didn't even talk. Eventually he passed by the street he should've taken to get me home. I told him to turn but he kept driving. I must have said, "stop," at least four or five times before he finally turned down the music and told me he was going to get something to eat. A few minutes later we stopped at a sub shop. He got out of the Jeep, but I didn't. He told me to come in with him but I said I was broke. As I noticed him grab his cock and balls again, he said, "I got you, kid. C'mon."

We went inside and it was clear to me that he and the girl working behind the counter knew each other. She was really gawking at him and trying to make plans with him some night later in the week. He didn't seem to care about her and somewhat made fun of her for working there and having to make our subs. When he went to pay, he said he was a few bucks short. He gave the girl a seductive look. A look I hadn't seen from him before. She offered to make up the difference with her own money she made from tips. I couldn't believe it, but damn, how could you not succumb to that hot look of his. He said, "thanks, baby. I might call ya later." We took our food and left. I felt bad for girl, but said nothing about it. We got in his Jeep and I asked how he knew her. He chuckled and took out his cell phone. He started browsing through some pictures and told me she is the younger sister of a girl he used to date. Then he showed me a picture of her, completely naked in a bed, with a ton of cum all over her, but mostly her face. He laughed a lot once he saw it again. "That's all me, kid," he said proudly.

"Oh, shit, dude. That's awesome," I told him. I tried not to sound impressed, but in reality I was so envious of him and how he just flaunted his sexual escapades in front of me.

"She fucking loves it. She was begging for it again just now. That's why she paid for my food," he said with a laugh.

"Yeah, I guess so," I said.

"I don't think I'm gonna give it to her again for a while. That pisses me off when bitches start liking it more than I do, ya know what I mean, kid?"

"Yeah," I said, but really had no clue.

"Besides she was just a quick lay for me to get her older sister angry. I took both those bitches virginity in less than two weeks." I could tell how good and big that made him feel to brag about it. He continued, "Keep scrolling through the pics on my phone; you'll see a ton of sleazy sluts covered in my spunk. I love marking my cock property that way."

I so wanted to look at all the pictures to see his handy-work and maybe catch a glimpse of that big, thick cock I know he has. Instead, I played it cool and just handed the phone back to him.

"OK, kid. I'll show ya later." He started the Jeep and told me to hold his sub while he drove.

"You going to drop me home now?" I asked.

"No. We're gonna go chill at my bro's place for a bit." He told me this as if there was no other option for me.

"Umm, that's cool I guess." I said.

He turned his stereo up loud and took off fast down the road.
 
Sounds really hot man, gibbons. Can't wait to see what the team capt has in store. ;)
 
ditto gaytxn09 , i can't to see what will happen next...|
 
Hey guys, thanks for the positive feedback. I promise I'll have part 2 up sometime later in the day, but as I write more, I realize I need to give the team captain a name. It just gonna be necessary for later. Of these names for him, which do you like best?
-Casey
-Josh
-Andy
-Tommy
-Leon
Any other suggestion? I prefer Casey so far.
 
Casey is my first choice and Josh is my second:-)
 
Ok guys, here ya go... I made some minor, but really hot, changes to the original first part. For one, I added Casey's name and some other hot facts about him. Plus I wrote it in the present tense because I think it reads better than in past tense. Anyway, I’m posting the rewrite of that along with the second part. Please take the time to read it all cause it's awesome. I know you're gonna enjoy.


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He tackles me down on the ground and holds me there as he slowly rubs his long, thick, growing cock up my face. Then he quickly pulsates his hips up and down, as if he's skull fucking me. He looks down at me with a sly grin and winks -- it's Casey. As he gets up, I can see the enormous bulge in his mesh soccer shorts. Sweat from his defined, muscular chest is left on my face. I taste a bit of it soaking on my lips. He walks away from me with such an arrogant swagger that leaves me feeling weak and belittled. He proudly marches back over to the rest of the team and exchanges some high-fives while laughing and receiving their praise. I feel so embarrassed, but in a strange way, I am suddenly intrigued by him.

I never think about guys in sexual ways and I know I'm not a fag. But still, after Casey's quick display of dominance over me and his obvious fierce sex drive, I'm left wondering more about him. After just feeling how big his flaccid cock is through his shorts and feeling it grow against my face, I'm real curious to know just how big and hard it can get. I know it has to be much bigger than my own dick. I've never been happy with the size of mine which is probably why I'm not confident enough to sleep with many girls. I'm almost 21 years old and only had sex four times. Casey is more than two years younger than me, in better shape, and has a bigger cock. It really makes me envious, and yet, somewhat infatuated with him. Suddenly, a ton of thoughts and questions run through my head:

Is his cock smooth?
Does he have any hair on his balls and cock?
Is he circumcised?
How often does he fuck?
Is he a big cum shooter?
Does he like to be dominant and make his bitches do whatever he wants, like swallow a big load from his cock?
Is he rough and aggressive when he fucks?
How long can he fuck and how many times can he shoot his load out?​


I start to get aroused thinking about this. I really want to know, but have to snap out of it. I'm the new kid on the team and this is my first practice on the field with them. I'm not gay. I shouldn't be thinking about this stuff. I figure since Casey is the team captain, he is just showing off to the guys. I consider this to be my hazing, so to speak. I want to fit in so I get up and laugh it off. As I do, the coach blow's his whistle and tells us to hit the showers.


There are twelve of us on the team and I still don't know anyone yet, so I keep to myself. I've never taken a shower with guys around so I'm a little nervous. I go to my locker, drop my shorts, and throw a towel around me real quick. I walk into the shower room and I'm relieved to discover that there are small dividers between the guys, like a stall, that is a little more than waist high. I am really happy about this because even though I have only been thinking about Casey, I worry that I'll start to bat my eyes at some of the other guys on my team, because they seem to be just like him too. It is obvious that these guys are like a fraternity and have no problem showering in front of each other. There are no gay antics going on. In fact, they only talk about girls, fucking girls, fucking more girls, and who has the fastest car among them. I walk straight ahead to the first available shower stall and begin to wash up.


After a minute or two, Casey walks in and enters the stall right next to me. I can't believe it. Only a thin plastic divider is between me and his naked body. I really want to peek over, but I restrain myself. I don't want to be caught looking at the team captain's naked body in front of everyone on my very first day. He doesn't say anything to me or even acknowledge me. No one does. Instead, he talks to the other guys about the same locker room talk as always: Tight Pussy, Big Tits, Sweet Ass, and fast cars. I finish showering as fast as possible and when I'm done, I wrap my towel around me and leave.


I go to my locker and dress. I have to hang around a bit longer and finish setting up my new equipment in the locker. All the guys are gone except for Casey. I don't even realize he is still there until he walks over to me and says, "What's up?" Wearing just his towel, the water drips from his wet, wavy, dirty blonde hair. He wears his towel real low and I try not to notice just how low it is. He has such a nice surfer's tan. Some water gleams around the edges and crevasses of his pecs and abs. He has more muscle than me and is really cut. He keeps his face and chest freshly shaven; I guess he keeps his cock and balls the same. He is a fresh 18 year old who takes care of his hot body real well. His ice blue eyes pierce right into me. He is the epitome of a cocky hot young jock and I am in awe. I know I look like I'm about to drool over him. I keep trying not to look right down at his cock but I can't resist. My eyes quickly glance down, and, sure enough I see the head of his cock bulging against the wet towel. He catches me looking and just smirks. Almost as if he's used to it and knows he's hot. I finally say, "Hey."


He takes a few steps closer to me. I feel nervous and awkward. I mean, I just met the guy earlier in the day and now he is practically naked, dripping wet, and standing less than a foot in front of me. He is so close to me, I bet if he gets a hard on, it'll poke me. I can tell he is completely comfortable with himself. He carries his cockiness very well. Yet another reason I envy and admire him. He pats me real hard on my arm and says, "Good job out there, kid."


"Kid?" I think to myself. I'm over two years older than him. I'm hardly a kid. He continues, "I think you have a lot of potential."


"Thanks." I say back, but still felt uncertain about his approach.


"Yeah. I'm glad you joined the team. You're really gonna have a good time with
us."


"Cool. I'm looking forward to it,” I tell him.


He shoots me that same sly grin from before when he had me pinned down and says, "Yeah, me too, kid."


I wonder if he is ever going to apologize or mention at all what happened earlier on the field. But, he doesn't bring it up and I'm not about to right now. He begins to walk away, but then suddenly stops in his tracks and turns back around to me. "I noticed you rode a bike. It looks like rain is coming," he says with some legitimate concern.


"Yeah, but I don't live too far," I reply.


"Well, I have big Jeep that you could toss your bike in the back of," he tells me. Then his tone gets deeper and his eyes become more fixed on mine. He grabs his cock and balls to adjust them under his towel, and asks, "You want a ride, kid?"


He sees me watch him grab his junk. I don't reply immediately because my mind races with so many thoughts. He raises his eyebrows at me and says, "C’mon, I know you want to."


I finally respond and accept the offer.


Casey pulls his Jeep up, and as I throw my bike in the back, I see a box of magnum condoms under the seat. I get in next to him and he takes off fast. He wears a backwards hat that makes his wavy hair stick out over his face a little. Despite the approaching storm clouds, he wears his shades and looks damn cool in them. He wears a pair of jeans with rips over his knees and a basketball jersey that really exposes a good portion of his chest. As I said before, I never check guys out like the way I just did, but something about his presence, the way he dresses, talks, walks, and drives his car is so damn. . . hot and sexy. I know he gets laid as often as he wants.


I give him directions to my house but he doesn't seem to pay attention to me. He is more interested in his stereo system sounding loud enough and checking out girls in other cars. In fact, with the music as loud as it is, we don't even talk. Eventually he passes by the street he should take to get me home. I tell him to turn but he keeps driving. I say, "Stop," at least four or five times before he finally turns down the music and tells me he is going to get something to eat. A few minutes later we stop at a sub shop. He gets out of the Jeep, but I don't. He tells me to come in with him but I tell him I'm broke. As I notice him grab his cock and balls again, he says, "I got you, kid. C'mon."


We go inside and it's clear to me that Casey and the girl working behind the counter know each other. She gawks at him and tries to make plans with him some night later in the week. He doesn’t seem to care about her and makes fun of her for working and having to make our subs. He goes to pay and says he is a few bucks short. He gives the girl a seductive look. A look I haven't seen from him before that shouts out, 'I'm gonna fuck you good!' She offers to make up the difference with her own money she made from tips. I can't believe it, but damn, how can you not succumb to that hot look of his. He says, "Thanks, baby. I might call ya later." We take our food and leave. I feel bad for the girl, but say nothing about it.


We get in his Jeep and I ask how he knows her. He chuckles and takes out his cell phone. He browses through some pictures and tells me she is the younger sister of a girl he used to date. He shows me a picture of her, completely naked in a bed, with a ton of cum all over her, but mostly her face. He laughs a lot once he sees it again. "That's all me, kid," he says proudly.


"Oh, shit, dude. That's awesome," I tell him. I try not to sound impressed, but in reality I'm so envious of him and how he just flaunts his sexual escapades in front of me.


"She fucking loves it. She was begging for it again just now. That's why she paid for my food," he says with a laugh.


"Yeah, I guess so," I say.


"I don't think I'm gonna give it to her again for a while. It pisses me off when bitches start liking it more than I do; ya know what I mean, kid?"


"Yeah," I say, but really have no clue.


"Besides she was just a quick lay for me to get her older sister pissed off. I took both those bitches virginity in less than two weeks." I can tell how good and big that makes him feel to brag about it. He continues, "Keep scrolling through the pics on my phone; you'll see a ton of sleazy sluts covered in my spunk. I love marking my cock property that way."


I so want to look at all the pictures to see his handy-work and maybe catch a glimpse of that big, thick cock I know he has. Instead, I play it cool and just hand the phone back to him.


"OK, kid. I'll show ya later." He starts the Jeep and tells me to hold his sub while he drives.

"You going to drop me home now?" I ask.


"No. We're gonna go chill at my bro's place for a bit." He tells me this as if there is no other option for me.


"Umm, that's cool I guess." I say.


Casey turns his stereo up loud and takes off fast down the road.


We pull up to an apartment building. As we approach the building entrance, we notice two girls carrying some moving boxes inside. Casey smiles and winks at them. "Hey girls, you moving in? I'll give ya a hand." The girls quickly take him up on his offer and hand him a box. He looks back at me with a grin and says, "Hey kid, grab a box. Help these nice girls out." Of course I take a box and follow them inside. The two girls are really attractive blondes with great bodies that any guy would want to fuck. They're at least as old as me or possibly a year or two older. Considering that they are four-to-five years older than him, I figure I have a better shot at talking to one of them and seeing if I can spark any interest. But, just as soon as I think that, I realize I don't stand a chance against Casey's sexual prowess. The girls lead the way up the stairs, and as they do, he's fixated on watching their nice ass bounce in front of his face. He quickly glances back at me with a suspicious smile, sticks his tongue out, and raises his eyebrows at me. I can only imagine what he's thinking.


What a coincidence it turns out to be when we discover the girls’ new apartment is right across the hall from his bro's apartment. We drop off the boxes for them and they thank us. He never loses that seductive smile of his. "Hell yeah, you're my bro's neighbor. That's awesome."


"Cool. Maybe we'll be able to pay you back sometime then," the hot blondes respond.


"I already thought about that..." he doesn't hesitate at all, "...you two should come drink with us at my bro's tonight."


The girls look at each other and give it a thought. He doesn't like having to wait for an answer. "Ah, c'mon girls. It will be fun. I just got a fake I.D. so I can get whatever ya want to drink."


The girls laugh right away. "How old are you -- just a day or two over 18?" they ask.


"Yeah, so what? I'll still drink you both under the table. How old are you anyways?"


They respond, "Well girls never tell their real age, but we got a few years on you and way more experience."


He responds by doing the same exact thing he did to me earlier in the locker room: gets real close to them, uses his bright blue eyes to pierce into theirs, grabs his junk, and with a deeper tone says, "Trust me, baby girl, I may be younger than you, but there's no way you're gonna keep up with me. I'll prove it all night."


The girls react the same way as me too. They're taken aback and succumb to his wishes. They agree to come over his bro's later tonight. I see how he uses intimidation to get what he wants. He has such a strong, cocky, sexual presence about him that emits ravenously.


A few minutes later, we were in Casey's bro's apartment. It's a total bachelor pad. Two big couches, big TV, video games, stereo system, a surfboard in the corner, beer cans, liquor bottles, and a lot of posters of naked girls. I can easily tell why Casey loves to come here to chill. "This is it, kid. I crash on this couch here more than anywhere else."


"That's cool," I tell him, "so where is your bro?"


I hear a toilet flush and his bro comes out of the bathroom. As he does, he zips up his cargo shorts from taking a piss."Hey, little bro, what's up? Who the fuck is this?" asking about me.


Casey starts to pour three shots of tequila. "He's the new kid on my team." He distributes the shots among the three of us.


His bro is older than me. He looks like maybe he's 24 or 25. He wears camouflage cargo shorts. I definitely notice him zipping up and see the bulge he is packing. He has a striped jacket-hoody on but it's not zippered and his tan chest is exposed. He has a bad ass tattoo of a jester on the side of his ribs. He also doesn't shave his chest like Casey does. He has a real nice happy trail of hair from his belly button down to his junk. I follow the trail and see the brim of his plaid boxers. He has hair stubble all around his pecs. His nipples are hard and peak from behind the zipper of his jacket. His hair is very much like Casey's long, wavy hair style, but much darker, almost black. His eyes are just as intense too, except they're emerald in color. He sports a sideways baseball hat and a 5 o'clock shadow on his face. Whereas Casey is the epitome of a cocky hot young jock; his older bro, Josh, is the epitome of a cocky hot surfer dude.


"Hey, kid, I'm Josh. This is my place." He comes in close to me and extends his hand. I extend mine and he pulls me in close to him. Our chests touch. His feels so tight and muscular. Being this close to him, I can smell his hot musky pheromones. In a matter of three seconds, I'm aroused.


The three of us each have a shot of tequila in hand now. Casey makes a toast to me. "Here's to the new kid on the team!"


Then Josh chimes in, "and to bangin' sluts!" He grabs his cock and balls much like, younger bro, Casey does.


As we throw back the shots, I see Casey and Josh next to each other and I can't understand why these cool guys have me so infatuated with their hot bodies and sexy attitude. I realize that Casey is exactly the type of a guy I wish I had been when I was 18; and Josh is exactly the type of guy I want to be when I'm twenty-five.


Casey pours three more shots. "Oh yeah, bro, speaking of bangin' sluts. We just met your new neighbors. Two busty blondes begging to be fucked silly. They're coming over."


They slap hands. "Fuck yeah! Good work, bro!" Josh exclaims. "Let's slam those bitches tonight." Josh looks at me and jabs my shoulder hard, "I'll let ya have sloppy seconds, kid."


"Cool,” I say. I start to worry how this night will play out. I thought Casey was just giving me a ride home. Now I'm here at his bro's place, on our way to being drunk, and I just met both these guys today. The girls are on their way over; I know for fact that between Casey and Josh, I have no game with these girls and no chance at all to hook up with one of them.


We drink the second round of shots. "Let's get rowdy tonight, boys," Casey says as he pours more shots.


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So what do ya think? I know there is A LOT of foreplay going on here so far, but please check out Part Three coming up in a day or two, cause I promise it's gonna be the best part so far. Real hot. The buildup isn't for nothing, trust me...
 
cool I like it but is this gonna be like Purple Rain where he is just the kid?
 
In Purple Rain, Prince is known as just The Kid he has no name I was wondering if thats whats going to happen here. Or at some point and time is his name going to be revealed? For me it's like the main character is a ghost they have no identity, still a hot story I just cant paint the full picture in my head yet.
 
In Purple Rain, Prince is known as just The Kid he has no name I was wondering if thats whats going to happen here. Or at some point and time is his name going to be revealed? For me it's like the main character is a ghost they have no identity, still a hot story I just cant paint the full picture in my head yet.

I didn't want to give the "kid" a name or directly describe him, because I feel like the reader can envision themselves as being the main character. It's like putting yourself in "his" shoes. If I describe him as being a tall Mexican named Carlos, it's harder to think of the story as happening to YOU. The readers are many different types of people with different names, so I thought this would be the best way for you to experience the story better.

Anyway, to answer your question, I have no intention (as of now) to give him a name or accurately describe what he looks like. I have never seen Purple Rain, so I can honestly say that I did not take the idea from that.

P.S. Thanks to everyone for the positive comments. I'm glad you are all enjoying the story so far. Been a busy weekend, but I'll have the next chapter up very soon. Stay tuned!
 
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