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The Tide Began to Rise

Wow. What a beautiful chapter. I'm so happy that he has found a loving home. He has been thru so much pain and suffering. That is all behind him now. Now that he has found a place where he feels like he belongs. He found home. It made me sort of tear up, but I couldn't stop smiling at the end. Thank you, I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.
 
lol. im not sure when sex is going to come up in the story. this is definatly not a story based around sex.
 
Wow Tim! I have caught up... What an amazing emotional roller coaster ... I followed the link to your YouTube page, tears rolling down my face at the Love you expressed.

Your wonderful well-written story is one thing, however it is how you have been sharing your SELF that has attracted me so much ... I was with my Beloved for 37 years (the last 3 legally married when it became possible) until Cancer separated us. I am totally in support of your marriage and really honour your sharing so much with us.

Namasté ...
 
SEXYcivilianXXX said:
i still kno some ppl who cant really believe u went thru and r such the great person u r today. im just glad that i read it cuz i think i got one of the best LiL' bros of all time. love ya bro.
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To make this a little more clear to those that have no clue what he is talking about. The things that i went thru have nothing to do with the story. i have taken a few things from real life and put them in the story. The broken bones that tyler has for instance. I had those when i was in highschool. A group of 5 guys beat me up because of who i am.

Tyler losing his mom, not knowing how much she really cared about him. I lost my mom becuase of heart prolems the day after i told her i was gay.

This story is completly made up. But i take things that have happened to me and i put them in the story. Another thing that has happened with be in this next chapter, but it is a recent event. I can not tell you what it is now, because then it will ruin the chapter. But you will know what it is when you read it.

I think that make up a story is a very hard thing to do unless you have something in common, even if it is the smallest thing, with a character in the story. For me, i havce something in common with all of them. Some more then others. But i think that it helps me to keep going. I can share and get things off my chest, without you really knowing it. lol. It also helps to know that you all like and enjoy reading the story.

Bodhi1,

I saw that you looked and subsribed to my youtube page. I havent had alot of insperation to make a new one at the moment, but i will doing more. I dont claim to have a gift for poetry, frankly i dont think (when i write them) that they are anygood. But i go back a reread them and i find the meaning behind at and i love it. It also helps that Zach thinks they are great. But what does he know, hes a blone boy form a small farm town in Iowa. LOL. Just kidding. i love him and i love that town. it is to cold there though and way to much snow in the winter. lol.

Until next we meet, i leave you with this:

“This is my wish for you: Comfort on difficult days, smiles when sadness intrudes, rainbows to follow the clouds, laughter to kiss your lips, sunsets to warm your heart, hugs when spirits sag, beauty for your eyes to see, friendships to brighten your being, faith so that you can believe, confidence for when you doubt, courage to know yourself, patience to accept the truth, Love to complete your life.”
 
Tim,
Thanks for the explanation. I've read your story, too, but it means a lot to have you revisit it here, in the middle of your fiction.
 
loving the story Tim. Started it today and read it to this point. I want more!
 
Wonderful!! It comes across that you are drawing on personal experiences. That is not a bad thing, as you develop the story around them, it is more natural.
More please, as you can manage!
Harry
 
It is coming along. I had to put the writing on hold for a couple days becuase i was out of town. and i need to take care of some things. This one is turning out to be a long chapter. Im stil not dfone writing it. I might end up spilting it in two parts just so i can update it. im not sure yet though. i will kep you posted.
 
Glad you like it. Now i have to run to the store. I set my pencil down so that i could go make smacking to snack on, and my dog decided that the pencil is a good chew toy. That was the only pencil in the house, and i hate writeing with a pen. so now i will run to the store. with any luck i will have the chapter writeen tonight.
 
TimWhite07 said:
Glad you like it. Now i have to run to the store. I set my pencil down so that i could go make smacking to snack on, and my dog decided that the pencil is a good chew toy. That was the only pencil in the house, and i hate writeing with a pen. so now i will run to the store. with any luck i will have the chapter writeen tonight.
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Tim,

Glad to hear the chapter is coming along.:=D: I check every day to see if there is an update. I have a question for you though, what is "smacking to snack on"?:confused:
 
i did find something tasty. left over chili. yummy. i made some corn bread and ate that.

OK here is my problem. im not sure if i want to end the chapter where im at right now, or if i want to push for that little bit more. The problem is that i feel that if i go for the extra bit, it will feel long. but if i end it now, then i wont be able to come up with a whole new chapter for next time.

im so confussed. i guess i can write it out, and see how it feels to me, then decide form there.
 
Tim,
That sounds like a plan. Sometimes, Neil (GSDX) runs into the same situation - drives him a bit batty while he's agonizing over it, too -- so you're in good company!
Glad you're feeling better.
You guys gotta be getting a little excited at the prospective near term future about now -- January isn't that far away, anymore!
 
OK im a lost at the moment in the writting, and i need some help. I have asked my editor to help me out, and i am going to ask you as well. tho i dont want to ruin it in the thread. so if you want to know what i need help with, PM me. you may have a say in what goes into the chapter. Im starting the typing process until i can figure out and get what i need to finish writing.
 
I have the chapter all written and i am almost done typing it. i have like 3 or 4 more pages to do. My editor will be online around 1 pm Central Time. so as soon as he getts done, i will post chapter.

I would like to thank everyone that offered to help me, and to those that did help. After i post the chapter i will explain why it was so hard for me to do.
 
The story is being edited right now, and as soon as i get it back, i will go over it and post hopefully before one my time.
 
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