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The Tide Began to Rise

Two excellent installments, Tim. Thanks.

Really dick move by Brent, though I think Tyler's only making it worse by trying to punish him when Brent wants to apologize. Two wrongs don't make a right, guys.
 
Tim, you have continued to create characters we really want to care about!

A great job to be sure....

Keep up the hard work!
 
Really an intriging story. I read it all on my iPhone. It has twists and turns like an epic Russian novel. It could be developed into great fictional work on coming out or a screenplay.

The current questions:

1. Why did Tristian's arrival at Tyler's house cause the father to go off the deep end?
2. How did Tristian and David know that Tyler and Brent were gay? It is clear that Tyler was ineperianced so he did not previously fool around with them. Did one of the small group of friends talk. Or had the more experienced Brent messed around with Tristian and/or David?
3. I agree with a previous poster. Whatever happened to Patch.
4. BTW the store is Von Maur not Von Mar. I work on the other side of Iowa and know the Von Maurs as customers. The stores are exactly as described. Does this whole story end in the tragic Dec 2007 mass shooting in the Omaha store?
5. Since Julie is keeping her current lover secret, does it turn out to be a woman?

I hope the author has the energy to take this story to the limit. He certainly has the talent.
 
@ bmwducatirider:

Wow, im glad you are liking the story so far. I sure hope that i have the energy to keep this going. Trust me i am enjoying reading it as much as you are. Not sure if many of you know this, but i do not plan out any of the chapters. I write it as i feel at the time. If im not feeling good, or if im in a bad mood, then that will reflect in the writing.

Those are some good questions. And i will try and anwser them. It is always good for me to have something that i need to put in the story.

Im not sure what happened to patch. I will try and find a way to bring him back into the story and keep him there.

To the first question on there, Im not sure what you mean by this. The dad went off because he thought that Tyler was lieing to him about where he was. And for not being there when he wanted him to be.

I do appologize for spelling the stores name wrong. We actually went shopping there today. We are in iowa right now. Going to be here a few more days. I love that store. And i dont think it will end like that terrible day. We were here for christmas that year. It was very sad.

You have given me alot to think about. Thank you.
 
@ bmwducatirider:

Wow, im glad you are liking the story so far. I sure hope that i have the energy to keep this going. Trust me i am enjoying reading it as much as you are. Not sure if many of you know this, but i do not plan out any of the chapters. I write it as i feel at the time. If im not feeling good, or if im in a bad mood, then that will reflect in the writing.

Those are some good questions. And i will try and anwser them. It is always good for me to have something that i need to put in the story.

Im not sure what happened to patch. I will try and find a way to bring him back into the story and keep him there.

To the first question on there, Im not sure what you mean by this. The dad went off because he thought that Tyler was lieing to him about where he was. And for not being there when he wanted him to be.

I do appologize for spelling the stores name wrong. We actually went shopping there today. We are in iowa right now. Going to be here a few more days. I love that store. And i dont think it will end like that terrible day. We were here for christmas that year. It was very sad.

You have given me alot to think about. Thank you.

I think he was asking why the dad started to become abusive after Tristan came into the picture.

Also, I just want to add that this is a magnificent story. I had avoided reading it, due to the length, but I decided to take the plunge, and I regret not starting earlier. Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next installment.
 
I have alot of next part done, but after writing what i did, and some recent things that came out in the open, im thinking that i might go back and change how some things turn out.

And i pretty much feel like an idiot. I also post this story on GayAuthors.org. I posted chatper 24 and 25 on there. But when i did it, i post chapter 25 twice. lol.

Zachs blondeness is rubbing off on me.
 
The Tide Began to Rise
Chapter 26​

[Brent’s POV]


I heard the garage door open, and then close. My mom was home. She walked through the door and came straight to the living room.

“Hey honey. How was your weekend?” she asked me.

“Ok, eventful. Not in a great mood.” I said

“Trouble in paradise?”

“What?”

“You and Tyler; are you guys fighting?”

I just looked at her with a shocked and confused look on my face. “Is she talking about what I think she is talking about?”

“Come on Brent, give me some credit. I know that you and Tyler are together.”

“Really? How long have you known that I’m…………. Umm…………umm…………”

“Gay……….Honey, I have known since you were 5 years old.”

“Really?”

“Yeah, you used to steal my pantyhose and wear them around the house. You never wanted to play with boys toys. You wanted an easy bake oven. It was the things that you did. I can’t say that I didn’t hope it was just a phase. But deep down I know that it wasn’t. I am happy for you. I’m happy that you found someone. It is going to take me a while to get used to the idea. But you just remember, you are my son and I will always love you. I will support both you and Tyler no matter what.”

“Thank you mom, I love you so much.” I gave her a hug.

“You’re welcome honey. The only thing that I need to ask you is, to spare me the details.”

“I think I can do that.”

“So why are you so down? Are you and Tyler fighting? You can tell me anything.”

“It is a combination of things. Someone at the party on Saturday outed both Tyler and I. So now the whole school knows. Everyone was talking about it today. Some people were supporting me; but mostly, people were starring and whispering. Whenever I got close, they would stop and give me death glares. Then to make it worse, Tyler wasn’t there to make me feel better. Something happened this morning and now we are fighting. Tyler was so upset that he skipped today. I have no clue where he is.”

“He’s outside with Brad right now.”

“Really?” I ran over to the window and looked out to the driveway. Sure enough Brad’s car was there, and Tyler was in the passenger seat.

“Do I even want to know what the fight was about?”

“You don’t want details.” I smiled

“Ah, ok. Well; when he comes in, take him to his room, down stairs, or to your room to talk.”

“I will.”



[Tyler’s POV]


Brad and I just sat in the car. We didn’t talk. We just sat there in silence. I had my phone in my hand. I was waiting for someone, anyone to call me or send me a text. I wanted and needed to get my mind off Brent. I wasn’t ready to talk to him, but I’m already in the driveway. I couldn’t just ask Brad to drive away. I guess I could, but then I would just be running away from my problems.

I looked over at the window, and saw Brent standing there. He was looking right at me. As I looked back at him, a single tear rolled down my cheek. I wiped it away. I turned to look at Brad.

“Thank you for today. You’re a great friend. I don’t ever want to lose you. You always know what to do to cheer me up.”

“You’re welcome.”

I leaned over and gave him a hug. He hugged me back. When we broke the hug, I gave him a kiss on the cheek. Then I got out of the car and walked to the front door.

Brent was standing in the door way to the living room when I walked inside. I took off my shoes then looked Brent square in the eye. His eyes were red, he must have been crying.

“Down stairs.” I said, and started walking. I could hear Brent following me.

I sat on one of the chairs, and I pointed at the couch directly across from me. Brent sat where I was pointing. I took a deep breath, and then started.

“I’m going to talk first, don’t interrupt me……………. This morning……….. No wait. I love you Brent. You mean everything to me. I would do anything for you. I would do anything to just see a smile on your face. I thought you loved me. I don’t know what happened to you in the shower this morning. You were so sweet, and then you went cold. At first your hand was like a soft cloth rubbing me, and then it turned into a piece of steel wool. It hurt. You had gotten me hard, half way to blowing my load. It felt so good, that I went weak in the knees. Then you got rough because I asked you to help me finish. I was going to do the same for you.

“You got me off and left. Then to top it off, you decided to leave me here. What the fuck? Did you expect me to walk? Today was going to be hard enough at school. I didn’t need the added stress, so I called Brad. I asked him to skip with me. I left you with all the abuse and harassment that everyone was going to give us today. And all day long I was hoping that they would make you cry.

“You really hurt me today Brent. I felt used. I felt that everything has to be on your time, when you’re not in the mood, then nothing. But if I insist, you will still do it, but it will hurt. You broke my heart. You made me feel lower then dirt. You made me feel like my dad made me feel. I hate feeling like that, and I won’t let anyone make me feel that way anymore.

“Ok now you talk. Tell me why you did what you did. Tell me what you were feeling. Tell me if you even considered how I felt. And I want the truth. Don’t just tell me what you think I want to here.”

I sat back in the chair and crossed my arms.

“I want to start off by saying I do love you Tyler. I’m so sorry I hurt you. There is no excuse for what I did. I wanted to stop then because I wanted to do something tonight. I thought that after the stressful day of school, that finishing what we started might cheer you up. I guess I should have told you that. I got mad because……………well………….I don’t know. I guess you didn’t listen to me. I did want it my way. And no, I didn’t consider how you felt. I wanted things to go my way.

“I didn’t mean to make it hurt, emotionally or physically. I was just frustrated. I guess part of it was that I was worried about what would happen at school. I didn’t get much sleep last night.

“I don’t know what else to say. I love you so much Tyler. I’m so sorry I hurt you. Can you please forgive me?”

I sat there with my arms crossed, just watching and listening to Brent. He buried his face in his hands. I stood up and went over and sat down next to him on the couch. I put my hand on his thigh.

“Brent, look at me…………………. Everything in my body is telling me not to forgive you. You hurt me deeply. You hurt me in ways my dad never could. You broke my heart. I still love you. I really, really do. But I lost a lot of respect for you. My heart is telling me that I need to give you a second chance. I have to listen to it. But I won’t listen a 3rd time. So you know we are back to square one. You have to earn things back. Right now all you’re going to get is to hold my hand and a kiss.”

“I understand. Thank you so much for giving me a second chance. I’m going to do whatever it takes to make things right.”

Brent leaned over and gave me a hug and a kiss on the cheek.

“So what did you do today? I know you were hanging out with Brad.”

“We got some lunch, we went to Joe’s Karting, and the rest of the time we just hung out.”

He got this strange look on his face. It was almost a look of jealousy. Is he jealous that I spent the whole day with Brad? If he is, then oh my god, there is no reason for him to be jealous. He is pretty much the one that set this day up.

“What’s that look for?” I asked him.

“What look? This is my normal face.”

“Whatever, I’m going upstairs.”

“Ok…..oh by the way, mom knows.”

“Knows what?”

“About us.”

“Did you tell her?”

“No, she already knew. She was the one that said something. She said that she is completely ok with us.”

“Wow, that’s………Great.”

He gave me a weird look after the pause. But he didn’t say anything.

I went upstairs and went to my room. I was tired from the long day. I was ready to let my mind slip away. I was ready to be in the peaceful realm of the dream world. I needed to let my mind be free of the events of the day.

Slowly I started to slip down in unconsciousness. It felt great. I was in a state of pure bliss. That is, until there was a knock on the door.
 
From one reader i already know something is sterotypical. Can you tell me what it is?
 
LOL @ Panty Hose and the Easy Bake Oven, omg too good!

GREAT chapter, so emotional. I'm not afraid to say I cried a bit during it, Tim, I love this story :-) Keep it up! :D

Ben from Australia (momoman).
 
First I want to apologize for not posting more often. You're too good a friend to get lazy with.

Now about your story: You, of all the writers I read on line, are willing to let your characters be completely messy. They aren't all good, or all bad. They're a mix of this and that and some of it changing with the wind. Just the way real people do. It makes the story much harder to tell. More confusing to completely envision in your mind as the creator. But you are doing a magnificent job of it and the result is some of the most realistic, messy relationships I've ever read. And I absolutely love it for it's solid ring of truth.

We all know your life hasn't been a walk down a straight and narrow path, so you know real life and its complexities. Translating those complexities into characters and storyline and nouns and verbs and adjective . . . well, I'm jealous.

And you keep the edge to the story all the time. It's sexual; it's uncertain; it's compelling.

And did I mention that you're the cutest, sexiest, kindest writer on all of the WWW.

Thanks for being you and sharing yourself with others . . . especially with me.
 
Tim,
I already PM'd a whole lot more. I just wanted to publicly say how much I've enjoyed your story - and reiterate how much you've developed as an author.

HR is spot on - your characters are real. And real means sometimes messy.

Thanks for continuing to share yourself with us.
 
Thanks for the installment, Tim. I think Tyler is being too hard on Brent, but I can somewhat understand his hesitancy to forgive given his past. So I will just sit back and eagerly await the next chapter in this lovely story.
 
Tim, you know how hooked I am on this story.

Nothing is stereotypical or wrong with it...

It continues to entertain and compel me!
 
Wow thanks guys. HR, i love you man. It took me a few times reading your post to finally catch all that you meant. I never really thought of it that way. I get some many different emails about the story and how people fee about the characters.

There is one person that tells me that he hates Tyler. He thinks he is a whinny, bitchy, and stuck up. He thinks that he needs to be knocked down a few pegs. But he is also one of those readers who thinks that he knows where im going to go with the story.

Let me throw this out there. I think i have posted this a few times already.

I DO NOT KNOW WHERE THE STORY IS GOING!!!

lol. I have never known. My editor and I only came up with the characters and the basis of the story. Everything else has been written spur of the moment. I has been how i felt. This whole thing with Tyler and Brent, was mad because i wasn't in a good mood. So therefore that characters had to go through something. Now this makes it kind of difficult. Then i have to either get them through that problem ok, or not ok. Which i think makes it what seems so real.

I'm not trying to make this a cookie cutter story. One like everyone else. Where it has some drama, and lots of sex. I want the opposite. Or something in between or completely out of the box.

Jer, i love you too. I was in Iowa so i really didnt have a chance to post. Then the other drama that is in my house. If you don't know what that is, ask Cody.
 
I do not know where a moderator gets off editing my post. If they have a problem they need to come directly to me. Last I checked we live in America and not Russia or China so as long as I am not cussing up a storm or saying illegal things there is no reason to edit my thoughts. A certain reader does not own the name TOM!!!! That was in reference to a friend of mine which is not that certain reader. As editor of this story I think I deserve some RESPECT!!!!!
 
Ok guys. I dont want a fight in the thread. Please, if someone doesnt want their name posted, then please respect that.

Thanks.
 
You've done a great job writing "spur-of-the-moment" so far, Even If you don't know where the story is going I want you to continue it!
 
I do not know where a moderator gets off editing my post. If they have a problem they need to come directly to me. Last I checked we live in America and not Russia or China so as long as I am not cussing up a storm or saying illegal things there is no reason to edit my thoughts. A certain reader does not own the name TOM!!!! That was in reference to a friend of mine which is not that certain reader. As editor of this story I think I deserve some RESPECT!!!!!

Moderators make me mad sometimes..... :mad: They kinda make me not want to post here anymore!
 
You've done a great job writing "spur-of-the-moment" so far, Even If you don't know where the story is going I want you to continue it!

I plan on it. I like the "spur-of-the-moment" writing. So look for more.
 
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