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The Tide Began to Rise

ok a few things.

I can write them alot faster if you dont mind them being alot shorter. i dont mind them being short but i write until i find a good spot to spot and it ends with that cliffhanger. I dont ever think about the cliffhanger. i just write it then i think oh thats a good way to end this one.

Yes the cliffhanger is a way to get u to come back a read more. and it works. hehe.

With this next chapter im trying to make it a bit longer then the last ones have been. i have done 3 chapters now (i think) where Tyler is in the hospital and i think that it is time that he gets out. dont YOU?

Justright25....I love you to. hehe. but dont get any ideas from that.

And MidnightWarrior.....I love your Avatar. lol.

Bodhi1....... How should i be punished. Make it kinky. im sure zach would love to make it could true. hehe.
 
Tim, there is no rush.....

Quality rates over quantity...

You are a newlywed too...Zach is your first priority. Make sure that you guys are making enough love to each other.....:D

PS....YOU ROCK!
 
Glad you like the story and glad your first post is on this one. hehe. Im working on the next chapter, but its been hard to do since got back i have had to go to work every single day.
 
yeah but i have to make money, i post the story on here first, then i post on my group yahoo page, then i send to nifty. after the editor edits. lol
 
that would be great get a good enought book idea in my head and write it like harry potter. lol would be cool.
 
Tim, you really are a brilliant writer! As everyone is saying you do leave is with too many cliffhangers! Meh.... I don't mind. Congrats btw on the marriage
 
Umm i should write a book?

I dont think that im that good, someone else has told me the same thing but im not sure.
 
I agree with both of you! Your writing is good, but in a very rough diamond sort of way. You certainly have the ability to be better than most of the mainstream gay fiction writers, you just need to polish the stories a bit more. Keep up the good work!
 
polish as in how? like more editing, becuase that is the part i hate. lol. i have someone that doest that for me, so yell at him about that.
 
Wow. Love the story, what a tearjerker. Talk about a romance that got out of the frying pan and into the fire.

Where did the idea of Council Bluffs, IA come from? Or are we going to find out?
 
OK Council Bluffs IA. I don’t think I will explain it in the story so I will right now. I may throw it in there. Zach is from Iowa. A small town about 20 miles from Council Bluffs. Which is where the story takes place. I made the reference to make it seem more real than a made up town. I only of this to2wn because I went there for Xmas this last year. Small bedroom town. AND COLD. Lol if you really want to know the name of the town that the story takes place, I guess I can tell you because I don’t think that I said it in the story yet.

But you have to ask nicely
 
OK guys, I have the Chapter all written up. It woke me up and i had to finish it. So all i have to do it type it up and get it edited. im hoping to get that done on saturday or sunday.
 
yay cant wait!!!! although i have to wait till sunday, monday.... still cant wait! this is so freakn sweet az this story i cant get enough of it!
 
Ok, im going to give you an idea on the length of this chapter. I write this in a note book, that i carry with me all the time. when ever i get the urge to write a little i do. it is one of the composition note books. That was so you can get an idea on the size of the pages.

The number of pages is front nad back. but i count each side. so like the last chapter in my note book was 5 1/2 pages long. not long at all. This cahpter how ever is 15 pages.

I have some typed up right now, but i have to go tot he doc to get my meds changed around. i will do my later.
 
Dear Tim,
How are your dexterous digits doing? Are you making your way through your "war and peace" chapter? lol.

Hope your med adjustment wasn't anything serious.

What's in store next for some of our favorite newly weds?
 
im typing it up right now, i hope to have it dont tonight if not then tomorrow.
 
Tim,
I read your stories on Nifty-Fifty and tried to go find the rest at www.crv.com. I couldn't find them. I send you an email and it returned. So, let me know if I can see the rest of your stories. Thank you so much for "Tim". It was dynamite!
 
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